1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi nice update
wen r u planning to update next
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angledesire

hi nice update

wen r u planning to update next


may be in one hour 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sirf mere liye


part 23...

aadi was hesitent but then he tell her: bindiya geet ki shaadi jisse hone wali thi wo ranjeet tha...

aadi: ranjeet ne geet ko delhi me dekha tha aur uske baad dhandiwaal me... kisi shaadi me aayi thi wo, ranjeet k liye uske family k khoj bin karna koi muskil nahi tha, brij yaha dhandiwal me hi kaam karta tha so, uske liye aur asan hogaya,, brij se mila aur geet se shaadi karne ki baat ki... geet k parivar hosiyarpur k wo parivaro me se hain jo ladkio ko pair ki jooti samajhti hain, jinke liye ladkio k rajamandi koi maine nahi rakhi...brij ne sabko yaha bulaya aur shaadi ki baat ki, sabne ranjeet ki family wealth n background dekhke saadi k liye maan gaye fir unhone geet ko yaha bula liya... aaj humne brij ko pakra to usne hume ye sub bataya,,, kal hi maan ko pata chala, ranjeet, thakur aur brij koi sazish kar rahe hain as they r too silent... humne brij ko chameli k madad se uske kothe pe bulaya (place for all the prostitute) aur aha rate daal diya, wo jagah v ranjeet k paise kamane ka ek aur jariya tha,, hum waha se bohot saari ladkiyo ko women right associate me vejhna chahte the lekin ranjeet ko pata chal gaya so usne maan pe hamla karwaha, main bhi tha waha, he got shoted aur balance bigadne e zameen pe patthat se chot lag gayi,, wo behosh hogaya but all the other police men arrested them and sealed the area,, ranjeet hath me nahi aaya lekin brij agaya,, maan ne 3rd degree torture se usse sab bula liya...

bindiya was limping on the couch beside her,,, she knew him too well, he can do anything with her...their was only fear on her face...

maan sit on his knees and hold bindiya's hand: main usse kuch nahi hone dunga... u believe me na?

bindiya noded while her eyes are full of tears...

aadi: chal maan, pehle iss rahul ki khabar lete hain,,, kash geet abhi tak uske sath hi ho...

both bid bye to bindiya...

aadi got a call and when he hung up his face was all serious and he was in great tension...

aadi: maan brij bhaag gaya...

maan: janta hu, abb wahi hume ranjeet tak pouchayega... uske kapre me maine ek chota sa device laga diya tha,,,, microphn... aur usme GPRS bhi hain so usse trace karo dekho wo kaha hain...

maan sat on the driver seat while aadi on the passenger...they took the turn around to go rahul's place... but the guards stopped him to go inside,, but as a ACP who can stop him,, he make his way to rahul's living room where rahul was talking with his frnd and making arrangements of going out from this place... (bechara thodi na pata tha kisse panga liya hain)...

maan roared in anger: RAHULLL,,,,,,rahul turn to see a boiling maan standing over his doorstep like a lion standing over his pray...he was petrified to see maan there but more of his anger that could burn him alive...

rahul: maan tum yaha?

maan: GEET KAHA HAIN?

rahul: wo wo to apne papa k ghar chali gayi, usne kaha hain tumhe phn karegi...

maan: MAIN AKHRI BAAR PUNCH RAHA HU GEET KAHA HAIN?

rahul: common maan maine kaha na before he could complete his sentence he found himself on the ground with a bleeding nose...maan held his collar and punch him hard on the same spot, rahul couldn't handle anymore,,,, maan geet ranjeet l pass hain, meri ko galti nahi hain, main nahi janta tha wo ranjeet ne ye sab sazis ki hain mujhe to brij ne bulaya tha aur kaha tha get se meri shaadi karwayega,,, maan gave one more punch on his stomace,,

maan: shaadi k liye aaya tha, galti nahi hain, pyar karta hain, pyar ka matlab bhi samajhta hain tu??

maan could kill him with his bare hand aadi stopped him and whisper brij ka pata chal gaya hain,

rahul: main jab geet ko yaha laaya tha hamare aane se pehle ranjeet k kuch admi yaha baithe the, hum pouche to ranjeet bhi piche se aaya aur forcefully geet ko legaya, brij nahi tha lekin bohot sare log the main kuch nahi kar paaya, ranjeet ne mujhe kaha brij uske liye hi kaam karta hain aur wo geet se shaadi karna chahta hain,, main kya karta itne sare log the main akela...

maan punch him once more: akela? kya karta? geet se pyar k daabe karta tha na? ye tha pyar? pyar ka matlab bhi tu nahi janta, tujh jaise aadmi ko to ,,,,,,,,,

aadi stooped him: maan hume chalna chahiye,,,,

maan leave him and goes from there with aadi...

aadi: wo abhi unke haveli me nahi hain, brij se hume jo signal aaraha hain wo uske haveli se 10 kilo miter dur kisi cottage me hain...

maan: lets go,,,

they reach the destination in 30mins, (abb MSK jayega to 45 ka 30 to banayega na) there was a godown, where all the charas n ganja were stored... the place was completely silent what was unexpected, maan's men were not yet reached there...

aadi: abb kya kare maan, should we go inside...

maan: aadi tu yehi ruk main andar jata hu,

aadi: maan ye jagah thik nahi hain, i m going with u...

maan: meri baat sun aadi, main andar jata hu agar 30mins me wapis nahi aaya to force leke andar ajana..

aadi: lekin maan

maan: thats an order inspector Aadiraj...

aadi: yes sir...

maan went from there and goes inside...there was darkness every where, maan pick up his revolver in his hand and goes slowly one end to another, one wall to another, there was no one,,,but suddenly he heard some noise like someone was crying...maan speed up and follow the sound and he found a man in pool of blood lying there crying in pain, he reached there, and turn him,

maan: BRIJ?

brij: ACP geet yaha se 20 km dur ranjeet k farm house me hain, jaldi jao usse bachao...

maan held him in his arm: lekin tumhari ye halat kaise huyi?

brij: ranjeet ne mujhe goli maari hain, waqt kam hain mere pass, accha bhai to main ban na saka lekin ek insaniyat to abh bhi bachi hain mujh me, jisse main maarne gaya tha wo ladki mere liye apni zindegi barbaad karne chali gayi,, maan wo tumse bohot pyar karti hain tumhari zindegi k liye usne apni zindegi kurban karne se pehle ekbaar v nahi socha...wo ranjeet usse aaj hi shaadi karne k liye legaya hain..

maan: aisa nahi hosakta...

brij was in so much pain he couldn't talk properly,,

maan: tumhari ye halat huyi kaise?chalo main tumhe doctor k pass le jata hu...

brij: main custody se nahi bhaaga tha mujhe uske aadmio ne bhagaya tha, main jab uske haveli poucha to usne phn karke yaha bulaya, ye hamara gupt sthan hain jaha charas aur ganga market me jaata hain, jab main yaha poucha dekha geet pehle se yaha hain, bohot dari huyi thi...main janta tha kabhi na kabhi ranjeet uss tak pouch jayega,, main khus tha abb un dono ki shaadi hogi lekin main nahi janta tha ranjeet itna kamena niklega...

flasback...

brij: ranjeet tum geet ko leaaye aur mujhe v churaya shukriya, main janta tha tum apne saale ko jarur bachaoge...

ranjeet smiled: hmm brij saala ha? maine tujhe bacha to liya lekin abhi tujhe mujhse kon bachayega...

brij: matlab?

ranjeet came close to him and goes backward whisper: maine tujhe bachaya taake main khud tujhe maar saku brij,, brij was shocked so was geet, she was frightend so much that she was sweating like anything,,,

brij: ranjeet,,,

ranjeet: brij maine tujhe kaha se kaha laaya aur tune kya kiya mere sare plan ka vanda phod diya uss ACP k samne... mere sare addo k naam pata bata diya mera itna bada nuksan kar diya,, his voice was on high and he held a knife in his hand and punch brij with it in his back, brij cried in pain,, aarrrggghhh...

geet: veerjiii

ranjeet throw him and held geet by her hair: itna dard huya geet? lekin ye insan to tumhe marna chahta tha, tumhe, iss gadhe ko itna malum hona chahiye tha na k tum to meri hone wali ho, sirf meri, mere sath shaadi,,,

geet: khabardar jo ek labz v aage bola,, maan tumhe maar dalega...

ranjeet laughed loudly: maan, bohot ishq hogaya bas 3 hafto me? wo dekho tumhara veer zameen pe padha hain, waise hi maan v padha hoga lekin zinda nahi,, tum samajh rahi ho na geet?

geet: tum kuch nahi kar paoge,

ranjeet: kar to main bohot kuch lunga geet... pehle tumhari veer ko marunga fir tumhare maan ko lekin maan se pehle bindiya ko aur uske bacche ko, he whisper wo akeli hain ghar pe aur gaurds ko to kabhi bhi kuch bhi hosakta hain...

geet: nahi tum unhe kuch nahi kar sakte,, wo tumhara bhi baccha hain...

ranjeet: baccha huh,, tumhe lagta hain main ussko apna baccha manta hu,, usse shaadi bhi is liye kiya tha k sapna ko apna bana saku lekin wo bhi hath se gayi, lekin tumhe main hath se nahi jane de sakta...pyar jo karne laga hu tumhe,,

geet: pyar? tumhare jaise janwar k muh se accha nahi lagta ye shabd...

ranjeet: ye janwar aur bhi bohot kuch janta hain geet.. tumhe apne bistar par lana mere liye muskil nahi tha lekin main tumse shaadi karna chahta hu,,,

brij: ranjeettt he wanted to hit him but ranjeet held him and punched him hard making him land on ground again...

ranjeet: brij brij brij kyun chahte ho k main geet aur meri shaadi se pehle tumhe maar du...

geet: tum veerji ko kuch nahi karoge, brij looked at her amaused, then proudly and then his guilt,, he couldn't match her eyes...

ranjeet: tab to tumhe ek souda karna padhega,, brij k zindegi k badle tumhe meri banna padega,

geet looked at him disgustedly: kabhi nahi...

ranjeet shot a bullet to brij,

geet: veerjiii

brij was lying there in pool of blood couldn't move...

ranjeet: abb yehi hasar maan ka hoga,, geet looked at him frightend,, geet janti ho isse pehle bhi maan k upar attack ho chuka hain yakeen nahi aata to brij se pucho,, geet looked at brij who noded his head... geet main chahta to usse wahi marwa deta lekin mujhe sirf tum chahiye,,, isse pehle maan ko goli sirf chu k nikal gayi lekin iss baar sidha dil pe lagegi, abb tum hi socha jab insan hi nahi rahega to dil aur dil me base logo ka kya hoga? faisla tumhe karna hain, kya chahti ho maan k ACP ka mout ya tum janti ho main kya kehna chahta hu, aur ha maan k baad bhi ye kissa jari rahega bindiya jo hogi he laughed eviily...

geet cried bitterly but she agreed to marry him but with a promise he will let go brij and he will not harm bindiya aadi n maan...

flashback end,,,,,,

brij: wo usse leke chala gaya,,, jaldi jao maan saab geet ko uss aadmi se bachalo, tum agar usse bacha sake main samjhunga mere paapo me se kuch maaf hogaya, sayad tumhe ye sab batane k liye hi abhi tak mujh me jan bachi thi,, abb jao maan saab...

ok thats it now, next part kal milega...

sorry for all the grm spl mistk...

thanks guys for the support,,, i will try to update Kagaz ki kashti tom...

Edited by tich.1990mg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update is ranji ko to maan batayega and geet is so pure hearted to save brij she is angel of maan

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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally brij turned to be a nice person..
i hope maan vl reach dere soon..
waiting to meet real MSK..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsem update is ranji ko to maan batayega and geet is so pure hearted to save brij she is angel of maan


thanks dear and same to u 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Finally brij turned to be a nice person..

i hope maan vl reach dere soon..
waiting to meet real MSK..


hmmm msk's true self,,, lets see how will he get his angel back
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope maan reaches on time, cant see geet with some one else.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...
erhhh Ranjeet is disgusting...
hmm poor brij...
hope maan reaches on time to save geet..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant part
please update next part soon
can't wait for next update
thanks4 the pm

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