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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: DDbiggestfan
U r doing a great job 👏
please continue it...
Waiting 4 ur update 😃

thanx dear😊
will update soon...

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#362

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

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                                 PART-12



mayank wiil be waiting in the living room for geet and nupur so that they can start to khurana mansion where the party is held...
he waits there for more then half an hour and finally gets irritated...

mayank:nupur...kya kar rahi ho andar?
jaldi karo na..warna hum late hojayenge...
[nupur...wat are u doing inside?plz get ready soon we are getting late..]

but there will be no reply from her..

mayank:nupur...tum sun rahi ho na...?
nupur...nupur...
[nupur...are u listening to me..?]

nupur:(from inside the room itself)
ha mayank...aarahi hoon bus 5 minute...
[ha mayank iam coming...just give me 5 minutes..]

mayank:(smirks)5 minute...pichle ek ghante se yehi baat keh rahi hai...
5 minute..5minute..(immitates nupur)
aur ye geet di bhi bahar aane ka naam hi nahi le rahi hai...
[hmm..5minutes...she is repeating the same since one hour...
and this geet di is also in no mood to come out of the room]

finally nupur comes out of the room...

nupur:ofo...mayank tum bhi na...kyun chilla rahe ho...aarahi hoon na...
[ofo..mayank y are u shouting like that...iam coming na,...]

mayank:accha...!mein pichle ek ghante se tum dono ka wait kar karke pagal ho raha hoon...aur tum...(stops)
muje ek baat samaj mein nahi aathi hai ki tum ladkiyan tayya hone mein itna time kyun lagathe hai..
[oh really!iam getting mad by waiting for u people since one hour and u...(stops)
i cant understand that y girls take so much of time to get ready?]

nupur:oh..accha!tho suno...
pehle hum logo ko tum ladkon ka seva jo karni hoti hai...i mean pehle tum logo ka dress,shoes and everything u want...o sab nikalkar aapke saamne ready rakhna hai, tha ki aap logo ko koi takleef na ho aur phir...
[oh!then listen...
first of all we have to arrange every thing ready for u people so that u need not face the trouble of searching them here and there...and then...]

geet who is coming out of her room interrupts...

geet:aur phir hamare liye kapde,matching jewellery,costumes arrange karna hai aur tayyar bhi hona hai...(takes deep sigh)
aur aap log ulta hume dosh dethe hai ki hum ladkiyan tayyar hone mein time lagathe hai...
[and then we have to arrange our dress,matching jewellery,costumes and all..then we have to get ready...(takes deep sigh)
and u people say that we take more time to get ready...]

mayank who was silent listener of their speech joins his hands in front of them...

mayank:maaf kardo meri maa...galti hogayi mujse...
GIRLS ARE THE BEST...ok now...
[iam sorry...girls are the best..ok now]

nupur:ye hui na baat...[that's right]

three of them smiles...

mayank:mein jaakar gadi nikaltha hoon..tum log aajao..
[i'll be waiting outside in the car...u people come there]

nupur who doesn't notice geet in saree widens her eyes..

nupur:are wah geet..tu tho kamal lag rahi hai...lagtha hai aaj kisi ki hosh udne wale hai..
[wow geet..u r looking gorgeous..i think some one gonna faint by ur beauty]

geet blushes...

geet:ab jaldi chal...warna hum late hojayenge...
[now let's move..otherwise we may get late]

nupur:ha ha kyun nahi...ab tumhe apne unke paas jaane ki itni jaldi hai tho hum koun hote tumhe rokne wale...
[why not...if u are in hurry to go him then how can we stop u]

geet:chup kar aur jaldi chal...
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ridz:sam jaldi karo na..sid aatha hi hoga hume pick karne ...
[sam plz be quick...sid will be coming to pick us]

sam comes out of the room and riddhima gets flabbergasted...

ridz:sam..tum aur salwar suit...
(she rubs her eyes)ye sapna to nahi hai...
[sam...u in salwar suit...(she rubs her eyes)is it a dream?]

sam:kyun mein nahi pehen sakthi?
[y i shouldn't wear salwar suit?]

ridz:no..i mean tumhe tho western kapde pasand hai na...aur aaj salwar suit...
[no not like that...u like only western outfit na so...]

sam:(in low voice)impress jo karna tha..
[ i have to impress them na]

ridz:what???

sam:i mean iam going to khurana's party and that too get together..so it wont look good if i wear western outfit in traditional party...right!

ridz:hmm...good!waise bhi uncle aur aunty ko traditional wear hi pasand hai...
[hmm.good!however uncle and aunty likes traditional wear]

sam:(self thought) i guessed it...because sid loves u who is totally behen ji types...(smirks)

ridz:lo sid aagaya chalo...
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mayur and geet reach khurana mansion...
mayur enter the house first and finds maan there who is eagerly waiting for someone...
nupur goes to maan...

nupur:bhai...aap kisi ka intezar kar rahe ho?
[bro..are u waiting for someone?]

maan who is dying to see his angel,his geet without any thought says...

maan:ha...wo geet...

mayank and nupur smiles and maan gets embarraced...
meanwhile,geet enters the party hall...
maan stands there dumb struck as soon as he finds geet entering the hall...

mayank:ab chalo...yaha hamara koi kaam nahi hai...ye dono apne duniya mein busy hojayenge..
[now let's go from here...however these two will get lost in their own world ao there is no need of our presence here]

here maan is continuosly admiring his princess without having any information with his surroundings...

                        Aankhon mein teri ajab si ajab si adaye hai...
                         hoo...aankhon mein teri ajab si ajab si
                          adaye hai...
                          dil ko banade jo patang saanse yeh teri
                          hawaaye hai...


[geet wears the same saree]

geet is looking beautiful like an angel in that white and pink saree exposing her milky white waist but not completely...infact looking as the most beautiful girl of the world...

                              aai aise raat hai jo bahut kush
                              naseeb hai...
                              chahe jise door se duniya woh mere
                              kareeb hai...

geet's hairs were flowing from hair which were hiding her angelic face ...but no power of this world can stop maan from admiring his angel...queen of his heart...maan starts moving towards geet...

                                 kitna kuch kehna hai phir bhi
                                 hai dil mein sawaal hai kahin..
                                 sapnon mein jo roj kaha hai
                                 woh phir se kahun ya nahi...

as maan is coming closer to her...her hearts beats were fast...her rose petal like lips were shivering with shyness..each and every foot step of maan towards her making her crazy...
maan is seducingly looking at her lips..he wants to taste them and love his angel by kissing her,taking her in to his embrace...





                        Aankhon mein teri ajab si ajab si adaye hai...
                         hoo...aankhon mein teri ajab si ajab si
                          adaye hai...
                          dil ko banade jo patang saanse yeh teri
                          hawaaye hai...

maan finally reaches geet...geet cant with stand her shyness and instantly closes her eyes...he comes and stand behind her...geet who stood closing her eyes could feel her maan behind her...her back was touching him..

maan bends his head towards her ear and whispers...


maan:meri mishty bahuth sundar lag rahi hai...u r looking gorgeous...
[my mishty is looking beautiful today]

geet hardly opens her eyes and smiles...

geet:(in husky voice)kyun main roz khoobsurat nahi dikthi hoon...
[i wont look beautiful daily?]

maan:mein ne aisa kab kaha?meri mishty ki khoobsurti tho har roz badthi jaa rahi hai...infact meri mishty to isduniya ka sabse khoobsurat ladki hai...aaj aur bhi khoobsurat lag rahi ho...
[when did i say like that?my mishty beauty is going on increasing day by day and she is the most beautiful girl of thw world..and today u r looking more beautiful..]

geet:accha!(smiles)

geet turns towards maan...both get lost in each other and maan starts
cupping her face...


both get lost in their own world and fails to notice sid,ridz and sam's arrival...sid and ridz stands there smiling and sam is burning with jealousy..as her mission of trapping maan got failed before it started...
after some time sid and ridz decides to move inside as they already stood there for 5 minutes...

sid:ahem..ahem...

maaneet soon gets seperated...
geet quickly goes to ridz at the same time hiding her embarrassment..

geet:ridz tu...kitne din hogaye..tum se mili nahi hoon...
[ridz u..?it has been many days i didn't met u]

both hug each other...

geet:batao kesi ho?aur itne dino se mijse milne nahi aayi..muje bhool gayi kya?
[how are u?why didn't u come to meet me?did u forget me?]

ridz:are nahi geet aisi koi baat nahi hai...hospital mein itni busy thi ki aane ka waqt nahi mila...
[no..not like that..i was very busy with my work so i can't able to find time to come to u]

geet:phir bhi ek phone tho kar sakthi thi na...
[u can atleast call me na]

ridz:o geet mein...

geet:(showing fake anger)
chal..bahane mat banao...keh kyun nahi dethi ki tumhe mujse baat hi nahi karni hai...
[y dont u directly tell me that u dont want to talk to me instead of making excuses]

ridz:are nahi...sach mein busy thi...
[i was really busy]

she makes baby face,holds her ears and says...sorry
geet smiles and hugs ridz...

maan:arey koi humse bhi baat karo...
[some one talk with us too]

ridz:(with smile)hai bhai...sorry itne dino se aa nahi payi uncle ko dekne...o kya hai na kaam ki wajah se aa nahi paayi...
[hai bhai...sorry i could not able to visit u since many days as iam busy with work]

maan:hey ridz common...dont be formal...i knew that u were busy...so no sorry...

sam:(self thought)
oh god ye log tho apni melo drama shuru kar diya hai...ye ridz tho muje bhool hi gayi hai...
[oh god..these people are busy with their melodrama and ridz forgot me totally that iam here]

she reminds her presence by setting her voice,...

ridz:geet ye meri frnd hai sam...aur sam ye hai geet

sam:(with plastic smile)
hai geet...

ridz:aur ye maan bhai...
[and this is maan bro]

sam instantly moves to maan as she was waiting for this chance for so long...and extends her hand before maan for hand shake...

sam:hai maan..iam sam..sameera...

maan also wishes her formally...but sam is looking seducingly in to maan's eyes and wont leave maan's hand which is not unnoticed by geet...she glares at sam for looking at her maan as if she wants to eat him...
she signals maan to leave her hand by setting her voice...
sam again fumes with jealously and glares geet...

sid:ab andar chale...[now let's go inside]

maan:ha..

everyone moves inside except sameera...

sam:(self thought)
huh...wat this geet is thinking of herself...tum kuch bhi karlo geet mein tho wo karke rahungi jo muje karna chahiye...
and this maan...how can he show interest in benji types ladki like geet being a millionaire...why this khurana brothers are interested in low class people...anyways i came to know about his interest and i'll definitely win in this mission too as always...

she smiles weirdly...

precap:
party...

so guys this is the update...hope u like it...and sorry guys if u dont like song sequence..i tried to write for the first time and i know it wont be good as iam bad at writing romantic scenes...
plz bear with me this time...

plz press LIKE and do COMMENT

PLZ ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST IF U NEED PM'S FROM ME..

sorry for the mistakes and plz bear with my launguage as iam not that fluent with it...

love u all...
-mona

link to next part:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/52848584

Edited by maneetlover1 - 14 years ago

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ETRIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

nice update

continue soon

thanx for the pm.

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ETRIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

lovely update

sam ki to band baja deti mai par koi tension nhi geet hai handle karne ke liye

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

my personal opinion cntinue it as FF..
Dnt gt dissapointed... I knw xactly hw it feels... Bt jz rmbr thea r ppl hu luv ur writin n u wud 4 sure neva wanna dissappoint dem..
So think bout it n make ur decision..

Luv u...

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punam2712

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

hey friends iam here with so much of dissapointment 🤢🤢after seeing response to this ff...
iam sending more than 200 pm's and not getting even 50 likes that too after waiting for one week also😭
iam not saying that everybody should read and like my ff..i should not say that because it is not necessary that every body should like it..i would have failed in impressing u😭😭or may be my writing is not good and interesting...
so iam thinking to make it a ss instead of leaving midway which i dont like...so plz let me know ur opinion about this whether to stop this or write as ss/ff...
thanx to all of them who liked my ff till now...
plz let me know ur opnion soon..
-mona😭😭

PLEASE DO CONTINUE FOR ALL THE READERS WHO READ YOUR STORY

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dreamy4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

nice update👏

plz dont discontinue this ff

cont soon

thanks 4 the pm

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#369

awesome update dear...
loved it...
loved maneet they r so cute...
grrr hate that sam... hope she doesnt create any mu b/w maneet...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm...