maneet: do i deserve ur love? ch 15 pg 138 - Page 4

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Congrats on your new FF!!😃

Initially I thought that u were talking about Sadaa me sevalo.😆

but after reading your reply got to know that it's daddy.

I have watched it ,well it's one of those few films which my channel wala keeps on repeating 😆

All the best for this FF Jyo!!🤗

Waiting to see a fun-loving and simple Maan

Originally posted by: soniya_lovesu

great concept dear 😊

okay so what about "will she be able to him again?" thing??? or was it her?😕

hiii friends here is the character cketch for this FF. hope u liked it😳. will be waiting for ur responce. will send pm after updating prolouge. 😊

character sketch:

Maan singh khurana:

he is the coolest guy. Cares for all, loves all. He is an orphan. He has a dance school (like srk in dil tho pagal hain). He trains his students n perform shows. His life is full of joy. He tries to help all n he is rich but down to earth. He is even a volunteer in an hospital. He has many friends he can anything for them. He believes all. He cant see anyone sad. His best buddies are yash n adi.

Geet handa/singh khurana:

she is a software engineer. She lost her father in a very young age. From that time she became serious. She couldnt enjoy her childhood due to the responsibilities which made her strong. But she never complained Her mother struggled very hard to educate her children. She has one sister pari. Geet loves her to the core. Evethough geet came across many hardships but she never let her sister down. Pari is princess for geet. Pinky is geet's best friend from school.

Rano handa:

mother of geet n pari. Loves them to the core. She is very sad for geet because due to the responsibilties she didnt enjoy her childhood like other children. She struggled very hard after her husband's death. After geet completed her studies she retired from her job. She wants geet to get married n lead a happy life.(same as in geet)

Pari handa:

sister of geet. Loves her mom n sis to the core. She is quiet opposite to geet. She is jovial n always playing pranks on others. Her sister's words r final to her. She is doing her architecture 3^rd year. She too wants geet to be happy n lead a peaceful life. She wants her jiju to be best n loves her sister to the core n never hurts her.

Adithya sharma:

best friend of maan. He is a software engineer too. He loves his family to the core. He is married to pinky n has one son rohan. He tells maan to think twice before helping anyone for which maan dont agree. He tries to give some peace of mind to maan but maan is maan he wont listen.

Pinky sharma:

she is wife of adi. Loves him to the core. She treats maan as her own brother. She is best friend of geet. She knows about geet very well. She too wants geet to be happy.

Yash singhania:

he is best friend of maan n adi. He is a playboy n a big flirt. But he loves pari like crazy but never expresses it. He is afraid of geet's anger. He is a owner of software company but down to earth. Sometimes seeing him afraid maan n adi makes fun of him.

Sameera oberoi:

she is friend of maan. They both met by an accident. She loves maan very much but maan treats her as a good friend. She is very stubborn. She is a model doing advertisements. She should get what she wants for that she can go to any extent.

Muskaan singh khurana:

hmmm... will let u know later. But important character in this FF.

will add more characters as the story progresses.

So guys here is charater sketch. So tell me how is it? Will post prolouge by tomorrow n send u the pms. Thanks a lot for ur support. But me expecting more likes n comments. Plz all of u hit like button. Sending 100+ pms. But getting very less likes.

Plz tell me should I continue or not. Feel free to tell ur opinion.

Plz add 'jyothikrish' for pms. Send me the buddy request friends.

plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.

Love

-jyothi

prolouge: page 8

prolouge:

A fresh morning, a new ray of hope, all the people r busy doing their works, children r getting ready to go to school, some people getting ready to go to office. Some people r reading news paper having their morning tea. At the same time a man came out of his house all ready to go for work. He wore black t-shirt with black jeans. He wore his helmet n sat on his bike n took his ID card. (his face is not shown yet only back). He started the bike n acclerated. He is going to hospital (as I told u he is a volunteer in a hospital). He loves children a lot. So daily he gives chocolates n sweets to the children in the hospital. He is on the way to the suddenly his phone rang. He stopped the bike n picked the phone.

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At the same time in other location where the shoot is going on for a bike advertisement. A girl is busy in doing her makeup. She wore a black colour dress which is above her knees slightly exposing her thighs. She is already late for the shoot n now wasting time.

(this is her dress)

The partner of this in girl in this advertisement lost his patience n shouted on her

hey what the hell? How much time will u take more?

The just one glare of that girl made him shut his mouch.

That guy thought she is damn sexy.

After sometime atlast she completed doing her makeup n came for shoot. That sat in front seat n that girl sat in the back. She hugged him from back on the bike. He is in heaven being so close with her. She is looking hot n sexy in that position n the photos r clicking n the shoot is going on. After the shoot got over she got down of the bike n the director told

hey sam.

Hi sir

u r awesome the shoot went very well.

But sam said with attitude I know that I am awesome. From next time I dont want him as a partner. He is disgusting. Ok?

The director with no other option ok.

She smirked n went from there n waiting for someone.

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maan picked the phone

Hello..

Maan sir this is naina from hospital.

Bolo naina.

Sir there is a major accident in ******* area. We already send the ambulance but this is very serious. Plz go to the spot immediately.

His face became serious listening to this n told Ya sure naina I will.

Ok sir.

He cut the call n turned the bike. He is going in full speed. Within 10 min he reached the accident spot n there is full crowd there n police r also there. He taken his helmet out n He took his glasses out then his face is shown.

excuse me sir, no one is allowed.

But then maan immediately showed his ID card to the police.

Sorry sir plz go.

Maan just nodded. He went near the car the whole area is full of blood. He immediately took the person out from the car n did necessary first aid. Then after the ambulance came n they shifted the person into the ambulance. After sometime they reached the hospital n took that person to OT.

Maan decided to imform to his family. He immediately took his mobile but dont know whom to call. He dialled one of the number from recently dialled numbers.

Tring... tring... tring...

A girl picked the phone n told

Hello...

precap: who is that girl???? 😕

thats it guys this is the prolouge. So tell me how it is? Hope u all liked it. Plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.

I request everyone to comment n tell ur opinion. Criticism is most welcome. Plz plz do comment.

love

-jyothi

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