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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

modi bhawan-kokila how are we going to manage all the houseshold chores now that mani has left?

mota bhain i have advertised and i have interviewed a few candidates but they are not what i want they demands are ridiculous,but someone is coming today her aunt phoned and the girl also needs a place to stay.her aunt appears to be a very rude womanbut lets hope a gem is coming.thats fine what time will she be here .at three.

shah house- gopi gopi shouted urmilla were are u ? start cooking supper as rashi will be here very soon and u need to see to her.a young slightly built girls enters lounge.mami i was busy washing clothes do u need anything? yes u good for nothing illetrate do your work quickly because i have found a job for u with living quaters.jee mami .gopi's eyes full of fright. u will give me the salary everymonth as we spend a lot of money on u and any u cannot stay here anymore u are a useless gawar.gopi looked at her mami and replied ok mami i will complete work and leave for interview. Take your clothes with if u don't get job don't come back .gopi hid her tears and completed her work while praying to kana that he should guide her .gopi was not sent to school or had any comfot living with mami rather she was abused and treated worse than a servant .her cousin rashi was just like her mother always putting gopi in trouble. Her mamma never stood up to his wife but he loved gopi.

gopi put on her best clothes which were rashis throwaways and went to modi bhawan.gopi rang the bell and koki opened door, there she saw an angel standing with old darned clothes and a small bag holding statue of krishna ."jai shree krishna maji i am here for the interview for the maids job", kokila at looked at girl and called hetal.hetal saw gopi and and felt that she was a godsend and said to her to come sit. gopi looked at house and thought my kana i make these people happy ?gopi sat on floor where the interview took place.when she answered all the questions put to her both kokila and hetal were very happy and her demands were none only a place to stay and a plate of food and salary to be sent to mami. koki realised that this gopi was abused emotionally ,and physically ,she fell in love with gopi and promised herself thet she will keep this girl very safe.

part 2 to follow soon share your comments

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-JollyJabeen- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RESERVED!👏

This is an interesting start,so Gopi's a maid,aww she's so sweet😳

Continue soon!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AAn interesting start, can't wait to read more!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful start...koki fell in love with gopi already...waiting to see ahems entrance...please do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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poor Gopi😭
Very interesting start Cant wait to read the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Or it's beautiful 👏, all the previous fan fics no-one has come up with the concept of Gopi arriving as a maid, please don't make Aham hate uneducated people, well it's your story so you can, but I want him to fall in love with Gopi rather then it be an arranged marriage between him and the maid, otherwise it's just the same as the serial, he will hate her until she breaks down his defences, make your story from the start Aham chasing her.


Don't take too long updating the next part, Now I have read it already I want to read the update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely concept starryeye! and welcome to the forum!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow tats a good start and i like the concept so Ahem and Gopi will share the same roof as Maid and Master ...looking forward to ur update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow what a nice start ...loved the new angle to the story...gopi as a maid...

will go and read the second part...

can u post all parts in one thread 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow that's a very good start and very different...
its amazing

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