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Posted: 13 years ago
drashti is amazing
she said karz rehnay do
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my goshhh
i get so annoyed when ppl write stories in hindi
i dont get what thr trying to say
can use plzzz translate it in english plzzz
i mean i wnana read this story but i just dont understad when some words r written in hindi i mean its written in english BUT they speak in hindi
so plzzz translate it
i am not the only one who doesn't understad it
but thr are some more ppl
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10
nice part...
enjoying it...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shokofa

oh my goshhh

i get so annoyed when ppl write stories in hindi
i dont get what thr trying to say
can use plzzz translate it in english plzzz
i mean i wnana read this story but i just dont understad when some words r written in hindi i mean its written in english BUT they speak in hindi
so plzzz translate it
i am not the only one who doesn't understad it
but thr are some more ppl

hi am glad u liked our FF..
The dialogues are written in hindi to have more of an impact on the audience.. as in the show they speak Hindi..

Sorry you couldn't understand it..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Link to Previous Part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/51596628

PART 11

"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"

The first name was picked out, and in her rough voice the teacher called out a name "Barun" she shouted.

A careless Barun remained silent and didn't make no action as he was not bothered whilst the posh Lavanya sat next to him prayed "I hope, I hope, I hope, I hope my name comes out next!! so I can be paired with you.." elbowing Barun to seek his attention. Barun looked at her in disgust, with eyes that looked no less then a pistols opening.

Lavanya looked into his eyes, and then quickly looked back down facing the hard floor as she didn't like being the cause of his anger.

The teacher then approached the jar again and picked out another name, "Kushi" she announced "that will be our first couple".

"Ab yeh Barun Kaun hain?? Muttered Kushi hoping he would be a good dancer.

Kushi was not aware that the man she had met in previous occasions was named Barun.

One by one the teacher was calling out the names pairing up the students. Manvi waited impatiently to hear her own name being called, "yeh dekho na Di, yeh Mrs Dasgupta.. Meri naam kab nikale gi.." she moaned to Kushi.

"Sabr rakh meri maa" spoke Kushi, when finally Mrs Dasgupta shouts out "Manvi".

After hearing her name announced loud and clearly she closes her eyes anticipating to hear Kushaal's name praying she is paired with him. She crosses her fingers and waits.

Then finally she hears the teacher shout "Kushaal!", which releases all her happiness in one go. She climbs on top of the chair and cheers crazily. "Ya ya ya yippi yippi ya ya!" She shouts doing the bhangra dance.

"What are you doing?!" shouted Mrs Dasgupta in her rowdy vocal, annoyed with Manvi's disturbing behaviour. With Mrs Dasgupta's anger being bounced off from every wall and Manvi's delightful show on top of the chair all students couldn't help themselves from looking behind to witness Manvi's foolish act.

Kushi looks up at her sister and tries to pull her down whispering "niche ajaa meri maa, everyone is looking at you" , but a dancing Manvi doesn't pays any attention.

Mrs Dasgupta shouts again "ab bas!!, tumko aaj detention hain pagal ladki!!". The word detention wakes Manvi up from her happy thoughts and realises everyone is looking at her, she grabs on to Kushi and comes down.

"ab pas gayi na? Tu itne kush kyun hain??" Quesions Kushi.

"Kuch nahi Di" says Manvi trying to avoid the question whilst the teacher continues reading out the names.

Kushaal's head was bowed down, he thought to himself "main iss Manvi ki sath nahi nach sakta, phele hi woh mujpe mar mithi hain, I can't give her any wrong ideas".

He stood up really fast saying "Mrs Dasgupta main Manvi keh sath nahi nach sakta". "but why" asked Mrs Dasgupta in an angry manner.

Kushaal didn't know what to say when suddenly his eyes fell on Barun and he got a bright idea. He quickly blurted "becuase am getting married..". "toh?" Said the teacher getting angrier.

This infuriated Barun causing him to jump out his seat "what do you mean toh?" He shouted at the teacher.

Kushaal looked at Barun and thought "isko kiya hua bhai.. But teek hain mera khaam ban gaya" smirking.

"His getting married to my sister, isko aur bhi bohat kaam hain, other then dancing all day" says Barun.

"Barun! Drop your attitude" screamed the teacher from on top of her head walking up to him saying "that's it you got detention!"

Kushi tries to look pass all the students to see who this Barun was, as she had to dance with him and didn't have a clue who he was.

She saw him standing tall, but couldn't see his face as it was covered by Mrs Dasguptas big head.

On the other hand Manvi couldn't hold still when all this was happening "ab iss kushaal koh kya hua yaar, why doesn't he want to dance with me?" she thought walking up to the heated conversation between Mrs Dasgupta, Kushaal and Barun.

"Miss, he will be dancing with me" said Manvi to Mrs Dasgupta holding on to Kushaal's big muscular arms.

Barun interfered again "oh no, he is not going to be dancing with you" pulling Manvi's arm from around Kushaals arm, protecting Kushaal from connecting with any other women apart from his sister.

"Hey Mr you stay out of it" shouted Manvi pointing her finger at Barun.

This made Barun's blood boil, "how dare you point your finger at me, you stupid girl" he says crushing his teeth together.

Kushi hears Barun shouting at her innocent sister, but from where she is standing she can't see anyone's face clearly specially Barun's. So she decides to go up to them.

"Hey!" She screams at Barun whose facing her sister. Barun turns around in slow motion revealing the face behind the name to Kushi's pearl eyes.

Kushi gasped "OH MY GOD! Ye yaha kya kar raha hain"she speaks loudly. "What the" muttered Barun when his eyes fell on Khushi "awaaz neeche!" he screams, as her "OMG" aches his ears.

Kushi was heated up and didn't like Barun's attitude however Kushaal was enjoying Barun's little drama that he even forgot Maanvi was clinging onto him until Maanvi started rubbing her face onto his upper arms. He pushed her away saying "mujhse door raho".

"Shut up! All of you" shouted Mrs Dasgupta opening her mouth wide and sprinkling her saliva onto the students.

Barun was standing right opposite Mrs Dasgupta and he could see the spit escaping from her mouth, his first instinct was to save himself from being drenched with the poison escaping from this snake like teachers mouth. In a flash of a second Barun bent his lean body downwards successfully dodging the spit ball.

Kushaal witnessed Barun's matrix like antics and was dazzled with the way Barun flexed his body and then he spotted the reason behind Barun's behaviour, the SPIT, he quickly ducks down protecting himself from being infected with the spit. The next person in line to be attacked by the spit was Manvi and she was too slow to act and SPLAT the spit covered her brown face.

A silence prevailed the entire hall which was broken by Kushaal's heavy laughter. Everyone looked at Maanvi in amusement, she was drenched with Mrs Dasgupta's spit, even Kushi couldn't help but chuckle at the situation. "CHUP!" Shouted a very embarrassed and angry Maanvi and she walked towards Kushaal, she extended her hands and pulled up his t-shirt exposing his perfect abs. She moved closer and started wiping the spit off her face with Kushaal's t-shirt.

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The driver dropped Prachi at the 3 storey mall, which she was eager to visit. She quickly gets out the car saying "pick me up in 2 hours" not wanting the driver to wait for her. She goes into the glass mall guarded with security guards who look at her curvy figure with their sinful eyes.

She feels uncomfortable and scared, but walks pass them by closing her eyes, holding her scarf tight to her body so it covers her from there evil eyes. She thinks to herself "am not going to let anything ruin my day today", walking up to the escalators really fast.

Prachi stood on the running escalators freeing her yellow scarf which was now draping down as the escalator was going up.

The tall dark handsome Shabir also entered the same mall Prachi was in, he was in search for the manager as he had proposed a plan to buy the mall.

Shabir also stepped onto the escalator, he saw a perfectly shaped women standing in front of him, she looked as if she was specially carved by God for somebody very special.

Her face wasn't clearly visible to his eyes, he saw the lady struggling, trying to pull out her yellow scarf that was stuck in the steps of the moving escalator.

Unconsciously Shabir volunteered to help, he placed his hands on top of hers, that were clutching onto the yellow scarf. He gave a hard tug which was enough to release the scarf from the grasp of the machine.

When Prachi looked back to thank the kind person who had just helped her free her scarf, she was too late as she found nobody standing behind her. She just held onto her scarf tightly and started walking into the gift shop.

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After Manvi had wiped all drops of spit from her face with Kushaal's t- shirt, Manvi smiled a wide smile. Kushaal was disgusted "yuck!" He moaned annoyed with Maanvi. He immediately took off his t-shirt revealing his well shaped body which was a feast to the eyes of all the girls.

Kushaal threw his t-shirt aimlessly into the air and it landed on Lavanya. "Oooh" squealed a delighted Lavanya.

Mrs. Dasgupta had enough of all the chaos the children were creating. "Shut up! All of you go to class now!" She roared "'and Barun Manvi Kushi Kushaal" she called pointing at them, "all 4 of you can join me in the detention hall today after college for your rude behaviour".

All four of them made an attempt to protest but were stopped by Mrs. Dasgupta "no arguments! And your dance partners will remain the same! Understood!" She howled with a flare in her eyes and walked away leaving all four of them frustrated.

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Prachi entered the gift shop and was confused about what to buy, "usko kya gift pasand ayega" she thought whilst looking around at all the items nervously.

Meanwhile, Shabir also entered the gift shop as he thought it will be the perfect way to woo the lady manager.

Shabir was looking at jewellery when Prachi's leaf shaped eyes flew up and she saw him. Prachi hid herself from Shabir's eyes as she didn't want him to notice her.

Shabir bought a pretty pink bracelet for the manager when his eyes fell on a stoned bracelet for men, he brushed his fingers through the delicate design and was about to buy it when his phone disturbed him.

Prachi saw Shabir leaving from the jewellery counter and she walked up to the counter thinking maybe jewellery will be the best gift for her special day. Her eyes fell on the stoned bracelet, the same bracelet which Shabir had selected for himself. She touched the bracelet and an uneasiness filled her body, it was as if she got a shock. She removed her hands from the bracelet and decided to buy it as there was something attracting her towards it.

When Shabir returned to the jewellery counter he found out that the bracelet was sold "ajeeb itefaaq hain bhai, pal main hi gayab" he laughed to himself and was walking out the shop when he notices a girl in a yellow outfit struggling with all her shopping bags, it was the same girl from the escalators he noted in his mind as it was the same back he saw earlier.

Shabir swiftly walked towards the girl covered in yellow and picked up her bag from the floor which contained scented candles and rose petals. He was about to look up and hand it to her when she snatched it out of his hands and ran. "Ajeeb ladki hain bhai" Shabir whispered to himself.

Prachi stopped near the main exit, catching her breath after all the running, she had to run pretty fast so that Shabir couldn't catch up with her.

The perverted security guards in uniform again spotted her leaning against a wall breathing really fast, which was causing her chest to expand. They hungrily eyed her up their minds clouded with filth.

Prachi got out the mall when one of the perverted guards shouted "oye cheekni chameli" another one whistled and sang "wanna be my chammak challo". Prachi was scared, she started running to escape from these goons but she was like a tortoise and the guards were hare's, she was too slow and they were too fast.

One of the guards put his dirty fingers and squeezed her upper arms and another guard pulled off her scarf laughing constantly whilst baring her off of her dignity.

The wind blew her yellow scarf and dropped it on the head of a man who was tall dark and handsome. He was wearing a short sleeved shirt, his muscles exploding out, his loose white cotton trousers were hiding his neatly shaped legs and his '212 sexy men' fragrance filled the air around him.

He slowly pulled the yellow scarf off his head and the sight that was before him made his head spin. Three guys were mercilessly teasing a girl, she was struggling to escape and from the back he realised it was the same girl he had the encounters with before.

Shabir wrapped the yellow scarf around his palms and walked directly towards the goons. He pushed the guys off the girl and dragged them a safe distance away from her. Shabir was unable to see the girls face as her hair was covering his view.

Shabir punched the guys non stop, making them bleed from every part of their body, blood shooted out their nostrils and crackling of their bones could be heard when Shabir's huge muscular arms collided with their weak skin. Shabir's legs were like a sharp razor knife that slit the stomachs of the three filthy guards when he kicked them with his legs that were as hard as an iron rod.

Prachi was stood few centimetres away and witnessed the whole fight. She was grateful to Shabir for saving her honour and protecting her dignity.

Shabir made his way towards the girl who stood looking at the ground, her hair still covering her tear stained face. He unwound the yellow scarf from his hands and wrapped it around her, making her appearance modest once again.

As his fingers touched her skin she felt a slight tingle. Shabir also got the goosebumps when his hands came in contact with her skin, all the hairs in his body stood up, sending a chill through his body.

"Ankho hi ankho main yeh kya hogaya' Dil yeh bechaara dhadakne laga'"

This song vibrated loudly from Prachi's phone making her look up, staring directly into Shabir's eyes.

Shabir stared at her without a blink "prachi" he screamed in his mind realising she was the girl who he had met again and again in one day.

The song vibrating from her phone was as if its reflecting his inner thoughts. Before he could speak Prachi whisperes "thank you" and ran away. Shabir stood rooted on the spot, staring at her fading away he mumbled "ajeeb itefaaq hain, kya mulaqat hain"''

Precap


Ek college ki lambhi rath..
Ek ghumshada sa milan Prachi keh naam
Ek Gurmeet phas gaya bechara?

***************NOTE***************

Dear Lovely Readers'

This part is slightly longer then the others' I hope you are not bored lol but do let us know if are and want the parts shorter..!! Also please LIKE and tell us what was ur FAV scene! and guys do you enjoy reading about Prachi??

Edited by s0phie_152 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update. no gc nd dd
aaj news sunkar ki gc is all set to do new show without dd mera toh heart break hogaya
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved it
but prachi is buying gifts for whom?? who is that mystery man for prachi????? plzzz tell it is killing me ya
i loved the fights of manvi and khushal and barun and khushi so dace partners amazing wow update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeyy first 2 comment and no plz dont make them any shorter i like them this long but awesum update 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: billy_ritu

nice update. no gc nd dd

aaj news sunkar ki gc is all set to do new show without dd mera toh heart break hogaya

I KNOW ME 2!!! I DONT WANT HIM IN THAT ZEE TV SHOW! 😭😭

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