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Posted: 13 years ago
😆awesome part it was.
for me the best part was when drashti landed in to mud and gurmeet watching her.the besr line was "chocolate icing over vanilla cake"just loved it.

well now gurmeet also landed there so waiting to see what comes from him next.

waiting for the nxt n sorry for being late in commenting n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Link to Previous Part 9: /forum/fan-fictions/2325057/ff-kaho-na-pyar-hain-updated-part-20-page-86

PART 10

"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"

With her strongest pull and his unstable balance, Gurmeet landed on top of her. His strong stone chest crushed into her rib cage, his long toned legs were positioned beside her, sinking into the mud, his robotic head was stiff as ever stuck on front of her muddy face as if the mechanism to get him moving wasn't there.

He looked directly into her big eyes, with aggression. His mouth was paused whilst his expressions did all the talking.

Dharasti was sinking into the mud as his weight on top of her was pulling her down. A sudden urge of desperation to survive was written over her face, but she made no sound or neither tackled to get up.

His warm presence was felt by her caged body. His untouched face from the splat of the mud was like a UFO beaming at her with his two headlight like eyes.

Gravity was playing its game, Dharasti was drowning in the mud whilst her big brown eyes were drowning in Gurmeet's anger filled eyes. Dhrashti was observing his eyes and his anger made no difference to her.

Gurmeet saw Dhrashti staring at him and his anger started to melt away. But it returned very quickly when Dhrashti started smacking her hand at his body hitting him like a pinyarta.


"Tum mere upar se uthoge bhi yah nahi??!" She yelled in his ears. This aggravated Gurmeet further, he pinned her hands onto the ground, Dhrashti immediately raised her head up in order to protect herself from being buried in the mud. However, in the rushed process her face slided across Gurmeet's. Her chubby cheeks tainted with mud rubbed against his bearded jaws which created a havoc somewhere in Gurmeet's chest.

Gurmeet's soft breaths falling on Dhrashti's shoulder's were creating a whole different sensation within her. She subconsciously closed her eyes whilst Gurmeet screamed to himself "tu is pagaal ke itne kareeb kya kar raha hain Gurmeet!!"

Gurmeet immediately withdrawed himself from Dhrashti, freeing her hands which were locked in his. He sprung out the mud pit with a jump, flexing his toned leg muscles.

"Haath do!" He demanded to Dhrashti but she was still lost in her trance, her eyes closed. "Haath do varna main jaa raha hoon!" Gurmeet warned at which Dhrashti opened her eyes with a startle. She smacked herself mentally for being lost in some weird feeling and extended her muddy hand forward to Gurmeet.

Gurmeet placed his tough hands onto Dhrashti's soft hands. As their hands touched, a current flowed through both their bodies, and as if a fuse was blown, rain started pouring down onto the two of them, washing away the mud and unveiling two angelic figures.

Gurmeet pulled Dhrashti out the mud pit and both silently started walking still hand in hand and the rain showering its blessings upon them.


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Barun was out of his mansion and was driving his white sleek Lamborghini around the local area in search for Dhrashti. He drove around back and fourth but couldn't see any sign of Dhrashti. "What the!" He muttered in frustration and parked his car on a empty street. He got out the car and started marching around trying to catch a glimpse of Dhrashti in the heavy rain.

This is when he heard a musical melody of chimes ringing behind him combined with the drips of rain. He turned his head slightly backwards and he could hear the jingles of bangles coming from a distance. He started chasing the sweet noise and reached a dark alley but to his misfortune he found it empty.

He stomped back across to his sleek white Lamborghini when he saw someone peeking through his window. He ran to his car and grabbed the hands of the person peeking through his window.

The person peeking at his windows was none other than Kushi. She had left her home an hour ago in search for Dhrashti and her search had bought her to this lonely street and on seeing this big car she assumed the worst thinking can it be Dhrashti locked up in the car.

"Chor mujhe kutthe kamine" she started abusing as soon as she felt a strong hold on her arms. "Chup!" Barked an angry Barun and twirled a lightweight Kushi around and she landed on his hard chest, her hands held behind her back due to his strong grip and the heavy winds draped her purple printed silk scarf on top of both their heads covering them entirely and blinding their vision.

The rain now dripped from the wet scarf, Kushi can hear the rhythmic loud heartbeats escaping from Barun's heart, it was soothing her ears when Barun shouted "mujhse chipko math" and pushed her away throwing the scarf away from his head too. The scarf landed around her neck covering her body.

"Why are you looking inside my car?? Iss bhar kya chori karne ayi ho?!" Screamed Barun to a shivering Kushi. "Chori aur main! Tum jaise kangal se kaun chori karega" Kushi roared back. "Main apni behan Dhrashti ko dhund rahi hoon" she whispered to herself but Barun heard it and realised she was the stupid girl over the phone who called him earlier. "Tum'" Barun started to shout once again but was interrupted by Kushi's annoying ringtone.

Kushi picked up immediately "Di tu ghar ajaa Dhrashti Di abhi agayi hain ek bale aadmi ne hum pe karz kiya hain aur Di ko ghar chor kar gaye hain" Maanvi chirped over the phone. Before Kushi could reply she heard Dhrasti's yell "khak bale aadmi hain woh toh zaalim hain zaalim, kitni mannato ke baad ghar chorne ke liye raazi hua woh, aur uska yeh karz udhaar raha yeh tho main zaroor chukaungi".

Kushi screamed "Di, Maanvi CHUP! Main abhi ghar ati hoon" quitening her two sisters.

Barun was a silent spectator to this conversation and due to the high pitched voices the whole conversation was audible to his sharp ears. "What the" he muttered at their nonsense and sat in his car and made his way home knowing that Dhrashti was home now.

After disconnecting the call Kushi turned around to find no one there, "ajeeb banda hain' kaha gayab ho gaya" she chuckled and made her way home.

The crazy night was finally over, a lot had happened and a lot was told, all slept in there house in peace with god looking over them.

Shabir woke up bright and early the next morning and had a wide smile printed on his face, he was overjoyed that his brother Kushaal had said YES for the marriage.

He made his way to his grandfathers room to seek his blessings like he does every morning, "good morning Daadaji" he beamed at his Grandfather and started discussing Kushaal's wedding and the two men were lost in planning and preparing for the big day.

Kushaal had just woken up and was going to see his grandfather when he peeked into the room he saw the two most important people in his life happy after such a long time. He smiled from his heart but then he realised what the two men were discussing "my wedding? Yeh kab hua bhai?" he mentally quizzed himself.

That is when the previous days events rolled across his mind "maine galti se haan bol diya ab naa kaise bolu, Bade aur dada kitne khush hain" he muttered "yeh sab us Maanvi ki vaje se hua hain" he recalled realising she had told him she loves him. "Yeh love kab hua?" He whispered to himself in agony.

Meanwhile in the Sobti Chaudhry house Prachi woke up embracing the sun with a glimmer of smile on her face, the devotional singing of her Dadi was loud enough to reach all bedrooms.

She quickly had a shower and dressed herself in a pale yellow churidaar as she had to go shopping today to buy a special gift for that someone special for the special day it was today.

She reached downstairs to the pooja area were Dadi was still doing the arthi. Both her brothers were standing beside Dadi holding their hand in worship.

Gurmeet wore a plain white kurtha whilst Barun was formally dressed as usual avoiding asian wear.

She stood behind them when the pooja was over, Dadi started doing the tilak one by one.

Barun was next in line for the tilak when he said "nahi dadi, main in sab main nahi manta" walking off calling his driver to drop him off to college.

"Yeh ladka bilkul biger gaya hain" said Dadi when Prachi spoke "don't worry Dadi one day he will change" whilst Gurmeet walked up the stairs sneakly.

"Abb yeh dekho, Gurmeet bhi baag gaya.." Spoke Dadi looking at Gurmeet running up the stairs.

"Don't worry Dadi ek din bhai bhi badal jaynge" spoke Prachi again.

Dadi smiled going back to the pooja area when she noticed Prachi is dressed, "tum kahi ja rahi ho beta?" Prachi looked at Dadi saying "main shopping ja rahi hoon, don't worry I'll be back home quick".

Gurmeet came back downstairs this time all suited and booted to go to work.

"Main tumhe drop kar doon?" Questioned Gurmeet to Prachi. "Nahi bhai main chali jaungi" answered Prachi.

Both left there house straight after, making there own way.

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At the college today it was a totally different atmosphere, all the boys and girls were busy preparing for the yearly dance competition that takes place on a grand scale at the college.

The teachers pick the dance partners on a random basis and everyone was assembled at the hall to hear the final verdict.

Barun was seated at the back with Lavanya, she was hoping she'll be paired up with Barun and had her fingers crossed. Barun on the other hand was least bothered and didn't really wish to participate in any dancing nonsense.

Barun glances across the hall and is appalled by these students who were so eager to dance. His eyes fall on Kushi who was looking up and mumbling something and there was another girl seated beside her doing exactly the same "crazy!" He muttered.

Kushi was sitting by her sister Manvi, she was praying she gets a good dance partner as she really wanted to win the competition. Manvi was also wishing, but she wished to be paired with Duryadhan so she could get her plan into action, she was not bothered about winning the competition.

Kushaal made a heroic late entry to the hall. He sat himself next to Lavanya and spotted Barun sitting on the other side, "hi, tho aaj maine tumhe dhund hi liya!" Teased Kushaal to Barun. "Haan, I guess so"said Barun, not impressed with his comedy.

Kushaal rubbed his hands and chirped, "I'm so ready to dance with a hot girl!" This caught Barun's attention and his dislike for the guy increased. "What, you want to dance? And that to with a hot girl?" Barun spoke harshly. "No, nahi, mera matlab tha'" Kushaal's sentence remained unfinished as the teacher came up on stage and ordered for silence.

Mrs.Dasgupta the head of the dance competition started explaining the rules "the dance will be between one boy and one girl, the dance must be to a romantic song and the winner will get a dinner for two at the restaurant Arjee Barjee and they will be crowned Rab ne bana di jodi!".

All students clapped and whistled and then there was complete silence as Mrs.Dasgupta approached the 2 Glass cylinders which contained the name of all students.

Precap


Kaun hain kiski kismat main?
Prachi ki special cheez kya rang layega?
***************NOTE***************
Dear Lovely Readers'
We are so thankful that you are loveing this script as much as we are loving writing it for you'!! We have reached 10 parts and this is an epic moment for us and you..!!
Like the post and tell us what scene did you enjoy the most today..! And make some noise if your eager to see the pairing in the dance competion "rab na bana di jodi"'
Edited by s0phie_152 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was superb..!
Barun s so mean..
use akela chodkar chala gaya..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh wow so there is going to be dance competion who wil win it????

Eager to know and hope Khushal and Maanvi win it...well even BArun and Khushi would make me happy well lets see!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Update...
loved it
but it was so confusing
pls asap clear all confusion
con soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part cont soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.
finally gurmeet did helped drashti😆😆
or khushi and barun in ka kya hoga😉😉

poor dadi worried about her pota's 😆😆

pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo superbbb...liked it...pls continue sooon...waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
super like and thanks for the PM
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