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Wishing all my readers a Very Happy & Prosperous New Year🤗

Part 33

"Now be a good girl. Don't open until I say."

"Mayank this is grossly unfair on my poor heart. Where have you brought me?"

"No...no sneaking out of the blindfold yet. This is a surprise for you."

"Whatever." I crossed my arms in a huff.

"Hahaaa...Nupsie you are so cute. Stubbornly cute if I may add. Well you have waited so long. Why not a few minutes more?"

"I hate waiting. For anything. The anxiety kills me and especially if it's you. Every second we are apart seems like an eon has passed between you and me. I just can't seem to bear this."

"I had never known you wanted this much to be closer to me. Does even standing an inch apart hurts you?"

"Mayank!!!!.."

"okay serious now...open your eyes . I am right here beside you." I felt a sappy wet kiss on my nose as he finally removed the blindfold." So do you like it?" he peered at me through wide eyes.

The view infront of me left me speechless and numb. Cascading waterfall gently made its way down the slope. The lushly green meadows bordered it giving the running water company through its course down. The clouds appeared as if hovering over us. The world below couldn't be seen from this height as darkness engulfed them. However there was still light here as the setting sun shimmered behind the tall dark pine trees. It was a beauty to behold. The cool breeze gently played with our tresses. The humming of few lone returning wild birds added to the soulful pensiveness of the place.

"Nupur?" He gently tapped me on the right shoulder to break me free of my reverie.

"Yeah...Okay then. It was worth all the climbing you made me do to reach the top. In one word- beautiful."

I gently rose on my heels to give him a light peck on his cheek."Thank you."

"Wait, there's something more."

"Now what Mayank?"

"This." He held out his hand with a gorgeous bouquet of freshly plucked purple orchids. I couldn't help squealing in delight at the sight of my favorite flowers.

"Oh ...two words now- love them!"

I ran into his open arms to be warmly enclosed in his strong hold."But the best part of the surprise is still to come. Save your love for it." He winked.

"Mayank." I eyed him suspiciously."Don't test my patience. Out with it right now!"

"What do I get in return my feisty lady?"

I pretended to think hard." You get what is spontaneous reaction depending what your surprise is."

"Fine. Just remember your words. Give me in return what you will feel."

"Deal." I nodded my head.

"Alright ...here it is then. " I waited with curious breath as to what he could surprise me with. He was empty-handed infront of me.

I looked closer. There was something tiny glistening in his fingers.

"OH...MY...GOD..." my jaw dropped.

"Is that a no?'

"You idiot...I hate you!!" Thick large tears rolled down my cheeks.

"But I love you," he smirked. "Now cut the drama and accept it. My knees are hurting."

"Get up you dolt. It's a yes!" words evaded me further as I badly choked. He quickly slid the ring in my fingers and got up. I could see mine reflection in his hazel eyes. They were moist as well.

That was the last thing I could make out before my senses were swept away by his warm lips ruthlessly capturing mine yet with the delicate touch so ever possible. As I allowed him to savor in the delights inside my mouth reaching out to my soul I slowly felt myself drowning in the unexplainable passion of love.

Miles apart, day after day
And I slowly go insane
I hear your voice, on the line
But it doesn't stop the pain
If I see you next to never
how can we say forever

Wherever you go, whatever you do
I will be right here, waiting for you
Whatever it takes, or how my heart breaks
I will be right here waiting for you

I took for granted, all The times
That I thought would last somehow
I hear the laughter, I taste the tears
But I can't get near you now
Oh can't you see it baby,
You've got me going crazy

I wonder how we can survive, this romance
But in the end if I'm with you, I'll take the chance

Oh you can't see it baby
You've got me going crazy

Rubbing my eyes I woke up, wiping the lone tear from my cheek- a reminder of my last night dream. Hitting the alarm to stop I ran to hurry getting ready for hospital duty.

"Hey Dia, good morning."

"Morning Nupur. So are you finally coming tomorrow evening?"

"I am so sorry Dia. I can't."

"But it's New year's eve. You gotta come! Ian and I are hosting this party to celebrate with our family and friends. And you are my best friend."

"Dia, you are the only one who I can always confide to just about anything. Please understand, I just don't feel like celebrating."

"What's wrong with that guy? He hasn't yet called you since he left town?"

"I don't know. I have tried calling but apparently his number isn't reachable. I am worried if he's okay. Has he contacted Ian by the way?"

"No.Heard of his welcoming party in Atlanta through a common friend. If he doesn't bother to call you soon, he'll be regretting big time from my side."

"Relax Dia, he's just lost his father. He is spending time with his mother. There has to be some strong reason. Anyways it's been only 5 days since he left."

"Only 5 days??? Don't give that crap to me. How much can he be busy so as not to even text you a simple message? Don't defend him. And moreover don't act as if you're okay with his this behavior."

"Dia I am alright." I spoke in a small voice.

"Right. You are happy and don't cry for him missing him. Sleep peacefully at night and not constantly stare at your cell hoping he would call you anytime. You are totally in the mood to rock and roll. But care not to party in New Year's Eve because oh –its-so-not-worth –it...definitely not because I am unhappy."

"Dia."

"I am sorry Nupur. It's hard for me to see you in pain. Does he even loves you or not?"

"Yes he does."

"Has he ever actually confessed?"

"I do not doubt his love even though the customary I-love-you he never said. I don't need his words to get what he feels for me."

"okay there. But he deffo needs to make it surer."

"When he will be back I am sure he will make it sure."

"He's not one of those ditching losers, is he?"

"No. I have my utmost faith in him that he's coming around for sure. I am uncertain on –'when'?"

"When the time is right, the right thing will surely happen Nupur. We'll be waiting for you tomorrow. 8:00 pm."

"Fine." I sighed." Listen Dia...Liu has arrived. Gotta go for work. See ya tomorrow evening. Bye." I put down the phone.

There was a day when I was fine
And everything just kept in line for me
And none could preventing me
From following my dreams

But You put away the ray of the sunlight
And every shimmering moment turned out to night
No butterflies and rainbows anymore

But where I'm goin now
I'm homeless somehow

You mess me up
I'm incomplete
And start to bleed

It's me your very own RJ Marty wishing all the listeners of BGTW- 100.5 FM an advance Happy New Year. Sales are on 50% discount at Wal-Mart for shopping for New Year's eves. However we inform our listeners to remain alert as the Met department as issued a warning for an impending Hurricane arising from the East coast that may hit New Jersey tomorrow. The question is 'may'? Tune in for regular updates.


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Posted: 13 years ago
SIS...🤗
Awesome part...
i loved it lodsss...
d DREAM part was sooo amazing n adorable...
i loved it to d coreee...
Beautifully written...
wen i was reading it i was like...
awww...😍
bt wen i read it was a dream...
i was like...🥺
why d hell Mayank is not calling her???
atleast he cud send her a msg...
waiting eagerly for him to come back...
it seemed very empty without him...
loved d song...
love u SIS lodsss...🤗🤗🤗
missed u lodss...😔
so now ab ase na jana ok!!!😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shivi...girl that dream was soo so good... 😍
but why did it have to be a dream😆
U know U describe the eartly beauty so well Shivi...it makes me feel good 😍
n Nupur has developed good trust on Mayank...me likes it😳

but hey what's gonna happen to Mayank...where is he...n this calamity?😲
U better keep him safe, K.😳
will be waiting...😃
Edited by Payal-15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww luvedd the start
i thought he was actually proposing her
luvly way though
but u broe my heart by making it a dream lol
now try to update it soon
mayank is missing and we have to do somethin😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updte

continue soon

thanks for the pm.

wish u a very happy new year.
Sanugr8fan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
just awesomee shivi. awesomee..!! 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shiviii...🤗🤗
Omgg...U broke everyone's heart you know na😳...I thought he proposed her🥺..Kaminiii😡
And now I m really very scared...Hurricane??😳...Plzzz kuch aisa mat kariyo...Specially the lines Nupur said..She expects soo much from him..and we all from you...😳
I want this to be a happy ending..Got it??...😳
Update soon jaani🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
the start was so beautiful
but it was a dream
hope it happens in real as well for mayur
waiting to read next part😊

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