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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on your new SS...
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Character Sketch

Main Characters

Maan Singh Khurana: The rich guy around the whole college. He's a bully, he's mean, he's arrogant, he's ignorant, he's loud, he's hot-tempered, he's handsome, he's a person who hates loosing and he's a jock. He lives with his Dadimaa and his younger siblings; the triplets; Vicky, Dev and Annie.

Geet Handa: She's an innocent reed, she's innocent, she's intelligent, she's funny, she's simple, she's jovial, she's bubbly, she's beautiful, she hates jocks and bullies, she especially hates Samira and her gang not to mention Maan Singh Khurana. She lives with her cousin Kristy and her uncle and aunt.

Others;

Priya: Sports nuts she is; psyched about sports and is a geek techno. She's one of Geet's best mates; she's loud, she has a sharp mind and a sharp tongue.

Joshinee: Nature lover; she's passionate about animals and nature, she can go drooling over animals and how nature and the sky and the sea. She is a real geek, she loves silence and prefers not to rebuke. She's nicknamed as 'Josh' or 'Saint' by her friends - Geet, Priya and Nikki.

Nikita: Her only vocabulary is "Fashion" with a block F. She loves Fashion, latest trends, latest hairstyles, and latest shoes. It's her religion. She's nicknamed as "Nikki" by her best friends; Geet, Priya and Josh. She gets wind up very easily. She's the only one of the group who dreams about kissing boys in magazines!

Kristy: Kristy aka Krishni, one of the Famous Fashion Designer of the brand Destiny Hope. She's loves Geet to death.

Adi: Parrot of MSK, the most intelligent among the gang - Dr. Frankenstein for short.

Sameer: Parrot and best buddy with MSK, he cares about his looks very much!

Nikhil: Parrot of MSK, another jock, and sports freak!

Samira: The rich tweetie of the college. She's snob, obnoxious and has a big obsession of MSK on her head.

Anvi: Parrot of Samira

Edited by music_girl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
awesome sketch
ha ha the c sketch of sameer looks like that of a girl lol!
cont soon!
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updating...
anyone willing for an update?
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Falling For A Jock


(Character Sketch on page 4)

Chapter 1

"Touch the rainbow, and whisper your name, fill the world with happiness and fly high in the sky" a sweet voice sang inside the bathroom.

"Chotibe quick" someone else called.

"I am busy" the sweet voice said again.

"Choti, its seven thirty" the person said again.

"What?" the sweet voice choked. She wrapped herself around her bathrobe and quickly ran inside her room. Laid on the bed, was a purple salwar kameez.

"Thanks Kristy Di" the sweet voice said.

"No problem" Kristy replied.

Three minutes later; the sweet voiced girl came dressing in the salwar kameez. She combed her wet hair and wiped her wet face. She applied some little touches of make-up and slipped her slippers on. She quickly took her bag and ran downstairs.

"Geet! Eat this" Kristy pointed to the food. Geet nodded. "Where's mama and mami" she asked her eyes rounding around the dining table. Kristy smiled "I know you're not used of eating alone but mom and dad went to see granny; now I'll sit and eat with you" Kristy giggled. Geet smiled. Kristy ruffled her hair.

"Kristy DiI am going to schoolI am getting late" Geet said and kissed Kristy on the cheek.

Geet entered the college, smilingly.

"It's a new year for studying" she said as she looked at the juniors who had just arrived. She smiled. And her eyes caught something else.

~~

It was another year for studying; for being with my friends. It felt good, really nice. I, unknowingly, was smiling to myself. Well, then my terrible luck tangled me and made me saw something not really nice; the Jock's Gang. Right, MSK aka Maan Singh Khurana aka the jock, were sitting with his group of friends under a tree nearby, watching the new comers, obviously thinking of ragging. And then he noticed me frowning at him. Ever since I made my first step in this college, I, and my friends are sworn enemies with the Khurana Gang and the Samira's. He noticed me and he was staring in my eyes, checking me out if I changed or not. I diverted my gaze away and saw Priya approaching

~~

"Hey, Geet" Priya said brightly.

Geet found her smile back. "Hello Priya" Geet said and hugged her. Priya was in her short and shirt. "Hey, we met just yesterday" Priya complained. Geet smiled and said "but it did feel like years, didn't it" Geet asked smilingly. Priya nodded back.

~~

I knew Priya ever since I was a toddler at the nursery. I actually knew the rest; Nikki and Josh when I was six in my first grade. Priya is a sports nuts; and she hates girly things. She doesn't have more than three dresses, the last time I had checked! I laughed when she said we just met yesterday. I know she can't live without us, the trio.

~~

"Hi Priya, Hi Geet" Josh said racing towards us. She was in her jolly mood. As usual she was wearing a shirt written "Go Green". Geet hugged Josh, who hugged her back. Geet noticed Nikki coming slowly behind. Geet shook her head. Nikki was wearing the highest peak of heels she ever saw, in her dress.

Geet smiled and her smile quickly changed into a frown. Samira was approaching their little group!

"Hi babies, still squealing" Samira said poking her nose high. Anvi giggled.

Geet saw Priya gritting her teeth trying hard not to rebuke. She knew the war would be out. From the corner of her eyes she saw MSK and his group moving towards hers.

This was it the war had began!






Edited by music_girl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey me 1st to comment
simply awesome
loved it
cont soon
luv u🤗
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update yar loved it a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Eventhough she hates to c him..
Her eyes wanders for his glimpse...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!👏
awesome part...loved it...😃
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome update
lovely
awww loved geet kristy bonding and the friends circle was so cute
arggghhh hate this samira
omg now fight has begun
awesome precap
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm!

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