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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soni4eva

awsum update luvd it
hpe dey meet soon
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x

Happy new year x 😊


Thanks soni.
They will.
Ur welcome

Same to you!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you!


Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

whats maan's idea of saying sorry?


Will try to make it maan style 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: yogita1382

hi

please don't delete me as i m not able to read it from off
the sitte is blocked so i use proxy to read it and able to login so not able to hit like button.


Thanks for letting me know. I won't delete you.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kasurbest

Chapter 20!


I love it! Maan and Geet's bond getting stonger every passing minute. Its so sweet how they share everything to each other and feel a connection between them. I am really happy for Geet! Can't wait for her 21st birthday! hope along with giving Geet her Mom back you give us a nice surprise too. I know it's Geet's birthday, but still we readers deserve surprises too yaar. After all we are going to be the main guests at the party 😆 😉 haha.

haha yash and his boudyguards. Poor Geet! I would hate it too if I was her. lol. Loved the last scene. Let's see what face to face brings. Precape: Forgiven or not? I vote for Forgiven. I would really love to see something different and unique, than just fights.

Keep up the good updates coming!


Yes! Glad to know... Hmm! M also happy for her :p maybe it'll be a nice one ;)

Hehe yesh!! Who would want a bodyguards ;) Yes.. about fights parts agreed. So wait and see..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

oh so geet mother s alive waiting for maaneet moments do update soon


Yes! They'll be soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating in about half hour...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 21

"Easy for you to say! You know this office. I don't." she said. He shut up knowing that she had a point there. Thus he just led her to his office while she followed.

He practically had to force her to sit on the chair. Then he went to grab the torch light and walked up to her.

"Follow me." he said and she glared at him in the darkness. What does he think of himself! He was here thinking of apologizing but his small words were going to make it hard for him.

She found herself in dark room and having no other choice, she followed him. They stopped at the electric room as he fought with the bunch of keys to find the right one. Stepping inside, he told her to hold the torch light near the fuse box as he worked on it.

She was getting mad at his commands as she wasn't one of those who listen to commands. She was born to give commands herself! It's a different thing that she never misused her status. But nevertheless, his attitude was getting the best of her anger. She just wanted the lights to come back on as fast as possible. So not uttering a word, she held it. He looked at the wires here and there checking for the problem.

It turned out to be a short circuit and so he found the new piece of wire and fixed it. The light was on in about 20 minutes. Geet was getting impatient and her heart jumped out of happiness seeing the lights turn on outside. She stepped out of the small, electric room that smelt of a fire that burnt long time ago.

Maan shook his head as he followed her.

***

Pari, Vicky, Dan and Emma were again in a conference discussion their plan's success and further advancements that need to be done. Vicky informed.

"So I had a talk with dadi and she has said that Geet has agreed. So the first part of it is done."

Emma: "Super! Now as for Maan, the usual treatment will work."

Pari put a break. "Wait, what usual treatment?" all bit their lips as they remembered she doesn't know much about them. Dan answered.

"You see, whenever we want Maan to do something for us, we always try emotional atyachar. And if it doesn't work, then forcing him does."

Vicky continued, "But force karne ki naubat nai ayegi. He loves us and thus emotional atyachar always does the trick."

"Great! Some friends you are!" Pari teased them. They all gave her a look even though she wouldn't have been able to see it. Then they all laughed. Ana come out to the living room while Emma was talking to them. She asked.

"What's going on? Anything special?"

Everyone on the line went silent as they listened. "No Ana. All's fine. Just talking to Dan and Vicky. Do you need anything?"

She shook her head. "No. but you're lying." Emma gave out a sigh.

"Fine! It's not actually lying. I just didn't mention that I am talking to Pari as well."

"About?"

"Uhm' you know both Maan and Geet. Well, they both had a tiff and'" she went on to explain what happened at the mall and now how they want Maan and Geet to become friends. Maan is sorry but we just need to convince Geet, etc., etc.

Ana smiled as she found it all out. "That is cute! So count me in on your mission."

They all smiled. The more help they have, the better!

***

Maan looked at her who was busy reading the file. Vicky was right. When she talked business, she meant it. He was left to wonder on how to say sorry as she was nowhere near to talking personal things. He looked here and there trying to find an excuse to bring the topic to her.

She looked up sensing movements around. He was walked up and down behind the chair. "Anything wrong?" she asked.

"Uhm'no. I'll just be back."

He rushed out like she was about to nail him down and murder him! She rolled her eyes and shrugged getting back to reading the file.

***

Maan dialed Vicky's number. "Vicky! Help me! How do I start the conversation?" Vicky slapped his forehead.

"Dude! Are you in KG that I have to teach you basic to talk to a girl!!!?"

"Not funny Vicky! Just help me right now."

"Maan! She's in front of you. You have to talk to her and say sorry. Look, if you learn from me, then it's not saying sorry from heart."

"But I don't know what to do!" he whined. Vicky explained.

"Yes you do Maan. Yes you do. Just go with the flow! Isn't that what I always tell you?"

Maan nodded his head and accepted. "Yes'"

"Then do that. Bye!"

Maan ended the call with a satisfied smile knowing just what to do.

***


Geet looked up from the file to see bunch of orchids in front of her. She looked around but Maan was nowhere to be seen. She picked them up and took the sweet fragrance in. when she opened her eyes, she found Maan in front of her. She gave him a questioning look and he inhaled deeply.

"Geet' I know we didn't have one of the clean starting' and it totally understandable that you dislike me. I just want to say that I truly am sorry. As it is, not everything is in my control. Fate just does things' good or bad' how about we just start over again?"

He looked at her blank space. She thought, Wow! Never thought he would say sorry like this'

"Uhm... heh, well this is unexpected of you. I don't know what to say'"

He let out a scoff and said, "Just say yes or no. do you forgive me?"

She crossed her hands across her chest. "If I say no?" he gave a sad look.

"I am hoping you would say yes."

Geet chuckled and said, "People are right. Don't judge the book by its cover." Maan giggled along with her. She isn't that much of a 'Hitler' either. He thought. Geet held out her hands. "Friends?"

Maan took it happily and repeated, "Friends." Then it went awkward for them. They were newly turned friends and what were they supposed to say then? What if the other didn't like what they said?

They just sat back down and buried themselves in reading each other's quotes in the project. Both did look at each other frequently and gave a smile when the other caught them looking. After a while, Maan plopped the file on the desk and said, "That's it. I can't work more than this."

Geet put her file down as well and remarked, "Finally!" Maan narrowed his brows. She explained, "Well, I'm new to all this and working so much continuously is something I'm not good at. I was just waiting for you to call this meeting off."

Maan chuckled. "You're one crazy girl!" Geet's eyes widened. He thought she might have taken it offensively and quickly said, "No no. I didn't mean it that way."

"I know." She chuckled as well. "I can joke once in a while too." She then winked at him. He understood and laid back in his chair letting go of the stress. Geet did the same. Though her chair wasn't that comfortable as his.

As seconds ticked by, she started to get sleepy. Suddenly, she realized she wasn't at her house. "I think I should get going. Call you later?"

He nodded and just when she was about to go out the door, he said, "Wait. I'll drop you."

"No, it's fine. My car's waiting anyways."

Maan cursed the driver but nevertheless, greeted her good night. After she left, he jumped down on the chair happily. She had finally forgiven him and had found out that she is sweet and not like the 'Hitler' types he had thought her to be.

***

Geet entered the house silently thinking that Pari would have went to sleep. But as she entered the living room, she found her sitting on the couch, very much awake, and talking to someone on the phone.

Pari ended the call as she saw Geet come in. In fact, she was talking with Emma and Ana waiting for Geet to come home. "Finally! Where were you? A meeting does not take that long!"

"Pari, what are you doing still up?"

"Don't change the subject. Anyways, how'd the meeting go?"

"It was okay." She replied with no enthusiasm. Pari thought something might have gone wrong and thus started checking her hands. Geet found it weird and pulling her hands back, she said, "Pari! What do you think you are doing?"

"Considering that the meeting was with Maan, I am guessing you just might have scratched that poor person. In defense, he might have attacked you back right? So I am seeing for any signs."

Geet slapped her forehead as she sat down. "You think too much. And FYI, we did not fight. That's not the only thing I know how to do you know. In fact, we've become friends."

Pari gaped at her as she sat beside her. "You're not kidding right?"

She giggled and started going up the stairs, "Believe it or not.' She yelled down at her. All Pari could do was grin at their success. At least Maan had said sorry. Now it should be better for all of them.

***

Precap: Birthday on its way!


Previous: Chapter 20

Next: *MG-Love Story Online:3*

Intl 1: So there it is. Hope it wasn't a filler. 😳 Next will be only after Saturday! Enjoy!

Even after telling tons of times, everyone keeps on sending friend requests to this id. Please understand that I DO NOT send out pmz from this id. So send requests to -mistcreationz- instead!!!


There's the whole chapter. Sorry for the delay! And by the way, I had members ask why they didn't get a pm. Well, it was because I only send out pmz once the whole chapter is posted. Pointless to send out pmz at each installment ;)


Feel free to comment again on the second installment! 😃

Edited by Princess_Khushi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey khushi ..


that was a gr8888888 update

continue soon

take care :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update...
Maan trying to apologise...

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