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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update 😊
Prachi's part is very confusing, pls shed more light on it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
too good
khushaal said yes
and prachi is not happy...whom she admires secretly?
and here gurmeet is stuck with drashti
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read all the parrts they are really excellent & do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was a nice part.loved the last scene. n pracap is interesting n waiting for it to come.

yeah who is this guy that prachi is seeing n if she loves him then why is she not telling her brothers????????
HAPPY NEW YEAR n thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow cant belive tht this vm is ensembled so perfectly very nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow this is a great story btw i m a die-hard virman fan but just love shabir in here. he is great in this FF i mean his humor is great & loved the way there is sumthing-sumthing btwn virman of all the couple...gr8 work
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Posted: 13 years ago

Link to Previous Part 8: /forum/fan-fictions/2325057/ff-kaho-na-pyar-hain-updated-part-20-page-86

PART 9

"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"

"Main tumhe koi rickshawala dhekaye dheta hoon kya?" Gurmeet roared. "Nahi rickshawala toh nahi dekhthe, because woh itne bau nahi kahte" spoke Dharasti from her polished mouth casually.

Gurmeet gritted his teeth and shouted "bahar niklo!". Dharasti didn't move a inch as if she didn't hear a word he spoke, regaining her attention he again screamed "abhi niklon, warna utha ke phek dhoonga!" this time his anger vibrated from the top of his car.

Dharasti still didn't budge from her position building a home for herself in his car seat but she did give him a flattering smile hoping it help melt his anger.

Unfortunately for Dharasti, Gurmeet was not the melting type but he was the type to fulfil each and every word that leaves his mouth.

Gurmeet stormed out of his car like a snappy alligator preying for his victim. He smashed the front door in causing it to close tightly with a bang.

He went towards the back door with only one mission to get that "nachari ladki" out of his car.

He placed his hook like left hand on the sleek silver door handle and pulled it towards his gorgeous body.

A sudden flame of rage went up his spinal cord turning his stone white eyes into the colour of bright red roses, the red didn't represent the fragrance from heaven it was infact representing the fire from hell.

He pulled the stiff door once more but didn't feel any changes.

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Manvi reaches home to a furious Kushi who was still boiling in the anger caused by Barun.

Manvi couldn't move a step forward from the front door when Kushi hopped on her like as if she was going to eat her.

"Kya hua Di?" Questions Manvi.
"Kya hua ki bachi.. Tu itne der take kaha thi?" Says Kushi pulling Manvi's delicate ears shaped like a butterflies wing.

"Woh main apni best friend Prachi ki ghar gayi thi" Manvi blurted innocently. "Ohhh," thought Kushi.

Kushi didn't know Prachi in person, but always did hear her name from her sister so she didn't question her anymore saying "That's fine, I have cooked, freshen up and come to eat."

"Am not hungry di, am going straight to bed" yawns Manvi.

"But you can't sleep Dharasti di is not home yet" says a tensed Kushi

"Kya, she's not home yet?" Questions Manvi. "No she isn't I have been waiting for her since ages" replies Kushi.

Manvi: "But she went to a party today, maybe that why she's late, did you try calling her phone?"
Kushi: "yes I did, but its unreachable"

Manvi didn't see Dharasti when she was in Prachi's house as she sneaked in and out, but if she had seen her it would have stopped both the sisters from worrying.

Manvi: "di try calling her boss, what's his name yaar, haan Shabir" and threw the directory at Kushi.

Kushi quickly searches the directory for Shabir's number. "Found it" she claims.

She dials his number, 'ring ring ring ring'.

"Hello" says Shabir in his deep voice.
"hello sir, main Kushi" she speaks hesitating not knowing what to say.

"Kushi, huh' Tum kya mujko stalk kar rahi ho??" Shabir says in a chirpy voice remembering her name from earlier on.

A confused Kushi replies "stalk?".
Shabir: "haan stalk.." Laughing rather unusually.

"Ajeeb boss hain.." Thinks Kushi not recognising him saying "Main Dhrashti ki behan hoon, and I phoned to ask, if she is still with you?"

Shabir: "no she isn't with me I left her by the Sobti Chaudhry house.."

"Abb yeh sobti chaudhry house kaha hain yaar" she thinks asking "Have you got there household number?"

"Of course Kushi" he claims giving her the number asking her "tum Kushi ho na jisko maine aaj bachiya?"

Kushi suddenly clicked on and realised his the same guy who saved her earlier saying "Haan, main Kushi hi hoon sorry maine aapko nahi pechana.. Well I really didn't know you are my sisters boss."

"Not to worry" giggled Shabir saying "don't worry about your sister she will be home soon" hanging off the phone.

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Gurmeet was roaring like a lion now, the door he was persistently trying to open wasn't opening. He kicked the door with his large left foot out of frustration.

Dhrashti knocked on the tinted glass windows to gain Gurmeet's attention, he immediately looked at her, his eyes now spitting fire. Dhrashti pulled a funny face, laughing at Gurmeet, she started shouting "aab mujhe bahar nikal ke dhikao??!"

Gurmeet realised that it was Dhrashti who had locked the doors from inside, he was fuming, his white creamy skin now showed his green veins, which seemed as if they will burst any moment.

Gurmeet was not in the right frame of mind to take any nonsense especially from an irritating girl. He rolled up the sleeves of his black versace shirt and punched his hard fist onto the glass window. The impact of his fist made the glass shatter into tiny pieces. Dhrashti covered her face with her arms to protect herself, she didn't know that Gurmeet will be this crazy as to break the glass window.

Gurmeet put his arms through the broken glass window and opened it from inside. He stared at Dhrashti and gave a triumphant smile.

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Kushi dialled the number Shabir gave to her. "Ring Ring Ring Ring" the phone rang continuously, but there was no answer.

Barun was sat in the living area working on his laptop when the phone disturbed him. "What the!" He muttered. "Yeh Nakul kaha mar gaye". He angrily went to pick up the phone as it disturbed him from concentrating on his assignment.

"Hello" came the soft musical voice of Kushi joint with the rhythm of her heavy breathing. Her voice was so angelic that his anger turned into sweat and rushed down his cheeks calming him down making him loose himself in her voice, he stood rooted to the floor in a haze. "Hello Hello Hello" Kushi repeated constantly in order to gain attention of the person on the other end of the phone.

Barun awakens from his haze as now her loud voice sounded like a cow mooing, "bolo kaun chahiye?" He mutters. "Woh meri Di.. kya woh abhi bhi aap ke ghar pe hain? Bahut dhair hogayi? Abhi thak ghar nahi ayi? Itni late kabhi nahi hota'" Kushi blurts out at once without a breath.

"Chup" Barun demands as he didn't understand what the girl was talking about also her fast speech irritated his ears. "Kiski behan.. Kaha ka behan?!" He mutters more to himself then to the girl on the line.

"Meri behan" shouts Kushi, "bolo kaha hain woh? Tumne uske saath kya kiya?"

"What the" mutters Barun "main na tumhari behan ko jaanta hoon aur na uske saath kuch kiya hain" he spat.

"Kya??! Woh aaj Shabir ke saath tumhaari ghar ayi thi" whispers Kushi in tension.

Barun realises that she was on about Dhrashti the girl who accompanied Shabir , "haan woh mere ghar ayi thi lekin kab ki chali gayi" Barun said with no emotions.

"Kya??! Lekin Di tho abhi thak ghar nahi pauchi!" Kushi screamed. "Tho main kya karoon?!" spoke Barun with attitude and then hung up the phone.

Daadima stood behind Barun and had heard Barun's conversation. "Barun beta kya hua?" She spoke gently. "Kuch nahi Daadima, woh Dhrashti joh humaari ghar ayi thi aaj woh abhi thak apni ghar nahi pauchi" Barun said casually. "Barun! Tum ja kar usko dhoondo beta, akeli bachi, itni raat ko.. Humaari ghar se gayi thi, tum jao beta" Daadima ordered. "Lekin Daadima, main kyun?" Barun started to question but one look from his Daadi made him quiet and he left to look for Dhrasti muttering "What The!".

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Gurmeet tried pulling Dhrashti out the car, but she sat still like a statue. With no other option Gurmeet poked his head inside and placed his toned arms beneath her knees and on her smooth back.

As soon as the flesh of these two individuals met, a spark ignited in both their bodies which they couldn't name. Dhrashti felt a sudden warmth covering her from head to toe but she payed no heed to this sensation as she rolled her fists into balls and started hitting Gurmeet on his rock hard chest as he carried her in his arms and finally managed to take her out the car.

Her constant hitting didn't falter Gurmeets balance, he walked upright carrying her in his arms as if she was light as a feather. Dhrashti didn't give up, she started kicking her legs and pushing and pulling her body to escape his hold.

SPLAT! All the shuffling and moving around caused Dhrashti to fall off from Gurmeet's warm hold to the cold ground. And to add to her misery she had landed on a pit that was full of dirty mud.

Dhrashti was now covered with a thick layer of brown mud. Her smooth hair was now drenched in the slimy mud, her exposed flesh was now a muddy brown colour making her look ugly. Her face also had drops of mud splattered across, staining the actual beauty of the face.

Gurmeet stared down at her, he could see her struggling to get up when his eyes fell on her thin legs that were now visible to his eyes due to the heavy mud clinging onto her salwar. His eyes zoomed up, and he saw her upper body gliding in the mud exposing her petite figure, he then looked at her rounded face and was mesmerised in her innocent beauty that radiated from her face despite the stains of mud. He was observing her body features very closely, drinking in her beauty which looked so heavenly to him that her being covered in mud made no difference in him.

For the first time ever he looked at any women in such manner, her glorified beauty was irresistible to his eyes that surrendered itself to her divine elegance. It was as if the mud wasn't mud and in fact it was like a chocolate icing on a vanilla cake.

"Hai, iss manoos kichar kaha she aya, mera pura haal karab kor diya.., ab toh mera kamar bhi dhuk raha hain Babaji.." Dhrasti shouts.

Her loud curses brought Gurmeet back to his senses, he ignored all the thoughts that were flowing in his mind a minute ago and shouted "yahi tumhari asli jaga hain! Ab tum yahi par raho! Samjhi!" Pointing at the mud pit with his straight long index finger. This comment enraged Dhrashti, without a second thought she pulled Gurmeet's hands causing him to fall into the pit, Gurmeet wasn't prepared for this therefore he was easily thrown into the mud.

Precap

Will Dharasti reach home? What will Gurmeet do to Dharasti after being put in a mud pit? Will Barun be successful in his mission to find Dharasti as his Dadi ordered?

*******Note********

Dear Reader,
Thank you for liking this FF.. We appreciate all your feedbacks
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also please continue to LIKE and comment!! A quick question: what was your Favourite scene from this part???

Edited by s0phie_152 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome!! My favorite scenes from this part was when DD fell and landed on dirty mud😆 And GC looking at her the way he has never looked at any women😳 Love is in the air, huh?!😍 - and Arhi phone conversation😆 They are really adorable😳 Sorry i picked two scenes But i couldn't pick one of them.. i loved these two scenes a lot!!!😆 Thanks for the pm! And continue soon! - AND i know i haven't commented on the other parts.. sorry, really😳 But i hope this feedback can make it all good again😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice attempt thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

great part

i love gurmeet and drashti all parts

cont soon thanks for pm

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