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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

luvd it a lot..
pinky's covincing part was superb...
luvd to c a mature pinky...

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monika

@lovemaaneet1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Thank god ..finally geet listened pinky ... waiting for their plan...

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: maneetlover1
Awesme part.so finally geet agreed to go to delhi..
I hope the story goes like ths:
geet wil be introducd to pammi as nurse with sme other name.she cant recognize her as she didn't c geet and also dnt knw anythng abt her except name.then pammi shd decide to make geet get married to maan and make agreement with her that she wnt make maan to get well..geet agrees as she just want to stay near to man also do what she hav to.pammi also feels happy as a dumb girl wnt ask 4 share in the property..hope u like my suggestn.plz let me knw..
Mona

what an idea...I m really happy u really lik my work.Ur idea I ll keep in my mind.

For all my friends I wanna tell u once more...plz don take this story as usual Hindi films where a hero is saved after accident by a heroine.Geet's past is also quite shocking...upto that extent no one can expect.I hop u ll lik it.

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Beena_g

@Beena_g

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

awesome update..still we unaware of geet past..hope it get unravel soon..waiting for next update

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: Jass.KN
updating

SWEETY WAITING EAGRLY

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

love it yaar
awesome all the 5 parts
me waiting eagerly for next

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sakshi

@tanvi04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

mind blowing update eagerly waiting for maaneet milan i hope ki is baar jab geet maan ki maa se lade tab maan uske sath ho aur uska sath de continue soon

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Kshitija

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Posted: 13 years ago

#508

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Chapter 27

Sometimes it happens..Destiny snatches each n everything from a human at that point when person has reason to liv...a meaning ful lif.Lik Maan was.But destiny snatched each n every thing from him within moment..His lif was meaningless...when Geet gav him a meaning to his lif.But she never thought when she was giving meaning to Maan's lif...her lif one day became meaningless.even she was not in condition to think about her child.But suddenly Pinky became a reason to again give meaning to her life..a reason to think again for Maan n their child.n what gonna next she was not aware.But she had decided to move.Her confidence was coming back...Sitting in dim lite of her room she was thinking had happened n what she had to do

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In the background

O re piya haye..O re piya haye..O re piya haye..

Udne laga kyon man baawla re..Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re
O re piya haye...O re piya haye..(her confidence was coming back ..her mind wanna fly to Maan)

Tanabana tanabana bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawa
Boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahan
Sagish mein shaamil sara jahan hai
Har zare zare ki yeh iltiza hai

(she went out in rain..few hours back where nothing around her was affecting her...this world had made her lifeless...Pinky came a air having hop..Geet's emotions started to flow lik this rain)

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She came inside.It was quite chill outside.Geet started to remener each n every thing what happened

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O re Piya...O re Piya haye..O re piya haye..O re Piya...

She took Maan to hospital

Maan had turned to a statue..no emotion no reaction

Her decision to keep Maan wth them became a matter of prtest first from her Maa Rano n Mausi Leela

Then it became a matter in between whole community.She had to marry him

Nazrein bolen duniya tole

dil ki zaban haaye dil ki zubaan

Ishq maange ishq chahe koi toofan

(Her unconditional lov hav a meaning to Maan 's lif..when he started to react)

Chalna aahiste ishq naya hai
Pehla yeh vada humne kiya hai

(some where they had committed therselves foreach other forever)

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O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya
Piyaaa...yehhh piya

Nange pairo pe angaro
chalti rahi haaye chalti rahi
Lagta hai ke gairo mein

Palti rahi haaye
(One day she lost her lif...not more than a lifeless lif..having no meaning no reason to liv..when..she was running to get her lif...her meaning...her Maan back)

le chal wahan jo
Mulk tera hai
Jahil zamana
dushman mera hai
(Now she got a reason again..Pinky was that..Geet again gonna start her journey...it was morning..she was out of her thoughts..of nite..dark phase...n thinking about to regain her lif back..Her Maan)
haaye

O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#510

Same Part

They were ready to go..Pinky..Geet...Rano...Rahul...This was not easy to reach where they wanted.The plan was.First they were going to Shimla at Pinky's sister's house.They did that.It was Saturday .hal day at showroom..so Rahul went to his boss's house to get a leave.which was sanctioned after requests.Pinky couldn't go wth them to Delhi...due to Pammi.

She had to go to Punjab as her previous schedule was.So Pammin couldn't suspect .But Pinky n Addi had planned every thing.From railway station.Addi n Addi's friend Karan picked three of them n took them to his home,.He was living alone in quite big house...so staying there was no problem...

At Karan's house

Addi: Aunty I m sorry...aap mujhe maaf kar dijiye,

Rano: Addi...Pinky told us everything so don't b sorry.

Geet was standing silently.But Addi realized she wanna say something so he gav her paper n pen.

Addi: Geet I know u wanna say something...aur woh Maan Sir k baare main..

Geet(wrote) Maan kaise hai..mujhe unse milna hai (n she gav to Addi)

Addi: Maan Sir waise he hai jaise thay Geet...aur wo kab theek hongay..yeh tumko patta hai...I mean if u r wth him...n for that we hav to take every step carefully.

Rahul: Per tum karogay kya...( he came forward)

Addi: Kehte hai ghar ka bhedi lanka dhaye...aisa he hoga Pammi ki lanka...wo he dhaaye-ga(to break) ho har samay us lanka main rehta hai...( he was much confident)

Rano: Addi plz tell us...sidhy sidhy.

Addi: Aunty Khuraana Mension...Lanka nahi..waha rishte baste hai..per Pammi jaise sharoop-nakha(Ravan's sister) ne usko lanka banna diya hai...Per wahan sabhi apne hai..Maan Sir k apne...unme's ek hai...unka wafadaar( loyal) servant...Nakul..wo help karega hamari...(so Nakul was involved😲)

Rano: how?

Addi: Nakul bhi umne se ek hai..jo Maan Sir k liye kush be kar sakte hai...Pammi k aas paas wahi rehta hai...kyonki house keeping usi k pass hai..hum aisa karegay k aap log KM main challe jaayo...aur mujhe Geet per purra bhrosa hai...she ll do it...becoz sabse pehle Maan Sir k saamne Geet ka hona...unko yakeen dilla deggaa...unki Geet unke paas aa gayi hai...

Rahul: Per yeh hoga kaise..Aur tum jaante ho Geet kis haalat main hai...iske bachchay ko koi nuksaan na pahucha de Pammi ( he shouted)

Addi: Wo to kinni aur he plans main buzy hai..hum bhi kush kar sakte hai usne socha bhi nahi hoga...aur yahan rahhi Geet aur baby ki baat ..jiske bachchay k paas Geet jaise Maa aur Maan Sir jaise Pita ho..usko kush nahi ho sakta..ek baar Daddi Maa ko kush samjh main aa jaye sabh theek ho jaayega...main hu ( he smiled)

So they all were waiting for Nakul...who made excuse to buy things for kitchen...next morning around 10:30 Nakul reached there.

Around five feet tall person can do some thing this seemed funny to Rahul.

Rahul:To aap hai bhibishan (Ravan's brother) ( he laughed)

Nahuk: Apko galat fahmi hui hai..mera naam Nakul hai (he made his pitty lookin face more sad)

Rano n Geet came to meet him...

Nakul: To aap hai Geet ji ...I mean Mrs Khuraana...maine pehchaan liya...

Geet was in tears.She was really Mrs Khuraana...Till now she was self made Mrs Geet Maan..now Maan's close ones had accepted her ..But it not mattered .Till Daddi Maa not accept her as her grand son's wife.For this she had to fight

Rano: Kya hua Geet.

Geet nodded her head.

Nakul explained every thing what they gonna do...n their action would start next morning..As

Next Morning/Khuraana Mension..

Pammi had not seen Geet so it was easy for them to act

Nakul at breakfast table...Daddi Maa...Dev...n Pammi were all there.

Nakul : Daddi Maa ? ( he said slowly)

Daddi Maa: Kya baat hai Nakul ?

Nakul: Daddi Maa

Pammi: yeh kya Daddi Maa...Daddi Maa laga rakhi hai jo kehna hai kaho ?( she was angry on him)

Nakul: Meri ek Chachi hai..akeli...chacha to nahi rahe...wo akeli hai..ek beti thi uski shaddi kar di...per uska patti bhi aab usse alag rehta hai..donno Maa beti dar dar bhatak rahe hai...

Daddi Maa:To hum kya kar sakte hai..if u want money hum de dengay...kissi ka dukh khatam to nahi kar sakte per kamm to kar sakte hai...( Daddi was sad thinkin about Maan)

Pammi: Mom aise kissi ko bhi paise denne lagay to har koi aa jayega muh utha k...( she said as expected)

Nakul: Nanhi Nahi Madam..wo bahut khudgarz hai..main to yeh keh raha tha..yahan KM main kaam wali ki zaroorat hai to meri chachi ko aap rakh lijiye na..aur uski beti bhi acha kaam kar letti hai...(so this was trick)

Dev: Daddi Maa..jab Nakul keh raha hai aap usse mil lijiye...yeh theek he keh raha hoga..itna bhrosa to hai is per...aur waise bhi apko zaroorat hai ek woman ki jo apko help kar sakke...aur kissi ko fursat nahi ( he looked wth tough looks on Pammi)

Daddi:Ji beta u r rite...Maan ki dekh bhaal k liye humme ek nurse nahi ek aisa insaan chaahea jo nurse ki tarah nahi ek apne ki tarah care karre...wo Maa beti hai..to hume aur Maan donno ko dekh sakti hai...( she smiled)

Pammi: Per Mom Maan ki medicines etc kaise hoga yeh sabh...us ladki ko pata hoga to he...

Nakul: Madam meri chacheri behan ( cousin) itni padi to hai...medicine ko time table k according de sakke..10+2 kiya hai..usse aagay na himmat thi aur na koi aas pass agay padne ki sahulat...( he took deep breath)

Daddi Maa: Theek hai..pehle hum un donno ko aur kaam k liye rakhe gay..agar lagga wo Maan ki aur is ghar ki baddi responsibilites le sakti hai hum dekhate hai...tum unko bulla lo ( she gav permission n left)

Nakul:Lo Sharoop nakha..tumhari lanka main Nakul ne danka bajja diya ( he thought n left lookin at Pammi)

Geet's way toward KM was opening crossing hurdles ..she was not alone..her back was her mother n Rahul n to guide her she had Addi...Pinky n Nakul..So how she not gonna b successful to get her lif...her Maan back...

hop u ll lik plz comment n hit lik..sorry to bore u..if any think more u can tell me...u r most welcomed

Lov

Jass

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago