1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

superb..

dat was a dreamy part..
but sheena s speaking with whom?

there are lots more dreamy part dear,,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one...but no misunderstand between maaneet.plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monika1992

nice one...but no misunderstand between maaneet.plzzz

hmmm,, i think there will be some sweet moment,, abhi to MU k liye jagah nahi hain
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update
hope there is no up coming any misunderstanding between maaneet
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
till part 20
nice story...
so the story starts with Geetansh telling about his parents to his wife...
Maan has faced so much...
cont soon and pm me...

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Posted: 13 years ago
sirf mere liye

part 21...





next morning geet wake up to only see a smiling maan was seated beside her and admiring her beauty...


geet: maan, aap is waqt yaha?

maan: ha apni sleeping beauty ko dekhne aaya tha...

geet: good morning,,

maan: meri morning to ek chees se hogi,

geet looked confused at him: wo kya

maan: bed tea

geet: lekin aap to coffee then her eyes fell on on his eyes which was staring at her lips...

maan with a smirk: aaj to mujhe wo tea peeni hain,,

geet became too shy: maan aap bhi na and hugged him,

maan slowly carasses her hair and arms: geet tumne meri har subah khubsurat bana di, abb hamesha ye chehra dekhke meri subah ho bas yehi khawish hain...

geet: maan ab se aapka aur mera har din ki suruyat aise hi hogi,,, abb zindegi ki har subah aapse suru aur har shaam aap pe khatam... (line kuch suni huyi hain na?)

maan kissed her forehead: geet aaj kuch kaamse main aur aadi bahar ja rahe hain may be dhandiwaal se bhi bahar jaana padhe, tum apna aur bindiya ka kheyal rakhna,, maine kuch gaurds yaha bahar rakkhe hain... tumhe koi pareshani nahi hogi...

geet with a teasing smile: aur sheena?
maan looked at her and frown,,, and then he could tell geet is in a teasing mood, so decided to play with her...

maan: uska to aur bhi dhyan rakhna, itni khas mehman hain meri usse kuch hogaya to mera kya hoga,,,
geet gets angry on this and started to throw all the cussion and pillow at him, and their pillow fight began but soon it has end with a sweet kiss...



3pm...after lunch


maan and aadi was gone for their misson, and sheena bindiya and geet was in the cottage...three were in the samll living room...
sheena: ye sare gaurd kya geet k liye hain,,

geet: nahi sheena ye to sirf maan ne couleges hain, maan aur aadi nahi hain so maan ne unhe hamari safety k liye yaha rehne ko kaha hain,,,

sheena: safety? yaha kon ayega jo tumhe safety ki jarurat padh gayi...

bindiya: sheena tum do din k liye aayi ho kyun khamokha apne
dimag ko takleef de rahi ho...

sheena goes from there irritatedd by their answer,,,

geet: ye aise hi hain kya,,,

bindiya: kaisi?

geet: idiot,,,,,,,,,,,
both the laughed their heart out...



in the evening...



rahul came there...bindiya greeted to to come inside...

rahul: hey geet, how r u? hi bindiya...

geet: we are fine rahul, tum yaha is waqt?

sheena came there: aare usse maine bulaya, hey rahul...

geet: tum to jane wale the na rahul to yaha?

rahul: geet tumse baat karni thi, isiliye aaya hu...

bindiya went to kitchen to make tea snacks for them...
rahul hold her hand geet main tumhe lene aaya hu, main janta hu tum kis halat me yaha aayi ho, tumhari bhai tumhe maarne ki kosis bhi ki, mere sath delhi chalo geet, tumhare zindegi me koi gum nahi rehne dunga main...

geet snatch her hand from him: ye kya keh rahe ho?aur tumhe kisne bataya brij veerji k baare me?
rahul became nervous and tried to give some reason,,

rahul: aare geet tumne hi to bataya tha...

geet:maine shaadi k baare me bataya tha, mujhe marne ki baat nahi...

sheena: uff geet tumhe ye janke kya karna hain usse kaise pata chala atleast ye dekho wo tumhari kitni fikar karta hain, tumhare liye delhi se yaha agaya aur tum uss maan k pyar me pagal horahi ho...

rahul came close to geet: plss geet meri baat manlo yaha tumhara rehna safe nahi hain,,, kuch bhi hosakta hain...
geet: rahul plss dekho main abhi nahi ja sakti, maan bhi yaha nahi hain aur don't worry maan jab tak hain mera koi kuch nahi kar sakta...

sheena: maan maan maan ufff yeh ladki ki zuban ye naam lene se jara bhi nahi thakti... kya naseeb hain tumhara geet sare ladke tumhare piche pagal, maan rahul aur,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, bindiya came there and sheena stopped in middway...

geet: sheena mujhe nahi lagta tumhe koi haq hain hamare mamle me kuch bolne ki aur maan ka naam to geet k sath judh chuka hain,, chaho bhi to tum usse alag nahi kar sakti...

bindiya: ye sab kya baate horahi hain,,,

sheena: kuch nahi bindiya bas rahul apni geet ko lejane aaya tha lekin geet to kisi aur k naamse naam jodna
chahti hain,
bindiya and geet both glare at her...

geet: rahul ki geet nahi sheena maan ki geet... aur tumhe bimari hain kya har waqt insult khane ki uff, har baat pe tang arati ho... rahul i think tumhe mujhe nahi sheena ko lejana chahiye, main maan k sath ajayungi, sheena waise v do din k liye aayi thi... do din beet gaya abb tum usse le ja sakte ho...

sheena: aur ye tum decide karne wali hoti kon ho? kis aukad se mujhe yaha se jaane ko keh rahi ho?

bindiya: maan ki hone wali patni ki aukad se,,, aur MRS GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko ye haq to jarur hain na?
rahul excuse himself from the ladies as his phn was ringing continuously...
sometime later he came back,,,,,,

rahul: geet tumhare papa ko heart attack huya hain, wo yehi dhandiwaal me hain... tumhe chalna chahiye...



geet was too shocked to react,,,, so was bindiya... geet darji and family could be orthodox but she love her papaji,, he was the only one who supported her to study and also in the city like delhi which was totaly unknown to them...




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Posted: 13 years ago
yupiii me first one
looks like heat attack is also planned by idiot Rahul
hope maan come on time and stops geet from leaving with Rahul
cont. soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

thank u dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishti13

yupiii me first one

looks like heat attack is also planned by idiot Rahul
hope maan come on time and stops geet from leaving with Rahul
cont. soon



woo mishti u r the 1st one to cmnt in both my ss... love u dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh jeez!i smell sumthg fishy..!
i hope maan vl b back soon..!



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