BLOOD RELATIONS-EPILOGUE Pg 138 - Page 66

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

hi dear Happy New Year
awesome fic i just read it
plz continue soon and add me in your pm list too


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

Tamanna just started reading it... very nice re... have book marked it... it will take some time to catch all the parts... I will comment then...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice story...


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Posted: 13 years ago

HEY GUYS, WISHING U ALL A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR...

MAY THIS NEW YEAR, BRING IN MORE HAPPINESS IN ALL UR LIVES...

LOVE U ALL...

THANKX A LOT FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS...

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OK, ENOUGH OF MY BAK BAK NOW...

SO HERE IS THE NEXT PART...

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Part 24

Maan went near DJ, seeing her worried face... She was fine just minutes ago...

Maan- DJ, what happened????

DJ- nothing beta... Bas kuch yaad aa gaya...

Maan very well came to know whom she remembered... Bas usse khud kuch yaad nahi karna tha, that is why he didn't say anything further...

Geet and Annie were in their own thing, but Geet was aware of DJ's saddened face... She told Annie that she will meet her when she is free, to which Annie agreed... Geet went to DJ and said,

Geet- DJ, ab aap ghar jaaye... Aap kaafi thaki hui lag rahi hai... Thoda aaram kar lijiye... Annie tum DJ ko ghar chodkar college jao...

She said with full authority, as if they were her sister and Daadi... Maan liked her authoritative behaviour... DJ, too liked the care Geet showed to both of them...

DJ- thik hai beta, but tum aaj sham Maan ke saath ghar aaogi to mujhe bohot acha lagega...

Annie- haa Di...aap plz aaye na???

Geet- aare DJ, Annie, aap log aise kyu keh rahe ho... aap ko mujhe puchne ki zaroorat nahi hai... aap to sirf order kariye, aur me ghar pe pohoch jaungi, dekhte hai mujhe kon rokta hai... She looked at Maan and gave a wicked smile...

Maan ke mann me to ladoo phut rahe the... He didn't mind Geet's wicked smile... wow DJ, I love you for this... Aapne to wo kar diya jo me karna chahta tha... Mujhe lagta hai DJ isse humesha ke liye hi rakh legi... Maan was continuously talking to self... His face showed all the happiness... He thought of something and said,

Maan- DJ, kyu na sabko bula lete hai... I mean, hum Suraj, Shaan, Adi ko bhi bulate hai... acha sa get together ho jaayega... And Geet you too bring TJ and Khanak with you... DJ unse bhi mil legi...

DJ- haa acha idea hai... vaise bhi kaafi din ho gaye hai sabse milke... Sab apne kaamo me vyast rehte hai... Aur tumhari friends se bhi mil lenge hum...

Annie- haa, sahi kaha aapne, DJ and Bhai... Di, aap apni behen ko bhi lao na... Aapne mujhe bataya tha ki aapki choti behen hai... I will also get to know her...

Geet- thik hai dear, usse bhi le aaungi... aur kuch hukum mere pyaari bebo...

Annie- nahi Geine, aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai... She laughed heartily, and Geet and DJ joined in...

Maan was totally elated with the atmosphere in his cabin... How this girl has spread so much happiness in just few hours... It was not even an hour, may be just half an hour... She has brought so much happiness in his life... DJ ke sad mood ko bhi thik kar diya... uff, God, I love this girl... me iss jald hi batane waala hu... But usse pehele mujhe isse ye jaanna hoga ki ye sabko itne achese kaise jaanti hai...

DJ was very happy with what GEET said... She has fallen in love with this sweet girl... how fast she got gelled up with Annie too... Bas, yehi mere ghar ki bahu banegi... Maan naa chahe to bhi... Vo alag baat hai, ki he wants the same thing... I know it very well, pagal ke chehre pe sab dikh raha hai... Maan, iss baat pe, tum apne papa par gaye ho... kya choice hai mere bache... I m proud of u... she was self talking all this... She came out of her thoughts and said,

DJ-thank you dear... So be there for dinner... And don't forget to tell at your home... Nahi to vo chinta karenge...

Geet- jee DJ...me bata dungi... Aap tab tak achese aaram kar lijiye... Fir, sab aane ke baad to aap aaram karne se rahi...

DJ smiled and left with Annie...

Geet- chalo Maan, bohot time waste ho daya hai, I should head to work...

Geet was also leaving Maan's cabin before being blocked by Maan... She very well knew what he was up to and also that there was no escape today...

Geet- Maan hato raaste se... Bohot kaam hai... Geet still tried her level best...

But he is Maan Singh Khurana, she was trying to escape...

Maan- not before you clear my doubts... Sit over here...

He made her sit on the sofa, so that it doesn't increase her pain... Even in all this stuff, he was caring for her... Geet was too obliged with this gesture of his...

Maan- What was all this???? I m happy that you got well with my family, but how do you know them so well... Annie ka to fir bhi I'll accept, that you both have spoke to each other, but not completely...There is much more than what you two just showed... DJ thi isilye kuch nahi bola me...I want to know what is that, but first about DJ... How come you know DJ so well??? I have asked you from the beginning if you already knew her... But you always rejected it and now you met her as if you know her from long time... What's the matter??? R you stalking me or my life???

He was kidding with the stalking thing but had a straight face...

Geet- Why will I stalk you... your successful life is very well known to everyone... Mujhe koi efforts lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... Saare magazines me se pata chal jaata hai... She said it all with a smile on her face, but she knew he won't buy such a silly answer... The things she knew are nowhere near the stuff magazines have... She knew more than that...

Maan- But tumhe vo sabse kuch zyaada hi pata hai... These all stuff are not written in magazines... Infact, they don't even know how my personal life is... You know I won't buy such a silly excuse... Uss din bhi tumne mere life ki bohot purani baat bol di thi... tab to tumhari chot ki vajahse tum bach gayi, but I haven't forgotten it... I very well remember it...

Uff, Geet kisse palaa pada hai tera... Ye to itni asaani se nahi chodne waala... Maybe its time that you tell him, Geet thought...

Geet- Haa Maan, me tumhari life ke baareme bohot kuch jaanti hu... And even I want to tell it to you... But its not easy for me... You have to trust me... Mujhe pata hai ki jo me keh rahi hu, vo tumhe kuch samajhme nahi aane waala... But you have to trust me and give me some time...

Maan was totally out of his mind... what is she saying???? What does she know about me??? And HOW does she know about me??? But if she is so confused, then I have to give her sometime... I can't force anything on her, even if I want to... But first I have to be sure that she will tell me... She should also know that I have feelings for her and I trust her...

Maan- Geet, hum bhale hi kuch din pehele mile ho, but I want to tell you this... I don't know how you feel about me... But...

Geet very well knew what he was going to say, so she cut him in between...

Geet- Maan, abhi kuch mat bolo, shayad me jaanti hu tum kya kehena chahte ho... But I want us to know each other better... I want you to know me better... Me koi bhi jaldbaazi nahi karna chahti... Agle jitney mahine hum saath me kaam karne waale hai, I want to use them properly and productively... (uff, business dimag)... Me nahi chahti kea age jaake, hum koi bhi cheez regret kare... Aur, before you say anything, you should know very important thing... Its your right to know about it...

Maan had a confused and somewhat hurt look... Did she have anyone before me, that she is not ready to accept my feelings for her or otherwise... What does she want to tell me??? He was fighting with his thoughts, but his face was saying it all...

Geet immediately clarified his confusion...

Geet- And before, you think anything wrong; let me tell you, that its nothing related to my previous relations... In fact, I have never been in a relationship before...

This statement or rather clarification was more than a relief for Maan... He was happy that he would be her first, and probably the last too... He was happy that atleast she is acknowledging his feelings... But again, if its not related to her past affairs, then what is it that she wants to tell me??? May be he should give time to all this... She was right... Haste makes waste... And this is definitely not waste, and nothing is wrong in knowing the person more before they proceed...

Geet- Me tumhe, aur tumne mujhe achese jaanna bohot zaroori hai... I don't say that we don't know each other, but not that well... we still have a lot to know about each other, rather you don't know much about me...

Maan caught something very well, that in all this conversation she has done, it is stressed about him getting to know her better and not the other way... Maan decided to voice his thoughts...

Maan- why are you saying, I should know more about you... Dont you want to know more about me.????

That silenced Geet totally...

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Edited by Tammana_Maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vow that was a fantastic updt. geets bonding superb...loved the fact she cared as well as ordered at the same time.

maan getting perplexed...wants to know the reality.

dj knows he is lattu on geet from his face. geet wants him to know her more so that she can easily reveal the truth when she is much more comfy with him.

what does our naughty maan want geet to know... his hidden sexy side kya?

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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm that was superb update
thanx yaara
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem love it awsem update



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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update..
geet bonded with all so well.
daadi bhi maan ke maan ki baat cheen li.
so nw its tym for confrontation!!!



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
continue soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
woahhh tjjj.
loved it to core😳
kya awesum part hai😃
geet annie dadi part rocked...😳
oh god! geet going to tell maan abt the connection😲
hoping ki kuch gadbad na ho...😲
tj agar kuch gadbad hui then u r gone ...😡😡

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