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ANIMOSITY
PART 43




Agony, ran through maans vain, he wasn't sure what to look at where to look... He sat in his cottage, gazing upon a bed that only reminded of him of geet. The cottage laid over 60 acars of land, even birds were terrified of making any noise. He have won anything that he ever wanted, won what he always wanted... It never had to be by love, it was by force. Maan crashed the glass in his palm, snapping in his hand, glass dug in. Heroine laid on the side, he was trying to ignore that pain that lied beneath his heart. He surly will not let geet go, he could never. Love, if love don't happen naturally, the force will have greater effect. Maan took one clean syringe and injected right through his vain. Last time he was in drugs when his god dam mother... He crashed the big wine bottle against the floor. Everything was provoking him, provoking to do far wars then the situation should be.

Maans guards came along and informed him about the wedding. His mind was so in tense that noting was working like it should do. He just couldn't come to a conclusion after all that they shared she have left him in middle of no where.
"how long until the weeding?"
"only couple of days sir!"
Maan bangs the bottle of alcohol on the table, planning what exactly should be done in order to take this deep pain way.

Maan took the heroine and drove back towards deli. He can't bear this torment, something must have happen? Something was serious! Why so suddenly she left him? When only few days back she was all ready to accept him. Something must have provoked her. Maan drove on the main road like a lunatic. Maans guards was all there behind him. Bit to worried as he was near to drive on the wrong side of the road.

After 4 hours of extreme drive he eventually came to the khurana banglow. Opening the one locked door that he promised never to open. He pushed it far as possible, the bang echoed along the empty room. He rushed in, angrily took each one of the frame of his parents, bashing against the floor...

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Flashback in flashback about maans parents.

Maan the eldest then dev then, vicky and anny, the three siblings. Maan was never like that, he was calm, nice a friendly person. But every evil have to start from somewhere. It was a wedding day. Mr and mrs khurana, maans parents seems to be all happy, no tension. It was mrs khurana, avantikas cousins wedding. Everything was organized by mr raj, maans dad. Raj have always look after everything of avantikas family. He only had his mother and no other except far distance relative.

"mom, mom... When aunty will leave?" maan looked at his mother, who looked beautiful from every angle. All the gust always wonders how maan looked so cute even at the age of 8 along with all his sibling. They can easily guss that when they will grow up, there would be no need of work to get extra attention.
"soon.." avantika hurriedly replied before walking after a man. Maan looked at his mother confusingly, then the door bang shut on his face...

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Maan closed his eyes. Bashing the picture faints the floor. "you all are bitch. That's what you all are. You play with heart then break them, shatter them." he took his big bottle of alcohol and started to drink without stopping, closing his eyes, forcing him self to the flashback again...

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"mom... Mom... Open the door... Why have you locked the door? Why our accounted manager is in there? Mom open the door..."

Suddenly avantika opens the door, with a smile. Wondering what is going on.

"why are you knocking on the door?"
"dad is calling you..."

Maan wasn't sure but why there was a feeling of hatred within him, building of animosity, not that he ever doubt his mon but , it's just he can't stand any other men with his mom...

Later on that night, maan slowly sneek through the door... His mom and dad was fighting... This wasn't the first time, it's been like that for months, his sibling understood less compare to maan therefore less interest but he, there are something going on...

He slowly pushes the door, wide open... "why you 2 are arguing?" maan innocently asked... Was there something missing? Why were they have been in bad mood? It wasn't exactly doing any good to him mentally.

"it's nothing, you go to your bed." mr khurana shouted at him.
"NO!" maan shouts back.
"maan! Listen to your dad! Go to your room!"

Maan slowly walked off. There was something going on but what? As the day turns in to week then month... The family was expecting another child. Mr khurana was more the. Happy whole avantika seem to show no intrests, rater counting some days.

One day, maan walked in to his parens room and he over heard about all the children's custody. That was a shock. "what is custody dad?"
"get out!" avantika instantly shouted at maan. Which terrified him even more...

Maan went to his grandma, wondering what is custody...
"it's when parents separate, one of the parents takes over the duty of looking after children... But where have you hard this word from?"

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The image slowly vanished. Maan closed open his eyes, he really didn't have the gut to imagine further, then that's mean... Imagine how exactly his life turn upside down... How he became so cold heart.
"cold heart it be geet... If this is what you want"
Maan rushed out again, breaking few frame, dadima woke up instantly. Wondering whats te noise but before she could come out... Maan left.

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Marriage was delayed, it would be held first thing next morning. She wasn't sure what to look for where to go with this new life. Only thing she could be thankfully to was maan not being with her anymore. That mental man, who she don't understand.

Geet slowly closed her bedroom door, then opening the window. Last night that she would be alone in the bedroom, she observed every corner, smiling, wondering where this will take her. Wondering how everything will be so different from the next day. "well geet, think maan as a bad dream, a nightmare in your life. Nothing els. He is nothing. Worthless" even though she was saying those words to her self, a pure fear was waking within. Knowing maan, knowing how dangerous he is, that terrified her. Whole political system runs with his index finger, half of the worlds economy probably owned by him, no one dare to question him, no one dare to ask him anything then who is she?

She looked t he self on the mirror for while, wondering what exactly she is doing? What if maan comes here tonight? Her heart beat rose within matter of few second, gazing upon every corner of her room. What if he kidnaps her tonight? What if he...

No matter how much geet denied, maan is her husband. But what marriage? He forced her. And that job, it was by luck nothing els. She did not play, he is the one who offered her house and job, nothing els... It was nothing good and bad... All it can be a nightmare..

Geets concentration was broken down by the sudden bash of her window which did really take her life way. For a moment she thought there was maan reflection on the mirror. Geet drank her saliva and locked the window. Observing the room again, there was nothing.

She came back and sat in front of the mirror, looking at her self, and brushing her hair... Suddenly a smell coughs geets attention, flowed by a whisper... "do you know I always love seeing you with your open hair" geet skipped her heartbeats. She sat there frozen, wondering what to do. She knew that voice, she knew that smell, but along with strong add of alcohol that's something she did not except...

After long moment of gap and his strong cold hand around her waist she snaps and lands on the floor from the stool. Looking at him with big wide eyes.. "y-y-you..."

Maan stood up, with a glare and smile. He lazily placed one feet before another, his hand drooped the bottle, smashing against the floor. He took his right hand, "what did you expect? Dev?" his red eye shot a glare at her. That's the last thing he wanted to imagine, geet with another man. He never touched her, and she was dreaming about spending night after night with that b**** dev! Now... That's a shocker. Very shocking.
"it's shocking. Very shocking!" he sits on his knee, sliding his hand over geets frightening cheek, ten with a strong hold, he twists her hair with his hand and brings her close to his face.

They looked in deep with one another eyes... "now what made you think I would leave you this easily? Maan sing khurana would leave the girl he loves this easily... He never let a single business deal slip way from his hand... And leave his love" he laughed, a historical laugh," leave his love forever... That's not possible.."

He stands up, pulling geet up along with him... Geet closed her eyes in pain... Opening her mouth wide open, ahouting screaming for help...
"shut up! SHUT UP!"

Outside everyone started to knock on the door, wondering what's happening inside...

"lets see who saves you now..."

Maan picked her up, tying her hand then leg, she was kicking nonstop but to week, there was no way escape. He opens one of her window, climbing out with geet on his shoulder. Shoving her in his jeep then drove off...

It was only half way through the jungle when geet managed to untigh the rope and jumped from te running jeep. Maan stopped instantly, watching geet running in to the jungle.




Geet lands against a tree, bruse covered all over her. She knew the jungle very well, but running in through thick wood, that would be impossible and also bare foot. She looked at the soft floor, but this is about life and death, if maan catches her she will most likely will be dead, but she rather die in the jungle then his hand. She hated his guts after what he was trying to do...

The whole handa family was out in search for them now, the question was where are they?


Geet was running without looking where she was exactly heading towards. But then suddenly she hard crowds of people, screaming her names. A smiled covered geets face, it was them, it was her family... But before she could react, maan held her mouth and tied instantly and picked er up... Shoving her in to the jeep and drive off...


After few hours of mad driving they eventually came to maans private house. Geet was still crying, fighting to free her self. He drooped her to the floor freeing her, locking the door...

"what do you want?" she screamed and cried. Geet could easily see he wasn't in his state. Barely could see. There was needle mark on his arm. She glimpsed her saliva in fear. Knowing maan is not in any mood of listening, she tried with innocent words, hoping it will wake him up... But again he is a monster... Nothing would wake him up..



"what have I done to you? Please leave me... Please" geet backed little, but maan came forward and pulled the duppata from her...

"I always have been nice, I always tried to give- na! Na.. Not tried I always have given you everything. Everything you have ever wanted... Now where did I go wrong?" maans angry eye looked at geet.



There was one side of him, who was imagining how he will ripe er apart on that bed that lay just few feet way from them, and there was another full of anger with her dishonesty. Reminding him of his fearfully past that he learned to suppress with geet.

He pushed her to the bed, watching geet struggle to seat up again. He bends down, holding her mouth, pushing the cheek in then thrashing his tongue inside. Ripping her apart. It did not taste like they used to, back in that lift, back at there house. It wasn't the same. It tasted awful, but today he will go all the way... Isn't that's what she wanted. Someone to **** her. Isn't that's why she wanted to merry? That's why she was in so hurry...



His hand pushed both of her fragile one against the bed. His body, rested across geets with presser, moving nonstop to spread her leg.

She screamed in pain, when he went down, butting the collar bone, leaving his mark, showing who exactly she belongs to. It's maan. Geet is only maans. But why there was refusal, a refusal from his heart... Was it because it was forcing him to remember his wars nightmare, what he have done that night after his parents announced they are divorced. Opening the close door in his mind... It can't be...

He reflected up, looking at geet who was pleading , crying... "b***" maan whispered. He tore her dress, not that it was first time he seen her bare, but it disgusted him. A pure animosity was there, but that was the only thing which was provoking him to go all the way.

His hand roughly slides down to her pants, ripping that also, before his cloths joined, and eventually he forcefully fulfilled his wish.

Never knew geet is this week, faint so easily...


sorry for very late...
well hoping i can end this soon...
hehe i am sorry his secreat you will know in future and how it contrubuted to the rape.. but hurraa
all the past is finished now.. lol
only maans future and we will know everything now..
hehe
xxx

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finallyyy u updt ...interesting prt ...updt sooon eagerlyyy waiting ...
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Atleast I almost forgot but again how can I it's animosity...
Hatread always comes back but love that's hard to remember lol

It's scary... I was rushing then retread and just amazed how everything coming together.
I just can't belive it's over an year and we still don't know the real reason and guss what even after year I am dying to know that's how good you are
Now update jaldi.

Update was supper shocking I retread the first part and this again knowing maans Indepth really helped allot...
And the raping thing looks so different now...
And omg maans animosity too good

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wow...finally updated...it was awesome...after dis updt things change...rape, his hatred...

eagerly waiting for d next updt for his past...

thnx once again for a lovely updt...

hey sry if u found my comment read in ur FF...as a writer u r free to write wherever and on whoever u wish to write...wishing u luck for different forum...

bt dont forget to updt here too...

happy new year once again
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt
lovely
omg now all d raping is making sense
poor maan really had a bitter past n his hatred 4 dev seems justified somehow
poor geet was so afraid
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm!
HNY 2012
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finally an update
interesting
do continue
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awsem update please update his past more