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Posted: 13 years ago
😊nice update.
each scene was beautifully written.

and Shabbir dialogue was too good.

thanx 4 the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loving it yaar
it is a bit funny but poor drashti gurmeet ne usko sorry tak nahi bola
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Posted: 13 years ago
Totally lovin ur ff please don't go any faster cuz its hard to focos on wat is goin on. Nd who is the guy that Prachi looks @ throughout her window everyday when she reached his house nd he was nude. In anyways could u please Pm me wen u update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read your ff dear...all parts on one cigo...i liked it very much...speally last part...i was laughing while reading...just awesome...
thanks for pm and update soon...
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Happy and prosperous New Year to you and your family...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Link to Previous Part 7: /forum/fan-fictions/2325057/ff-kaho-na-pyar-hain-updated-part-20-page-86

PART 8

"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"

Prachi instantly opens her bedroom door and sees Manvi who has just dropped a vase that was put on top of a table next to her door.

The vase went in to pieces, as Manvi's eyes looked directly into Prachi and she felt how shattering her friends life had become.

Grooms often came to see Prachi, but she had never been interested in them and made plans to get rid of them and Manvi was her partner in crime.

Manvi barges her self into the room, pushing Prachi out of her way. She goes in and sees a huge guy wearing blue denim Jeans and a black Ed Hardy shirt from which his pumped up muscles were popping out. He was looking out the window so she couldn't see his face. "Bade, yaha bhi lag gaye.." He smiles to himself after witnessing a while ago a girl in his brother's arms.

Manvi sees this as a great opportunity to put her plans into action. She slowly sneaks up to him like a mouse with out a noise and puts her long arms around him, holding him really tightly, pressing his broad back into her chest.

Kushaal instantly feels a warmth of a women on him. He feels like a marinated chicken ready to go in the oven as the heat of her body swirls around him. He looks down at his stomach were she has tied her hands like a lock that can not be broken. For a moment he thinks "Prachi, yeh mujh ko kya kar rahi hain?" thinking it Prachi whose holding him.

He instantly turns to face the girl who was grabbing him, as he moves rather quickly the hands locked around his masculine body is untied.

Manvi sees his face, and like a blow of a hurricane it hits her really hard. Fainting on the soft pink carpeted ground as she recognises him from few meetings before.

Pretending to faint, she closes her eyes. Her face looks really innocent, under the bedroom dim lighting just like puss in boots from Shrek when he opens his big eyes.

Her acting is so persuading that even Prachi shouts "Manvi!" and walks towards her.

Kushaal sees her laid on the ground and recognises her as draupadi "isko kya hua?" He qustions Prachi.

"Pata nahi" says Prachi pulling Manvi's hand from the ground trying to warm it up.

Manvi still lays unconscious thinking in her head "Hai, bagwan abb iss Dhuryadan ko kaise pasaungi mere prem ki jaal main"

Kushaal stands still, witnessing Manvi on the floor but doesn't offers any help to get her up.

Meanwhile Manvi is spitting in her mind "yeh toh mujhe utha bhi nahi raha"

She notices her plan is failing drastically, she only hit the ground so he can pick her up in his arms and also not to give him any opportunity to ask her why did she hug him.

Manvi knew her plans wouldn't work with this guy, as he seemed not bothered. Therefore she decided to open her eyes and stand back up, that is exactly when Kushaal moved from his cemented position and grabbed her from the floor, pulling her up by his stomach saying "she's heavy man, lagta hain koi brick maine uthaliya".

His big hands on her clothed back was felt by Manvi, she didn't like it but didn't moan. Kushaal looked down at her glowing face and claimed "kash hamesha aisi bholi aur chup hoti" putting her down on Prachi's bed speaking again "hai mera kamar..!".

Kushaal was planning to leave her bedside, when Manvi pretends to regain concious, pulling Kushaal by his shirt collars so his face was only 2cm aways from hers.

She laid there on the bed gradually opening her deep brown eyes. Kushaal didn't know what was happening to him but felt her heavy breathing targeting his golden face when she speaks "math jao na, kab se maine tum koh kuch kehne ki sochi hain.. Magar kabhi himat hi nahi hua'. I LOVE YOU.." she whispers. Then she pauses herself for a bit looking into Kushaals naked eyes, waiting for a reaction but she sees no firework and then continues her speech again " ' From the first time I saw you at college, when u damaged my scarf and then when I saw you again on the pitch running.. Tabse maine sirf tumare bahre main soch thi hi rehti hoon.. Its love at first sight kind of thing, then when I saw you today in Prachi's house I couldn't help myself but to hug you" her confession gets interrupted by a sudden shout coming from downstairs "Prachi Beta, Kushaal koh lekar niche aah jao" says dadima unaware of Manvi being present in their house and in Prachi's bedroom.

"Tik hain Dadima" shouts back Prachi with her squeaky voice whilst Kushaal with out speaking a word takes off Manvi's hand from his shirt standing back up.

Prachi wondered how did Manvi know Kushaal because she never mentioned him to her, she also wonders if what Manvi was saying to him was the truth because it sounded utterly true to her.

Kushaal walks out the bedroom with Prachi, looking back at Manvi laid on the bed through his sharp eyes.

Manvi didn't enjoy manipulating men into thinking she likes them but for her best friend Prachi she would almost do anything even playing with ones feelings.

Downstairs everyone was getting ready to leave. Kushaal walked to his brother when Shabir spoke "ladki pasand ayi?". Kushaal was confused about everything that happened upstairs, he felt as if his soul was somewhere roaming around Prachi's bedroom as he had many questions to ask Manvi, but at that moment he was in a utter shock therefore he didn't really concentrate on what Shabir asked him answering him back "haan".

Shabir smiled to himself he was glad after a long time his brother agreed for marriage but this was his misconception.

Everyone now reached the door to leave when Dadi speaks "agle hafta karva chauth hain, aap sabko humari gar main dhawath hain.. Tumko bhi Dharasti beta, apne mummy papa aur family koh lekar anna."

Dharasti smiles and nods in agreement to Dadi whilest Dadaji speaks "tik hain Savatri, toh agle hafta dekha karenge aur rishta ke bare main bhi bath kar lenge"

The Aluwaliya Tandon family make their way home whilst Dharasti decides to makes her own way home.

Now on the main road she tries her level best to look for a Rikshaw, but it was too late to find one. She feels clumsy and says to herself "should of asked Shabir sir to drop me home, but I want to be independent, abb pas gayi nah!" looking up at the sky speaking to BabaJi.

If one speaks to God then obviously there prayer will be heard.

In the busy traffic of the busy city. Gurmeet stops his car as the lights have gone red when he spots Dharasti on the side of the road walking up and down like a mad women.

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Maanvi jumps up from Prachi's bed as soon as Prachi enters the room, coming after leaving the guests outside.

"Tum ne mujhe yeh kyun nahi kaha ki tum Kushaal se pyaar karti ho?" Prachi questioned enthusiastically without a breath.

"Main us Kushaal se pyaar nahi karthi! Woh tho main usse college se jaanti hoon! Tu fikar math kar tera kam hojayega! Woh mera prem jaal me zaroor phasega! Teri shaadi main thor kar rahungi!" Maanvi winked and high fived Prachi before leaving to her house.

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"Yeh paagal ladki itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahi hain? Kya usse pata nahi ek akeli ladki ek khuli hui tejori ki tara hoti hain?" Gurmeet shouted in his mind after seeing Dhrasti walk back and forth like crazy.

Horns from cars behind him and the yelling voice of Karan Singh Grover in a red motorbike shouting "aage chal majnoo, laila ko itna gur ke dhekega tho woh jal jal ke dua ho jayegi" brought Gurmeet out of his self thought. The comments of this man in motorbike made Gurmeet furious. Karan Singh Grover zoomed off whistling at Dhrashti.

The whistle grabbed Dhrasti's attention and she looked ahead to see Gurmeet in his metallic blue foreign imported Audi. She was flabbergasted at the thought of Gurmeet whistling at her. She smiled a cheeky smile and walked towards his car, his car was driving off but at a slow speed. She ran as fast as she could, opened his doors and sat inside, panting heavily.

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Prachi stood on her balcony, the wind played with her hairs, making it a mess, the breeze dropped her saree pallu from her shoulders, covering her chest with the cold wind, Prachi however, stood unaffected. Her dark eyes which were filled with loneliness were focused on its usual place, across the fields, she was lost thinking about her life.

"I don't want to hurt Kushaal by playing with his heart, but what can I do??! I don't want to marry him' I can't marry him' I belong to someone else" her mind screamed at her.

Under the moonlight, the tall broadly built man emerged out of his dark house into his terrace. His eyes automatically looked for her and his lips positioned into a smile as he spots her.

As if by magic she felt his presence and her eyes started searching for him frantically. Her search stopped when she spots him on his terrace. He stood still, breathing in the cold air, smiling widely.

She immediately turned her back towards him, the past nights event rushed through her mind making her fragile as she relived those moments once again in her memory.

The way he was so close to her, the way he caressed her arms, the way he wrapped her in his towel, the way her heart was racing, the way the rain drops hit her naked face playing in the tunes of his love.. it all made her shy and blush a deep shade of red.

The guy standing across on his terrace looked at her seductive back, and whispered "teri meri prem kahaani' Hain mushkil' Ki do lafzo main baya na ho paye'ek ladka' Ek ladki' Ki yeh ek kahaani hain nayi.. Ki do lafzo main baya na ho paye".

He smiled from the heart at her retreating body which was entering her room and he too went back to his dark house.

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Gurmeet turned his head towards his back seat and saw a breathless Dhrashti sitting there. "TUM! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho" he barked, his eyes red with fury he was like an exhaust pipe ready to burst. "Kudh hi seeti marke bhulate ho aur ab yeh nakhre'" Dhrasti spat back at him muttering to herself "Dhust Danav!"
"Kya??! Gurmeet Sobti Chaudry ki itni bhi bhure din nahi aye ki woh tum jaisi cheez ko bhulane lagega!"
He yelled still in anger. "Haan! Mujh jaisi cheez ko hi aap ne bhulaya! Ab chup chap mere ghar mujhe drop kardo! Bahut late ho gayi hain" Dhrasti spoke, hoping that he will drop her home now that she was seated in his car. "Main tumhe koi rickshawala dhekaye dheta hoon kya?" Gurmeet roared.

Precap

Kiska call kisko laghe ga??

Gurmeet aur Dharasti ki labmi safar!!

***A MESSAGE TO ALL MY DEAR READERS!***

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Edited by s0phie_152 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update and eagerly waiting for the karvachauth day 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
clear up prachi's mess plzzz
thanks for the pm update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!karvachauth..!
pata nahi kaun kaun kisske liye vrath rakhega?????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for karvachauth nice update

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