The day love came ss

The day love came

Hey guys…….am feeling like to write nowadays…mosly on gohem….their onscreen chemistry is kinda of inspiring me…...and came up with this concept…which I will be continuing only if have a good response…it will focus of gopi and ahem….and rashi and jigar…am not at all a good writer it's just my lame attempts to pen down my weird thoughts lol

Ah-I hate that gopi what she thinks of herself now if am going to marry someone it shall be her get ready to be mrs gopi ahem modi and to face hell

mom i wanna marry gopi instead of rashi

Gopi-bubbly sweet,loads of childishness she loves her cousin sister to bit

Ahem modi- nice but hates if someone hurts his ego he loves his younger brother and sister a lot but never shows them he prefer staying away and showing he is strict the only one who reads his unspoken words is his mom

Rashi- gopi cousin sister nice love her sister ….she is in love with someone…and only gopi knows the name(rashi is not negative character but one of the most important)

Jigar modi-ahem modi…..younger brother…he is nice…but is damn scare of of his elder brother….he is currently dating someone……without anyone knowing in his family

remaining characters are same as in the serial...

Originally posted by: xsumi

nyc
it amazing
thnks
xxx

Originally posted by: Xarina

Keep going. Looks interesting.

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Excellent!😃

Love the concept,can't wait to read more!

When you update,please PM me😛

hey all happy new year😃...hope all enjoyed themself😉

part 1

He entered his room….closed his eyes…..unable to forget the angel he just saw…..she was angelic…..her eyes….milky skin…rosy lips…….he never smile….but seeing her his lips automatically curved in a smile….she was not dress modernly simple yet beautiful…..

flashback

he accompanied his mom to the temple

he-mom…am gonna get late for office……

mo-ahem dikra….only for a few minutes…..mein zara panditji seh milun phir hum chalajayegen

ah-thik hain mom…..i remove the car till then……

He walk down the stairs in hurry….when he felt someone colliding to him……his hand snake around his waist holding her…..she was soo soft…..her flowers fell down…..her little fingers went on her shirt hold him tight and her eyes tightly closed fearing she might get hurt

She was no wonder the most beautiful creation of god…….he did not want to leave her…..lost in her beauty….admiring her each and every feature……he watch her more intensely to see her opening her angelic eyes slowly….soon he notice a small pout forming on her lips…..

Getting off his arms…

Sh-app…..dekh nahi sakte kya…… she nearly had tears looking at all her flowers down…..mein yeh sare phool apne khanaji keh liye layi thi….and because of you…..all fell……she looked at him only to find his eyes fixed on her and felt her cheeks becoming warm😳……scare to make an eye contact with him again she took her plate and ran inside the temple………….

Leaving a lost ahem behind….before he could run behind her…..ahem dikra chale

Ah-mom…….apki puja katam hogayi…

Mo-ahem….tum kohye seh kyun dikh rahe hoo…finding his eyes looking out at something else

Ah-kuch nahi mom….lets go……before getting back in his car he turn back…..in hope he has a glimpse again of her……..but alas he returned disappointed

Flashback end

Ah-kya kashish ti usme….remembering her eyes …..lips…..her skin softness……..ahem what are doing……these love crap is not for you……entering his bathroom he let the cold water fall on him trying to let it take away all that mysterious 's girl memory….

Other side

She entered her home lazily when heard someone shouting her name angrily

Ur-gopi…….kahan tit uh itni der seh….

Go-woh mami…..mein kahniji keh liye phool tordne gayi thi……she closed her eyes nervously……her heart starting beating hard at her mami's angry voice

Ur-woh kya…..tuh nah humse kam seh bhagne ki tarike dunti hain…………

When….mummy bass kijye……

Ur-rashi dikra tuh nahi janti yeh gopi…………

Ra-mummy meinne gopi koh bahar apne kam keh liye bheja tha………chodiye seeing gopi scare sh went giving her a side hug….chal gopi room mein chalet hain……….

Sitting on the bed she close her eyes letting a single tear flow out

Go-why does mami hate me….

Ra-holding her cold hand….gopi she does not….mummy aisi hi hain…aur ab mein teri di hoon nah mujhe ek pyari si smile bhi nahi dehsakti nah……soon her lips curved in a beautiful smile making her face glow……..and giving her a hug…..acha chal bata mere liye apni kahnaji seh kya manga

Looking at her di she smile naughtily and replied…….meinne khanaji seh kaha meri di and jiju koh humesha khush rakhna shouting her last bit and making rashi blush and eyes widen

Ra-gopi shaitan😆…rukh….batati hoon tujhe jeeju ki bachi………

And she chased her whole house…..their laughter filled the house………but will this happiness stay…….