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Posted: 20 years ago
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Rrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiing ....... "It is 730 am" Rrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiing

The talking clock ringing the silence away of a new dawn ..... startled the bed of blankets moved..... lost and confused he raised his hand blindly swapping at the darn clock ..... thinking if i hit it just right it just might shut up .....before sujal baiya throws me out of bed...... Yaawwwwwnnn ......

RISHI a booming voice soon trailed .... arent u ready yet .....

Big B ..... Aaap office jauu nah ... mei nehi aungi .... aap jauna ...

Rishi rishi .. what m i to do with u ...... u know some day u gotta step in for the responsibility nah ..... Rishi felt his brothers hand ruffling his hai r....

Aaaaawwww not today big b plezzzz ...... promis tomorrow ok ....

shaking his head sujal left the room .....". well no poing dragging him out in this monsooon ...... : he thought

Fresh toast all waiting on the table with the paper and warm brewing coffe ..... but i'm gonna be late .... looks like i gotta skip breakfast and run.. meetings wholeday ......

SUJAL kahaa jaungi thu ..... breakfast kaungi beta ..... Winching he turns ... ahh mamah ..... plezma bohut theer chuki ..... meeting leye maai late hogaya ....

No excuses ur sitting eating then u can go save the world.... The stern eyes booring into him ... how could he say no to her .... teeke mamah ....


.....

Rushing in early morning traffic is a lost couse ....... he was late he was angry and not one soul on this road seems to be cooperating with him ...... drawing a curse he floored the accelerator hoping to bypass the yellow light before it turned red....... DAM Missed it...... as he sat there cursing ...... he saw her

nimbe creature are dainty and sweet ....... walking in the rain smiling and twirling amist al this caos she was but a dream ....... dressed in white she was an angle

he must have looked silly gawking at her for she turned and smiled at him .... the first time his heart flutered ..... who was she he thought ..... "Pppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii "

Aaaaaaaaaiiii ja ja .....a rude auto wala scremed abruptly brought back to life he searched for her but she was long gone .. he drove on shaking his head .. but still she was there who was that dainty creature .... i wonder......



guys tell me if u like to know more will cont to write ....

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Posted: 20 years ago
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heyyy its nicee y not its abt r sujal v alll will luvv if u continue😳

suree plzz do continue😉

luvv,dina!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey blaze79...... its a nice one..... plz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey blaze79

please continue...its very good..

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Plz Continue...😛

Rocking Yaar!!!👏

Plz write abt Sujal Kashish romantic scene!!!!😳😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi blazy79
it is nice story plz contiue and write sujal and kashish👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi! nice story. Gud beginning. pls post the next part soon. Will be waiting for it.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Blazy welcum to the forum....

Ur story is such a refreshing air to me.......sach i just love that Aaaaaaaiii Ja Ja........

I know sometime happens, if our morning starts badly then whole Day is Spoiled.......

Do Continue....

Rameen..........

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Posted: 20 years ago
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BLAZE79 CAN U POST UR NXT PART SOONER
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Posted: 20 years ago
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yeh that should cool contune

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