Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 64

Originally posted by: -sofiya-

aw what an lovely update !

Originally posted by: swaron502

osm...luvd it...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome part

loved it very much

vicky ne neha ki photo as a wall paper set karli how sweet😉

and this raghu😡ye jarur kriya ko tang karega😡

update soon waiting eagerly for the next part😍

Originally posted by: AlexArsha

cool update.. keep updating.. and yea.. don stop it.. plzzz...

Originally posted by: -sofiya-

ahha Awesome Awesome yar totally Loved dude con soon !

Kria avoids raghu and starts walking

Raghu: hang on... Mai tumse baat kar raha hu...

Kria: par mai tumse baat nhi karna chahti

Raghu: ohhh... samajti kya ho apne aapko...kya kaha tha uss din.. Mujhe.. raghu yadav ko gali di tmne

Kria: haan kyunki tum ussi layak ho...

Raghu:ssshhh...bht bolti ho tum...mirchi jaisi hai tmhari zuban and he tries to touch hr face

Kria: dur raho mujse.. Looser

Raghu: shut up... Khabardar agar dubara muje kch kaha to... Tum janti nhi ho mujhe...

Kria: jaan na b nahi chahti..

Raghu: ufff ye gussa... Tumhre chehre ki khubsurti ko aur bada raha hai...

Kria: hat jao mere raste se..

Raghu: nahi hatunga... Trust me tmhari in adaon ne mjhe ghayal krdiya hai... Ab to mai tumhara diwana hogaya

Kria: scared...jaane do mujhe...

He holds kria's hand

Kria: haath chodo mera... She tries to slap him...

Raghu: no baby... Yeh haath sirf pyaar krne k liye uthana..aise galat kamon k liye nahi...

Rey enters

Rey: haath chod

kria: rey

Raghu leaves kria's hand

Rey punches on his face.. N raghu falls down

Rey: *Red eyes* how dare u touch her... Uth... Uth saale... N he hits on raghus stomach wid his knee...

Raghu gets up n tries to punch rey

Rey holds his hand n twists... N den hits on his back wid his elbow... raghu becomes unconscious n falls down

Crowd gathers...

Rey holds kria's hand n takes hr away frm dat place...

rey: tum thik ho na?

Kria shivering

Rey: kria.. R u ok.. Daro mat...m here...

She burst out crying...

Rey: dont cry... Kuch nahi hua... Kria... plzz mat ro

She hugs him tightly n cries...

Rey: kria stop crying plzz...

Kria:*crying* sab meri galti hai... Mai hi pagalon jaise kisi ko kch b keh deti hu... Cries louder

Rey: no kria aisa nahi hai...

Kria: aisa hi hai.. Aaj k baad mai kabhi kisise baat nahi karungi...kisiko kch nhi kahungi

Rey wraps his arms around kria n rests his head on top of hers..kria cries into his shoulder n wraps an arm around rey's neck

Rey: shhh dont cry... Maine uska mu tod diya...n rubs kria's back warmly...

He releases kria slowly...n smiles weakly, wipes some tears off of kria's face... Tum haste hue, shararat karte hue acchi lagti ho...

Kria's eyes softened... Aap nhi hte to pata nahi kya hojata

Rey: m always wid u...you are not alone...smiles kindheartedly...

Kria: smiles... N stares rey wid love

Rey: chalo canteen chalte hai..

Kria keeps staring

Rey: kya hua tumhe...oye kria...aise kyu dekh rhi ho... chalo..

Kria; ha...Kya kaha aapne?

Rey: tum kaha kho gayi...i said lets move to canteen

Kria: ohh ...haan.. Chaliye..

DO HIT LIKE N COMMNT IF U LUVD IT😃

Originally posted by: twilightmystery

amazing!!

love the way rey hit raghu

hahahaha raghu ko uka sabak milgaya

how dare he touch rey's lady love

😉😉😉

superb writing

continue soon