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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ayesha786xxx

Awrrhhh that was soo sad but I LOVED it thanks for the pm and please update soon xx



Originally posted by: dumas

that was the most heartbreaking chapter ever

loved it its true khushi was right yet she paid over and over so sad she can't have a biological child but she has a big heart they can always adopt more awesome update



Originally posted by: bookadict303

Omg! Loooved it! Continue very very very soon! :)



Thanks to you all. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

whoa! did not see tht coming!! it was rele good though. very nice twist! great job hun! this was a great update!!



Glad I managed to surprise you there. 😊 And thanks.

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

A big hug for you! That was an amazing update! Heart-breaking, too. Can't wait to read more!



Thanks, and 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nici0306

i was actually crying... i feel so sorry for Khushi.. and yes she has all the right to say all what she did.. once and for all... loved it.. so much... you come back with more interesting turns in each updates...



Originally posted by: prettyasjen

That was heart breaking, poor Khushi! Update soon please! I think Arnav n Khushi need sometime together!



Thanks to you both. It was emotional...I know, but glad you are enjoying it anyway. 😊

Originally posted by: malluangel

shit. o my god.
thats...i feel so horrible for her.
o god.
o my god.
that was angsty. as you put it, really angsty, i mean the way khushi just burst out, i dont blame her.
i mean anjali has seen her share of gloom but somehow her happiness always ends up as khushi's semi loss...
but im loving the ending, i mean arnav fully understands how much he ruined, for himself, for her...



Thanks. Angsty it was...yes. And Arnav had to go through it too..to feel at least some of what he put her through and what he took away from her.

Originally posted by: Vsc94

Till when will Anjali's bura saaya bring misery to khushi? This is what happens when a man gives FAR too much importance to his sister...at the cost of his own happiness!😡



I think we're just about done with that in this FF. Promise. 😊

Originally posted by: hilly

Vidiya ! :D
I believe this is the first ever comment i've got to post. I wanted to last time as well, don't know what happened then.

You're one amazing, fabulous writer ! honestly, I've caught up to your threads in no time, and they've just awestruck me ! Truly loving how've been developing their story in the future, and I can so imagine it like that.

All the character synopsis and the way you've developed them are just great, loving the self-made women Khushi, those adorable kids and the fully supporting friends. Last post, my heart went to Nita (the little one) , going throu cancer. everything was so surreal and just so real.

I've felt the dialogues and the imagery, loving the kids especially. Keep it up, and keep this going. I don't want it to end, lol. You're just great with everything from dialogue, to getting into the character and pouring their heart out, to maintaining a correct plot that matches the absolute correct timing and atmosphere. Loving it all.
Please post again soon, I'll be gladly looking forward to it as always <3



Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it. To find that people like my work is satisfying...to say the least. 😊

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

Omg!! vidhya...
it was totally unexpected...nice twist..
feelin so bad for khushi...!!
great update
continue soon

Divya



Thanks Divya. Glad you're enjoying it..even though it IS too bad for Khushi.

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

Am so sad, that was so unexpected. I feel so sorry. That was written beautifully, esp the last part, where arnav khushi shared their pain with each other.



Thanks. 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

LOVED this update. I think its my favorite hth update so far. Im glad khushi finally expelled all the bitterness that was building up inside her. In a way, she was right. The only mistake she made was, what? Being forced to marry an already married shyam? Because of that, she was kicked out and blamed by anjali, who blindly trusted her husband. Yet while she was able to remarry and be pregnant at 39(which is prob very dangerous for the baby), khushi cant have any kids. She totally got jipped in life, but hopefully she can get through it with arnav, her daughters, freddy, and nigel



Thanks! Khushi had to let it all out..she's only human. I'm glad you liked it. 😊

Originally posted by: smileyhug7679

Wow man poor kushi


Couldn't control herself


Awesome update glad they r here for each other now



Thanks.

Originally posted by: prerna1

amazing part
plz continue soon



Thanks.

Originally posted by: zafi

Wow, what a revealing chapter. Anjali and Aadit do have awful timing. 😡I did agree with everything KHushi said about Anjalis chatacter being weak and all and everything else she said in anger.

Brilliant chapter, well done.⭐️
You really made me feel for Khushi and what she has been through.
Anjali has had it so easy.😡
Update soon.😃Thanks.😉



Thanks. They do indeed have very, very poor timing. Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Brilliant update Vidhya!! I did feel bad for Khushi, Anjali does manage to steal the thunder all the time! But most of all, I loved how you didn't drag this issue and instead made it alright with ASR and Khushi <3 The last 2-3 paragraphs were so well written! 😳


xoxo
Aanya



Thanks Aanya. Fortunately I have the luxury of being able to write my mind, and not have to deal with producing a 22 minute episode 5 days a week. Else this chapter would've gone on for about..oh...I dunno...3 months. 😆😆

Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: slgirl

oh no!! That was sooo sad..Poor Kushi and Poor Arnav 😭



Sad it was..but happy times will be here very soon.

Originally posted by: lexaxel

That was heart-breaking, I've got this huge lump in my throat.

Now tht Khushi has got tht off her chest, maybe she can in the truest sense move forward.
Beautiful update Vidya👍🏼!!!!!



Thanks Nancy. In response to your earlier comment, I'm glad you had a good Christmas though it was very busy. I had a nice day too. Actually, I had the best cake I've ever eaten in my life that day.😃. Had a fun day with family. Very nice.

As for this chapter...it was a little gloomy. But like you said, essential for Khushi to move forward.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

awesome...but y khushi has to suffer again...dont do dis to her :'(



Aww. It'll be all better soon. Promise. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samiya.tas

It was amazing... simply amazing



Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

Thanks for the PM. Poor Khushi. She has been through a lot. Freddy handled the situation well.



Originally posted by: Audiwalia

Don't u think u being parshal wid khushi... I m feeling bad 4r her...



Originally posted by: savvz

ohh.. me gone all teary and all..

that was heartbreaking.. poor khushi and arnav...



Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Ah Vidhya..! It was a really emotional one!


I couldn't read the entire update in One go! I took a lot of breaks so that I wont cry in office!😭

That was cruel for what happened to Kushi..! But still, that made their love heal..!

Thanks for the PM 😊



Thanks to you all. Am am sorry it was so sad and made you all upset. Will write a less gloomy one soon. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: littlemoi

whoa.. wht a twist vidhya!! the dinner was definitely explosive!!

really happy abt tht khushi finally let it all out... she needed tht!!! when khushi and arnav were crying... i had tears in my eyes too!!
plz plz plz continue soon with the next chapter!!



Yep...Khushi needed to let it out..Anj and Aadit had it coming. Thanks.

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

that was just so... i cant find words. i feel so sad now... and it's just the begining of the day!! boo hoo! my poor KKG!!



Thanks. I will try to be less gloomy in the next chapter. 😊

Originally posted by: moon_mine

though it ws heartbreaking...bt u managed to write it too well!!!!

jst awesome!!!!
loved it!!!!
pls cntinue soon!!!!



Thanks. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hirushinz

that was amazing 😭 I was crying my heart out...

Thank you for doing such a fab job on this FF... I need pms when you update next!! Sent you a buddy request already!! 😊



Thanks. And will do Re PMs. 😊

Originally posted by: -sia-

That was such a sad part but a great one!!! Poor Khushi how much she had to suffer!!

Loved the last part especially these "A place where a hard-nosed, arrogant businessman could weep in peace, and where a tough, intelligent and self-sufficient woman could accept she was a little broken. They fixed each other. Or at least, their love did. "
Guess love can break all barriers!!
Loved the update and looking forward to the next :)
Thanks a lot for the pm :) :)





Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: thecraze92

aww it was as sad as beautifully written! kudos to you 🤗



Thanks dear. 😊

Originally posted by: Mysticnavya

An amazing update as usual !!!!! It was so heartbreaking 😭 !! Loved it !!!!! Thnx for the pm !!!! Update soon !!!!



Thanks.

Originally posted by: alice54

Great Update!!!!

I did expect an abortion but not this...am utterly shocked...
a very very heart breaking update🥺🥺🥺
Felt really bad for Kushi and Arnav...And ofcourse Anjali is really lucky, everybody always wants her to be happy and they sacrifice for her...
continue soon...i dont want them to think about this again...



Thanks. Anj does lead a charmed life..that's for sure. And they won't be thinking about this much...that's for sure.

Originally posted by: srahs

aww sad, poor khushi feel really bad for her.


thankx for pm



Thanks.



Sorry!

Originally posted by: vampire-girl

that was so emotional update... i was crying by the time i completed reading the update...😭😭



Are you sure you're a vampire? 😆
Just kidding...sorry. And thanks for reading and commenting.


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Originally posted by: -Dee-

That was so heart-breaking. Khushi's outburst.. OMG.. that was really angst-y.. But Arnav's going to have to be more than supportive and this time, I am sure he'll do his part - his love, care and passion for Khushi will help them cope up.

And Vidhaya, I loved the chapter.

Thanks for the PM

Dee 😊



Thanks Dee. Glad you liked it.



Sorry!

Originally posted by: ssr565

Oh Vidya. Absolutely loved it. I really cried for them. It was so heartfelt good work.
Edited
I didn't realize I was first ha ha ha
Hey Dee not fair.
But agree with u though would want a happy ending
May b a miracle from God. Science has also adv so Much. Let them hv a baby. Kind of blessing from Devi Maiya.
Hey Vidya. Truly Love ur ff. Ur Khushi has gone thru hell she deserves to b happy.



Thanks. And sorry Dee best you to it...next time. You want they should have a baby? You people have got to (just absolutely got to!) stop giving my storyline away. And that's all I'm going to say about it. 😊

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

WOW i was in tears while i was reading this... TOO GOOD!



Btw i have some question:

How did Khushi get pregnant, i mean Arhi weren't married so did they just loose themselves in a moment? Or was it purely out of love?




Thanks. And for the answer to your question, read Chapter 14. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49408025



Originally posted by: ipkkndank

OMG ...

I never thought about this story like this way =)
Wonderful dear =) well , Kushi finally let out her all inner feelings na =)
And that too in one chap . Amazing =) =) =) ...
Anyways continue soon dear ...



Thanks. Glad I managed to surprise you. 😊



Thanks.

Originally posted by: SanayaBarun4eva

its heart-wrenching... felt for khushi... and about anjali, i just hate her, so well served medicine by khushi to this dumb bimbo anjali.. after all she is the reason behind Arnav-khushi's so painful separation, her abortion and now her painful sterility..
i just hate anjali 😡



Don't hate Anj man. She's human too..and much of what's happened to her...just happened. She didn't maliciously do anything to make it that way...though she has exhibited poor judgement on multiple occasions.

Originally posted by: Luvanya

Awesome FF and last chapter is really heart breaking



Thanks.



Thanks.

Originally posted by: frockstar

You are my favorite writer in FF. As much as i love this story, i hate kushi behaving the way she did.

Any amount of pain she had gone thru is not justification for her outburst at Anjali's pregnancy. Its a new life comin to the earth for gods sake!! if you cant be happy at another persons happiness, then that makes you a miserable person.

I wish kushi would let go of her grudges and become more forgiving. atleast to people who repent their mistakes from the bottom of their heart. if she doesnt then there is no difference between her and anjali.

Good job on the FF again...



Thanks. And I have to agree with you re Khushi's behavior. What she said was pretty pathetic. Her only excuse...she's only human. And she's been through quite a bit. So, this was her catharsis, so to speak...and she realizes she's behaved badly.

Originally posted by: oh.petite.one

awww poor khushi 😭 i suppose i should say poor arnav too, but at this moment i feel more for khushi



Amen to that.

Originally posted by: T4YY4B4

loved it! plz add me to ur PM list



Thanks. And will do.

Originally posted by: Zeee

omg!!!! poor khushi! i have to hate arnav that little bit more. and god!! anjili, i want to like her, but jeeez she makes it difficult.

xxx



Anj does make it hard. And no hating Arnav now..after all...he's been a good boy for so long. 😊

Originally posted by: meenaluma

vidya u r great awesome updates



Thanks much! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vidya! This has to be my favourite chapter so far!! I absolutely loved it.. U have to be one of the very few writers who has managed to bring tears to me.. & trust me when I say it.. The site with my eyes with tears is as rare as a big bang or a supernova explosion!! 😆 This chapter.. u managed to bring those memories back to me which were buried inside me for longest of times.. something that turned me into a total nonbeliever of people.. I trust nobody in this world except myself!! 😕 I can very well correlate with what Khushi would be feeling & why she broke down.. & more than that the sarcastic but truthful venom she spitted was very much needed for her to maintain her sanity!! I can recognize with her a lot.. she did go through a lot of pain & we can argue Anjali may or may not be one of the reason but the truth still remains that it was her, her mis-trust on Khushi her weak nature & her non-compatibility of not recognizing the snake inside her own very husband that brought all the wreck in Khushi's life!! so, her behavior untill now in ur story was very much justifiable.. as to why her heart didn't manage to forgive Anjali while she forgive Arnav & everyone else!!

Also, I loved how u managed to get Khushi-Arnav closer with this bitter truth coming across Arnav & how much he has changed that he can break down in front of Khushi & can manage to make promises of no more secrets btw them.. But I absolutely adored him for saying that Nita & Shiela are his own kids & he loves them.. all he cares for his Khushi & this happy little family that they have now managed to build up after going through so much in their lives!! He wouldn't even care if he has his own kid, his own blood or not.. it's Khushi that makes his life worth living.. it's her who makes it all happy & worth everything he has & will have!! Superb!! 👏

Anyways, it was truly brilliany!! Ur one of the best writers of the forum.. one of the very best I'm coming across with each passing day with all the FF's & OS's being introduced in the IPKKND forum!! Just love the way u portray things... awesome, brilliant, BEST!! is all I can come up with.. 👏 Keep writing wonderfully..

Btw.. sorry for this veryyy late reply!! Hope u enjoyed Christmas & Happy New Year to u in advance!! Enjoy to the fulles.. Keep rocking as always!! 😊🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 31: Gaata rahe mera dil'

2 days later

Anjali opened the door. Khushi stood there with a gigantic bouquet of orchids in her hands and a look of contrition on her face.

"May I come in?" she asked.

"Come on in," said Anjali, smiling slightly.

"I've come to apologize. I behaved badly that day. You came to.."

"Stop!" Anjali interrupted her. "You don't have to apologize. Not to me. I understand how you feel. I'm a woman too. And although it was never my intention, I have ended up hurting you. More than once. For that, I apologize most sincerely Khushi."

"It's all in the past Anjali. I need to move on. I think I have. I'm sorry Anjali. I'm sorry I said all that. And I'm very very happy you're going to be a Mommy. I can't tell you how pleased I am." Khushi smiled widely. Anjali leaned over and gave her a hug.

"Thanks for the lovely flowers," she said, leading Khushi into her kitchen.

"Where's Aadit?"

"Oh, he went out for a bit. Want some cake?" she asked, opening her fridge to fish out a magnificent offering smothered in chocolate. She cut Khushi a generous slice and herself one double the size, as they sat down at the kitchen table.

"Oh, don't look at me like that. Ever since I've found out I'm pregnant, I've been eating like a pig. I don't think its cravings either. Just greed!" said Anjali, in response to Khushi's wide eyes stare. They'd barely finished the cake when Anjali looked at the clock and exclaimed. "Oh, look. Is that the time? I'm supposed to meet Aadit at the park for our daily walk. Why don't you go with me Khushi? He'll be very happy to see you."

Khushi wanted to see Aadit too. She wanted to apologize to him as well for her appalling behavior. She readily agreed. They sauntered happily to the park discussing whether or not they should venture to watch "Don-2". Anjali was a Shah Rukh fan unlike Khushi, and she'd been dying to watch it, except Aadit didn't watch Bollywood and had put his foot down. Khushi suggested she call her brother, who didn't appreciate the magic of King Khan, but would do anything for his sister. Even if that meant suffering through a movie he didn't care for. She smiled to herself secretly, "That's revenge for preferring cricket over ME, Mr.Raizada."

They'd reached the park now, and were making their way up a pretty path to the rose garden which was blooming now. Suddenly, the quiet evening air was disrupted by a loud voice that said:

"Yo boys i am sing song" Freddy stepped into view.

"Soup song" said Nigel, wheeling out Nita in a stroller.

"Flop song" sang Aadit.

Khushi stared open-mouthed at them while Anjali just laughed.

"Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di?

Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di?"

They sang in unison, all 3 of them, perfectly in sync, like they'd been practicing.

"distance la moon-u moon-u

moon-u color-u white-u

white background night-u nigth-u

night-u color-u black-u", sang Freddy with a perfect Chennai accent, as if he'd been raised in Egmore, not Ealing. He ended by offering Khushi a pink rose that she accepted.

"What is going on?" Khushi asked Anjali. Anjali shook her head, as if to say she didn't know.

In the meanwhile Khushi's FANs were standing shoulder to shoulder and singing the chorus together again.

"Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di?

Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di?"

"White skin-u girl-u girl-u

girl-u heart-u black-u

eyes-u eyes-u meet-u meet-u

my future dark" , sang Aadit soulfully to Khushi. He finished with a flourish, handing her a single yellow rose, and Anjali a red one.

"Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di?

Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di?", they sang together again.

Suddenly Arnav appeared from behind a tree, with Sheila clutching one hand.

"hand la glass

glass la scotch

eyes-u full-aa tear-u

empty life-u

girl-u come-u

life reverse gear-u

lovvu lovvu

oh my lovvu

you showed me bouv-u

cow-u cow-u holi cow-u

i want u here now-u

god i m dying now-u

Marry me Lovvu"

He knelt in front of Khushi, and pulled out a box from his pocket. He took her hand in his, and opened the box to reveal a sparkling, solitaire diamond. "May I?" he asked. She was too stupefied to say a word, so she merely shook her head. He slid the ring onto her finger.

"Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di?

Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di?", Aadit, Nigel and Freddy sang while Arnav and Khushi kissed. Sheila and Nita clapped their hands gleefully, even though they understood nary a word.

"Why this strange choice of song?" asked Khushi later on when they'd all trooped back to Aadit's house to celebrate.

"Oh, you know, you seemed in such a murderous rage the other night, it seemed appropriate to ask!" said Aadit slyly.

"Oh Aadit. I'm so sorry about that. I really am," said Khushi remorsefully.

"No Min. It's quite alright. We were selfish and you were right," said Aadit, hugging her.

"If you must know, it was Anjali's idea," said Freddy lazily, twirling his champagne flute in his hand.

"What? You knew about this?" Khushi turned to Anjali.

"I merely suggested that a romantic proposal might be appropriate. The choice of song was certainly not mine!" she shuddered.

"Oh! Who chose the song?" Khushi raised an eyebrow. Freddy looked at his shoes. Nigel pretended Nita's cap needed adjusting, and Aadit decided he needed more, well he hadn't decided what he needed more of, just that he needed more of something not currently available in the living room. He made to go into the kitchen. Arnav alone looked unflinchingly at Khushi.

"Arnav, did you choose the song?" asked Khushi.

"Err.No. I wanted to sing "All I want is you" by U2," said Arnav.

"Then what made you change your mind, to such drastic effect?" asked Khushi, looking extremely serious.

"I dunno. The guys felt a comic effect was wanting," he shrugged.

"It was a proposal of marriage. It's supposed to be romantic, not funny you twerp!" said Khushi.

"I thought you already proposed. I was just giving you a ring," said Arnav brazenly. There was a collective gasp at this. Freddy, Aadit and Nigel looked at each other furtively. They didn't think this was going to end well. Anjali stood up and walked to her little brother. She pinched his ear hard, and he let you a loud yelp.

"Di! What the!" he exclaimed.

"Chotey! What a stupd thing to say. A lady never proposes. And if she does, a gentleman never tells. This was supposed to be your big romantic gesture. Though I guess I was a fool to leave it up to you men and not ask you which song you'd picked. All Aadit said to me was, "It's the biggest hit of the year! She'll love it." She turned to her husband. "Did you really think this was an appropriate choice of song you idiot?" she yelled.

"Now, now honey. Calm down. It can't be good for the baby for you to get all stressed out like that," She swatted his arm away angrily. "Fools!" she muttered under his breath.

"It's OK Anjali. I'll live" said Khushi dryly. "We better get going, it's time for the children's bed time."

"We'll bring them over in a half hour Min, why don't you and Arnav enjoy a nice walk home?" said Freddy. Khushi looked at Arnav. He shrugged his shoulders at her. They left together.

She unlocked the door and stepped into the dark foyer of her home. He pushed a switch, and the lights turned on. She gasped. The entire living room was lit up with strings and strings of lights. Blinking, golden lights. Much like the ones she'd wrapped herself in, a long long time ago, by a pool. There were also lilies, sunflowers, gerberas, carnations and violets all over the room. Arranged tastefully in vases and baskets.

"Arnav, what is all this?" she turned to him, surprised. He held out a single red rose to her. She took it. He led her to the couch and sat her down. Then he knelt beside her.

"Arnav, you already.."

"Shhh. Quiet," He said. He picked up a guitar that he'd hidden behind the sofa. Then, in a soft, scratchy, raspy tone that sounded like he had a cold, but was actually just him trying not to get too emotional, he sang.


I wanna make you smile,
Whenever you're sad.
Carry you around when your arthritis is bad.
All I wanna do,
Is grow old with you.

I'll get you medicine,
When your tummy aches.
Build you a fire if the furnace breaks.
Oh it could be so nice,
Growin' old with you.

I'll miss you, kiss you,
Give you my coat when you are cold.
Need you, feed you.
Even let you hold the remote control.
So let me do the dishes in our kitchen sink.
Put you to bed when you've had too much to drink.
Oh I could be the man,
Who grows old with you.

I wanna grow old with you.

(Original song: I wanna grow old with you, by Adam Sandler).

And Khushi. Khushi looked at him like she'd never seen him before. Her eyes shone with unshed tears and unmeasurable love. Her lips quivered with emotion. And she was too choked to speak.

"I already gave you a ring, so I can't give you another. But I have something else for you. Something much better," said Arnav. He fished out a trinket from his pocket. Then he slid her sandals off and placed first one, then the other silver anklet around both ankles.

"I once stole an anklet from you as a keepsake. I returned that one. But I wanted to give you one myself. So we can make new memories. We need new memories, you and I," he said.

"Arnav. I love you. I love you. I love you. I. LOVE. YOU." She said, throwing herself into his arms. He hugged her back. "I love you too Khushi," he whispered.

At Aadit's place.

Freddy phone rang. He answered it briefly and then turned to the others. "It's safe to go home now," he said to the others.

"What do you mean safe?" asked Aadit, puzzled.

"I mean Arnav has finished proposing properly.We can drop the kids off there now," explained Freddy patiently.

"Didn't he just propose in the park?" asked Nigel puzzled.

"If that was a proposal, my granny's a Victoria's secret model!" snorted Freddy.

"No, that was just an elaborate ploy. A decoy if you will. For something better. Much better," He said.

"So, you mean Arnav had a better idea up his sleeve than my Kolaveri plan?" asked Aadit.

"I knew it was you who picked that awful song!" said Anjali, swatting him on the shoulder.

"Arnav! Of course not. But, luckily Arnav has a friend in Me. I had a better plan. Though, to be fair, he did come up with the details himself. I only told him to surprise her at home. I don't exactly know what he did. I'm as keen to find out as you folks." They left soon after for Khushi's home. Freddy wasn't the only one who wanted details!


"They'll be here in 20 minutes," said Arnav. Khushi nuzzled his neck. "You better be quick then. 20 minutes isn't too long." she said laughing.




Alrighty people. That's the last one for 2011. Let me wish you all a very, very Happy new year. I am off on vacation tomorrow. Expect no updates till late next week. Or, be very, very surprised if I do update. (I'll be surprised myself, honestly😆). I wanted to leave you all with a sweet chapter at the end of the year. I hope I've done that. Tell me what you think.


Cheers!

Vidhya




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NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated) NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to Shibani aka oh_nakhrewaali P R O L O G U E The whole house was decorated like a bride. The lights were shimmering,...

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Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

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Posted by: desidillse

11 months ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

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