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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hy guys im back with a one shot again hope u guys like it...
Our First kiss
At vadhera mansion virat was sitting in his room thinking "usne mujse aise baath ki uski himmat kaise hui woh mujse ithna rude kaise ho sakthi hain" recollecting the huge fight between him and manvi last night……..

Manvi is also staying in vadhera mansion after she was shot by the killer.she was treated and viren felt jeevika will not feel comfortable sending manvi immediately after her treatment so vadhera family decides to make manvi stay with them and now its more than 5 months of manvis stay in the vadhera mansion…….

Manvi in her room is thinking "woh chep apne apko kya samajtha hain usne manvi ko insult kiya aaj tak kisi ki himmat nahi hui(in her own andaaz)"

Both had a lot of ego who should call first and talk but neither of them took the initiative……..both wer staring at their fons expecting each others calls…..hours passed but there was no sign of fon cuming……….

Manvi shouted on the fon "jab tak mene uska pyaar accept nahi kiya mere piche hi padtha that din mein hazaar bar call kartha tha lekin ab uske akad dekho ek call nahi kiya kal se…….aakir galti uski thi jagda usne shuru kiya tha……………….call bhi use hi karna chahiye………….."

And here virat is also expecting manvis call……..it was time for evening tea and both virat and manvi are in hall………they jus stare at each other after a while all others move both are sitting alone………..

Manvi thinks in mind "baath kyu nahi kar raha hain mujse ……chep kuch toh bholo"

Virat is thinking "bandariya tum pehele kuch bolo"

Manvi saying in mind "arey chep ithna bhi kya ego haan jab tak tum nahi bologe mein bhi baath nahi karoongi tumse"

Virat is saying in mind "teek hain phir dekhthe hain kon pehele bolta hain"

One week passes still both of them don't talk to each other even while meeting they move away………….

Manvi is thinking about one of the sweetest moment in her life her first kiss……

Flash back:

It was about 2 weeks after virat proposed her and manvi hadn't accepted her love…..he had asked her to say her decision that day night on the terrace…….so manvi was thinking mein use pasan toh karte hoon lekin kya uske family wale muje accept karenge….and for hours she was thinking it was 9:50pm in the clock and virat said he will be in terrace by 10pm……..she had 10 mins left she hadn't decided anything yet………..she started dressing up…….she was wondering y was she so much concentrating on her looks even though she hadn't decided anything yet…………..she was looking at her reflection in the mirror for 5 mins and now the clock striked ten she ran to the terrace holding her saree which was horribly tied by her………

In terrace virat was waiting and the terrace was decorated so beautifully with lights and ballons and rose petals all the way manvi walked she thought can anyone do so much for me……….she went near him………….she could see the question in virats eyes he was waiting for her answer..but bfore that he notices her saree which was completely messed up…………he slowly went near her and manvis nervousness increased …….he sat on his knees and startede tieing her saree properly manvi closed her eyes as he was tieing the saree……..he comes across her waist and stops his hand over their….he gets up and hold her cheek with the other hand…….he holds her tight grasps her closer………..he whispers in her ears "manvi tumne mera jawab nahi diya" she blushes and rests her head in his chest he was in cloud nine as he got the answer of his lifes most important question………….

He left her rest on his chest for sometime………….she was feeling the warmth of love on his chest his hands still on her waist slowly he took his both hands away and moved them to hold her face……he took her from his chest slowly like she was a5 yr old baby……..he held her face on both his hands she was not looking into his eyes she was still blushing…….he said" arey mere sherni ithna sharmarahi hai aaj barish varish na aajaye….." ohhh it started raining soon……..manvi started running to go down but virat catches her from back and holds her thru her waist now manvi had to surrender to him……..she turned and she could feel the love for her in his eyes she wanted to kiss him for the happiness he had filled in her life though she was expecting him to kiss her first….she forgot all those thoughts and held his face in her hands and went near his lips….virat was quite surprised by her move but he was happy too………….she started eating his lower lips virat couldn't control any more both went deep into the kiss and may be it was the longest kiss ever and manvi's first kiss too……………

Now:

A knock on the door…….

Manvi was back to reality and tears on her eyes.she wiped them and opened the door it was jeevika who said "hum sab bahar jaa rahe hain aane mein raat ho jayegi virat ghar mein hi hain tumeh kuch chahiye toh use kahedena teek hain….."

Manvi nodded her head as a sign of agreeing to it…………..

All of them leave……

Virat also thinks about their first kiss…..he feels the love he has on her her and decides to give up the ego and go and talk to her……

Here manvi also decides to talk to him both run to see each other and end updashing…………

Both of them simultaneously say "Woh muje tumse"

Both smile for the coincidence…..

Again it happens then virat says"tum pehele bolo"

Manvi says "nahi tum bolo"

Virat doesn't say anything he goes near her and starts kissing her so deeply as if he was eating her lips…….as he released her lips from the lock……she kisses his face all over and comes down to his lips and she eat them too as a sign of revenge….they hug each other and both whisper in each other's ears "sorry"and they don't break their hug till they felt hungry and it was almost 3 at noon………..

Ok guys how was it???? I know im gonna repeat this dialogue "I had no ideas while starting this" actually I wonder without any ideas how do I manage to write this much……..ok enough of my blah blah now…….

U guys please comment on it so I can know how well I write and how much u liked my story………its basically a one shot…….

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS yaar,,,😊
what a title,😉,,,
i enjoyed it😉😳...
do write more...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Perfect!! I'll say it's just perfect!! I loved it! How do u think of this?? Seriously!! How? Gosh I'm in love you!! Lol :)) thanks for the PM! :) will look for more:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was amzing i really likd it thanks 4 pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...
loved the os...
it was hot..
loved the way virat tied the sari..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tooo gud... it ws wow ! awesme , perfect !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the PM, the OS was really romantic. VirMan's cute fight, their first kiss and how the made up were simply amazing. ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesomw yaar
,tooo good,,,,plz cntn
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is really good, keep going

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it..Thanks 4 the PM...

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