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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 9(B)

aww geet called up in maan's office to take an appointment to meet him...
but that jerk only knows how to ruin things, he dnt know her name... how great this MAAN SINGH KHURANA is...urgh maan mp is coming to kill u😡
Sukhmani Sahib Paath - well that was a surprise shru... tujhe pata hai sikh religion ke baare mein???😲
how sweet of manpreet (which is unfortunately me😉 - this is called apne muh miyan mithu😆) to arrange a paath and invited geet also...mp tu toh sahi ja rahi hai😆 maan toh kuch karne wala nahi hai, tu hi kuch kar
maan din't notice geet giving prasad to everyone, well he himself was busy, and she thought that she is hallucinating... and last mein maan din't listen to mp, just zoomed off from there...missed his chance to meet her sweetheart 1...well what more i can expect from him...yeh maan kisi kaam ka nahi hai😳...



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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 10(A)

awww pari fighting with maan for not letting her meet her massi... that was so sweet of her😊
maan pehle kam kaanfuse hai shru, jo tu use aur kar rahi hai... but finally he managed to figured out that geet is NT/myra's sis, but he himself shrugged his thoughts off, he just couldn't bare to even think geet as myra's sis...well that was expected...!
just to clear his doubt, he got all info about geet...
chalo finally he got to know her name "thankyou babaji iss dhakkan ko kuch toh pata chala"... well ek doubt clear ke NT is not geet but unfortunately she is, to which maan is oblivious...
now dhakkan's mind struck that the girl who was calling him yest was geet...
YAY ab toh yeh milne waale hain...


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Posted: 13 years ago
Haila...yeh kya????
Confession😲
*THUD* ... mp fainted...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 10(B)

She knocked his cabin door, he missed a beat, he turned his chair around and did not say any thing, she was not expecting that any verbal affirmation so after waiting for 30 secs she entered to find him seated with his back facing her, she smiled and went forward and with a bit loud voice she said

G: good after noon Mr. Khurana

He was surprised by the high pitch of her voice, though that day he had not registered what she said but he very well observed how soft her voice was, with a little hesitation he turned around, she smiled widely and put forward her hand

G: hello Mr. Khurana

He looked at her then at her hand and after few seconds shook hand with her. His heart told him not to leave her hand but his mind warned him, she may be writing Ms. But Maan don't forget she is married and even if she is not you j\have no right to hold her hand more then manners requires to, so he let go off her hand .

G: I Geet Handa, think yesterday you did not get me

M: um

G: its ok sir, you are a busy man so it's natural for you to forget the ones you oblige

He gave her a not approving look, she was closely observing him

G: sorry and thank you sir

M:???

G: sorry for being a bit rude and thank you for giving me an appointment

M: O

G (I were right he is not deaf just dumb, but he can hear loud voices, that why he was behaving strange that day): sir I wanted to meet you for a project

M (gave her a puzzled look)

G: sir not for some hotel etc, but for a architectural and planning project

M: ???

G: sir I know you are an architect planner and have heard that you were the best student so sir I have this small project that I want you to work as an architect planner for. It needs your expertise sir

M (is so puzzled that he is unable to form words so decides to remain quite)

G: sir let me explain

And without waiting for him to say anything she starts the explanation, as she has watched Myra work many times at home she was aware of the presentation part and plus she had many sketches Myra had left semester after semester in HSPur.

She went on explaining Maan wondered why she was not waiting for his input, she was not speaking fast but loud, and she was stressing on words while speaking, she was also keeping an eye on his facial expressions and she answered his doubts before he could voice them. She was also using gestures to explain which he was finding quite strange.

He looked at the sketches and all with keen interest, few sketches were he was sure made by his own hand, and few were looking as if were sketched by Myra and Yash, he was quite sure that the apartment sketch was the one from the group project the tree of them did at college, but how was that possible.

After about an hour he ordered coffee and snacks and as at that time she was busy extracting some data from her laptop she did not notice it

So when the peon came with them she was impressed, after another 30 mins she finished explaining. All the while Maan had no need to say anything, she was very precise and did not leave anything unanswered. He was impressed, in the end

G: so Mr. Khurana this is what we want, here is the CD you can think about it, please study it and let me know if you are interested, then we came discuss about economics part.

M: um

G: ok now I shall take your leave call me when ever, (sorry) I mean tell Pinky to call me whenever you are ready

M: w..

G: ok sir, bye, sorry and thank you

M:???

G: sorry for bothering you and thank you for giving me so much time

She put forward her hand he shook it

G: bye sir, good day

She gave him a wide smile

He was amused when she left without letting him say bye, he again wondered why she did not let him speak, he took the phone and dialed Manpreet's number

Manpreet has left for Mumbai after the Paath with Pari, she had lefty Pari at her parents' house as she was leaving for Europe for 20 days, with Prem, they had to attend a 3 day new hotelier's conference and then the group will head for a 15 day Europe tour.

MP: yes Maan

M: have you dropped Pari?

MP: yes

M: when are you checking in?

MP: in 15 mins

M: well

MP: hey how was your meeting with her?

M: nice but

MP: but

M: she did not let me speak and she was speaking a bit loudly

MP: laughing

M: why are you laughing?

MP: she was using gestures also

M: how did you know?

MP: she thinks you are hard at hearing

M: what??

MP: and dumb

M: what??

MP: poor soul, its after marriage that wives do not let their husbands speak and here she s not allowing you to speak much before that, she has already muted you

M: Manpreet!!

MP: Maan

M: try to tell Prem everything

MP: will try

M: if you will not I will as soon as you return

MP: Maan

M: ok give him the phone, I want to talk to him

MP: ok

P: hi Maan

M: hi Prem

P: yes

M: take care and I want her back as she is leaving in single piece no damages and no messing up with her

P: yes

M: be with her

P: yes

M: don't let her have hard drinks

P: yes

M: don't let her go anywhere alone

P: yes

M: don't roam around at night

P: yes

M: don't '

P: Maan shall I leave her back here

M: sorry Prem, but its for the first time she is going on her own, and that tooo abroad, I am a bit worried

P: she'll be ok

M: thank you, best of journey. Bye

P: bye

After he hung up

MP: what happen?

P: tell me Manpreet is he really your husband

MP: means

P: I mean he is very possessive about you, but he does not sound husbandly

MP: you will soon know

P: pardon

MP: he is always worried about me and Pari, that's it

P: no there is something more

MP: Prem the announcement we shall leave

Part 11 (A) coming soon

hope you liked the part 10(B), 😊😉
she did not let him speak😆 OMG Maan muted 😆 good going Geet
😆 he found his sketches in her portfolio😲 he is confused why she has them 😕😲 lets see what he will do now
now what will happen in europe😳 Prem ki Preet I mean Prem ke mann ki preet yaani MANNPREET☺️
now the parts have started merging...

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part 11(A) page 122.5thJAN2012
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant one...
yeh maan bhi kabhi boltha he nahi..
aur ab geet bolne ka mauka bhi nahi diya..
en logon ka kya hoga????????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome
oh wow they meet again...
well i was expecting sign language...
Geet was continuously not giving him chance to speak
but she guessed he isnt deaf...
i loved how Maan was just mute all the time...
Geet showed him his own sketches...
and also myra and Yash's made too...
waiting to see more of maaneet..
Continue Soon

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
oh yaar that was really comic that she thought him to b dumb and hard to hear...
loving the bonding bw maan and mp...
waiting for the truth to b out soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10 b
OMG Geet didnt allow Maan to talk at all...
and Maan the idiot didnt open his mouth also...
very good...
cont soon dear...

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