Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 2 pt 37 pg135 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago


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thnqq for d lovely comment... !!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

Mishti tum inn dono ko kab mila rahe ho... kab Maan Geet ki liye apna ehsaas ko samajh payega... mujhse or intezaar nahi hota


hii sayanee...
jaldi mila dungi yaar...😛
btw ur ff mrutyunjay is fantastic...
but i dnt gets pms from u 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 24
nice part...
what secrets Geet's family have that Sameera knows and probably Geet and not Maan...
lil' Geet was so wanting Maan to come back to her...
this Geet is putting forth the fact in front of Maan but the guy is not understanding...
cont soon dear...



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thnqq for d lovely comment... !!
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all d questions vil be answered till we reach to part 30..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

i used to follow this in FB...

now thanks to the pm...
the last update was painful...
wat happened to her when he was gone...
did brij do something with her...
poor maan still not able to understand his feelings...
i think he will only when he sees someone else with geet like the other night with sameer...
eagerly waiting for the next


hii preethi/...

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thnqq for d lovely comment... !!
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miss our discussion baord in fb 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

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naliniami, harikashiva25, dpurva, krishna., geniusbm, scarce05, drashtipatel30,


thnqq for d LIKES N COMMENTS...

gos dis chanding likes n comments soon gonna give me a heart attack...

it hardly takes a sec to hit d like button...
and a min to do comment...

dnt i deserve a min of ur time... ? ?

feeling very sad..plzz keep d likes n comment to a constant rate atleast...

love

MISHTY


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Posted: 13 years ago

recap :
geet rolled her eyes - dats final...let me consult wid d doctor...
maan - geet stop...dadi is not well...n i hav to take care of her...
geet looked at him - i see how good care u took...
dadi maa - geet bete...
geet - no more words...we r going to mumbai dadi...wid dr's consult ofcorse...

*************


Part 25


geet had a small discussion wid dr n came to conclusion dat she had to stay in delhi for a week..untill dadi gets well enough to travel...
geet agreed as it was for dadi maa...
but she had no idea to stay in khurana mansion or handa haveli...
she knew..whose gonna drag her...she rolled her eyes at d thought...
...
geet - dadi..mene dr se baat kar li..aftr 1 week..we r going to mumbai...
dadi maa - geet relax..u r over-reacting..im fine beta...
geet - yaah..i can see dat..is it d reason u r here...
maan and suzeil came in..
maan wid cheeky smile - ek aur rasta hai...jab tak dadi thik nahi ho jati..tum yahan ruk jao...
geet rolled her eyes...does he think of himself dat smart...oughhh...
suzeil - yaah geet..plz stay wid us..we hardly know each other..v vil have great fun..
geet smiled weakly - i wud hav loved too...but i cnt ignore office..i hav many important meeting scheduled..i hav already postponed dem for a week..as i can take dadi wid me only aftr 1 week...
maan making angry face - u know wat..i hate u...
dadi rolled her eyes..while geet ignored like she didn't even hear...
suzeil giggled watching dis childish maan...
maan had never been like dis to her ever..it was kind of amusement for her..
maan more angry - me tujhse baat kar raha hu..tune suna na...i hate u...
geet - i know dat...
maan to dadi maa - dadi ye aise ajeeb ban gayi hai...pehle dimag khati tha..ab puri jaan khane lagi hai...
dadi - beta relax..hum geet se baat karenge...
geet - forget it dadi...we both r leaving by weekend...
maan - fine jo karna hai wo kar..par ab ghar chale...dr ne discharge de di hai...
geet - u take dadi home..i vil cum in d evening...
maan - where r u going...
geet - to keep my luguage...
dadi looked at geet wid pain..vil she not stay wid dem...
maan confused n sumwhere angry started to build up - wat do u mean...
geet - i hav a booked a room for myself..n i vil be staying dere for dis week...b4 uttara drags me to...
maan cut her angrily - enough of it...forget it geet...u r not going anywhere...
geet looked at maan sternly - dnt strt it again maan...
maan was super annoyed now - wat d hell is just prob wid u...im done wid dis..enough is enough...
suzeil knew...dey r again going on d wrong track..
she decided to ease d situation...
b4 geet could retore back...
suzeil came forward - no way geet...dis is so bad..i hav cum india for d 1st time..n u vil not spend even sum time wid me...m i dat bad...
geet calmed herself - suzeil listen...plz try n understand...
maan came forward holding geet's hand - its u who need to understand geet...get it clear..u r not going anywhere..u r going to stay wid us in khurana mansion...
geet looked at maan wid her peirced eyes...
maan looked at geet wid angry eyes...
dadi was again in pain...dey hav changed so much...
dadi - geet beta plz..humare liye...
geet looked at dat wid pleading eyes..not to force her...
maan snatched geet's luguage from her hand n made his way out..leaving a fuming get behind...
he didn't give a damn...
enough is enough...
he had enough of her stupid anger...she is my geet..n she vil do wat i want...
she never refused me for anything..den y now..stupid duffer...
...
geet calmed herself - ok..but i had to go sumwhere for now..its urgent..vil see u ltr...
suzeil nodded wid a smile..
dadi looked at geet suspicious - geet where r u going...
geet looked at dadi wid assuring eyes - dadi maa calm down..i hav to go...
dadi looked at geet angrily - u r cuming wid us now..
geet didn't listen..hugged an angry dadi n left instantly...
suzeil looked at geet n dadi confused...
she dnt understand anything at all...

...

HANDA HAVELI shuddered in fear...as d strong footsteps of GEET HANDA made its way in...
malini who was sitting in d hall..looked at d door in shock of her life...
she saw geet...GEET wid 6 super strong bodyguards cuming in...
is she halucinating...she must be..
it cnt be real...
she stood up lost in her shock...
malini screamed in anger - GEEET...
...
d loud shout echoed in while haveli...
rajjender and brij came out hearing d loud voice...
but stayed rooted at deir places baffled n shocked...
brij's blood boiled in anger...
while rajjender looked at geet wid fear...
geet didn't even bother to look at any of dem...
brij came towrds her shouting in anger - tu yaha kya kar rahi...
but b4 he could even reach geet...2 strong bodyguard held him tight..not even letting him move...
malini n rajjender were shocked of d act while geet's face didn't even show a single wrinkle on her face...
geet started to walk in, ignoring d presence of malini n rajjender...
malini angrily - ek aur kadam aage mat badhana geet...
geet stopped...
malini - chhodo brij ko..tumhari himmat kaise huyi brij ko aise pakadane ki...
geet looked at malini wid her peircing eyes...
dose eyes were so dark n peircing dat it made malini scare for a second...
geet didn't ans n made her way in...
2 guards stopped at malini n rajjender..keeping an eye on dem...
while last two guars made deir way wid geet...
malini rajjender n brij kept looking at her astonished...
wat just happened...
is dis d same geet...who stayed wid dem for past 15 yrs...
she seemed to be sum1 stranger...

...
geet went to her room...
she had to break d lock...coz it was locked...
as she entered d room...
a very dangerous fear once again engulfed her mind...
she shivered to step in...
she held d door tightly while her eyes became red wid fear and anger...
and 1 of d worst memory ripped out of her mind...

FLASHBACKS...

aftr 2 months...

geet sat in a corner of room..holding an old album...staring at her n maan's pic wen maan was 11 yrs old and geet 9...
it was pic of maan's bday n she made a greeting wid her own hands...
very beautyfull msgs..deir funny chats..beautiull collections of pics of her maan n dadi of many times...
maan's fav song - rup tera mastana...
d greeting had everything...
so d pic was like maan in d mind..hugging geet sidewise...and d greeting in other hand...bothing laughing full heartedly...
she carrased d pic again...and d tear formed in her eyes...
maan havn't called since he left...
he already forgot me...didn't even bother to call..if im dead or alive here without him...
maan..plzz cum back..plz call me...im sorry i fought with u...
im really sory..sachhi..plz vapas aa jaona...plzz...mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya hai...
...
it was true...
she herself didn't know..wat just happened to her...
like she forgot smiling...laughing..joking...
she nevet went khurana mansion aftr dat...
it was dadi who used to cum to meet her...
dadi never talked abt maan thinking it vil hurt her more...
geet's different behaviour made dadi realize dat she hav started to possess feelings for maan...
she loved d thought..but den her condition was making dadi hurt...
dat old geet...had lost sumwhere...
or may be..maan took dat old geet woid him...leaving behind dis strange geet...
so dere she was...
sitting in 1 corner of her room...
crying..holding maan n her photo...
...
d door of her room banged open bringing her back to reality...
geet looked at door..n her heart filled in fear...
it was brij...
brij looked at her...while geet looked at him scared...
it was 1 month since brij is back..n he never left single chance to scold her...or sumtime slap her...
she never complained...
brij came in while geet instantly stood up...putting d album sideby table...
geet gently n scaringly - brij veer ji aap...
brij stood in front of her..staring at her...
brij - tum fir se ro rahi thi...
geet looked at him confused..he never talked wid her in good manner..den y 2day..
but her mind calmed..and d fear decreased...
geet - nahi veerji...wo me bas aisehi...
brij sweetly - geet...tune apni kya halat bana di hai..na bahar jati...na padhai par dhyan hai tera...
geet made sad face - im sorry veerji...
brij - maan ja chuka hai geet..uske bare me sochne se koi fayada nahi...
geet started to cry again...
brij put his hand arround her shoulder to console her...
brij - geet...maan aisa hi hai..isi liye me humesha se tumhe aur sam ko usse dur rehne ke liye kehta tha...
geet looked at him confused..thinking.." y veerji is saying like dat...wat did maan do..here im missing him n veerji had his own new story..."
brij - geet..me usse achhi tarah se janata hun...jab tak teri jarurat thiu..tera istamal kar liya usne..aur ab chala gaya..dusri ladkiyon ke paas...tujhe chhodkar...
geet looked at brih wid pain... - nahi veerji..maan aise nahi hai...wo to padhai karne gaya hai...
brij - nahi geet...tum bahot bholi hona esiliye...wo humesha se aisa hi tha...ladkiyon ko tissue paper ki tarah use karta hai wo...
geet started to cry - nahi veerji..maan aisa nahi...
geet left from deir crying her eyes out...
...
wid tears..she ran to khurana mansion...
she felt safe dere...near dadi maa...
y veerji was saying like dat..he is very bad...
my maan is not like dat...
he is gone for studies...i know him...i trust him...
as she entered d hall...
her eyes searched for dadi maa...
due to continuous tears..she couldn't shout..her energy betrayed her...
she madly searched for dadi..
just den...
d phone in hall started ringing...
geet smiled wid tears...
for sum reasons...she felt it is maan's call...
she knew..its her maan...
she ran to phone..
n picked it...
...
d silence prevailed for a min...
she couldn't utter a word...
while maan waited for sum1 to speak...
maan - hello dadi maa...
geet's heart skipped several beats hearing his voice aftr complete 3 months...
it felt like bless...hearing him..just him...
geet couldn't speak a word...
while maan didn't got any answer..so he assumed its dadi...
...
maan excitedly - im in love...
...
geet's heart explored in happiness...
her heart beats increased like anything...
finally maan realized his feeling for me...
he must be remembering me as much as i remember him...
say it maan...
just say once...
...
maan - her name is SUZEIL...
...
geet's smile slowly slowly feded...
like d colors of her happiness..slowly slowly turned to black n white...
her heart decreased n finally stopped beating...
she just forgot wat is d meaning of breathing...
her confused..expressionless face..slowly slowly died...as d realization hit her heart like a big stone...
like sum1 just snatched her heart brutally from her...
like sum1 just snatched her life...saying she dn't deserve to live...
like...
like she is no more...
hav she died..she cnt hear her heart beats..she must be dead...
is she in heaven...
she looked around..but could see nothing but black color..
like she is blind or sumthing...
is it not heaven..
i m in hell...i m surely in hell...dats y its black...i vil not meet mumma papaji here...dere r in heaven...
she was so lost in herself..
dat she forgot maan is still on d call...
...
maan - dadi say sumthing na..i know u r shocked..but i myself dnt know..how it happened...but i love her...her name is SUZEIL WAHBARG...she is dad's frnd daughter...
...n den
...geet kept d receiver down..cutting d call..
n left from dere...

...
[ flashback continues... ]

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IMP - frnds plzz hav sum patience..i know u all r very much eager to know d past..if i just tel d whole past in 1 go..wat interest vil remain in d track..i vil revealing almost all d past in next few updates..n i need good resnponse from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating..if u want more n more updates from me..dnt not forget to like n comment..i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

love
MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
waiting to know more past
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice part
poor geet😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update cant wait to find out about the past loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heart touching part feels very bad for geet..awesome part dear..continue soon loved the new type of geet vt her bodyguards..

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