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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it 😊
nice songs 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awsome
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the delay TJ...
cool romantic awesome updates...I specially love the song choice...just amazing. Bilkul unke dil ka haal pata chal gaya...just perfect.
Really eager to read more...please jaldi update karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey TJ Awesome Parts Dear😳😳😳😳😳😳😳... ok i knw i again missed so many parts nd again gets late in commenting😭😭😭😭😭😭... But wahi same purani problem😕😕😕😕😕😕😕... last tym Maaf kar dena ok🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔... From next tym i'll cumment on tym Pakka nahi Double Pakka wala Promise.😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...

ok nw cuming on Updates dey were truly outstanding😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳... i Loved each nd every Bit of it😊😊😊😊😊😊😊... totally in Love wid Maaneet's moments😳😳😳😳😳😳😳... U truly Rock yaar⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👍🏼
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Do continue soon... Loved it so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the delay guys...
i have been living at my sis' place for sum days...
so i m not able to write anything...
also, its a festive season going on with christmas and new year...
so busy with all parties and celebrations...
I know u all wait for the update...
so, i m leaving this note to inform u tht I wont be able to update much till jan... I know it is unfair, but i cant help it...
coz no1 knows this side of me at home...
so,isse confidential rakhna zaroori hai...
also my boards will near soon...
so study pressure will also be der...
but plzzz dont stop reading my SS...
i will try to end it before my exams...
n will start updating regularly after new year...
before the new year, i wil try to atleast give two or three updates...
so plzz wait for them...
thnkx for all ur love and support...
ur writer, TJ...!!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
its ok dear i understand we will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

SORRY FOR THE DELAY GUYS...

I M HELL BUSY AT MY SIS'S PLACE...

BOHOT CHUP CHUPA KE YE UPDATE LIKHA HAI...

PLZZZ GIVE ME FEEDBACK...

SO HERE IS PART 20

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Part 20

On the other hand, Shaan and Khanak's lovestory...

Since the last four days, Shaan and Khanak gelled up very well... It was actually love at first sight for them... But both were equally not sure what the other thought,so they had been silent in their first few meetings...

But the past four days of their workings together,both had started showing liking for each other... Both started getting to know each others' likes and dislikes... Both were able to read the expressions on the face...

Adi was being a spectator of all this... And since Shaan wud love to stay at the office with Khanak, so Adi would go to site visits...

She always used to come to his cabin for some work but it always turned into a special moments... She remembered very well, the last time she had entered his cabin for some work and what it had turned into...

---FLASHBACK---

Khanak entered Shaan's cabin to ask him about some documents related to some company... He was actually not around, so she decided to take a tour of his cabin... She came to his side of the table... He had some photo frames kept over there... One was his with his family, one with friends and one alone... She smiled looking at all of them... She sat on his chair totally unaware of where she sat while being in a trance taking one photo in her hand...

Khanak- kitna cute lag raha hai na iss photo(she was seeing his solo pic)...kuch bhi bolo, dikhta to ekdum dhaasu hai, macho man types... Aakhen to bas, meri Jaan hi lelengi ek din... Uff,iske dolle to dekho, aise hi nahi saari ladkiya ispe marti...

Shaan whispered in her ears- dusri ladKiyon ka to pata nahi, but tum kya sochti ho mere baare me, ye jaankar bohot acha laga... His voice was very soft but still full of passion and love...

Khanak was first surprised to hear and see him standing behind her... The very next moment after her realisation, she turned pink with blush... She dipped her head down, not looking into his eyes or else, she couldnt have turned her gaze at all... Shaan came more near her ears... His breath was fanning her earlobes and creating twists in Khanak's stomach... He further whispered in her ears...

Shaan- vaise to ye meri jagah hai... But tum baithogi to bhi mujhe koi problem nahi hai... Tum mere dil me basi ho, to ye to sirf ek chair hai... Me to tumhara hone k liye Kabse bekarar hu... Tum chaho to meri godi me bhi aake bait sakti ho...

Listening to this, she blusheD all the more and immediately got up and ran away not to get more embarrassed and listen to his naughty thoughts...

Shaan screamed from behind

Shaan- aare suno to...

But it was too late... She had already gone... He sat in his chair with a this and kept his hand on his chin supporting it and dreaming about Khanak...

---FLASHBACK ENDS---

Their love had started from the first day itself...

Hulchul hui, zaraa shor hua,

Dil chor hua, Teri ore hua,

Hulchal hui, hulchal hui,

Zaraa shor hua, zaraa shor hua,

Dilll chor huaaa, Teri ore huaa aaa,

Aisi chale jab hawaaa, Love is in the air...

Ishq hua hi hua...

Aisi chale jab hawaaa, Love is in the air...

Ishq hua hi hua...

Both would always steal glances from each other, when the other didn't know... But both knew that they are looking at each other...

Hulchul hui, zaraa shor hua,

Dil chor hua, Teri ore hua,

Hulchal hui, hulchal hui,

Zaraa shor hua, zaraa shor hua,

Dilll chor huaaa, Teri ore huaa aaa,

Aisi chale jab hawaaa, Love is in the air...

Ishq hua hi hua...

Aisi chale jab hawaaa, Love is in the air...

Ishq hua hi hua...

Ishq huaaa haayeee,

Ishq huaaa haayeee...

Music...

Palkonse hoton tak, jo raah nikalti hai,

Guzren naa vahase, ye teri galti hai...

Ooo

Palkonse hoton tak, jo raah nikalti haiii...

Hmmm ooo

Rehte hai abb hum vaha, Love is in the air...

Ishq hua hi hua...

Aisi chale jab hawaaa, love is in the air...

Ishq hua hi huaaa...

Music...

Kadmonko sambhale, Nazronka kya kare,

Nazronko sambhale, to Dil ka kya kare...

ooo

Kadmonko sambhale, Nazronka kya kareee...

hhmmm, ooo

Dil ko sambhale zubaan, Love is in the air...

Ishq hua hi hua...

Aisi chale jab hawaaa aaa, Love is in the air

Ishq hua hi hua...

Hulchul hui, zaraa shor hua,

Dil chor hua, Teri ore hua,

Hulchal hui, hulchal hui,

Zaraa shor hua, zaraa shor hua,

Dilll chor huaaa, Teri ore huaa aaa,

Aisi chale jab hawaaa, Love is in the air...

Ishq hua hi hua...

Ishq huaaa haayeee,

Ishq huaaa haayeee...

Whenever they would see each other, they would go mute, just looking at each other without even a blink, not to loose the moment... Words would fall apart, they were of no use sometimes... Love was in the air... Work was totally lost... Atleast, Adi was there to look after designing work, but what about accounting, it's already not in place and now it seems to be long lost...

Khanak realised this and would avoid coming to Shaan's cabin... If she would have any work, she would ask Adi... Shaan noticed this and was about to ask her this...

But the same time Annie incident happened...On the day of the Annie incident, Shaan had entered her cabin to talk to her but his phone rang... He was not going to pick up the call, but seeing the caller to be Annie, he couldn't avoid it... Seeing him so worried at the first place, she was going to ask him about it... But when he said princess and all, she was kind of shattered... It hurt her somewhere that he didn't love her and just in one day, he had someone else in his life... she got frustrated, hurt and what not and so, left her cabin abruptly and was going away from him...

Shaan noticed her going away... He ended the call as soon as he could and went behind her... He already knew she would have mistook the call and his way of talking... In a way he was happy to see her jealous, which meant that even she likes him and this would be the right opportunity to tell her and also listen from her that they love each other... She reached her car to go away... Shaan caught her before she gets into it...

Shaan- kaha jaa rahi ho???

Khanak- tumse matlab??? Me kahi bhi jau...Its none of your business...

Shaan- It is my business... you work for me now...

Khanak-ohh, is that so... then I will not come here again and tell Geet to handle here and I will go and work in KC...

Shaan- Kyu bhaag rahi ho mujhse????

Khanak- Me bhaag nahi rahi hu... Mujhe aur bhi important kaam hai... Tum jao apni uss "Princess" ke paas... Tumhe kya faraq padta hai, me jiyu yaa maru...

Before she could say anything further, Shaan sealed her lips with his... it was an attempt to shut her up from speaking nonsense... She was shocked with this act of his... She hit him on his chest to free her... She was not ready for it... It was her first kiss... It had to be blissful and not an act on impulse... But with Shaan's effect, she started melting... Her beatings started lowering... Shaan had just pressed his lips on her, just like a closed mouthed kiss... But it had a great effect on both of them... They were lost in the kiss, even if being a simple one, it was their moment... Shaan slowly moved away from her lips and went near her ears and whispered very huskily,

Shaan- mujhe faraq padta hai ki tum kya karti ho... mujhe faraq padta hai ki tum kaha jaati ho... kyunki, mein tumse bohot pyaar karta hu... I LOVE YOU ad I dont like to see you going away from me...

Khanak was at loss of words listening to what Shaan said...

He saw her expression and got her confusion... He cupped her face in his hands and made her look at him...

Shaan- tumhe meri aakhonme kya dikhta hai????

She looked at him, deep in his eyes... She just saw immense love for her... Not just love, care, happiness, passion also existed... She was happy for a moment, she even smiled a bit, but then she remembered about the call, and frowned again... Shaan saw it and said,

Shaan- vo princess, meri dost ki behen hai... she is Maan's sister, Annie... vo mere liye, meri behen jaisi hai... mere koi siblings nahi hai, to vo mujhe apni behen jaisi hai... Usse kuch hota hai to I cant tolerate it... Aur saale Maan ne mere saath usse lekar prank khela... And you left before I could complete the call and didnt listen the rest of the conversation... Uske liye me kuch bhi kar sakta hu... Ye tumhe jaana zaroori hai taaki baadme tum mujhe blame naa kar sako ki why I m not around when I get a call from her... Meri jaan hai vo, mere dost se bhi zyaada pyaari hai mujhe...

Khanak was at awe listening to what he said... And she doubted him... She was feeling like an idiot now... And she not only felt love for him, but also pride and respest... No one love his friend's sister this much... She was now proud that she loved such a sweet man... She smiled at him lovingly... Shaan understood very well that she understood what he said...

Shaan- ab tum bolo...

Khanak- kya???

Shaan- jo me sunna chahta hu...

Khanak knew what he was talking about, but decided to play around...

Khanak- kya sunna chahte ho?????

Shaan- vohi 3 shabd jo mene abhi kahe...

Khanak- konse 3 shabd Shaan???? She acted very innocent, but her eyes had a naughty glint... Shaan very well knew it...

Shaan- acha, nahi kahogi, to mujhe pata hai tumse kaise bulvana hai...

Khanak- Kaise????

He leaned over her... she went back and fell back on her car... Shaan came more close... His eyes were on her lips letting her know what he intended to do... But her next step surprised him...

She held his shirt collar and pulled him more close to her...and looking straight into his eyes, she came closer and also pulled him more, and kissed on his lips... Instead she gave him an open mouthed kiss... He obliged immediately by opening his mouth for her... He was loving her domination on him... She slowly slid her tongue in his mouth and tasted him thoroughly... He was obviously enjoying it... Even he tasted her... but before he could continue, she bit his lower lip badly... He came out of the kiss and screamed...

Shaan- ouch... ye kya tha... kiss tak to thik tha but why did you bite me????

Khanak- because you spoiled my first kiss... She smiled and pulled him again, and whispered in his ears, very sensually,

Khanak- I love you Mr.. Khandelwal...

Shaan was overwhelmed to hear it and in the fit of happiness picked her up in the air and spinned around... Khanak held him tightly and enjoyed it... Their lovestory had started and blossomed very well... both were very happy about their confession... He put her down and hugged her dearly, never to let go...

Shaan- tumhe pata nahi, aaj me kitna khush hu... Thanks a lot Khanak for coming into my life...

Khanak- The feeling is mutual sweety... and gave a sweet peck on his cheeks...

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OK, M EXTREMELY SORRY FOR THE DISAPPOINTMENT...

I KNOW U ALL WERE EXPECTING A MAANEET FILLED UPDATE...

BUT THIS ONE IS SHANAK UPDATE...

ONE OF MY READER Angelic_analyst ASKED ME TO WRITE IT...

SO, angelic TELL ME HOW IS IT... TERE LIYE ME SABSE JOOTE KHAANE WAALI HU...

NEXT UPDATE WOULD AGAIN TAKE TYM... BUT I WILL TRY MY LEVEL BEST TO UPDATE SOON...

TILL THEN, TELL ME HOW IS THIS ONE...

ABB UNKI LOVESTORY BHI TO ZAROORI HAI YAAR...

THNKX A LOT FOR ALL UR LOVE AND COMMENTS...

LOVE U ALL, TJ...!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
missed maaneet😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update loved it
missed maaneet😭


thnkx a lot Abi,...
and sorry for the disappointment...
next update full of maaneet... pakka...
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Posted: 13 years ago

meena, thankz a lot... 😃

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