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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Thanks Sim...very nice dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome update...👏

girlfr8...boyfr8...😲
o god nandu is totally mad n fully exploited...n so much possiseve about veer...o god anu ka kya hoga...
hope veer also equally love her...
n anu show some respect for mitali...she is ur mother...veer u should teach her how to behave with some one...opps...why i m saying this to u...u r also equally exploited like her...😉😆
so grandfather helped him...nice...loved their convo...😛
update soon...
luv u...😊

Thanks for appreciating...will update soon dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

loved the part yaar...
Wat a cool grandpa he got... :-)
Update soon

Thanks Sweety...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: prahelika

Luvly ud dear nd thnx 4 pm 😊 dis ff is so different from tum mere ho...where prini is so composed veer-anu is damn funny nd funloving...veer is health concious nd anu jst stuffs her mouth wid food everytym 😆 😆 anu drinks nd becums talli too.. 😲 she is so posessive yaar...sumtyms she reminds me of aditi from jaane tu ya jaane na 😊anu called dat naina witch🤣i compely agree wid her dis tym😆now cuming to veer...he is polite,cute,luving,caring...nd everthing...jst lyk a pampered prince charming...d way he described anu to his grandpa was damn funny 😆 luked lyk gran was having shock after shock..i wonder how in dis world veer-anu became bf gf...who proposed whom? 😕 😆 plz ud soon...waiting 😍

Thanks for your lovely comments sweetheart...yes i will update soon...i am glad you liked it so much...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: priyakinnikar12

wow yar new one
thank u so much dhanvi
thnx for the pm
n continue yar
love u lotz

Thanks sweetie...will continue soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sweetshera

lovely update

oops! Ananya is hell possessive.
Awe! Luvd the bond between Veer n Ananya.
Wow Veer grandpa is so cool. Awesome grandpa.
w8ing 2 read more.
update soon.

Thanks a lot dear...will update soon...yes he's got awesome grandpa...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

😊 nice update dear...

the story is different 👏 as they both r from same background...both r fun loving...

& veer is health conscious & ananya is foody 😆...

so what will bring the twists in this story 😍...

update soon dear...waiting...


will update soon...thanks sweetie...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prahelika

hi dear...update soon...😊

updating now sweetie 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Part 3

Mitali "i know you came late last night...will you tell me where were you Ananya?"

Ananya "please mom, just chill"

Mitali "fine...Manmohan you tell is your Daughter doing good?"

Manmohan was reading newspaper... "hmmm"

Mitali "really??? Manmohan..." she yelled

Manmohan "Mitali...arre why are you yelling??"

Mitali "because you are not listening to me Mr Chadha...i am talking about Ananya coming late everyday"

Manmohan "oh...so Ananya is it true?"

Ananya "Dad...you know mom right...she makes an issue out of every small thing"

Manmohan "hmmm...yes I know"

Mitali "what??? Manmohan please...you should scold her for coming late"

Manmohan looked at Ananya "don't come late again my princess"

Ananya smiled...she knew her Dad will never scold her... "Dad I need some money"

Dad "i will put in your card...alright"

Ananya "ok...thanks Dad"

Mitali "no you won't...enough Manmohan...no more pampering...well this is spoiling I must say"


Mitali was about to say something when her phone started ringing... "oh that must be Mrs Sharma..."

She went to pick up her phone...

Ananya kissed her Dad "ok dad I have to go for gym..."

Manmohan "bye darling"


Mitali "yes sure I will come to this kitty party... well you know I don't miss anyway"

Sulekha "Mitali...where are you??"

Mitali "i will call you back Mrs Sharma, my Mother-in-law has woken up now"

Mrs Sharma "wow...your Mother-in-law gets up so late..."

Mitali "i know...ok bye"


Mitali went with a glass of Juice " Good morning mom." she touched her feet...

Sulekha "how many times have I told you Mitali, don't touch my feet, you make me feel older...well give my juice...and yes I won't go for my walk today..i will go for the yoga class"

Mitali "yes mom...i will get your clothes ready"

Sulekha "thank you beta"


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Ananya "well it depends...now if I eat equally and I exercise then its alright"

Veer "you should control your eating."

Ananya "i don't care if you think I am fat"

Veer "you are not fat...you are always sexy yaar" smiled

Ananya "Veer...as I said I am not so desperate to hear good words from your mouth"

Veer "Ananya '..ok leave now tell me did you sleep well last night"

Ananya "yes I did...while running on the treadmill...

Veer while lifting weights "i am asking cause you had too many vodka shots last night..."

Ananya "well does it matter Veer...i love enjoying with you and I only drink with you"

Veer "i am a boy yaar...next time you shouldn't have too much"

Ananya "what do you mean you are boy??? we are equal...and I will do whatever you do..."

Veer "oye hoye...my jigar da tukda...now concentrate on your exercise...i will meet you in college"

Ananya "are you going now??"

Veer "arre Ananya you should do something without me also"

Ananya "no...stay here...until I finish"


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After some time...


Baldev "but where are the parathas??

Shilpa "dad, you must take care of your health...you must drink juice...and walk..."

Baldev "Shilpa putar...can I have parantha today...?

Khushwant "morning Dad..."

Baldev "oh come putar..."

Khushwant "Shilpa quickly give my breakfast...i have to leave for a meeting"

Baldev "everything alright"

Khushwant "oh yes Dad...nothing to worry."


Veer entered sweating...with his kit... "mom please give me juice quickly"

Shilpa "first go and change...look at you...and wait..."

Veer stood and looked at her as if some bomb will explode around him...

Shilpa "when did you came last night??"

Veer "early mom...hmmm...very early...Grandpa knows"

Shilpa turned to look at Baldev who pretended not to listen anything...

Shilpa "fine...go and change fast...you will get late for college"


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Priya "you have known each other for so many years and your parents aren't aware??"

Ananya "i hope they never get to know"

Priya "well...wait '.that's Veer's car"

Ananya "yes" and excitedly looked ahead...

She drove faster and almost reached parallel to his car "hey Veer...race"

Veer "Ananya ...no...traffic is too much...not now"

Ananya "you keep on thinking..."

Veer looked at her while she drove in full speed...veer nodded his head...then increased his speed...

both were driving super fast...but Veer reached first...

As soon as he entered college with full speed the girls around looked at him...

Ananya saw this and was jealous...

She stopped her car just next to his car... "why is every girl looking at you"

Veer "because they like me"

Ananya "like you!!! my foot...I will kill them if they come near you" she said angrily

Veer gazed at her lovingly while coming closer to her...she was about to close the door of her car when she looked into his eyes...

he came more closer...she looked at him...he hold her waist and pulled her closer to him... she looked at him... "Veer"

Veer "please don't say anything"...he saw her beautiful pink lips and came more closer to taste them...he sucked her lower lip...she closed her eyes and felt his tongue inside her mouth tasting her tongue...she pushed him back...and rubbed his saliva around her lips with the back of her hand.

Veer constantly gazed at her "strawberry?"

Ananya smiled and nodded her head...

Veer "once more"

Ananya "next time...lets go"

Veer "next time you won't stop me" and passionately looked into her eyes...

Ananya "i won't"


Both went inside to attend their classes...


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Priya "these samosas are very cold"

Nisha "i feel the same yaar...just return them"

Ananya "you are mad...first you will return them, then you will get new one...finally it will go into your stomach...does it matter that much..."

Priya "i am surprised Ananya, you have five star hotels but you still eat these samosas"

Ananya "so what...five star hotel means I shouldn't have anything outside?"

Nisha "no yaar...leave that...where's Veer??"

Ananya stared at him "why are you asking about him??"

Nisha "now please don't take me wrong..."

Ananya "he had a meeting with his coach" she said while drinking...


After some time...


Ananya "i don't like waiting...this is the last time"

Veer "please Ananya, I told you so many times...you should go home after college...but you never listen" while putting his stuff in the car..."

Ananya "fine...you want me to go home so you can have fun with girls"

Veer "don't get angry now...i was just saying because you can't wait"

Ananya "i can wait...now what??"

Veer "now we can do something"

Ananya "what do you mean??"

Veer "nothing" and came near "now don't stop me"

Ananya "this isn't the right place Veer...look there are still some students around"

Veer "how come Ananya cares about people around??"

Ananya "i don't care...but there has to be a nice place"

Veer "arre yaar...i can't argue with you...now lets go home"

Ananya "home?? why...i thought we will go to another disc today"

Veer "no Ananya...please...not today...i am tired..."

Ananya "fine...go" while getting out of the car...Veer pulled her hand and made her sit again "alright don't be annoyed...i don't like when you are angry"

Ananya smiled and kissed him...


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Veer "you know I told me Grandpa about you"

Ananya "about me? What?"

Veer "that yesterday we were together and"

Ananya while drinking "and"

Veer "and you were drunk"

Ananya choked "wh...what???...are you insane??"

Veer "why??"

Ananya "arre yaar...why did you tell this to your Grandpa...did you tell about my family???"

Veer "of course not yaar...i have that much brains"

Ananya "thank God...i hope they never get to know..."

Veer "there's something on your lips..."

Ananya "what???" she started touching her lips...

Veer "wait...i will remove it..." he bend down and kissed her lips...Ananya felt a strong passion running down her body and she tightly held him closer and curled her arms around his neck...Veer deeply kissed her...Ananya bit his lip...

Veer "why did you bite??" while touched his sore lip...

Ananya "is it painful??"with a grin

Veer "wait I will tell you" and kissed back fiercely...he gripped her waist tightly...he was about to bite her lips but stopped, smiled and kissed her gently...



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Edited by Dhanvi83 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
loved it sweety
awesome part
superb
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm

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