Love Will Find Its Way-Maaneet FF.. Note pg58 18/4 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

painfull update...😭
maan is not expressing his sorrow... i want maan to cry his heart out only before geet n geet to support him..



Lets wait and watch if Maan pours out his heart to his Mishti or not... 😛😛
Thanks for commenting... 😊😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



ah what a emotional but fantastic update...

the inner tumoil and feelings,emotions going on in everybody's mind and heart is very well written...how each one is feeling and mourning for departed souls is just fabulous...

thanx for pm



Thanks for commenting... 😊😊
Actually thanks for the appreciation... Real life mein thoda low chal raha hai... GHSP ending and some problems in the family life but then this comment of urs made me smile at once... 😊😊
Thanks yaar...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Update in another hour or two... 😊😊😊😊😊
Thanks for ur support...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 12

Geet comes and sits next to Maan...

Maan: Ek baat boloon Geet, I seriously don't have anything worth to talk about... Its just thoda tension of studies which is keeping me this way...

Geet (looks at him focussed): I take it that way then... Since u r not comfortable to talk about it... I will not force u... I'll get back to my studies in the study room... I thought I didn't have to every say that but then I guess u need a reminder of this...

Maan: Kaisa reminder??

Geet: You said I am ur best friend... So wenever u need some one with whom u can discuss anything and when I say anything, it means literally anything, u have a friend here... I am there in the study... I have plans to study late night and mom asked me to stay over, so I will be there only...

Maan: Geet, I know this... And thanks...

Geet: Kisi ne kaha hai dosti mein to sorry and to thank u...

Maan (smiling a bit): Kya dialogue maara hai Geet...

Geet: I am serious Maan...

Maan: Yes Ma'am (bows down in front of her and pretends to smile)... I know it...

Geet leaves the room and goes to her study... She studies for sometime... She tries to concentrate but then her mind is preoccupied with the tension Maan is actually in... She knows he had changed a lot after their father's passed away... He remained with himself and was more drawn into his shell... She knew there was something which he should share with someone to be back to his original self... Being a complete introvert as it is he didn't have many friends... She wanted him to share his feelings and thoughts with her as he won't do it with anyone else... Thinking about Maan, she just falls asleep in the study room itself...

Meanwhile Maan in his room keeps thinking about the things around him and realises that even if Geet had gone to the study room saying that she had to study she would actually be waiting for him to come...

Maan (to himself): I know Geet mera wait kar rhi hogi... But what will I tell her??? Should I tell her about papa's letter... But wo faaltu hi chinta karegi... She already has a lot to take care of... But nahi Maan, she must be thinking about ur worries first... Hamesha se hi mere baare mein pehle sochti hai... And if I discuss it with her may b we can come out with a solution...

Maan decides that he would go and talk to Geet... He goes to the kitchen first and gets something to eat for both of them... He keeps ice cream in two bowls and goes to the study... He finds Geet sleeping on her chair... He smiles knowing that she must have slept thinking about his worries because her books weren't even open...

Maan (whispers): Geet tum itna kyun sochti ho mere baare mein...??? How do u know wen I am worried... I am sure u still haven't figured out whats keeping me worried else u would have given me the solution till now... U r indeed so special to me...

He keeps the tray with the ice cream bowls on the table and goes to Geet and tries to life her up without disturbing her so that he can make her sleep in the guest bedroom... But as soon as he touches Geet she wakes up...

Geet: Maan, ye kya kar rahe ho??? Kuch kaam hai??? U need coffee???

Maan: Shhh.. Geet... Nahi mujhe kuch nahi chahiye... I guess u should go and sleep in the guest bedroom... Ghar par maa bhi so gayi hongi so don't disturb her...

Geet (softly): Baat karni hai na??? U want to talk abhi???

Maan: Nopes... Kal baat karte hain... U are sleepy abhi...

Geet: Nahi to... See I am wide awake... Mera mann hai kisise baat karne ka... And since u r here, lets talk about something...

Maan: Tumhara to mann hamesha baat karne ka karta hai... U can even talk while sleeping... I wonder tum kabhi chup reh bhi sakti ho ya nahi...

Geet: Kya karna hai chup rehkar... God has given u mouth and tongue to talk... Usse use karna chahiye...

Maan: But har time bolna nahi chahiye... Waise bhi bahut late ho gaya hai... Tum so jaao... Kal baat karte hain... Go to the guest bedroom and sleep now... Goodnight Geet... (He starts moving back)

Geet (holds his hand to stop him): Maan, seriously... Lets talk... Aur waise bhi mujhe ice cream khaane ka mann kar raha hai and someone seems to have got me an ice cream... (smiles indicating that she had seen the ice cream bowls on the table)

Maan (smiles): U will not listen to me right???

Geet (pulls her invisible collar up): Geet Handa sirf apne dil ki sunti hai, kisi aur ki nahi... She listens to her heart only... Not even to her mom...

Maan smiles and sits down next to her...

Maan: Geet, how come u always know there is something going on in my mind which is disturbing me???

Geet: Simple hai Maan... Because I am ur best friend... Aur best friends ko sab kuch pata hota hai... Its just that I would frankly tell u that I couldn't find out whats keeping u so worried... That's making me more worried... I always figure out ur problems even before u tell me but now I wasn't able to...

Maan: Geet, aisa kuch nahi hai... Bas aise hi... I don't know how to say it to u...

Geet: I can understand ur silence Maan... Iss baar try it out with some words, I might be able to understand it with ur few words... Is it by any chance related to Raj uncle???

Maan: Geet, pata nahi... I'll tell u the entire thing... Please help me take a decision...

Geet: Ismein kehne waali kya baat hai... Maan job hi faisla lega I am sure wo ekdum correct hoga... Aur Geet har faisle mein hai Maan k saath...

Maan: Geet par iss baar decision kya lena hai samajh nahi aa raha hai...

Geet (holds his face in her palms): Aisa kya hai Maan???

Maan: Geet, ek baat hai jo maine kisi se nahi kahi hai... Before I discuss it with u can I keep my head in ur lap, please???

Geet: Maan sure yaar... (she makes him lie down with his head in her lap)...

Maan: Geet, papa k jaane k baad I really don't know who to look upto for making important decisions in life... Daadi and Maa are there but I know they wont share their problems with me... If I say I want this, they would get it for me even if its very difficult... If I make a decision, even if its wrong or right they would support me completely... Aisa tumhare saath bhi hai... U will also support me whatever be the situations... But then I feel agar mere decision se kisi ko koi problem ho gayi to??? If it hurts someone???

Precap:

Maan and Geet talk continued...

Hey friends...

I am back again with the update... Tried updating it yesterday but then due to some net problems wasn't able to post it... I apologise for the delay... Wanted to make the entire Maaneet convo in the same update but thoda background ready kiya and then now have to rush for some work... Brother has an exam tomorrow and needs my help... Next update will have the entire conversation... Pata nahi kyun but complete flow nahi bana while writing the update...

Anyways... Please let me know how did u find the update??? I haven't proof read it so I am sorry if there are any mistakes...

Please hit the like button and give me good comments... I know I am greedy but I cant help it...

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Love

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Next Part: Part 13

Edited by zaqxsw - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love Maaneet's frndshp
Jus hop Maan shares all probs
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE...TOTALLY MINDBLOWING...
LOVE THE WAY GEET IS MAKING MAAN COMFORTABLE ..
DO CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi04

superb update i hope ki maan aur geet ka vo pahle wala magic phir se dekhne mile continue soon



Wo to milega hi... Maaneet magic... 😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



it is very emotional but awesome part...

u r really depicting their inner turmoil,their feelings after the dreadful incident very beautifully...

thanx for pm



Thanks for the comment dear...
Ur appreciation makes me all feel good and motivates me to write more... 😊😊😃😃😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the updates...

enjoyed her bday celebration...
but while reading the sad parts i was literally in tears...
waiting to c how their lives r gonna change...
pl cont soon



If i could bring tears to ur eyes, I am sorry for that... 😭😭
But it indeed means that I could express what I meant to write... 😛
Thanks for the comment... 😊😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum one..
loved the understanding nature f geet..

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