Simply Magic - Spell # 2 || NTL - page 147 - Page 76

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Posted: 14 years ago
perfectly enchanting one shot..! beautifully written. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Such a adorable OS sis
loved the maasi n nephews special bond
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful story. start new ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute and sweet one
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Happy birthday annie.

Okay i know i am late, but i promised annie (annie07) to write a MN beach OS on her birthday, so here u go dear. This is based on the early phase of MN marraige, i always wanted CVs to show such a scene, where the way their marraige happened had nupur thinking, but well .. it was never showsn!!..

i hope u'll enjoy this annie and i also that you had an awesome birthday!! .. God Bless.


MAYUR OS

A moment of love.


"Mayyyaaankkk",

She shouted for the tenth time but mayank was snuggling further in the blanket, giving a rise to nupur's temper with ever 'hmm", he was uttering. She huffed, glared and tried again, "mayank", she said and he replied with a "hmm"

uth bhi jao .. ", this time she couldn't help the pleading in her voice and mayank opened his eyes and saw his wife pouting, standing with teary eyes, almost on the verge of crying.

"aww, ro ku rahi ho nupur", he sat up smiling and pouting nupur sat beside him, "hum kitna late ho gaye hain, we were supposed to go for lunch na, ab tu sham ki chai ka time ho gaya hai", her voice was wavering and mayank placed his arms around and pulled her close, "tu kiya hua?, hum sham ki chai pe bahir chalten hain aur dinner kar k wapis ayen gey .. whay say?", he kissed her cheek and she cuddled quietly.

Mayank knew what phase nupur was going through, her sensitivity was understandable in this early phase of marriage, being so attached to her family, she all of a sudden had to live without them, moreover the unexpected things that happened in her life made her even more sensitive, so mayank always took care of the pampering needs.

"ab chalo tyaar ho jayen otherwise don't complain if i drag you in the bed also", he chuckled and blushing nupur quickly got up, "very funny, you go get ready first tab tak main chai banati hon, then we'll leave", she quickly got up and mayank headed to change.

After having tea , they both left their home to spend a beautiful evening with each other, "hum kahan ja rahen hain", nupur asked,, sliding her fingers with his and he held them tightly, "hum beach pe ja rahen hain, I thought of a quiet evening", he said normally and nupur felt a flush of blood on her cheeks, but before she could react, they were already there on the beach.

It was the sunset time and the whole scene painted with orangeish red gleam of the setting sun and the sky taking over the black color, with cold winds and vastness of sea, it was a scene of heaven.

"uff, so beautiful", nupur exclaimed unconsciously and mayank leaned on her ear, "no doubt". This sudden whisper left her in daze for a moment and looking at him she understood that the comment was not meant for the scene, it was meant for her, and thus smiling shyly, she walked ahead.

"mayank idher bethey hain thori dair please", she shouted from a considerable distance and mayank nodded and took fast steps to join her, "I am so glad hum lunch pe nahi aye bahir, itni bright sunlight honi thi, this weather is perfect", she quietly placed her head on his shoulder and mayank entwined their hands, "bus dekh lo, that is why i say k mujhe soney diya karo", he chuckled and nupur giggled along, "ye tu hai, I should always listen to you because you are always right!", she smiled and mayank faked shock,

"Oh God nupur, tum thek tu hai, accepting I am always right!", he gasped and nupur hit him, "please mayank"

"acha okay ", smiling he pulled her close again, "dinner kahan karo gi?"

"mayank please idher se jane ki baat mat karo itni jaldi, yahin pe kisi stall se kuch kha len gey, but abhi we are sitting here", she cuddled stubbornly and mayank held her hands, "nupur tum mujh se apni sari problems share karti ho na", he asked and nupur raised her head on the unusual serious tone, "haan mayank, kyun?", he looked straight in his eyes.

"bus aise hi, I find you lost at times, thinking and pondering, I agree abhi bus thora time hua hai shaadi ko but still we can talk and share, right?, so that is why..

"mayank main sab share karti hon, ", she held his hands tightly, "but kabhi kabhi if I think u bus is liye k I need to formulate my thoughts in words, life main itna kuch hua jis ka apparently koi reason nahi tha, as in it could have been avoided, but phir bhi hua , tu the anxiety and ..

"I understand, but aise soch soch k please don't spoil my smiling giggling nupur", he pouted and tears dwelled in nupur's eyes, "okay , I'll take care", she whispered and pulled him in a tight hug, whereas not bothering much about the people around, he hugged her back, "I love you".

They stayed like that for a while when nupur moved away, "and as you love me, you are going to let me eat gol gappey", she smiled innocently and mayank's forehead loaded with frowns, "noway nupur .. itney unhygenic ..

"mayank please.. main ..

And thus the bickering started .. as it always did , after a special love filled moment, enough for a life time ..

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
u actually want me to comment on this over here kinzu?😉
well jokes apart! i m in sighing mode , IT WAS SOO BEAUTIFUL!!! <3
and nupur, well u knw i love this pouting Nupur, and the lovely way in which Mayank handled her and pampered her was beyond amazing.. it was a dream! <3
actually na i want to give a very detaild coment on this OS but now m wondering yahan doon ya tmen kal colg mein doon! :p
hehe!!!
love u kinzuuu!!!!! and this was yet another magical peice of writing written by my princess! <3
mwah
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... that was amazing...Simple and sweet, just like ur style and jus how it justifies MN...

Thanx a ton, kinza, means a lot, and i hope u wil be back again with ur magic web...
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice...:):)
very swet and extremely cute...
n i am here even before the PM...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was really cute n beautiful jus lik r mayur 😳 Pls write more on MN...I'm eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt magical ff 😃 Thanx 4 d pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice os ... sweet like mayur hope we seen these type of emotions in mjht...

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