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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago


their pagalpanti was just so wonderful...

any one in Geet's place will love and enjoy this...

beautiful update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
...Love it graphics...
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Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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PART 22

Maan dropped Geet at her house.

Geet got down ,but before leaving she looked at Maan

Thank you Maan ...photography class ke liye , Meera and Yash se milaane key liye , mujhe drop karne ke liye and ...

Geet Geet Geet bas itne thanks mat bolo... tumhari in bhaari bhaari thanks you's ke neeche main dab jaounga seriously ,tum ab har baat pe thanks mat bolo please ,we are friends right!!

She smiled

Yeah Good Night Maan

Good Night Geet.

Geet went in and Maan didn't leave till she went in .

Maan started the car but he saw Geet's mobile lying on the seat

Geet toh mobile yehi bhool gayi.

I'll go and give it to her.

Maan knocked the door and Pinky opened it.

Ma..ma..maan Sir??!!

Hi Pinky.

He..hello Sir

Oh God Maan sir mere ghar pe am I dreaming??

Pinky.!!

Pinky came out from her thoughts.

Sir aap andar aayiye na please.

Maan smiled and went in.

Pinky woh Geet hai ,woh mobile bhool gayi thi

Geet? Haan sir hain main abhi bulaati hoon.

Geet ,Geet

Haan pinky kya hua??

When she came out ,she saw Maan in the hall

Maan??

Maan?? Pinky thought

Tu...Geet looked at Pinky she didn't wanted to behave informally with Maan infront of Pinky .

Aap??

Haan Geet tum woh mobile bhool gayi thi.

Ohh !! Thanks a lot.

Ok then main chalta hoon.

Sir ,aap coffee nahi peeyenge??

No Geet..I'l leave ok then take care bye ,Bye pinky Good night.

Good night Sir.

Maan left pinky's house.

And Pinky turned to Geet with her mouth wide open!!

Geet ...tera mobile Maan sir ke paas ,tu Maan sir ko jaanti hai??OMG! woh hamaare ghar aaye ,Oh wow!!

Geet didn't know what to say ,she didn't feel like lying to Pinky but should but still she didn't tell anything about her friendship with Maan .

Pinky woh ..woh...chodo na mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai khaana khaye??

Areh sorry Geet ,main bhi na bilul bhool gaye!! chal khaana khaate hai. Waise Geet Maan sir kitne acche hai na ,woh sabse bahut acchi tarah se baat karte hai! SO humble ! woh unka attitude ,unka behavior.

Woh toh hai Pinky ,Geet said while keeping the plates on the table.

He is the one who tried to understand me after a long time ,some-one who remeinded that there's is a life inside me .

Geet kis soch mein doobi hai ?? tabsi bula rahi hun!!

Kuch nahi Pinky

Chal khaate hai!! Mujhe toh bahut bhook lag rahi hai!!

On the bed Geet was unable to sleep ,she turned to her right then her left, tried to close her eyes ,opened her eyes.She was getting more and more restless.

Geet what's happening?? Why are getting so restless..Oh God...why do I feel like talking to Maan??

She woke up and sat on the bed ,crossing her legs

Geet !! She took a deep long breathe

She closed her eyes

After closing her eyes

She remembered Maan's smile

Maan extending hands towards her , His smile after she opened the pipe on him deliberately , the smile on his face while clicking the photographs of the small children in thevillage , his care towards the old woman , his encouragement ,his words ,their hug.

Everything ,each and every incident had something special in it.She thought

She again lied on the bed and closed her eyes with a smile ,she herself didn't knew the last time when she slept with a wholehearted smile before being friends with Maan.

The other side , Maan sat in his balcony with the picture of Geet clicking photographs.

Cool breeze was blowing ,it was cold but not too cold , The leaves of the plants in the balcony were slightly moving due to the wind

Why do you thank me always Geet?? For everything??

I have done nothing ,you did each and everything by yourself .

No matter how hard life hit you but you are the one who stood up and learnt to walk and smile.

Agar tumne itni himmat nahi dikhayi hoti toh meri baton se koi farq nahi padta Geet.

It's you who brought light in your life ,not me I am just a medium.

She again looked at the pictures and her kissed it .

After kissing the photograph he realised that he actually kissed her photograph.

Oh Maan!! What's happening to you!!

He hit his head with a small smile.

While he was sitting in the balcony Maan's father came to him

Maan

Hi Papa ,aap abi tak soye nahi?

Nahi Maan ,neend nahi aa rahi.

Mujhe bhi nahi aa rahi.

Lagta hai yeh raat hi aisi hai.

Sudesh sat near Maan and laid his hands on Maan's shoulders

Papa kya hua??

Kuch nahi bte

Kuch toh hai Papa, lagta hai aapko kisi ki yaad aa rahi hai?

Mujhe ??

Mama ki yaad aa rahi hai na

Sudesh smiled slightly ...Haan Maan tumhe pata hai aaj hi ke din I said I love you to your mom

You still remember?? asked Maan with a surprised look on his face

Yeah ,how can I forget this day??? Even If I was about to forget your mom never let me forget this day.

Accha?? So never forgot special dates.

bilkul !!

Dad ,yours and mom's was a love marriage na ,how did you actually propose her?? How did you tell her that you loved her??

Hmm..well actually your mom and I were family friends were family friends we knew each other from childhood but we both were never friends we rarely talked to each other but when we joined college ,things started to change and we started loking each other and those days we were so innocent that our parents easily found out that about us and in that way we got married.

It's a simple story but beautiful story ,your mom was an angel beta.

She is still an angel dad ,Maan said while looking at the sky.

While talking Dev slowly came to their room

Bhai aap abhi soye nahi and dad??

Dev you are still awake??

Haan bhai neend nahi aa rahi

Sudesh and Maan laughed

Sudesh called Dev

Dev ,come here I'll tell you a story

Dad,story??

Please dad I'm not a kid ,Dev said while rubbing his eyes.

Areh ok big boy ...I agree that you are not a kid but at least you can sit here na ,I'll tell the story to Maan

Maan bhai..!! hehe

Theek hai main bhi sunta hoon.

Dev and Maan sat with their dad while their dad shared some incidents of his life.

--the next morning'

Sudesh went to the park for a walk.

While walking he felt thirsty but couldn't find water ,he looked here and there but there was no shop or water.

He was feeling more thirsty and then a girl gave him a bottle.

Uncle you want some water .

He turned at looked at the girl ,she was smiling

Uncle main last 5 mins se aapko dekh rahi hoon ,I think you are feeling thirsty ,just drink this water.

He looked at the bottle and smiled at the girl

Ohh thanx a lot my dear.

He drank it and was relieved after drinking

Thanks a lot for offering the water my dear!! What's your name??

Geet.

Oh thanx Geet beta ..waise are you new here kabhi dekha nahi hai maine yaha aapko isse pehle.

Haan uncle I'm new here ,aaj main pehli baar is park mein aayi hoon for a walk.

Ohh...that's God

Walking everyday and that too in the morning is a very good habit.

Yeah uncle it freshens our mind too.

True ,it kind of fills a positive energy for the whole day .

And thanx a lot for the water my girl , Ab kal se main bhi ek bottle laaunga ,You know this old man gets tired so early ,not like you young souls.

No no uncle ,you are more active than many young people out here and I can see it!!

Geet looked at her watch .

Oh no..I'm getting late ,uncle I have to go I am Getting late ,meet you tomorrow uncle .

Bye Young girl . God bless you.

Thanx uncle bye ,have a nice day!

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Precap : Maan angry

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Hey friends

Awww...I jst watched the last episode of Geet ,they just showed all the old maaneet moments!!

I'm in dreamland after watching the glimpses of all the previous Maaneet scenes..Maan saving Geet from drowning ,the first oddice meet , Kurbaan hua ,Roop tera mastaana ,shaadi sequence!!!

Oh God.!!

I still remember the way I used to sit before the tv at 9:15 waiting for Maaneet.

I never used to miss the repeats!!😍

Ahh ..the craziness during the kurbaan hua week!! OMG!! I watched the kurbaan hua sequence n no. of times!!😍

and the outhouse fight scene!!😍

Ahh..it's one of my most favourites along with teri deewnai , pee loon ,meri kya galti hai Maan scene , where's the party tonight and what not!! Those amazing maaneet moments! and not to forget the episode in which they playd "maahi" Oh God!! I'm going crazy!!😍

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Please do read the note below this post😃

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well coming to my ff...😛
friends I have almost completed 20 parts ...and thanks a lot for your wonderful comments and encouragement🤗
and a big thanks to all who have been commenting throughout the ff
They truly mean a lot to me... Thanks a lot for liking and commenting , but I have a small request I seriously want to now how did you like the FF till now?? Which parts of it did you find boring and which good, so that I can improve myself ...I don't want to continue boring you
So please please gimme the overall response of the story!
you may either leave a comment in my thread or PM me!
I would request all the readers of this FF to please take a few moments and give their response about this FF , just once !Please friends it's a request
Positive or negative ,I request you to give your feedback so that I can improve myself .
Now waiting for your response
Thanx a lot for reading this 😃
and one more thing I hope few people didn't miss the previous update PART 21
which I updated last night😆
from now on I'll be updating regularly ! :-)
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update...👏
Maaneet moments cute..both of them falling for each other⭐️
Maan and his father conversation nice
Precap interesting..Why maan angry..?
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear love your ffs 😊 pls continue writing 😊

now for the update why is maan angry now oh gosh
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh poor pinky...
like the part where maan's dad shared his story
and he met geet already...

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