ArSh FF - 'Tu Meri Ghazal Hai'

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

awesome part!!!!!!

it's very hard to digest that arman is a shy guy, esp. around shilpa.😆

i wonder who was the guy that was fighting w/ shilpa.

please continue soon.

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

beautiful part... this shy,reserved kind of armaan is pleasure to read... 😳 wonder who was the guy fighting with shilpa... her landlord or sthng? 😕 anyways and the shayri at the end, gosh its AWESOME... i read it many times already... beautiful ⭐️

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Everything is blossoming for Armaan's love but Shilpa is still a mystery so far..Looking at the banner of your FF, Subi, it looks like this wonderful poetic serene love isn't going to last long. i'm just waiting for a horrible secret or mystery to be revealed and everything to come crashing down. Good things can't last for this long. i like how your slowly slowly revealing things about Shilpa to us readers. Real mystery she is. Looking forward to the next parts =)

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Sri

@OkThanksBye

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

FINALLY! you posted!!!!!!ThankYou! :p
I was dying to read this!!!!!!!you took so long...:I

i will be back soon to comment at it :p

Loveee you<3

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Rupa Roy

@-Im-Possible-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

awesome update, loved it...

can't for ARSH confession...

do update soon & thanks for the PM...

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Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Sorry hun that I'm commenting a lil late. This is the first chance I've had to sit and read. This part was lovely. I loved how you descrived all the NYC landmarks and Armaan and Rahul's reactions to them - it felt like I was there seeing them too. The meeting between Armaan & Shilpa in the hospital was sweet too. Like Armaan I'm wondering who that horrible man was that shouted at her. Can't wait to read on. Thanks for the PM.