Behind That Smile - Page 79

Awesome!!! I ve fallen in love with ur writing style. Do update the other FF also soon plz!

It was a beatiful FF and i loved it very much, thanks for writing..😊

it was...no wait...it is such a great ff...u deserve this..🤗

Wow fab update,

awww BEHIND THE SCENE ride was fab i will really miss it.

wow lyraa!!tat was a beautiful ending ...by now u wud hav guessed tat im jus anoder silent reader...
i looved d storyline ! from d start to d end ..it was jus amazing . i loved d way khushi's emotions wer described,her hurt, love,pain...arnav's guilt,love ,warmth ...his anger , jealousy just about everythin.
d epilogue is jus d perfect end to d story... d men of d house thinkin abt deir women , d women in deir laughter !! anjali-shaurya conversation was so good!! i liked how anjali has gotten over shyam n i loved wat happnd to shyam !i jus love d way shaurya cares for her . beautifully described !
den akash-payal 's eyes doin the talk is so nicely written !
n den arnav and khushi! i loved the last lines ...amazingly good ...n i loved d line "behind tat smile" it completes n justifies ur stories name so well !
truly lyraa this story has been one of my favourites coz its so well written , so real ,the actions, feelings, even the surroundings r so nicely put tat it makes u feel u r present right ther at d scene ! all thru this while i used 2 think y u named it "behind tat smile "...n after readin ur last part i got my answer which made me smile n lyraa "ur behind this smile".thank you so much for writin this FF ..i will definately miss it n please do write more . you are an amazing writer !

Hey Lyraa, its indeed very sad for me that Behind That Smile has come to an end. U r a terrific writer, and this was easily THE BEST of ur works. I just cannot compile here all the bits of this ff that i would read and re-read, because of their sheer lyrical quality and the moving images they portrayed. But this one thing i gotta tell u - never thought i would say this - but ur story and each characterisation were so vivid and touching, that midway thru ur ff, i was rooting as much for Shanjali as i was for Arhi, IF NOT MORE. The Shanjali track is particularly close to my heart among all ff's i have read on this forum, perhaps because i am myself a med student, and the story of a compassionate doctor palpably in love, always moves me :) Please write many, many more such wonderful ff's, and portray Anjali as the resilient woman as u have in this one. She seriously deserves a break from her dumb pati-parmeshwar-naari persona as depicted in IPKKND
Cheers! :)

wow!!that was a great endin..!!
loved your ff..!!