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Posted: 13 years ago
I am really sad for geet, sorry cant write more as sad with the news that geet is ending next week.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update! Continue soon!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
continue soon eagerly waiting ... plsss
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Posted: 13 years ago
Babaji, aapko pata hai kya ke anu kaha par hai????
Hum sab uska next part update karne k liye wait kar rahe hai. Atleast use reply toh karana chahiye k wen he wil update. Hai na babaji?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear when u r upate we all r waiting here
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

Babaji, aapko pata hai kya ke anu kaha par hai????
Hum sab uska next part update karne k liye wait kar rahe hai. Atleast use reply toh karana chahiye k wen he wil update. Hai na babaji?????

I am here only and am going to post my update now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Buddies,
Geet is changing slowly ... so please be with the story . This is my humble request.
I will try to move this faster.
Just hoping you all like the update parts. My fingers are always crossed.
Thank you all again for all the support. Loved all your comments so so much.
--Anu
Part 29
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Then after few days Geet was back in KM….. Maan was in office when she reached there directly from her office….

She met dadima and Annie and then left for her room…..

She opened the door and saw the room was filled with bouquet of flowers and a big Shiny Note at center

"Welcome back…. Love you Maan" It was glowing between the flowers…… Geet felt the instant happiness but in a second calmed herself down…. Reminding herself this was all illusion but still she went ahead and touched ther Shiny note and for once caressed it…. She kept the note inside the drawer of her dresser…. did not want to face that note infront of him. But she did not had the guts to remove those flowers from there, she just left them where they were…. She sat on the bed and admired the boquet for long time then shied and went to get freshen up…

Maan was really hooked up with work… the new venture and other projects also being in critical condition… he never ignored his work… he worshiped it….

He came little late at night…. Found Annie in the hall, he caught up with her… he got the update about what's going on with her… let her know that he knew things even which she was trying to hide…. He was not impressed by some of her new friends and some of her new found activities… that was enough for her to know she is not supposed to do and meet those ppl from then itself… But he gave her the permission to go on the Europe tour that she had made with her regular old friends and promised to make all the arrangement for her….. after taking account of her he left for his room where these days someone else's was his boss and he have to be carefull of his acts in front of her.

Geet was in deep sleep…. Maan saw her in his bed and an internal happiness surrounded him…. Even if they talk or not, her mere presence in their room made al huge different to his mental and emotional condition…. He saw the boquet were left as it is but the note was removed…. He checked the bin hoping to find his note not there…. No it was not there…. She has removed it but not thrown it…. He smiled. After a while…. he changed caught up with some more work and the dosed off….

Then everyday when Geet reached home she found the flower bouquet with different note every day…..

Like…

"Sorry…… Love you Maan" and a picture of cartoon holding his ears…..

Geet could not believe Maan could say sorry and that too showing holding his ears in cartoon…. She was too touched but could not believe how can Maan do this…. The most egoisting person like him…. But still she did not have heart to throw it… she again kept it in the drawer….

That night she was awake when Maan came in… Geet's heart skipped a beat seeing him and correlating him with the note…. It was beyond her imagination to even imagin him like that.

Then other day

"Can I get one chance please….. Love you a lot Maan"

Then other day

"Keep smiling always... Love you Maan"

"Your happiness is the meaning of my life….. love you Maan"

He tried to convince her everyway…..

So like this everyday she received the note with ever touching small notes in different style… she kept on collecting those notes and placed the boquet in proper place but they never spoke when they were facing each other in room…. Geet was saving herself of not speaking anything bad on his mouth and Maan was not willing to give her chance to speak harsh and then cry whole night…..

Along with flower buquet and note she also once in a while received some gift packages… everytime different size….. Without opening them she just took them and placed in the closet.

But when they met they never discussed about it. However hard she tried to convince her she should not fall into emotion with all this she could not help herself melting with his this unspoken gesture…. She never accepted to even herself that she was melting but unknowingly she started melting with his daily ever touching note and the flowers. Sometimes his words were so touching that she felt like hugging him tight and telling him I am all yours but she always held herself….

This went on for a month…

Then it was Geet's B'day one day and she celebrated it in the office with her friends… as they would never leave a treat… she also received call from her family….

When she reached home, Annie unexpectedly asked her to Dress well as she have to go somewhere… Geet was too tired but Annie just insisted her to get ready well… reluctantly Geet got freshen up and changed her dress to another office suit… Annie came in got very angry and selected a red Saree and a jwelery set for her…

"Where are we going…."

"Will just take you there, have patience"

Geet was very reluctant but followed Annies direction… She led her to an elegant restaurant and then to its party hall…. The hall was pitch dark but the moments she stepped inside it glowed with different colour of lights…. And her friends came around wishing her once again Happy B'day…. Annie hugged her and wished her. She was so touched… the hall was awesomely decorated but what caught her attanetion was the flower boquet all around the hall placed in different style and each having the note of happy B'day in it's own different style…. She then immediately knew who have done all this….. she felt like crying but could not in front of everyone….

Her heart just wanted to melt and bow infront of him but still she has to hold herself….

"Why are you playing with my heart Maan…. You made it so stubborn and like stone and now you want it to melt….." she cryed within her heart….

Annie and her friends compelled her to enjoy and she had no reson to give to them.

Maan did not want to spoile her mood today…. His presence will again bring her in different position and he did not want to do it at least today….

When asked about her husband by her friends… Annie said

"Ohhh bhai se maine bhi bohut ladai kee but he was really helpless…. There is a big client coming from UK and they will leave tomorrow a big deal signing…."

With stone on his heart he kept himself busy with work…..

Maan reached home late and due to party Geet also got late…. They entered the room almost one after the other…

Geet felt she should atleast thank him…. At least as a gesture of basic manner… she opened her nmoth several time to speak Thank you but everytime the words just could not come out from her throat…. She feared she will go out of her control if she spoke anything……

She feared if she says something she may end up hugging him and crying in front of him…. She feared she will not be able to speak…. So she just stopped herself with heavy heart.

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Maan knew he have to keep patience but it was more that a month and half… he was somewhere expecting something from Geet… atleast some words from her but failing to get them he started getting frustrated but always tried to keep his calm in front of her and genuinely tried to keep patience reminding himself "Its all your deed"

But that night Geet saw a different expression in his eyes…..

In the morning too she realized he was not his self… she left for office but his eyes haunted her… not that he gave any expression to her but she read some difference…. It did not look as calm as it was these days…..

Maan was trying to keep patience but being a human was loosing it badly today… he just did not want to do anything infront of Geet.

Next to be continued

Precap: Maan in Gym

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Posted: 13 years ago





just love it
maan's style of manofying geet is appriciable
he is taking all things so patientlly
just love this maan
geet is also getting affected but holding herself
precap is interesting
maan in gym
hoping for good exercise 😉
Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it . Today my heart went for both . I could feel the pain geet is going to make herself believe in maan's love but wound of past is not making her accept. That is really painful to go through . And poor maan, he is trying all his ways and he is accepting her silence is also becoz of his deed . That was too much go to that extent . He is regretting and trying to each and evry ways to convince her . His efforts r getting futile . Felt very sad , he arranged her birthday party and did not go , that was really touchy . May be both need to confront each other .Fabulous update and great going ...👏

Edited by acjanfeb1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
cant w8 for next

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