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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: teddy500

Hey ritzy di,


cool update.

See, i comment regularly on your updates but aap nahi karte.

It'sh velly velly bad!

Me making baby angly fashe.

Please check out all my fanfics and comment on them.

Give me likes and suggestions for improvement.

I think you know bout that new free thread that spvd has opened.

I have posted my fics over there toh please check kalo.

Hope you get the time.

Ciao,

take care,

teddy500

Naarz mat ho shona...I think you PM to my ritzypm id and as that mailbox is full or I hardly check, I am not getting your PMs. Please PM me on ritzy09 and I will definately read and comment
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

well lady luck ne chuna heto luck hi hoga na di aapne bataya nahi maan ne kitna jeeta Maan placed 500 dollars on the number.

rakka wapas kitna aaya

on a number is it is usually 36 or 37 times return. Depends on the casino and city
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydevil87


oh wow yaar super romantic n exotic part...luved it dear...
geet's flashback was really cute generally geet maan ko uthati hai yahaan bechara maan minnatein kar raha tha...hehe..
wow yaar i luv d way u give us d visual wid pictures n imaginative with ur awsome narration tour of deir each tourist destination...thanks...
luved geet emotional n bold avtaar n d part dat followed was exotic...
" I can never loose with you Jaan'You are all I need to win in life forever" dis was truly mesmerising...haye...luved it...
she finally chose d no. of maan's b'day n wow they won...
hats off for d amazing update dear...

Thanks dear for all the lovely comments. Yes, she is a mix of emotions, shyness and boldness
In this update Maan woke up Geet...kabhi kabhi role reversal acha lagta hai 😆😆. Mere ghar mein to aksar mera pati hi uthatha hai...I am such a lazy morning riser😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank you friends for your continued support. I have replied to few comments but trust me I enjoyed reading every one of them. But due to time constraints just replying to few.

Warning – 18 plus

Chapter 106 – Day 4

17th March

Geet was filled with anticipation as Maan told her that today was their last day in Vegas. They were scheduled to fly back to India tomorrow. She had feelings of expectations for the day mixed with gratitude of what they had already experienced and a tinge of sadness at going back. They had not only become very close physically but emotionally also as she felt their souls had entwined with each other together. No wonder Honeymoon was probably a period which actually converts a girl to a woman in every sense.

She blushed at her own thoughts which did not go unmarked by Maan. He held her close, hugging her from behind as she leaned on his chest. There was an understanding of her emotions as he loved her tenderly and leisurely, taking his time, pleasuring her softly….or rather with utmost love.

They spent almost the entire day in bed, not only making love but taking the opportunity to be just close to each other, hugging, touching and feeling each other's presence. They took bath together, dressed each other and fed each other.

In the evening they went for the final stroll on the strip where Maan took her to some other hotels like Mandalay bay for visiting the shark reef. While returning back, Geet noticed he was little agitated and nervous. At first, she thought it was probably because they were leaving but later she felt a different restlessness in him. Finally, she held his hand and looked at him. She gently touched his face – "Maan, I had the most wonderful time of my life here. Thank you. Frankly when you had told me the place, I had thought to myself if three days of travelling was worth three days in Vegas. But truly speaking, I don't think I can ever experience this again…anywhere else."

Maan just kept on looking at her lovingly…adoring her face….her smile.

Geet continued – "Ab bhi nahi bataoge aap kya soch rahe ho"

Maan sighed. His Mishti knew him so well. Maan – "I have planned something for the evening but I don't know if you will enjoy it or not. Agar tumhe man na kare to we can ditch it but I just don't want you to be upset."

Geet was startled – "Maan…how can I be upset with you…that too after such a lovely time."

Then she asked a little mischievously – "Aisa kya plan kiya aapne waise."

Maan grinned now. He held her by his waist and pulled her closer – "I have a table booked at Bally's for tonight show after dinner"

Geet tilted her head lost in thoughts – "Hmmm….toh"

Maan bent down and whispered in her ears– "It is a typical Vegas show….only for adults"

Geet's eyes widened as finally his words registered in her brain. She blushed - "Maan!!!"

Maan – "Chalogi na mere saath"

Geet wanted to shake her head in no but then she looked at him. His eyes twinkled telling her that he did this all for her…so that she can experience it. She nodded her head slightly in yes as red color tinted her cheeks.

Show was a hue of fast paced music, dance, singing full of colors and jazz. Intricate head gears, colorful long feathers, fans and dangling beads made the dance even more sensuous and mystical. Though erotic, one hardly felt embarrassed watching the dancers who wore just bikini bottoms with their upper body nude. Their moves were graceful with choreography which required precise synchronization. Geet was awed the way dancers used their accessories like feathers to give such a stunning performance.

Maan held her hand and caressed it through out the performance. He didn't leave her even for a second and was happy to see her comfortable and enjoying the show.

As the show finished, Geet leaned in and kissed him on the cheek. She spoke as her breath fanned his wet cheek - "Aaj ki raat aap jo kahoge main karungi Maan….it is just a small thank you Jaan."

Maan looked at her in awe and then smiled mischievously – "Soch lo"

Geet smiled – "Soch liya Dr Khuarna…it is fair enough….you have brought alive all my dreams so I am ready to play out your fantasies today."

Maan smirked. They entered the hotel and Geet went to washroom to take a bath. Maan called up hotel reception and made a request to the manager. Maan knocked at the door and asked Geet to come out wearing a robe. Now Geet was feeling shy. She was a little worried but then threw caution to wind – "woh mere Maan hain…jo bhi kahenge main karoongi….ab unke liye to main kuch bhi kar sakti hoon…hai na Babaji"

Maan waited impatiently for the room service to arrive and gave a large tip to the man who delivered the package with a straight face.

Geet came out after few minutes. Maan came close to her – "I am going for a quick shower Mishti….you have everything you need for tonight in the package"

Geet nodded as Maan left. She opened the package and gulped hard. Inside laid the tiniest bikini bottom with large assortment of beads and feathers. With trembling hands she lifted the bikini and stared at it. "Babaji…yeh maine kya keh diya Maan se…yeh sab main kaise pehnungi"

She heard Maan from inside – "I am coming out in 15 minutes Mishti….don't back out of your promise now"

Geet shivered as she adorned the panty. She lifted a waist chain which had beads dangling and put it on her waist so that beads dangled on her thighs. Next she wore some of them around her neck, trying to hide her peaks and mounds.

She dried her hair and placed the feather headgear. Next she applied dark and thick liner with thick mascara. She wore a scarlet red lipstick and applied red color rouge. She held the feathers in her hand hiding her torso as much as she could; dimmed the light and waited for Maan to come with abated breath.

Geet stood in the middle of the room looking down. She realized Maan was out when music started playing on the stereo. She gazed at him and gawked seeing him only in boxers. He went and slid into the easy chair keeping his hot gaze on her milky skin shining thru the beads and feathers.

He waited for her to dance. There was no need for words as Geet realized his desire. She felt shy but slowly started to move as she calmed her senses. She closed her eyes trying to loose herself in music as she started to sway her hips.

Maan growled – "Open you eyes Mishti"

Geet slowly opened her eyes. Maan smiled at her and gave her a nod of encouragement. She started to dance gracefully moving to the beats trying to recollect some of the steps she had seen earlier. She turned and twirled making beads lift and sag again next to her skin. She fluttered the feathers and moved her arms gently playing an erotic dance sequence.

Maan had asked Geet to open her eyes and she watched as he looked at her in a trance. He was clearly enthralled by her moves and she felt confident seeing the affect of her moves on him emotionally and physically. She realized that he had left himself vulnerable in front of her by wearing only boxers to boost her own comfort as she danced in front of him. Not only had he asked for her ultimate trust in him but also willingly placed his raw self in front of her. There were no barriers…no pretenses left as after this moment there was nothing in this world these two souls could not share.

Maan looked at his beautiful wife doing the seducing dance of love in front of him. He had asked her to do this on a whim but even his fantasies could not have prepared him as all kind of emotions hit him. On one hand her sensuous moves were fanning his innermost desires and on another hand her agreement to do this for him filled him with an emotional gratitude.

He stretched his hand as any distance between them became unbearable to him. She twisted and moved ahead to take his hand. He pulled her closer making her fall on him. Maan's senses tickled as she leaned on him. Her beads moved and his chocolate eyes melted over her milky skin. Music continued as Maan whispered "Dance on me"

Geet flushed and looked into his eyes which were bewitching her. She climbed into the chair and folded her legs. She parted and put her knees outside his each leg. She threw her headgear off and tangled her fingers in her hair. Her other hand rested on his shoulder as she hoisted herself up and danced on his lap.

Maan's mouth went dry as her entire body moved seducing him to a never before achieved place. He looked on as her chest moved up and down with her nip*** jutting out between the beads. He moved his one hand to caress the silk of her waist. He leaned forward and pulled the bead around her neck with his mouth. He gently tucked and removed it. He repeated the same with all the beads around her neck till her upper body laid bare for his eyes to feast.

Geet itched to feel his touch on her by now. She finally could not control and moaned – "Maan"

Maan still held her by waist with one hand, crashed her into his body. He kissed her hotly as his other hand kneaded and plucked at her inviting bosom. Geet sat down in his lap finally resting her wet self on his hardening. There was no control left in either of them and Maan literally tore her panty and his boxers off. He let her take him in on the chair itself as she rode him to a land of bliss and passion. After what felt like reaching an apex of desire, he cupped her bottom and pulled her into him further. A tear slid down her cheek as he muttered a thank you in her ear and wrapped his arm around her.

Precap – The Return

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Posted: 13 years ago
looks like i'm the first one to read your update... but loved it to the core...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh that was superb
lovd it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 finaly of honey moon👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
how to describe that wat i have imagined

but but but its incredible of writing such a hot scene

love you

keep up the effort growing

bye
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
Outstanding Dear...
I Loved it... superb and Hot... very very Hot...
Geet's dance part was just just OMG... but the main thing hidden there was more awsome...
the love that they have for each other and respect too...
Geet pomised to Do whatever he says and Maan just asked her his fantasy... it is very tough of what Geet did...
1st of all saying yes to go to those places are tough for girls... but she said yes... that require guts but here it was for Maan's love she did... that was one great step of her love to Maan and then doing the same thing...
This was pure love and Maan did not let her feel inch of shy... he made her feel comfortable and desirable...
It was a great update showing their love...
Loved it...
To your reply... yaar Niagra and NY ke to 3 trips ho gayee hain... they are never enough but the other two places I will go for sure... just waiting for correct time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome bt what about that sari geet got from pari...

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