My Only Mistake I'm A Female(MG) THREAD#3 - Page 59

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any one wanting an Update from my end ?
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arre yaar..esme poochne wali kya baat hain?
jaldi update de do na...😃
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this update is for DilMaaneet she pmed me

😭😡still short of ideas ?????😡😡

me dying 4 update...😍
make it plzzz😭😭


" so its for her as a please do not die

Part 54

Arjun and Maan along with others came out of the ICU, NT was looking horrified, and she was unable to forget the gaze of Dev's piercing eyes. Maan informed Pammi about Dev, and after completing the formalities, Dev's body was sent for postmortem, and everyone left for KM.

At KM

Dadi and Geet were eagerly waiting for some news from the hospital, as soon as Maan entered the hall Dadi came to him

DM: Maan, what happen?

M: he is no more

DM: oh

Then she saw NT entering the hall behind Arjun, she did not know what to say, in some other situation she would have consoled NT or the loss, but is this really a loss. Everyone was so engrossed in their own thought process that they did not notice Geet who stood there numb.

Maan told Nakul to arrange rooms for Arjun and NT, Lata brought tea for them and they all settled then did Maan notice Geet standing on the landing of the staircase, he gave her a weak smile, but she did not return it, he was confused, and went near her

M: Geet

G:??

M: Geettt!

G: ??

He touched her shoulder and she fainted, he was quick enough to hold her and check her from falling down the steps. There was a thud sound as her knees gave up and the three people sitting there turned around to see

M: Lata

L: ji

M: bring in some water I am taking her to her room

He lifted her in his arms and took her fainted form to her room, he laid her on the bed and covered her with a spread, and sprinkled water that Lata has brought, and he eyed Lata to leave.

Geet gained conscious and Maan smiled at her as she opened her eyes.

M: how are you mera bachcha?

G: he died

M: um

G: so easily

M:???

G: I mean he was not even punished for what he did

M: Geet,

G: Maan, ha made it so easy, he just gave up his life

M: because he was not strong, he could not live with the thought that he was to be punished for his deeds

G: but Maan, it has made things complicated for me

M: how?

G: since the time you went to the hospital I thought about it, Maan its not that easy, till now he was alive and I were able to stay away from HSPur but

M: but what

G: as soon as Darjee will know that he is dead he will create a scene

M: who will tell him?

G: you do not understand

M: then make me understand

She nodded and tears flowed from her eyes, he cupped her face and wiped her tears

M: what is disturbing you? Tell me Geet, you said that he has no place in your life, and then why suddenly you faint on hearing his death news (he was somewhere hurt)

G:I did not faint because he died but because I know what will follow

M: they will not know

G: for how long

M: why would they know?

G: as Brij veerji always finds ways to come here he will sure find it out, then

M: then

G: then when he will learn that Dev committed suicide he will blame me and may be will take me from here

M (cupping her face): no one will take you anywhere unless you want to go

G: but

M (kissed her forehead): you don't worry, Arjun is here, we will inform your father, and let him handle the situation there

G (rested her head on his chest): but

M (patting her head): you trust me

G (holding his shirt tightly in a fist): yes

M (hugged her tightly): I assure you that any harm that comes to you has to cross through me

G: Maan

M: I love you Geet, and I won't let any one harm you (he did not realize that he said those 3 words)

G (she too did not realize): I know

Though they did not realize but DM who was witnessing this sighed in relief and thought that Dev's death had at least brought them closer.



hope you liked it😃 I mean how Dev death

i so much wanted Maan to kiss her but how can he kiss her on prime time show... chi chi chi Babajee Bachche bugad gaye hain

but a kiss on forehead is allowed😆😳


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