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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet.Lover

*holds ears and apologise* SORRYYY KHUSHIII 😔 FORGIVEN! 🤗

me havent been commenting lately...got a hectic schedule which is gna get more hectic...but i promise il try 2 comment even if its jus 2 lines 😳 Lol I know how much more hectic :( lol you call this 2 lines! 🤢
commenting tiiimmeee :D
lets add some glitter to make it cool😎 😛😳 Awesome! Looks colorful 😆
Thanks!!!!
it was awesome n maha long...me likey 😳😛😆 Lol! ofcourse you do!
firstly before i start on the update i jus wanted 2 say WOW, SUPER Thanks iqz BANNER!!! Lol yea. Credit to my sis 😛
loool i love how everyone gets shocked at finding out that geet is the boss 😆 ---- 🤣 Did you get too? tell tell. 😉 Anyways, yea, it's funny!
LMAO geet always gets angry thinking about the incident with maan 🤣..ah i cant wait for her to find out that the guy who dropped her is really her online bestie :P heheheh lol that would be epic moment!!!
aww maan and pari r so cool they have such a cool friendly relationship n they dont even know each other properly! Yes they do ;) that's what instant click is ;)
hahaha "And don't tell anyone outside our group of friends, which in case you didn't know consists of me, Vicky, Dan and Emma. My rep. over here of being a devil will be ruined.' "made me laugh 🤣 Lol! I just had to put it in 😳
why does dadi wanna see geet before she sees maan? what is geet to dadi? cant wait to find out! I'll post that in next update!
looolll hahahaha maan was angry so he decided 2 come online 2 speak 2 geet :P...thats so funny coz geet was annoyed n decided 2 come online to speak 2 maan :P..its like they have each other as a means of escapism from their lives n stuff...awww 😳 heehee Woah! You are the only one who figured my true message out!! Love you so much for that!!!
LMAOOO their cnvo was so funny and awesome!! 😃 geet teasing maan was so cute :P:P
The pari and geet scene was jokess =) :P lol all of them are joksters.
ooO geet now knows that the mall guy is the boss of KC Yes now she does ;)
awww!!! geet is smilng coz of maan! thats adorable! It is. Want a shockk???
the poem is so beautiful 😳 Thanks! had to search a lot for it.
dadi was watching geet and she's become all teary!
yay geet n dadi meeting time now =) lol yea meeeting time. about time huh? 🤣
geet already has a positive impression of dadi which is gooodd =] or is it??
for such an incredible super long update
i really really enjoyed it
cannot wait for the next part
will defo comemnt n like ;)
continue sooon
luv uuu
mwaah
xxx


Thanks so much iqz for the long long comment.
me likey 😳
It'll be soon.
Hope you do get time to like and comment 😛
lov yu too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks a ton dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOTE:

Yes I know I need to stop posting them. But I can't help but post it. Getting to the point, I have replied to all the replies. Likes decreased but M not gonna get sad over that now. Have enough to worry about.

So, I will update this in afternoon on before midnight. Depending on how the day goes. I just want to say that I was about to update TBD when I realized it's been more than a week that I updated this. So gonna update this first and then TBD Incase you didn't know, TBD is Tujhe Bhula Diya -- Another Maaneet FF .

Anyways, so yea, I'll update that. I wasn't going to update any considering the 'drama' and other stuff going on right now. But then decided that those things shouldn't make you all suffer. So I'll update as soon as I finish typing it. Also, next week, I have tests (read:: TESTS) , so I will not be able to update anything. Nothing at all. I have to focus on studying. Thus updating everything today and tomorrow and then I'll be off until 19th December or so.

Love, Khushi
Edited by Princess_Khushi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

^^ Credit goes to Monal (Kasurbest) for making it. 🤗

Friends, pls add this id for pms :
Khushi_Princess
Also, my FB id: Khushi i might post there when i ud for quickness. in case i dont have to send out pmz. so if u hv fb, then add me there. 😊


C h a p t e r 1 7

Geet looked down and her gaze hell on the pipe. She saw the lady walking and feared that she might stumble over it. Her fear came true as she saw her slip on the wet grass and she rushed to dadi's aid. She made her stand holding her shoulders and then asked, "Are you okay?"

Dadi looked at her with teary eyes. She hadn't changed at all. At the least, her values were still the same. Always helping anyone in need and caring about them. She nodded and said, "Even you could have fallen right now in the wet grass. You shouldn't have run to save me."

Geet smiled and replied, "If I hadn't then you would have fallen."

Dadi ran her hands across Geet's cheek and then brushed her hair. "You look the same."

Geet asked, "Same? Do I know you?"

Now it was dadi's turn to smile. "I need to sit down first." Geet nodded fast and helped dadi to the nearest bench and then sat next to her. Dadi continued, "You are just like you're mother."

Geet was surprised. "Mom?!" There wasn't every day that she came across someone who knew her mother. It was a surprising fact. She gulped back her tears and asked getting emotional, "You knew mom?"

Dadi scoffed. "Knew? I know all her deepest secrets."

Geet said as a matter of fact. "She must have trusted you more than herself than!" She looked up at dadi as her hands felt cold. She touched her forearm and spoke, "You're freezing dadi! On top it's winter time. You can at least cover up in a blanket if not a jacket! Let's get you inside."

She led dadi to her office and made her sit down and turned the heat on. She looked back at dadi who was now sitting on the chair looking at her with utmost astonishment.

She asked, "What happened?"

Dadi opened her arms and motioned her to come to her. "Come here Geet." She went and sat on the chair next to her. "How are you?"

"I'm good. But how do you know me?"

"Like I said, I knew Rano and you are just like her. In nature, attitude, behavior, everything."

Geet said sadly, "NO'.No. I'm not like her'. If what you say is true, then she would have never left us."

Dadi replied with a pause, "And that's where you misunderstood her."

Geet looked at dadi with a confused expression. I misunderstood my own mother? She made it pretty clear by her action and the letter she left me! The time she chose also made everyone accuse her for the worst. How was I to still believe that my mother was innocent then?

"I know the questions you might be asking yourself right now. And you should be asking them. I know I am just a random person you are meeting and you might be considering whether or not to trust me. But trust me; I have only come to keep my promise."

Geet asked, "What promise? Can you stop talking in riddles and jumping from one topic to another?" Dadi smiled at her justified despair.

"Ok. Guess it's time to start from the beginning. And sorry, I'm not much good at telling a story' well, I met your mother before she was getting married. Probably a day before. It was in a hospital when I bumped into her."

*Flash back*

Rano: "I'm so sorry aunty. Here." She bent down and picked up the file that dropped due to the collision."

Dadi: "It's alright bte. Are you ok?"

Rano nodded and turned to leave. Dadi called her, "Excuse me?"

She stopped and turned around. "Yes?" Dadi replied, "You forgot your file with me too."

"Oh! How silly of me." She took a step towards dadi to take the file when her head felt heavy. She lost balance of her own posture and felt like the earth was slipping underneath her. She held her head trying to get rid of the pain it was causing her.

Dadi hurried to her and held her by her shoulders just as she was about to fall. She made her sit on the nearby chair. *JUST LIKE Geet HAD DONE TO DADI!* She asked for water and the nurse who was passing by got a glass of water.

They calmed her down and a few seconds later, the pain vanished just as fast as it came. She opened her eyes and looked around with a scared face. She tried getting up but couldn't. Dadi said sternly, "No need to get up. Sit!" she pulled Rano back to the chair as she tried to protest.

"Aunty, I'm fine."

"I can see that! Now sit here till the doctor comes. I'm not letting you out of my sight."

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Next: Chapter 18

This is a very short part. But all I could type last night before falling asleep. (Since I live in US) So I will type more when I get home in afternoon and post another chapter. 😉 So look out for it.

Edited by Princess_Khushi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 1:

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Thanks!
Part 2:

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Part 3:

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Thanks everyone! We're almost at a century. 😳

VERY IMPORTANT:

MANY PEOPLE WANT TO SEE THEM FACE TO FACE. WELL, I'LL ONLY SAY THAT YOU HACE TO REMEMBER THAT THIS STORY IS 'LOVE STORY ONLINE' SO IT WILL SURELY TAKE SOME TIME FOR THEM TO MEET. AND AFTER THIS DADI TRACK IS OVER, I HAVE ALREADY THOUGHT OF FOCUSING ON THEM ONLY. SO MAANEET SCENES WILL COME AND THEY WILL MEET SOON AS WELL. PLEASE BE PATIENT :)
Edited by Princess_Khushi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay dear we will wait 4 maaneet moments as its also important 2 know about geets mom her relation with dadi
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr88 dear

then will b waiting 4 it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hmm curious what dadi knows about geet's mom...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Daadi knows Geet's mother Rano...now we will also knoe her past story...

I will wait for Maaneet meeting...

awesome but short update...thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
small part...
so dadi s abt to tell her past..her mom..
waiting for it yaar..

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