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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 8(B)

Maan came home to find Manpreet waiting for him, he sighed and before she could ask entered the dressing room, she sensed something was wrong, so she left and came back with a pot of coffee and snacks, as she entered the room he was coming out after have changed to casuals

MP: Maan coffee

M: thanks I needed it

MP: come sit

M: um

As they were sipping the coffee she was trying to read him, he looked a bit confused

MP: Maan, did she get the loan?

M: yes

MP: what is she starting?

M: IDK

MP: did they not tell you?

M: no, she did tell me

MP: then?

M: I were confused and did not hear a single word she said

MP (was feeling very angry but she for his sake counted till 10 {remember Salmaan Khan doing this in PKP} and calmed herself): why?

M: Manpreet, for the first time I saw her clearly

MP: pardon

M: look whenever I saw her previously, it was in a shaded light or from far, but today she was sitting face to face with me,

MP (could not control any more): and you went to your dreamland

M: Manpreet first listen

MP: excuses

M: whatever, shall I continue (he was serious)

MP (sensing his seriousness): ok

M: look when she entered the cabin she collided with me

MP: OMG (acting to faint)

M: don't over act

MP: then what happened, you kissed her

M: MANPREET!

MP: ok, you say

M: I noticed her same eyes that I have been dreaming for years, but this time when I saw her after that long, I realized they had some similarity that I could not place

MP: simple they are familiar to you as you have never forgotten them and plus now that it has been years they may have gained some maturity

M: yes that is what I thought, but then she said, yes, I am in your cabin

MP: to you

M: no, to the manager on the cell phone

MP: oh! So the manager was not there

M: yes, and then she turned t me and said sorry and thank you

MP: then

M: she knew who I was? Like my name and what I do

MP: certainly after all she attended your marriage

M: but during all this though I was wondering how she knew me but I was also wondering that her style of talking matched with someone I have known

MP: Maan I think you were over imagining

M: no, Manpreet I am sure I have known someone, some girl who used to say sorry and thank you in the same way as she said

MP: what is her name?

M: who's this girl or the girl I can't place

MP: both

M: IDK

MP: what? The manager did not tell you

M: he must have thought that I know her; after all I signed her form previously also

MP: and she, at least she should have introduced herself

M: she must have, I were not paying attention

MP: so back to square one

M: Manpreet, is Prem back? (Wanting to divert the topic)

MP: yes

M: how was his trip?

MP: fruitful

M: when are you going to tell him about us?

MP: IDK

M: shall I tell him?

MP: no need

M: don't you think that he has the right to know?

MP: IDK

M: Manpreet, tell him as soon as possible, waise bhi he is too much a CID

MP: Maan, you are being rude (faking anger)

M: no ways, he asks so many questions, soon he will figure out everything

MP: how can he?

M: why not after all Mr. Rai (advocate) is his lawyer also

MP: really???

M: yes, I am sure someday he will know the truth

MP: won't it be easier that way?

M: no, he would be hurt, that you hid such a big thing from him

MP: but Maan

M: think about it Manpreet, I am too busy to think about why my sweetheart 1 looks so familiar, as if I know someone who looks like her and talks like her.

MP: Maan, what shall I do? I mean, how I can tell him that we are no more'

M (interrupted): that you have to figure out, and if you want I can talk directly to him

MP: let me try first

M: BTW I want to tell you an interesting thing

MP: what?

M: I think that girl thinks I am a dumb

MP: DUMB??

M: yes I did not even utter a single word in front of her

MP: what??

M (laughs): I think when ever we will meet next she will talk in sign language

MP: Maan you are impossible

M: no sweetheart 2 I'm possible

And the both laugh imagining someone talking to MSK in sign language

Part 9 (A) see link below

hope you liked the part 8(B), 😊
so Maan also found her familiar
so he was not able to speak...
CONFUSED MAAN
what is this about Mr. Rai???
what is this that Prem should know??

pyaar ke maara Maan Becharaaa😆
now he has made Manpreet BECHARI😉
OH Manpreet tu kitni understanding hain, and Maan changed teh topic by bringing in between your Prem😆
did you like it😳
now the parts have started merging...

please read it
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part 9(A) page 97.6thDEC.2011
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
u r my cutiepie...
the way u showed my n maan's frndship...i love u more for this...
per yeh kya maan ne mera hi dimag divert kar diya... uski waat lagane ki bajaye mein prem mein busy ho gayi...not fair...
i was all ready with that belan, but tune yeh kya kiya
n Mr.Rai??? hmmm new entry, prem's lawyer...sounds kewl...
me n maan no longer together😭...n that girl whom maan is talking about might be myra or pari, i mean jiske jaisi use geet lag rahhi hai...
waiting for 9(A)😍
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan-MP are no longer married
about whom maan is talking who had a similar habit as Geet / NT

this ff is so much confusing & has lots of secret hidden





LOVE IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏LOVED THE PART SHRUTI.👏... MAAN DUMB😆...😉 I M SURE GEET PAKKA NEXT TIME WITH TALK WITH SIGNS ONLY😃...
HEY MANPREET 😡TU PREM KO SACH KAB BATEGI... DO IT FAST YAAR😊... TABHI TO SHRUTI MAAN OR GEET KE STORY AAGE BADA PAYEGE...😃
SHRUTI 🤢MAAN NEY TO USKA NAAM TAK NAHI PUCHA .. 😲NEXT AB KAISE BAAT BANEGI...
PLZ UPDATE FAST...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

u r my cutiepie...

the way u showed my n maan's frndship...i love u more for this...
per yeh kya maan ne mera hi dimag divert kar diya... uski waat lagane ki bajaye mein prem mein busy ho gayi...not fair...
i was all ready with that belan, but tune yeh kya kiya
n Mr.Rai??? hmmm new entry, prem's lawyer...sounds kewl...
me n maan no longer together😭...n that girl whom maan is talking about might be myra or pari, i mean jiske jaisi use geet lag rahhi hai...
waiting for 9(A)😍


give me just 20mins
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd d update...
i think wen she speaks in sign lang too maan vl not react..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

👏LOVED THE PART SHRUTI.👏... MAAN DUMB😆...😉 I M SURE GEET PAKKA NEXT TIME WITH TALK WITH SIGNS ONLY😃...

HEY MANPREET 😡TU PREM KO SACH KAB BATEGI... DO IT FAST YAAR😊... TABHI TO SHRUTI MAAN OR GEET KE STORY AAGE BADA PAYEGE...😃
SHRUTI 🤢MAAN NEY TO USKA NAAM TAK NAHI PUCHA .. 😲NEXT AB KAISE BAAT BANEGI...
PLZ UPDATE FAST...


20 more mins 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 8 b
nice part...
Maan and Manpreet share good understanding...
he told her everything...
is he finding Geet familiar with Meera or Pari?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

ur 20mins over😆...where's the update???😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

20more😲...me dead🤢

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