TUM SE MIL K ..MN ss PART12(LAST)PG33 22/01 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was sooo cute...
i mean d thought was sooo cute n sweet...awww😳
i loved it lodsss...
May ALLAH bless U 4...🤗🤗🤗🤗
har ek ke liye 1 hug ok!!!😉
Khuda ap charo ki Frndship ko ase hi salamat rakhe...inshALLAH...ameen!!!😳
dat was really cute n adorable Fizu API...😳

ok!!! thank u all...
jin jin ki wajah se hum sabko yeh ss mila...😳
awesome concept n cs...
i loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d 1st part n d story to start...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
very interesting concept. waiting for that
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
true yar this post is full of colours and nice way to celebrate friends birthday...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
wow new ss now waiting for 1 part plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yippeee!!!🥳 so many birthdays to come😃... thank you fiza-jee🤗lovely surprise🤗

❤️❤️
~jiya~
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for your new ff fiza
nice cs & concept
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you so much fiza ji
faria dr maha and sujata happy brithday in advance😃
what a coincidance my mom brithday is on 12 december😃
and my exam is sarting from 24 december 😭
dekha khusi aur gham saath hote hain😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Nice Concept Fiza. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fiza ji,,,,congratss🤗for ur new SS
interesting cs
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nupur: demgah karab horah hai mera…she said stamp her books on the desk, n took seat next to him

Mayank: nupur yeah library hai…he whispered

Nupur: pata hai itna santay daar jaga jaha tum pay jao woh sirf libray hi hosakti hai….aur tu tum mjy se asay khabi baat nhi kero gay

Mayank: han magr tum ko tu libray k bhi lihas nhi

Nupur: mayank dekho wasy hi shukal sir ny mera deemgh karab kerdiya hai

Mayank: tu tum mera kyun ker rahi hoo..nupur tum dekh nhi rahin mein parh raha hoon

Nupur: us mein kaun se nai baat hai, tum tu hamesha hi yahi kertay hoo..mayank tum ko khawab bhi kasay atay hongay na..economic aur stats k romance…kaha hai hamesha thora break liya kero

Mayank: NHI…mein hoon..tu romantic khwab kasay dekh sakta hoon…he said sarcastically..

Nupur: yeah tu point hai..

Mayank: hai na…hogay tumhara tu mjhy shanty se parhny do samhji…wasy hi kal k din waste hogaya

Nupur: WASTE….she shouted at her most…

Shh..pls ms nupur keep quite..she nodded sheepishly in yes..

Mayank: library hai ..tumhara koi club hi….

Nupur: acha tu tum ko yeah problem hai…han..mein ny kal tumhara time WASTE kerdiya. Tu meray sath time spend kerna WASTE lagata hai..mayank..

Mayank: nupur mera woh matlab nhi tha

Nupur: acha waste k aur kya hota hai bolo….tum raho yaha apni in kitabo k sath, jitna payr tum in se kertay hoon na, us k 1% bhi mjhy se kya hota na tu..

Mayank: tum phir shoro hogai…nupur tumko hamesha asa kyun lag ta hai..

Nupur: tu aur kya kaho, tum meray sath time spend kerny ko waste kahtay hoo

Mayank: acha aur tum jo her bar meri feelings per shak kerti hoon…

Nupur: tu tum khabi romantic hotay ho, khabi meray boyfriend ki tarah behave kertay hoo

Mayank: nupur .. thik hai mein tu tumhary laiq hi nhi hona, sadu hoon, akdhu hoon, non romantic hoon and above all mein tu tum se pyar nhi kerta hoon, mein tu jhot boolta hoo, pata nhi kyun tumhara sath hoon, aur itna sab kuch ker raha hoon, bewaqufo ki tarah tumahary Dad k liyan…so ab tum yaha aram se raho , mein ja raha hoon, and han ur free from me..

Nupur: mayank..suno..

Mayank: nhi..mein sach mein thak gaya hoon …mjhy laga tha tum ny is sadu se hi pyar kiya magar aj pata chala k tum ko tu mjh mein kuch bhi nhi pasand…magar han ek baat yaad rekhna..mein sach me tumse hi pyar kiya hai….

Saying so much in a go, he left like a rocket, n she was siting still there with her mouth open, realizing that, she closed her mouth and looked at the door, he actual left like this. Yes he is a bit sadu, but true she loves him like anything.

She sigh, wht have I done, I was angry was disturb and I poured out on him, though I have been doing this from very long. But today she know she did too much, yesterday it was complete her day, he spend time with her, he made her feel special. And today he is angry but wht she did, is she was really that much hurting..yes she must, cause Mayank Sharma can me sarcastic, but he is rarely tht much angry that he said ur free to go..that was actually hurting for her, why he said tht, did'nt he knew that she loves him like anytng. Than her heart ask her, doesn't u know that how much he loves u.

Yes that is true, so very true it is. She knew how much he loves her,that much that he compromised with his ambition, his goal for her, only her and that so with a smile. When ever she felt guilty for it he always make her feel spcieal saying he is doing for himself. Yet his anger indicate either he is too hurt or he is in panic

Nupur and Mayank are the high school sweet hearts, if said so it wont be worng though realization struck his mind whn they came in college and mayank found her crying a day.

Nupur was a full of life, girl next door, yet mayank was focused cause of two reason. From very young age he has seen his parents struggled for lifes necessities to be full filled. And than he took all that in his own hands. Though now there pretty stable still he is the same. he is a complete self made person, doing part time jobs, teaching juniors he earn and spend all this in his education and that was the only reason nupur's father said yes to him, though he belongs to a mid class family and nupur is a kid from posh family.

It was a day in there colloge when mayank came n found her crying siting near a spot that was way aaway from any bodies eyes to catch.

Mayank: kya hua tumhain asay kyun roo rahi ho, kal se mera phone bhi attend ker rahi ..

Nupur: mayank DAD meri shadi ker rahy hain…she said shifting her head to his shoulder..and he encircle his arms around her as fact..

Mayank: KYA…magar abhi tu ur studying asay kasay…

Nupur: pata nhi kasay…woh kahtay hain engagement abhi kerlo shadi studies k bad ..

Mayank: oh…

This was the only word he got say in his own feeling of distress, sumthing was buring, paining, fearing , and wht not inside him. Nupur's wedding ..sounds to weird. How cum this can happen

Nupur: kya oh….mein shadi kasay kero gi

Mayank: kyun…

Nupur: MAYANK…tum ..tum poch rahy ho kyun..phir mein chali jao gi, hosakta hai us ko tum se mra baat kerna bhi pasnd nhi ho,..mjhy dekh bhi nhi sako ga

Mayank: ASA KASAY..asa kcuh nhi hoga…pagal hogai ho kya..per tumhari studies k kya hoga

Nupur/: uff mayank tumahin studies ki fikar hai..humara final year hai tu ek saal tu koi bhi rukh jay ga..magar phir bhi mein shaid kasay ker sakti hoon ksi aur se..

Mayank: kisi aur k kiya matalb..nupur kya bekar ki baat hai..koi shadi wadi nhi horahi hai tumhari, bekar ki filmy baatein band kero, aur ja ker notes complete ker jo class miss ki hain aj pora din..tumhara deemgh karab hoagy ha..mein ja raha hoon…

Saying so he left form thre, it was not nupurs mind that was off that moment , it was his mind that was not at all registering anything..he left hurrdily for his home. N reached his home.

Shilpa: tu itni jaldi kasay agaya aur aker room mein kyun band hai , lunch bhi nhi kiya, kya hoa, asay kyun moo latka ker bahita hai….

Mayank: maa..kya nupur ki shaid hosakti hai…

Shilpa: she chukled…lo kyun nhi hosakti,itni payri bachi hai…kyun

Mayank: aur us k bad woh mjhy se nhi milay gi.asa kasy hosakta hai..

Shilpa: agar us k husband pasand na hotu…per tu kyun poch raha hai…kya hua..

Mayank: kcuh nhi maa..plss tum jao meray sir mein dard hai ..i want to sleep…

Shilpa:a ray..

Mayank: maa pls…

He closed his eyes n shilpa left in surprise. As soon as she left he opened his eyes, her each word wos again n again cuming in his mind, her wedding..how can she get married. The feeling of sumone that close to her..wht the hell..he sat up. He hates anybody touching her, never ever any1 can do this..she is only his..the words were left incomplete as he was unable to understand all this..or was still in a denial

Why he is feeling so , wht he is feeling , its just ..no its cant be anything that are in her stupid films, its just he never though like that no it cant be..never…its just I feeling she has been there with him always so , its simple it's a friendly insecurity

OUCH..her chain of thoughts was broken by a boy

Nupur: dekh kern hi chal sakty …idiot…nupur abhi tu tu apnay Mayank ko mana lay warna buhat bora hoga, magr is ko hua kya hai, kal tu thik tha….

Moving in the corridor she was finding him but he was no where,

Nupur: lo yeah garden mein, wah kamal hogaya…

She came near him and stood there, with her hands on waist, finding a shadow lying on his books he preety much knew who its is..

Mayank: ab kya musibat hai

Nupur: tum tu ghar ja rahy thy..

Mayank: ab sab kuch tumharay mutabik kerna paray ga kya…

She sat beside him…

Mayank: mein parh raha hoon

Nupur: tu mein kya tumhari ankhein band ker rahi hoon ya deemgh

Mayank: nhi mera deemgh kah kah ker kahtam kerdo gi …mein parho ga kasay ..nupur pls move away..

Nupur: ab kyun parh rahy hoo, mjhy tu tum ny ditch kerdiya…she said in full on nautanki style..n he raised his head n glared

Mayank: phir mera pecha nhi chorti tum…jao yaha se…

Nupur: nhi jao gi…tum ny mjhy chora hai mein thori….acha sorry na

Mayank: nupur sorry kasi baat ker rahi hoo…tumhara kasoor thori hai…galti tu meri hai mein hi ap ki perfection per pora nhi utra..so ab mjhy apni imperfection k sath khush rahy doo

Nupur: mayank ….i didn't meant it ..sachi I didtn mean it,…bus subha subha dad ki batein aur phir shukla sir k assignment…aur phir tum hi milay mjy apna ghusa nikaly ny k liyan as usual….pls soory na..asay tu maat bolo

Mayank" nupur mera deemgh maat karab kero

Nupur: ek tu tum yeah bolna band kero kay mein tumhara deemgh karab ker rahi hoon..had hai ek tu mein yaha tum se maafi mang rahi hoon aur tum akdu

Mayana: han tu kis ny kaha hai k is sadu se maafi mango, jaona yaha se…bus…

Nupur: nhi jao gi tum mjy chorny k soch bhi kasay sakty hoon

Mayank: mein nhi chora rah hoon tum ko, tum mjhy bardsht nhi kersakti tu mein kya kero

Nupur: mein ny kab kaha asa..khud hi assume ker tay hoo…

Mayank: mein kcuh assume nhi ker raha tum khud hi kahti hoon..tumhain koi baat pasand hai mjy mein …

Nupur: nhi mjhy tum mein kuch pasand nhi hai….kyun mjhy tm poray k paory pasand ho ullu…..magr ko apni date ko waste of time kahta hai…

Mayank: mein ny date ko waste of time nhi kaha tha…maagr mana kiya tha kal maat jao..yeah kam kerlo phir we will go..magar nhi tum ko tu hamsha wohi kerna hota hai jo tumhain sahi lagta hai…baqi jo chay ho ksis k sath

Nupur: acah tum ko koi faraq parta hai k mhy kasa lagta hai , jab tum ny kaha ur free to go, u ditched me…

Mayank: I didn't mean that u know that very much ..

Nupur: han tu magr sunay mein tu kitna bora lag raha hai..aur tum serious hotay tu…itna tu her baat mein serious hotay hoo

Mayank: nupur pls..mjhy conc kerny do, bad mein jitna larna hai larlyna..meray pass bulkily time nhi hai…sirf 4 ghante hain..

He said in pleading tone..

Nupur: thik hai , mein yaha tum ko manay ki khosih ker rahi hoon aur tum ho k mjhy jao jao kah rahy hoo, nhi aao gi ab tumharay pass, aur na hi tum se kahbi baat ker gi na tumahra pass aao gi, na …she wiped her tears n left..

Mayank: nupur….sigh…he shocked his head..khabi bagar laray tum mera sath nhi gahri hosakti na…abhi I can't manofy u I need to do this…pray k sab set hojay..he said looking at her disappearing figure

…..

Next day

Nupur: bus mein aj dad se baat kero gi, aur mayank ko free kerdo gi…na mein hoon gi na us ko yeah sab kerna paray ga..bus…aj tum ko is sab se azaad kerdo gi….

Thnku so much for being apart of celebration, it means a lot. I know most of u know faria pretty well, and suja n maha as atleast writers if not as friends, I welcum u all if u want to be a part of celebrationu u can be as ever way u want to.

Hope u will enjoy this journey..thanks a lot..

Lov

U k now I am loving this eating fiza…rofl

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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