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Posted: 13 years ago
WAITING...
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DO I NEED TO SAY FOR WHAT IS IT...
OF COURSE I AM
WAITING...
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Part 7(B)

Maan was pretty excited finally Wednesday came, he was not able to sleep the whole night, Pari got irritated by him and went to Manpreet's bed to sleep, MP just smiled and hugged her sweet little angle.

He was selecting what he should wear and she was smiling and wondering what will he do when he meets her face to face

MP: Maan what are you doing?

M: Manpreet, what shall I wear?

MP: its Wednesday and on this day you usually wear that suit

M: its old, I will not look good

MP: Maan, you are just going to sign the papers,

M: so, should I not look presentable

MP: you always look good

M: I know but Prem is far better looking

MP: Maan, what's your problem

M: actually Manpreet'

MP: you are nervous

M: um

MP: why?

M: what will I say?

MP: like

M: if by chance she asks why I agree to this, what will I say?

MP: she will not ask

M: she may

MP: then tell her that you are smitten

M: NO, what will she think, after all she is a married woman

MP: Maan relax, she will not ask anything, she definitely will not want to jeopardize her chance to get a loan

M: sachchi

MP: muchchi

M: one more thing

MP: what?

M: previously whenever I met her I was not able to see her clearly

MP: so

M: I mean, at first two times the light was very dim, on the third time she was amidst the traffic and on the last occasion she was a little far

MP: so

M: during all these encounters she only saw me once

MP: so

M: nothing

MP: sure

M: sure, shall I leave

MP: Maan, its just 8:30

M: no, if I get struck in a jamb I should take margin

MP: Maan, stop it, now sit here quietly you are not leaving before 9:15

M: 9:15 (widening his eyes) that will be late

MP: 9:15 means 9:15,

M: ok as you say

MP: who will believe that this stupid fool in love has won the best entrepreneur award for continuous 3 years

M: Manpreet

MP; chup bilkul chup

He restlessly waited and as soon as the alarm went at 9:15 he left and Manpreet just laughed at his eagerness.

There at NT's place

She was hell worried, she was not able to arrange for any guarantor, she thought of calling Prem but image of Manpreet flashed in her mind and she thought that MP will think that she is like her sister and trying to take advantage of her, so she prayed to heaven's above and left for the bank.

At the BANK, 10:00am

Maan came on sharp 9:50 and waited for the clock to strike 10 and also kept an eye on the main gate to watch her walk in. he saw the bank manager arriving followed by many employees he patiently waited but she was no where near coming, so finally at 10:15 he came out of his car and walked to the bank.

He went to the manager's cabin

M: hello sir, hope I am on time

BM: hello sir, you are a punctual man, always on time

M: so are the papers ready

BM: almost sir, we are just waiting for her to come

M: was she told?

BM (sweating): yes sir, wait I'll just call her

M: you have her number (sighing, hope I had it)

BM: yes sir, its in our records

M: oh

The manger called her

BM: hello Ms. Handa we are waiting for you

G: I am on my way sir; give me 5 minutes I'll be there

BM: Ms. Handa sir is waiting for you

G: sir? (OMG NT it looks there is some problem)

BM: yes, make it fast

G: yes sir (OMG what will I do I have not yet arranged for the guarantor)

At 10:20, Maan was getting restless and the manager took that for anger and he excused himself and ordered coffee for three

BM: sir

M: um

BM: I'll be just back

M: um

And he left for the washroom perspiring profusely

As the manager entered the washroom Geet entered and was directed to his cabin, she stepped in

Meanwhile as the manager left Maan stood up and paced in the cabin becoming restless

As she entered the cabin he turned and collided with her, he missed a step and was about to fall when she caught him and the papers went flying, she increased the pressure of the grip on his arm to stabilize him, he felt like heaven and just looked at her in trance, she recognized him and blushed seeing him looking at her with such intensity

Part 8 (A) see link below

hope you liked the part 7(A), 😊
and now part 7(B) how was it
they collided last time he stablised 😉her from falling and now she 😆

as this story will proceed in two settings, 8(A) is at her side setting & part 8(B) is about him

when you are in love... ALL IS FAIR IN LOVE & WAR😆

did you like it😳
From now the parts will start merging...

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part 8(A) page88.2ndDEC.2011

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update...
Loved Maan's restlessness for meeting Geet...
Everything that he did during waiting for her was just sooo sweet
and when he sighed... kash mere paas bhi uska number hota... was just ...
hehehe
you are awesome yaar
maan ko faint nahi kiya...slip ker dia...
and Geet holdin falling Maan...
what a scene... picture perfect...
yaar... a doubt clearance required...
Geet attended Maan-Manpreet wedding and recognize Maan as groom...
Why didnt she recognize Manpreet as Maan's wife...

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
******RES********

see dear this time u didnt have to send me the pm..
havent read the update will edit after reading

*******Edited********
omg they r meeting after long...
loved the way u have shown maan's restlessness...
oh so cute of him to dress up for her...
will he atleast get to know her name i doubt that he wud even talk to her
i am sure he wud b frozen if he gets to know the name i am sure then mp will get to know..if i know u u wud not want things to go this fast will u.
waiting for the next update
Edited by preethia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
comment mai first nahi to kya hua
like sab se pehle maine hi kiya sacchi
thank god dono mile
muje to laga tum apne ff ki golden jubli karke hi milvao gi
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Posted: 13 years ago
such a cutie pie part
maan is acting just like teenage lover
and the collision toh honahi chahiye tha superb!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

******res********


see dear this time u didnt have to send me the pm..
havent read the update will edit after reading



will be waiting eagerly
a BIG ONE
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG...
Finally...!!
They met...!!
They really met...!!
I m so so so happy...!!
Now i m on the cloud nine...!!
Its just simply awesome update...!!
Edited by megh_piyashi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG geet caught falling maan 🤣
maan was getting restless to meet her 😳


Loved it

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