Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyanshluver1

gr8 job sultana! just luvin ur IF's


Thnxxx☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
such a cute dad and nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
DUDE LOVED IT!!!!!!!! JUST READ PARTS 4-8 AND THEY WERE TOO GOOD SORRY YAAR FOR REPLYING LATE HAD TO DO SOME KAAM BUT AWESOME JOB!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetapple2995

DUDE LOVED IT!!!!!!!! JUST READ PARTS 4-8 AND THEY WERE TOO GOOD SORRY YAAR FOR REPLYING LATE HAD TO DO SOME KAAM BUT AWESOME JOB!!!



Koi Baat nahi😊 Thnxxx🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnxxx Guyz For ur Precious reviews...Keep Commenting...Luv U all🤗

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Kria: Fun?? mast hai..par kya karein

Vicky: Party yaar...Chalo andar chalte hai

Kria: ok

Rey: Guyzzz wait...andar kuch maza nahi araha...hum kahin aur chalte hai na

VickY: ufff...Tu bhi na...

Neha: kya rey..party se itni problem kyu hai...

Rey: i hate parties

Kria: toh fir aap aaye kyun

Rey: tumhare liye...I mean vicky...vicky k liye aaya...

Vicky: haan kria yeh sirf mere liye aaya hai...And he laughs

Kria: ok...chalo na andar chalte hai

Rey: ok aur koi option b nahi hai...come on guyzzz

In d party hall

Neha:Chalo dance karte hai

VickY: yep...Chalo..Kria..aao

Kria: haan...

Neha: rey aao na tum bhi

Rey: no u guyzz carry on mai dance nahi karta

Kria: kyu besura gaane k sath bure dancer b ho kya??

Vicky: aisa nahi hai kria..bohot accha dance karta hai

Neha: toh chalo na rey..

Vicky: isko force mat karo ye nahi ayega..Neha kria come on..

Vicky neha leaves

Kria: chaliye na rey..bohot maza ayega...aur mera fav song b chal raha hai

Rey: No kria..tum jao..Mujhe nahi aana

Kria: makes baby face...aap mere sath dance nahi karna chahte

Rey: aisa nahi hai.. Tum jake unlog k sath dance karo na

Kria: nahi aapko aana hi hoga...mai aapko liye bina nahi jaungi

Rey: kria plzzz

Kria: she pulls him

Rey: Angrily stop it kria...kaha na nahi karna dance...Tum zid kyun kar rahi ho

Ppl around stare @ rey and kria

Kria starts crying

Rey: kria m sorry...luk i dint mean 2 hurt u...plzz mat ro...m really sorry kria...

Kria: dur raho mujhse...

Rey: kria plzz m sorry...mat ro kria..i beg u plzz

Kria: angrily aap samajte kya ho apne aapko... Maine bas dance karne ko kaha..kisika khoon karne to nahi kaha na

Rey: Mujhe maaf kardo kria..maine tumhe rulaya...main bahut bura hu...and he gives his handkerchief to kria

Kria: apne paas hi rakhiye...mere paas hai...sabke saamne mujhpe chillaye... And she starts crying

Rey:kria..suno...kria... Tum b mujhpe chillao...kria mujhe dance karna accha nahi lagta aur tum mujhe force kar rahi thi to ghussa agaya..

Kria: aisa b kya ghussa..itna ghussa karna thik nahi hai...khadoos ho aap...

Rey: ok..mai khadoos hu...thik hai...ab to rona band karo..plzzz

Kria: ok..and she wipes her tears..par mai aapko maaf ek hi shart par karungi...

Rey: kya?

Kria: aapko mere saath dance karna hoga

Rey: par kria

Kria: par var kuch nahi...agar aap chahte hai k mai aapko maaf karun to aapko dance karna hoga...Rey: ok...But aaj nahi..fir kabhi

Kria: nahi...aaj aur abhi ...

Rey: plzzz

Kria: chaliye...she holds his hand and take him to the dance floor

kria starts dancing... Rey stands

Kria: rey... dance...

Rey gets flashback " dancing wid his dad..."

Kria: kya hua..?? Aap thik ho na

ReY: haan..m ok...

kria: aap udaas lag rahe ho... She keeps her hand on rey's shoulder...kya hua...aapko dance nahi karna?

Rey: kria dont get me wrong...mai dance nahi karta..mujhe nahi pasand...

Kria: ok rey.chaliye hum kuch aur karte hai...

Rey: ok...

Kria talking to herslf...Hope ek din aap mere saath apna dard baatein

Kria: rey aapka fav dish kya hai

ReY: bhendi aur pasta

Kria: bhendi?? Mujhe wo bilkul b nahi pasand... Ghar pe mamma jab bhi bhendi pakati hai to mere liye extra sabzi banati hai..

Rey: emmm.. Tumhe meri mom k haath ki bhendi khani chahiye...den m sure ul luv it

Kria: aap kehna kya chahte hai meri mom bhendi acchi nahi banati?

Rey: arrey aisa kab kaha maine

Kria: kaha nahi par mai aapka matlab samaj gayi

Rey: kria mai to bas aise hi

Kria: mai to bas aise hi kya

Rey: tum pagal ho

Kria: haan wo to mai hu...and she smiles

Rey smiles

Kria: dekha smile kiya na...aap hamesha aise hi smile karte rehna...bahut suit karta hai aap pe

Rey: smiling tumne ye jhagda sirf mujhe hasane k liye kiya

Kria: haan... Par meri mamma bahut acchi cook hai

Rey: he he ok..tumhari mamma bahut acchi cook hai..aur tum bohot pyaari ho..

Kria: blushing..she luks down

Rey stares @ kria...and der hawa hawa luk luk starts

Rey: kria ek baat puchun

Kria: haan Puchiye

Neha enters

Neha: kya kar rahe ho yahan baithke...bore nahi ho rahe

Rey: nahi to

Neha whispers in kria's ears...Tujhe to bada maza araha hoga haan

Kria blushes

Rey: kya kaha tumne neha..zara mujhe b batao

Kria: kuch nahi rey...yeh to bakwas karti rehti hai..

Rey: ok..neha whr s viCky

Neha: waha dusri ladkiyo k sath dance kar raha hai...i tell u bahut bada flirt hai wo...

Rey laughs...haan flirt hai par bura ladka nahi hai

Neha: haan pata hai..bahut sweet hai

Kria: accha neha..sweet hai...

Neha: mera matlab accha ladka hai jaise rey ne kaha...

Rey: mai usko leko aata hu

Kria: ok

Rey: vicky bas kar...ab chal...

Vicky: kyun..mujhe yahan bahut maza araha hai...

Rey: chal chup chap se warna ghaseet k le jaunga

Vicky: ok

Kria: vicky kya baat hai...bada accha dance kar lete ho

Vicky: Kya bataun kria..mai paida dance karte hua tha

Kria neha laughs

Kria: guyzzz chalo truth and dare khelte hai

Rey: wat? Party me...pagal

Kria: bahut maza ayega rey..plzz

Vicky neha haan haan lets play

Rey: ok...chalo us table pe bait te hai..

and dey sit

Kria: ok lets start.. Mai bottle spin karungi...get set go...


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Posted: 13 years ago
I just read it on FB...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was realy super duper osm...damn luvd it 2 d core...!!!! u rock...
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Posted: 13 years ago
👍🏼 superb!!!! i simply love this!!! keep going good job!!!!!!!! jaldi se unke dance seq laao na plzz im waiting@@!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWW...!!!!! kria ne rey ko manane ke liye jhagda kiya..!!! hahaha...!!!! she's soo sweet yaar...!!!!
and yayyy...truth and dare...!!!!!!!

update soon...!!!!

-Saumya

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