-Dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF pt72 pg140 NOV27 - Page 87

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

Rachana - its plain and simple... most of the people come to connect on net and stay connected here coz they want something different from their real life...and fiction attracts people coz its supposed to be reel... something different from real...u wanna be a part of that reel life coz u can may b nvr get it in real and thats y we get attached...but when reel characters go thru situations similar to real life, it affects us if v at any point in time have experienced any of it...


I know yaar, but there is a line u have to draw na. I mean being an adult, responsible, mature...etc a person needs to have certain kind of control in life so that they can make sure situations do not get out of hand...I mean while being in skool - worrying about an FF...totally does not make sense...

If u know what i m talking about...cus this is just fiction...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.


Hi to you too darling.
I think it is so sad...that we let ourselves be so attached to fiction. I mean sometimes I think, Rachana how can u let it affect u so much?
I am a cancerian so i get attached to emotions so easily ...ab kya kar skate hain...
Muski - if u think our request makes sense...pls try if not I understand...

u are a cancerian.. me too... so i understand ...
@vivacious girl - hi... me hoping something good comes up
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

u are a cancerian.. me too... so i understand ...
@vivacious girl - hi... me hoping something good comes up


Hey fellow cancerian.
HOpe...Muski se, for sometime good n happy...soocha na paedaga!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.


Hey fellow cancerian.
HOpe...Muski se, for sometime good n happy...soocha na paedaga!!😳

but muski had earlier stated that we need to have tissues with this FF... 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
how much time it will take..
w8ing..
kabase f5 press kar rahi hoon
soch ti hoon isake liye java main ek program likh do to refresh the page after every 5 sec...
to bar bar i don't need to press f5..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

i told her the same.. i hv lot happening at work which is already working me up and i get involved with the characters i read...so depressing or sad FF will affect me more... dont need any more tensions and sad things lingering around me so will read all sad parts in one go till the happy parts...so am affected less or rather just for 1 day...

@rachana, shruti and mariam hi...



same situation here i 2 have stressfull work in office nowadays... n don't wanna read sad updates... but muskan has alrady stated tht we will need lots of tissue... n my problem is i can't live without muskans updates... so aab jaan kyon na chali jaye... padhana to padega hi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@shruthi - u can call me Gouri... thats my name... 😃
@Rachana - yes there needs to be a line... i know its my fault that i get attached to the characters but i hv been like this since childhood and hvnt been able to change despite conscious effort... i get attached to all characters i read and i go thru their pain and happiness...so get very affected... n if i relate to the pain or happiness the characters are going thru then i get more attached to those characters... am not a cancerian ...an arien yet i get very emotionally attached to characters...os it isnt like the sun sign yaar...its the person and its also the writer's skill... its all credit to muski that she weaves characaters so well that we relate to them and get attached... not all writers can manage to do that...
@mah stalker baby niddzzz... i see u stalking again... hugs... mwahs...
@muski - u r the best... love ya lots...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

@shruthi - u can call me Gouri... thats my name... 😃

@Rachana - yes there needs to be a line... i know its my fault that i get attached to the characters but i hv been like this since childhood and hvnt been able to change despite conscious effort... i get attached to all characters i read and i go thru their pain and happiness...so get very affected... n if i relate to the pain or happiness the characters are going thru then i get more attached to those characters... am not a cancerian ...an arien yet i get very emotionally attached to characters...os it isnt like the sun sign yaar...its the person and its also the writer's skill... its all credit to muski that she weaves characaters so well that we relate to them and get attached... not all writers can manage to do that...
@mah stalker baby niddzzz... i see u stalking again... hugs... mwahs...
@muski - u r the best... love ya lots...

totally agree with u gouri... just love the way muski portrays the characters... they are so different... and they are unique totally...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oops she held him closer.. giving in.. he was only trying to calm her.. he cupped her face.. she snuggled in closer.. his fingers wiped her tears.. she closed her eyes.. leaned closer to him.. it was so close.. to a kiss.. his lips brushed hers.. a situation so close only reminded him of her.. Geet.. her feel.. her touch.. her smell.. her essence that filled his senses.. her lips.. he mouth went dry..just thinking abt their moment.. his lips parted aching for her...

He opened his eyes at once glaring her... His breath was raged in uneasiness, hers was a total with different reason... he left his hand at once from her face.. She slowly opened her eyes fluttering her lashes lost in his closeness.. Her eyes widened in shock to see his miserable face..

Maan was horrified as he inched away from her looking blankly at her... He was actually blanked out. All he could see was geets innocent questioning almond eyes.
breaking the trust ..
breaking a promise !
His whole body rejected the touch.. Prachi tried to reach his hand.. He stepped back like he was being touched was sinful!!! He pushed his hair behind trying to look away.. from the dhundlae se disapproving eyes of hers.. For that moment there was nothing but her.. .
He couldn't even feel prachi's presence. Like she was not there any more or he didn't want to see her anymore... Feel her any more.. Her touch on his lips burned him piercing through every pore of his ... It was some weird irritation, sickening chocking him; He just wanted to run away from her.. Wat did he just do .. He went so ahead with his pretending of their relation which was baseless & to top it up he has given her all wrong signals that she came so close.. Dam she is just a frd...!!! Oh god ... not even a close one. All his words to her .. on stupid egoist claim played back ..so rotten ..
but they were clear on not get emotional... Wat was all that..
no one has right to touch him like that..
no one ... Why was his mind all the while thinking wat will geet say abt all this how will she react to this???
How will explain her.!!!??? he had no write to to cheat her..
it will hurt her so much.. his eyes burned.. thinking abt the pain she will feel learning this. he was scared to death!!!
She will definitely not approve all this.. He just rushed out of apartment, without saying a word to prachi!! who stood embarrassed abt the whole thing especially his reaction. It took a min before she could understand wat happened & wat went wrong !! By then maan had left.. disgusted & hurt..

He sat in the car.. He took his phone desperately trying to reach her... Dam .. He doesn't even have her number... He checked the time may be he could catch her in the college. He drove crazily to the college breaking all the signals. He managed to leave the car somewhere near the parking.. he ran to her class room.. she had left by then.. he closed his eyes sinking down on the floor... he probably breaking down in tears. ..had the idea of catching her in the bus stand not hit his mind.
He scanned the bus stand impatiently. He checked it couple of time.. he irritatedly hit the bonnet of his car. May be he could follow the bus.. he randomly drew in the direction of the bus.. he had no clue of the bus number she took.. all he knew that it went in which direction. He madly drew in that direction.. stopping all the buses..by driving in front of them & rushing in screaming her name..
It was odd traffic jam Geet thought when she saw the buses next to her pulled over suddenly in the middle of the road. the passengers were curiously peeping through the window. she wondered wat was all that abt.
Maan cried out her name every time he ran into the bus.. looking for her through the windows.. pushing the crowd.. she was no where.. he could have got beaten up today for all his stupid behavior. Lucky him they only pushed him off the bus.. he came out disheartened & broken..walked back to his car.. only to see her standing there wondering wat was wrong...


Oh Geet he ran to her.. Geet..!! Geet !! he panted
she got bit scared at the pace he stepped towards her. She began to think if it was a good idea to have got out of the bus for him. But she couldn't see him like this. She nervously stepped backward.

he couldn't get into her personal space especially seeing her scared.. he stopped just few steps away.
Geet he panted ..geet he kept saying her name in small intervals as he still walked towards her in tiny miny steps.
She didn't say anything, her eyes was glued down to the road more out of shock at his weirdest of behavior. He was so glad she was not looking at him now. He couldn't have faced those brown eyes & accepted his mistake. How will he tell her, wat he did. He did something no girl would accept.


His mind had become motionless, he looked at her face..it was so peaceful to look straight down at them, like touching his hearts depth. The heat that twiddle with an experience of intense feeling radiating pulsating, thriving deep within.
Before he could say anything.. the bus behind began to honk ..asking him to remove his car out of their way. He opened the door & waited or her to step in.
She was not sure if it was a good idea to go with him. He didn't say a word just patiently waited.. though the bus driver, was pressing the acceleration pedal...giving them glares.. she sighed & sat in the car. He came around & got behind the wheels. They drew quietly to for 15mins until they reached a place where they could finally pull over to the side without disturbing the traffic.
His heart beat was finally calm now, but the feel of someones lips touched his.
He stopped the car & turned to look at her. She not even once looked at him, but all the while she could feel he was stressed, something was bothering him; he looked wrecked, decimated. Something within annihilating him. She was pulled out of her thoughts when he nervously whispered wo
he took a deep breath in wondering wat was going to tell her, how will he explain to her!! why was he looking for her so madly, because he was guilty..
he kissed prachi.. he was nervous..his lips trembled before he could formulate the words..
he cleared his throat.. main ne
he stopped, & sighed again
his hands were frozen. Maan Singh Khurana was actually trembling as the whole event kept playing back in his mind.. he just couldn't take it anymore.. someone touched him, he let her!! he led the whole normal simple frdship take an odd scene like this. Dam his ego.. why did helet things get so complicated.. he began to breath heavily... he inched towards her side.. she clutched her hand together. Million questions in her mind. Most prominent.. inhe kabse bolne main takleef hone lagi.. jab dehko bematlab gussa karten rahten hain yah tho kiss karten rahten hain..
precap
bechari Geet totally confused
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
r
yippieee me 1st...
hurrah
but will read tmrw
after i get back frm my xam!!!!😳
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okies xam over n heres my comment...
fabulus parts di
super awesum..👏
part 72...am just speechless!!!!!

maan has really fallen badly for geet
the way he felt disgusted n
searched da whole bus
for her
defying the traffic...
n his nervousness yet tht gut
to tell her da truth...mindblowing!!!!!

he is pretty sure geet will be mad...cuz he feels tht they r a couple...nt him n prachi!!!
maan's feeling hve cum out really really well!!!!!

hats off to u di!!!!!!!!⭐️
u r awesum!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago

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