OS: Virmaan Jeevi Dill Mill Gayye

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys thought of making an os of wen virat and maanvi realize their love for eachother and how their love burns

There he was sitting staring at the st. Louis gang, friends of maanvi huh virtual thought so she had some guys friends too he went over the thought in his mind what the hell obviOusly doesn't every girl has a guy friend.. But the argue continued in his mind... But maanvi hOw can she she's never been out of rishikesh as far as he knows but why was he caring or thinking soo hard about the guy who had just pulled maanvi on stage and how the two were dancing with out caring about who was surrounding them. The guys name was reyaansh and the girl whose name might be Kriya with the rest of the gang was looking at the pair too. The two were dancing as if there was not tmrw almost every one was looking at the two the way they connected even the creepy waiter.

Virat then got up damn who cares if I promised myself not to song he went on the stage and started dancing with Kriya who eyed the guy Rey who looked at her dancing with virat. Maanvi looked at them too. Virat steers singing and everyone had gotten onto the stage to dance.

Abbey yeh stage thorna hai kya maanvi said out loud enough tht everyone went quiet and heard the stage crack and in less thn a second the stage fell with the pairs all falling on top of eachother

Rey on top of Kriya, virat on top of maanvi, viren n
On top of jeevika. All the couples looked like tht no one moved untill they heard a voice oyyye hoyye agar aisa hi kerna ta to main basket ko bhi leyata

Everyone luked at the guest who smiled and waved in a teasing mode

Karan sir yelled the st.Louis students while maanvi yelled Karan

Maanvi pushed poor virat off of her and ran into karans arms. Karan seemed to enjoy virats face expression and he smirked he resiste to stick tongue out at virat.

Arrey wah rishikesh express Bari fast ho

The st. LOtis kids got up the boys jealous of their girls staRing at the hunky professor withtheir mouths hanging open as thee professor looked more thn hot well sexy.

Everyone had gotten up and faced Karan jeevika went to Karan and said a hi while Karan hugged her- a one arm hug brothers give to their sisters don't get excited guys- viren saw tht along with everyone

Wow aj Meri behem ki Shaadi hai air mujhe kiwi e invite nahi Kiya
Viren relaxed at the word behem

Oh hello ab agaye ho na so Aram se bat ke chill kero maanvi said

Karan twisted his cheeks and stared at maanvi with a cute expression

Tum to chup hee raho tumhe hee sabse zyada Khshi hui hai mujhe Dekh ke ab Itna pretend na Karo u kno u luv me

Meri joothi bhi nahi Tumse love nahi Kerri

The st. Louis kids shocked to see their professor in such a easy relaxed mode

Karan saw thm And waved and didn't expect the reaction as all the girls ran to hug him squishing him- poor Karan-

Virat just stared at the closeness of the two
Maanvi and Karan

He decided to walk away and saw the waiter also staring at Karan
Oye ghar mein bhai Baap Nahi Kia

But virat had seen it wrong the waiter was trying to get a way to see viren but the muscular hunk had blocked him with his body

Plzz tell me if u like it and if u do and want me to continue
Plzz comment so I can pm u guys thank you for taking ur precious time to read this 😊 😊
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aaliya25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it =) please continue!!! I can't stop reading this.. i was hoping that virat got jealous of the d3 crew and the guys and lol i just saw your os! when are you going to upload next?? I really hope today.. lol no pressure ;) loved it honestly!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz contuine it it's really gud and plz pm me when u rite the next part😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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please pm me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continuation

Part 2 hope u enjoy

Virat had stepped outside and was wondering why why did he step out just for seeing someone with maanvi
Why did he care of someone touched? Why did he feel he had a right on her tht she can't fight with anyone's beside him? Why did he care she was fighting in a jokingly manner with someone else besides him? Wasn't tht his right?

Virat smacked himself on the head and turned to go I side wen he saw the waiter staring at his brother
He looked closely and saw a gun under his tray. Virat stared at his brother who was bz talking to his saali saheba.

Virat closed in on the waiter jut wen he was about to shoot.

Everyone heard a shot and ran towards where virat and the waiter were fighting on the ground. Another shot went off and maanvi felt a cold heat go thru her head she ran towards virat to see if he was ok and she saw him trying to pull the gun away the guys of st.Louis Karan and viren ran towards them but eventually the guy ran off.

Viren picked virat up and hugged his brother vadhera family members ran towards virat to see if he was ok and indeed he was. He just stared at maanvis facial expression. Her face had turned intO an horror expression and she just stared at virats face.

Virat reminded himself to ask her later

Scene shift
Eveyone had left virat and maanvi paced around the room for a chance to have everyone out so she can go inside

She wondered about her care for him as she got impatient for waiting
But she cudnt think properly unless she sees him fine
She knew he was ok but she still wanted to see him personally to know about his health

Virat on the other side while the others talked to him thought about why did he react the way he did? Was it only for his brother or was it also for the girl who had been standing there talking to his brother.
The answer he came up was both, but as a friend and a brother--- relax brother only for viren and friend as maanvi-

Viren was in his room and was accompanied by his dadaji. They talked about the danger the case had brought them and if virat hadn't been their hw things cud have gotten messed up. His grandfather tld him to quit the case and this time viren didn't reply. He didn't know way to do.

Jeevika had seen him thru her window as he looked up at the sky. She texted him.

J: app theek to hain

Viren heard his phone and saw jeevika

V: no

J: Sab theek ho jaye ga mujhe pata hai app tense ho aj ke baad Jo kuch bhi hua theek nahi ta Lekin main bas yehi Kahungi mujhe app per pura barosa hai.

V: aur jab tak app mere saath hai main zindagi mein kabhi Haar nahi Manu ga thankyou for everything

J: mujhe haq hai

Viren smiled and wrote

V: I luv u

Jeevika blushed in the darkness under the moonlight and it made her skin glow.

Viren who saw her took a picture and and wrote

V: UFff yeh hi beauty ek din Meri jaan le Legi

J: to phir Mai is ko chupa ke rakh dungi agar app ko apne pass rakhne ke liye mujhe kuch bhi kerna g
Hoga to main woh ker lun gi

V: oyye hoyye

Scene shift
Maanvi entered virats room sneakily and saw virat sleeping.

Maanvi knew this was not right she shudnt enter of hes a sleep but he looked so innocent she bent over him and touched his face without her own permission

Virat felt something on his face and quickly grabbed the person and spun her underneath his body the two stared at eachother and the blanket was wrapped around them.

Precap
Rapunzal Rapunzal let down ur hair virat soda out loud on a whisper
He was standing with his brother under maanvis and his bhabis room

The girls looked out the room

Oyye Rapunzal kisko bolla

Oh hello tumhe nahi bhabi ko
...
...
Manvi and jeevika climbed down their window and accidentally fell on top of the brothers

Enjoy
Piya.D thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was great i can't wait for the next part plz plz pm me for the next update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love it! :D ahhh i can't wait for the next part!
please pm me when you update with the next part :)
hopefully that is soon :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊loveddd itt =) can't wait for your next update.. you are getting me hooked on these lol! great job 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ooh this was really really really goood!!! please write more n pm me when u do :) superb!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's really awsome:D please pm me web u update next part !

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