new SS: Forbidden Love part 11 updated on 7/12

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#671

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

i am realy crying over the last part...cud feeel geets pain..😭😭😭

awsome😭

will edit later...

but couldnnt resist a small one..

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Edited by aashluvsmaan - 14 years ago

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 14 years ago

#672

poor geet...feeling bad for her...nice part though...continue soon

now that you have updated this , we can expect an update for sr soon right?😉

Edited by honeygrape - 14 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#673

AHHH, last stanza was so touchy and painful . can't even imagine the plight of geet in present situation . Beautiful but painful ending ...will be waiting for more .

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#674

Aah felt sorry for Geet. But I am sure her plunge into the water would snap a cord in Maan's memory zone.

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#675

@ part 10

it is indeed painful for Geet, seeing him in front all the time yet they are away

but when he teasing her .. he had a glimpse of his older self

and where does 'mishty' come from? he never thought why he used that word

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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#676

Why is Maan doing this ?

Poor Geet she's longing for his love

The ending part showed how much his rejection affected her

The way she walked further into the river I hope she does't drown

I hope Maan realizes what he's putting her through

Continue soon dear

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#677

i can understand maan not remembering her but its been sooo long how can he still not be drawn totally to her??? the love never fades..memory might fade but the underlying love...how can that disappear...it doesnt right... thats y he feels the pull... but its been sooo long and he is still in denial... he's only trying to keep distance...y bindu...

geet's pain is heart wrenching...

and somehow i dont like this Mahi track... getting the flowers, cards, calls etc... u started the SS with ML track but now with mahi track it will go on to include the stalker track as well... very like the show... so someone not liking the mahi track... story shud b a bit different from the serial...

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#678

Geet is doing way to hardwork yaar feeling really bad 4r her...
I think geet should go somewhere 4r sometym...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#679

part 10
nice part...
feel very bad for Geet...
now who's this Mahi?
is he sending Geet gifts?
Maan is once again the dusht danav...
wanna see Geet happy...
cont soon dear...