-Dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF pt72 pg140 NOV27 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

am i dreaming????😍

di dekho maine sabko surprise diya, aap ek week ke liye off pe the toh maine update kar diya😳

TELL ME THE NAMES OF UR FAV WRITERS MAI UNKO BOL DU GI VO BI 1 WEEK OFF HONE KA NOTE DEDE HUME TUMAHRE UPDATE TO MILEGE
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg omg musky u r updating...yepiii
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd

TELL ME THE NAMES OF UR FAV WRITERS MAI UNKO BOL DU GI VO BI 1 WEEK OFF HONE KA NOTE DEDE HUME TUMAHRE UPDATE TO MILEGE


omg... u made me laugh, m ROFLING 🤣... gud one gurlie... chal ab tumne pucha hai toh to be honest, there r so many, like muskan(i think i dont have to say that), keya, shruti, zeynab, zoha, zee, luvabbybaby, etc etc n there are still so many... my list will go on n on n on...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipeee di wow u r back...waiting for mistimia and puchki
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Posted: 13 years ago
me waiting waiting
guess what..
recently i dreamt myself getting married to my PUCHKI☺️
haiii dreaammmyyy😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!! you re soo sweet !🤗.. waiting 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
surprise surprise

waiting


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blood rushed through him & his desire to kiss her in real, passionately was rampant. His embrace tightened perceptible & he kissed her.. more deeply passionately.. she didn't know when her sobbing turned into soft moans.

her hands were still hitting him though weakly now.. still struggling to get out of the passion he was spinning her head into. He didn't know how he was filled with memories something every dhundlae se pal with her.. he couldn't let go.. it felt so perfect having her in his arms.. feeling her lips .. feeling her in way he never felt anyone else.. for moment he thought.. it was the wifey in his arms like that drunken night.. then a feel of mistimia her cuteness her.. sweetness..like he knew this how she would feel against his lips.. a feel her skin that burned when he touched her bare back when he had barged into her green room.. .. that intense hug... that longing that haunted him for months now.. that every feel of hers that was unknown to him as hers.. engulfed his senses. He kissed her more & more.. deeply.. it was passionately.. yearning.. loving .. screaming his confused self.. wanting her yet in denial of his wanting.. but his sense had mind of his own.. totally out of his control.. the feel was so intense.. he could feel himself in a feel of pleasured state just feeling her lips .. his hands snaking her skull...their raged breath was coming out in long & passionate rhythm.. she was still frantic.. sobbing.. moaning.. not able to understand his anger.. his passion.. or was it just act of lust.. wat was he doing to her.. this feelings she was feeling was new & strange.. & one thing she was definite ..that it was forbidden..


He didn't even know how long he continued to kiss her. She no longer tasted of paratas.. it was just just the taste of their togetherness.. him in her & her in him. Her hands holding his back.. trying to pull him away.. he finally gradually stopped .. still softly nibbling on to her pink.. swollen lips. Their warm breath falling in intervals.. on their lips.. his eyes was still closed in concupiscent emotional trans he was in.


His eyes fell open when he felt a burning hit of her trembling fingers.. awakening him from the ingenuous dream state. He glared at her.. smeared face.. holding her lips frantically.. pushing him away.. slapping him where ever she could.. he just stood.. looking at her.. he didn't say a word.. neither could.. she..
her hands fell on him.. slapping him.. hitting him, scratching him..




she hated every bit of herself & him.. to have made her feel that.. she probably kept hitting him.. until she could no longer & fell on the floor.. crying, cuddling her self.. he didn't say a word.. he just stood there like a statue. He didn't know why he felt all that.. why he did that..
all he knew was.. he never felt like this before.. so drawn.. so lost.. so passionate.. so ardent so fervid.
so involved. He was only supposed to feed her.. there was nothing more to it.. he stood their emotionless or probably too many emotions... it was only supposed to be feeding her.. nothing more.. then wat happened.. how did it all end up like this.


it was suffocating.. with her sobbing echoing the room.. he just crazily began to punch the door.. in frustration.. he didn't stop..
it was his thudding punch against each sob of hers.. each of her tears that fell.. smearing her cheek.


his thudding continued even long after her cry .. died off.. dissolved in her sleep. He would have blown a punch across karan's face as he opened the door in the morning.. he came early to surprise Geet with special valentines day gift.. He was shocked at the sight of Maan's blood red eyes.. knuckles bleeding.. him sweating panting.. & still angrily punching the door.. Maan took his bag & furiously walked pass karan.

Karan walked like he had an odd feeling.. he peeped in only to see Geet cuddled up in corner..
he patted geets cheek couple of times.. he got water & rushed in.. doing the same mistake of slamming the door. He splashed water on her face couple of times.
She got up terrified.. inched away from him..
karan shook her shoulder ' Geet kya huwa??
its me Karan??
tum teehk ho..
it took a while for Geet to get hold of the situation.. she looked around for Maan. He was no where to be seen
karan ' he left
wat happened between both of u? Why r u both looking so wrecked?
She got emotional & hugged him .. wat happened between both of u.. the words.. just brought tears in her eyes.. she hid her face in his arms & holding back her tears. ..biting it in... Geet Handa.. doesn't cry.. doesn't shed tears.. thats not her.. she couldn't be crying. .. but all that was wrong.. she was wrong!!!



Just then bunch of juniors walked in to collect the decoration.
They stood stun at the sight!!
soon the whole college knew.. Geet was in that 4ft x 4ft room alone with Karan the whole night.
Did they get stuck intentionally??
wat did they do the whole night??
Jitne mooh utni baaten..

every one had their own version of the night.. may be valentines day celebration.. wink wink..
karan did try to clarify but that only added up to the confusion.



Maan walked in to KM at that early hours looking totally lost.. he walked passed Daadi & yash who was holding the pooja thali.
Yash ' Maan
Maan couldn't stop.. he just dipped his head miserably.. hiding his wounded knuckles.. heading straight towards the steps.
Yash was furious.. Maan he roared.
He kept the plate on the table with a thud & followed him to his room.
Maan.. Maan.. where were u the whole night.. ??
I want an answer now
he almost raised his hand to slap for such disrespect.. when Dev screamed in horror from behind.. dad.. Maan ka haat dehko..
yash instantly took his hands in his.. & looked at them painfully..
Maan couldn't explain anything.. he was too exhausted & tired. .. he just collapsed.
Yash called for dr & got him checked.
He was stressed.. & exerted with his hand.. hurt & bleeding.


precap
Geet guilty
-PREV PART 65 NEXT PART 67 -
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

haila moi ish first😲😲😲

cant believe it😲😲😲😲😲
anyways...loved it..even though it didnt go as i expected ...😆😆 but u ar e amaster twister anyways😆😆😆😆
bechari geetu
and maan ko aur ek kantap😡😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
..aiiila😲 me second ... First time in this ff...😛
bravo... Musky its great update...
Omg previous precap ab samajh says.. Karan 😆
Edited by 18mypride - 13 years ago

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