-Dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF pt72 pg140 NOV27 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i can still see sum1 GREEN... how much more time???
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congrats on new thread ... and now waiting for next update
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still waiting for ur update
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i hv refreshed my page arnd 100times n still there's no update
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tried to make a long part..
posting it now😳
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YAAAY!!
Your updating. Cant wait.
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congrats on new thread ... and now waiting for next update
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she went far away from him & sat down after kicking the wall.. so wat now??
wait until someone come looking for us...
he came down coolly.. & lied on her lap.. crossing his arm on his chest & closing his eyes..she looked at him in utter disbelieve.
It took a moment for her to react.. she pushed him off her lap & curled her legs close to her chest. She again looked up at babaji & began her murmuring.. he was irritated at the loss of his comfort. He ignored her murmuring & now rested his back on her arms.. & sat side ways stretching his legs & crossing his arms. She inhaled sharply & jerked her shoulder off..& turned away from him.. facing her back to her.

He was set off balance.. he rolled his eyes & again sat comfortably resting his back on her back now. She closed her eyes & turned to shout at him aap yeh bar bar..
.. he fell off balance.. back straight in her lap.
Main tho phelen hi aisen laten tha.. tum hi pata nahi .. kanha kanha mujhe ghuma rahi thi
this is better.. koi aayen tho mujhe bata dena
aap..

he yarned nicely streching his hands & rolled cutely into a comfortable position
she gave up & looked into her phone again for reception
he coolly rocked his leg & began to sing.. totally out of the blue.. hum tum ek kamrem main band ho..
she knotted her brows & looked at him.
Aur tum dawraza slam kardo..
she crossed her arms & looked away..
hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho.. aur tum aisen moo banathi raho..
she couldn't control the smile that was creeping his hearing his besura song.. & the total outrageous lyrics.
hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho... tumhara phone bhi na kam karen..
she looked the other side muffling her laughter
hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho.. aur tum mujhe se baat bhi na karo
she frowned at him
hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho... oopss yun darthi rahoo
she made a big O .. in shock..
hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho...she kept her hand on his mouth.. & continued.. aur aap.. gana na band karen..
na puchu aisen hota kya ho.. na samjhu aisen ho tho kya ho.. she pretend to choke herself..& made a cute dieing act.
He twisted her hims & turned his face..very cutely
she laughed out loud.

he made a grumpy face & didn't talk to her for some time.
She continued to laugh for some time.. & then.. looked at him.. again..
he was still lying down with a big frown on his face..not looking at her..
she leaned closer... he turned away.. lying sideways..
she leaned closer & blew into his ears.. he felt shiver pass down his spine.. he snapped & turned frowning at her.. she was caught off guard .. leaning on him.. inches away from his face.. she fluttered her eyes.. & he frowned glaring at her. She made a puppy face.. pouting.. he snapped & turned away..
she giggled & leaned again naughtily blowing again ' he got up frustrated & sat up.. crossing his arms..
she laughed at him again..it was night now &.. Maan was still not reacting to any of her antics..
she finally gave up.. she crushed a paper ino a ball & threw at him
he turned to look at her angrily
Achha ji main haari chalo maan jao na.. she cutely twisted her nose
he looked away..
Dekhi sabki yaari mera dil jalao na
Chhote se kusoor pe aise ho khafa.. she questioned pouting..
Roothe to huzoor the meri kya khata.. he blamed it back on her

Dekho dil na todo.. she cutely tiptoed towards him & held hid arm..
arre Chhodo haath chhodo.. he snapped her hand..

Chhod diya to haath maloge samjhe.. she laughed..
Aji samjhe.. he nodded.. moving away from her.

Achha ji main haari chalo maan jao na.. she made all kind of faces..
Dekhi sabki yaari mera dil jalao na.. he snapped yet again..
uff hoo.. kaha na sorry..
he laughed & held her hand & danced around.. banging on the walls & the shelves.. humming the song.. she giggled.. tagging along .. around the small room.
they finally stopped goimg round round.. panting & still laughing
pata nahi.. prachi aapko manthi kaisen hain?.. she caught for her breath...& spoke
ussen mujhe manan ki kya zarorat?.. he asked looking into his phone
yah right.. waisen bhi aapka sara gussa tho sirf meren liyen hi hota hain.. she pouted cutely
thats because u deserve it
she made a cute face..
he cupped her face..
Geet
she raised her lashes to meet his eyes
Geet
umm
he sensuously leaned close to her.. wo ..
she looked at him puzzled.. ji?
She was feeling ..something.. something..the way he was holding her.. & calling her name again & again..
he made a cute face rubbing his stomach.. mujhe bhook lagi hain
she sighed in relief.. like she was holding back her breath for so long
wat did u think he teased
she just blankly shook her head.. trying herself to wonder wat she was thinking... his closeness only made her feel butterflies like tingling within.
She opened her cute pink puma back bag & pulled out her 2nd lunch box.. that she takes to office.
Before she could.. he pulled it out snatching from her hand.
He took it opened it restlessly... ummm.. yummy he took in the aroma..
wow aloo ke parata
kisne banayen.. he asked nibbling them
she knew if she said .. she made it.. he may not even have it..
cook ne
he continued to polish them off... without even bothering abt her.
Waisen bhi she wouldn't have had it now from that.. it was his jutha..
he was licking the last bite.. do u want?
she shook her head main jhota nhi khati
khaa lo.. last bite hain.. handsome husband milega.. or u will be stuck with that pinon of urs
She smiled & looked away.. no thanks..
he didn't like she refused to have his jhuta.. not that he has someones jhuta.. but don't know why he was not liking that she refused him.

He took the bite in his mouth.. & her words.. main jhota nahi khati.. kept playing in his mind..
he suddenly cupped her face.. & sealed her mouth with his.. she was totally caught off guard in shock..

The next thing she knew Maan bent closer his hands went around her waist & back of head & pulling her closer to him. He did nothing more than pushing his tongue into her mouth & feeding her the last bite.. her rapid heartbeats was baffling her..her hand hit his body.. leg protested.. pushing him off .. away.

Geet could only stare at him as he force fed her .. while himself.. chewing a part of it taking it from her mouth.. she continued to protest.. tears began to flood from her eyes.. he moved her closer.. & closer.. she tried to move away.. he pinned her to the wall. She refused to gulp the parata.. & he refused to leave her.. until she did.. Maan kept her captive.. with his mouth..& his tongue.. playing in her mouth.. tenderly sweeping around.. touching the parts.. he did once before.. but this was longer & less passionate.. until.. their closeness... took over... in spite of her hitting him ..kicking him.. his hand went around her waist & lifted her off the floor.. pinning her to the wall. .. she tried push him off.. that only gave another angle to their kiss.. this only made him shiver.. there was this moment he just wanted her.. blood rushed through him & his desire to kiss her in real.. passionately was rampant. His embrace tightened perceptible & he kissed her.. more deeply passionately.. she didn't know when her sobbing turned into soft moans.
I MAY NOT BE ABLE TO UPDATE FOR A WEEK..
ME TRAVELLING FOR THANKS GIVING..
SORRY.. FOR THE DELAY
precap
oh no.. the whole college main badnami.. bechari geet
-PREV PART 64- NEXT PART 66
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
AAAhhh *screaming on top of her voice*
What??? am i really first 1 to comment???? well then it was worth waiting...coz i gt this chance after...idk hum much time...its been long

now abt the update...
for the first time i enjoyed maan in this FF... i luved puchki bt not maan... but today his harkatein, wat he was doing to get close to geet, which was unintentional & so much adorable...i luved him...for doing that, meri taraf se maan ko ek flying kissšŸ˜†...haye patanhi geet mera kya haal karegi, agar use pata chala ke maine maan ko flying kiss di...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

aur woh last mein maaneet KISSā˜ŗļø,,,, ufff muski u always make me speechless with ur new new inventions... 😳

n wat??? u'l b off for a week😭... owo, will miss u... jaldi aana... hv fun🄳
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what to comment šŸ¤”

in starting part i love cute naughty maan casually leaning on geet šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰

maan's besure parodies was hilarious 🤣
even geet gave a goo answer šŸ˜†

song selection was awesome totally appropriate with their situation at the same time funny too

i love madhubala n kishor kumar in this song yet it didn't look awkward to picture this song on maneet in store room


in second part

very egoistic maan
can't take no from anyone
what a way to feed anyone 🤢




NO UPDATES FOR A WEEK
HOW WILL WE SURVIVE

well best of journey & have lots of fun
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago

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