Love, Lies and Deceit-Thread 2 Part 39 pg 64 9/12 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

congrats !! !!!!!! 4 d new thread ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

awesome ... superb ...

continue soon ...

Thank you very much😊
u r most welcome
sure dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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update kab milega Rose...

do din ho gaye...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinonome

the sunny angle is a bit confusing.. who is she exactly?

Not much of sunny is known uptill now...it is still a mystery
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Thanks dear😊
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Originally posted by: shalini_s

came across this FF... ur story is holding up to its title... awesome work Crystal...

Welcome to the story dear😊...thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So many comments, I am so happy today. Thank u friends for commenting and making my day.
I want to thank Water. for giving me the idea of the song. It's a beautiful song so full of meaning.
"It's done. The bags are ready. Let's call Nakul to take them to the outhouse." Geet told Sonalika.
Precap: Sunny in the outhouse with Maan and Geet.
Part 33
"I will help you to pack your things Sunny, I hope you don't mind living in the outhouse with us." Geet started helping Sonalika pack her bags. It took them a long time to complete the task. "You have so much luggage Sunny, do you buy everything available in the shop" Geet teased Sunny.
"Let's get Nakul to take the bags to the outhouse" Geet told Sonalika.
"I will go and meet Dadi; you go ahead to the outhouse Geet, I will come later"
Sonalika goes to meet Savitri Devi without waiting for Geet as she knew Dadima was angry with Geet and she did no want to antagonize her further.
Calling Nakul Geet asked him to take the luggage to the outhouse.
Geet knew she was still not allowed in the Haveli but as she passed the corridor she could not resist herself from having a look at the room which had become special for her. She decides to go to that room only for few minutes.
(click on either link. plz play the song while reading as it will give depth to the update)
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She knew if she wanted to see that room she would have to hurry up otherwise someone or the other would see her and question her. She knew all the servants were loyal to Savitri Devi and she did not want anyone to go and inform Dadi about her still roaming around the Khurana Mansion. She hurried to go and have a final look and as reached the corridor she could hear a song being played somewhere in the Haveli. She realized that Dadima must be doing her favorite pastime, that of watching television.
As she enters the room it felt too stuffy, dark and dank, bringing so many questions in her mind for the pull the room held for her.
tujhase naaraaz nahi zindagi, hairaan hoon main
o hairaan hoon main
tere masoom savalon se pareshaan hooN main
o'.pareshaan hoon main
As she moved around she touched and felt the table, the side table lamps, the curtains, and especially the bed she felt the song being played was portraying her inner turmoil.
Seeing the condition of the room she could not figure out why the room felt special?
Why the attraction to the place when all she could see was the place not being attended to?
Why did she feel special in that particular room when her whole life got shattered in the same room but still she wanted to come here?
jeene ke liye socha hi na tha, dard sambhalane honge
muskuraoon to, muskurane ke karz utaarne honge
muskuraoon kabhi to lagata hai
jaise hontonn pe karz rakhaa hai
tujhase...
The dreams she had woven around the love of her life lay broken on her feet still she has to keep on living. Was the life worth living when all that she could see around her was distress and despair? Dev, Pari, Maan even Sameera were heartbroken because of her and none of them had a life of happiness ahead of them, still they all kept on living with a broken smile on there lips and a weeping heart. Their whole bodies belying, failing to give a true idea what their hearts bemoaned.
aaj agar bhar ayi hai, boondein baras jaayengi
kal kya pata inke liye aakhen taras jayengi
jaane kahan gum kahan khoya
ek aansu chhupake rakha tha
tujhase...
She could not stop her tears from flowing. would she never get the love she wanted all though her life. Would each and every person she loved would leave her. First her Ma, Baauji then her Daarji left the world. She depended on Dev for her emotional support but that support was also taken away by the cruel hands of fate. She looked up at Dadima but her own mistakes pushed Dadima away. What did destiny have in store for her'..would her life always be plagued by sadness and would she never find happiness?
zindagi tere gum ne hamain rishte naye samajhaye
mile jo hamain dhoop main mile chhaanv ke thande saaye
o tujhase...
But now she has a responsibility to look after. She would look after Maan unborn child through Sunny and she wanted to do it with a smile on her face. After the little one was born she would love the little one as her own if Sunny allowed her to and after sometime she would ask Maan to send her to some other branch of their company far away from here.
She reached the Outhouse wiping away the tears and telling herself to become strong to face the future and whatever the fate threw at her.
On reaching the outhouse she saw same servants waiting with the Sonalika's luggage and Nakul looking lost as in which room to put the bags.
"Nakul, please take the bags to Maan Sir's room and please shift whatever things are mine in the other room. From now onwards Sonalika will be staying in that room and each and every servant assigned to outhouse will have to take care of her." Geet gave the orders to the servants to comply.
The servants did what was told to them and then left. Nakul organized Geet's things in the spare bedroom in the outhouse but he was not happy with her decision. He felt as Geet was now married to Maan she should not move out of the room and Sonalika should have been in the spare bedroom. But he knew his position in the house and he would not go against any order given by any member of the Khurana family. After settling everything he asked leave of Geet and left after he got the permission.
On entering the outhouse Sonalika was surprised at the transformation of the outhouse. It looked more cheerful and homely than before. There were fresh flowers scattered all around the house, the house looked more lighted as all the windows and doors were opened up. The curtains blew in the breeze and the house smelt of freshly baked cake. Her mouth watered just smelling the smells coming from the kitchen.
"Geet, you're an angel. How did you guess I wanted to eat cake today?" Sonalika happily hugged Geet.
"I know you like sweet things Sunny but not the traditional sweets, so I baked a cake for you and by judging form your expressions I did the right thing" smilingly Geet told Sunny, "Now go and change, its time for Maan to come".
"Ok, but where is my luggage"
"It's in Maan's room, which will be your room also from now onwards." Geet replied.
Sunny was surprised, "What?"
Precap: Sunny and Maan's reactions to Geet's decision.
Edited by crystal-rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh me first...😊

so sunny is not maan's gf like everyone in km believes... 😊 i always knew it... now that hurdle has been moved out of their way... where is rahul?? he accepetd his defeat so soon?? or is he planning to come up with any other wicked plans to separate maneet?? feeling bad for geet 😒 i have a strong feeling that it was not rahul inside that room with her... hope you will reaveal it soon

wow not bad, my comment is a big one today...😆
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
heey tat was a great update...
me loved it sooo much...
y suuny& maan are shocked with geet decision...
so tat means did he reallly got maaried to sunny r just acting...
if he is acting then y...????????
bt to day's up date was awesome loved it...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks 4 the update dear..i don't even think that the child is of maan

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