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Posted: 13 years ago
lucky thnku🤗🤗🤗thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗4 making me smil again...so so so sweet🤗🤗...nd i looove moonlight me romance😍
ps : contd...? contd... ab tho mysti ki tarah mujhe bhi kuch, umm, doubts😛...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

lucky thnku🤗🤗🤗thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗4 making me smil again...so so so sweet🤗🤗...nd i looove moonlight me romance😍

ps : contd...? contd... ab tho mysti ki tarah mujhe bhi kuch, umm, doubts😛...


U are always welcome dear.🤗..

Happy to lift up your mood..keep smiling😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
As usual a true Lucky style scene.👍🏼... wonderful.👏... Awesome.👏... simple and sweet and cute😉... Thank u Thank u so much.🤗🤗🤗... Today's special VM and FF too.😛.😊.. gr8 going.👍🏼... Loved it 🤗🤗🤗 and special thanks for making Daksh sleep in Naina's lap.😳..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

As usual a true Lucky style scene.👍🏼... wonderful.👏... Awesome.👏... simple and sweet and cute😉... Thank u Thank u so much.🤗🤗🤗... Today's special VM and FF too.😛.😊.. gr8 going.👍🏼... Loved it 🤗🤗🤗 and special thanks for making Daksh sleep in Naina's lap.😳..


U are welcome dear

Thanks thanks & thanks. bud...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. Lucky... it is beauuutiful!!! very nice!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

Y is daksh possessive of naina...??

DAKSHNA BEDROOM,1.00PM..

Dakshna on brk..after long romantic.😳.😳.

Both lying on bed..in embrace..cudled in rams of each other

http://www.inmagine.com/is_single0109/is098q7x2-photo

Naina; daksh..( soft sweet voice)
Daksh; Hmm...

Naina;yaad hain tum mujhe apne possesiveness ki wajah batane waale the..tumne kaha bahut lamba story hain..lifts up her head looks into his eyes; batavona..mujhe jaan na hain..aur ab tum mana nahi karoge...pls pls

Daksh looks at her cute face and instantly melts...😆...

Daksh;( hand on her cheek) Bas bas meri jaan..tumhari ek pls kaafi hain mujhe pigalne ke liye.😆...batata hoon

Gets up and leans on the bed..naina also does the same...

Daksh takes naina's arms into his arms.. and starts off...

Daksh; tumhe pata hain naina..main hamesha pyar..ladkiyan inn sab se door rehtha tha..Meri zindagi main kuch khaas nahi tha.. lekin phir tum aayi meri zindagi main( kisses her hand)..aur sab kuch badal gaya...ek dum se

Naina listening carefully...; kaise?😲😡

Daksh; woh ..agar tum nahi hothi tho mujhe kabhi pata nahi chaltaki main itne ache se jagda karsakta hoon woh bhi ekladki ke saath😆..chidna..naazar hona..nafrat karna..tumne to DP ka dfinition hi badal diya..😆.😆phir..

Naina; phir??

Daksh;;dosti hua..aur pyar..pata hi nahi chala ki kab aur kyu main tumhe itna chahne laga ki..itna pyar karne laga ki.❤️..lekin.

Naina; bataya nahi mujhe.?

Daksh;(looks at her) tumhari wajah se..jab bhi tum meri saamne aati thi tho bolti bandh ho jaati hain..dimmag ka kaam karna bandh ho jaata tha.😆...😆
Naina; aur bahut jyada muskuraate the😃...( laughs)...daksh joins her and as usual gives a cutie smile😛

Daksh;(lil gussa in tone) phir abhi aaya aut itna sab kuch hogaya ki.😡.tum nahi jaanti naina...jab Tum ne abhi se haan kaha aur jab abhi se tumhari shaadi horahi thi. suddenly dakshu becomes emotional..and naina also)...main kis dard se guzar rahatha.tooth chukha tha main😭.😭.akele akele tadap tha tha .soch kar ki naina meri kyu nahi hosakti.? kyu nahi?.😭💔

Uss waqt kisi bhi tarah maine bardash karliya..lekin ab..( hugs her) sochne se hi daar lagta hain..Tum se door hone ka,tumhe khone ka khayal tak mujhse bardaarsh nahi hota...

Naina; ab tho humsaath saath hain aur hamesha rahenge..mian tumne itne asaani se chodungi nahi KP...(Hugs him tight) aur phir??


Daksh; phir..mujhe mera pyar, mere zindagi sabse badi khushi milgayi.😛.( kiss her on fore head)..meri naina..Jis pal tumn mujhse i love u kaha..ussi pal maine decide karliya ki chahae jo hojaaye.main tumhe apne aap se kabhi door nahi honedunga..(hugs her more tightly)..kabhi bhi nahi..aur kisi teesre ko hamre beech main nahi aanedoonga..

Daksh;( looks at her face) Iss Liye main tumhe lekar baut jyada possessive hoon aur hamesha rahunga( head butt) samjhi...

Naina; Haan haan samaj gayi mr.Possessive DP... phir?( cuddling in his arms more closely)

Daksh; Phir??... hello memsaab story khatam hogaya...( chutki bajata hain)
Naina;(comes out of hug) Hmm kaafi lamba hain..lekin hame acha laga...kuch doubts hain lekin subha poochungi...
Daksh; doubts? aur iss main! naina tumbhi na.( stroking her hair).subha kyu? abhi poocho?
Naina; (pushes him on to bed) abhi Q& A session ka mood nahi hain..😳vakeel saab
Daksh puts his arms around her pulls her closer; tho kya karne ka mood hain?..

Naina shy smile..and daks pulls her more closer...and scene fades

Contd......
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Lucky.👏... Yaar woh dakshu ke senti dialogues ne tho phir se sab yaad dilake ruladiya😭😭 mujhe...
Thank u Thank u for such a beautiful scene Lucky🤗🤗🤗... Jadu ki jappi for u dear 🤗🤗🤗🤗..

PS : Abhi ye doubts kya hai Naina ko is main 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Wow Lucky.👏... Yaar woh dakshu ke senti dialogues ne tho phir se sab yaad dilake ruladiya😭😭 mujhe...

Thank u Thank u for such a beautiful scene Lucky🤗🤗🤗... Jadu ki jappi for u dear 🤗🤗🤗🤗..

PS : Abhi ye doubts kya hai Naina ko is main 😍

ditto ditto... lucky yar... itna touchy😭... bechara dakshu... felt bad 4 him all ovr agn... nd itna sweet bhi😊😊😊😊😊... jadu ki jhappi frm me 2 dear🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗...
ps : mujhe bhi dbts hai ki ye naina ko ab isme kaun se dbts hai😛...?
pps : sry 4 late reply jaan... kaan pakad ke sry... told u na... myriad probs last nite...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Friends.. this FF is for future track based on the articles.. guess Dakshna has problem btn them. Daksh is angry and he does not speak with Naina. Naina tries to speak to him but he is fully out of mind. Rem: when Lekha issue Daksh behaved like that rite? Naina feels bad... Ayi still in angry mode but internally she softened.

in the morning Daksh left without telling naything to Naina. she felt too bad. she tried sereval time to speak with him but Daksh does not show the mind. Naina with tears in room... she gets a call from Anjali..
A: arre Naina... tum kab ayegi...
N: kya huva mamma?
A: kya baat hai.. tum bhool gayi hai kkya... ? Usha aunty ki beti ki shaadi ka tayyariyam kab karoge? voh baar baar muje pooch rahi hai.. aaj bhi tum log nahi ayi to sab gadbad ho jayenge..
N: Oh God..!! mein bhi na? sab bhool gayi... mamma... mein Daksh se batakar avoongi...
[hurrily cuts the call]
She ends the call and calls to Daksh
in office KP-Dkash looks at the phone and cuts it. she calls again and again and Daksh cuts.. at last in anger he switches off the phone. Naina tries agin and no luck.. then she message "Daksh pls cal me.. " since phone os off... it does not reach him.
Naina waits for the call.. looks at clock.. oh its time to leave... otherwise she will miss the flight. at last she leaves a note "I am leaving for Darjeeling". She meets Aku and tells she has to do the wedding planning of Usha aunt and she is leaving for Darjeeling. and mentioned that does not get Daksh on phone... Aku tells she will say she will say.. actually she thought she waited for Daksh to come and thy both planned to go. in the office Daksh is restless and decides to come early.
When he reaches he does not find Naina.. a little bit confused.. then Aku sees him
A: Dada, Niana kitna wait kiya apko.. Naina Darjeeling ke liye nikal chuki hai..
Daksh a bit shocked but not showng that.
he comes to the room and sits on the bed..
D: agar mein gussa kar le to aisa karte hai kya...? mein phone nahi karoonga.. [then he finds the note Naina left for him... thinks for a while ]
D: mein bhi kitna gussa kar diya..? kitne baar voh phone ki thi.. mein bhi kuch zyada hi gussa kar diya. galathi meri thi.. [regrets and decides to go..
In Darjeeling.. Naina shows happy face to everybody and in the room she weeps..
N: Daksh bohot gusse mein hai.. mein aisa karna nahi chahiye tha..
Then she leaves for Usha aunty's house.
Meanwhile Daksh reaches BV. Randha aunty receives him with happily... daksh feels better.. she didn't tell anything here..
D: Naina... ?
R: Voh abhi ati hogi..
Daksh gives a fade smile..
Manwhile Naina comes and senses Daksh in the house "Daksh!!!"... she eagerly goes to room.. tears in her eyes.. seeing Naina, Daksh also has a worried face... Naina runs and abt to hug himm. But looks at Daksh.. he is ultimate KP..
D with anger and tension: tum samajte kya hai apne ap ko? agar hamare beech mei kuch problem hote to.. ghar chodkar ati hai kya.. ? etc etc.. Naina tries to speak but "muje bolne do.."
Phir Niana sunti rahti... with a smile and tears..
she runs towards Daksh and hugs..
N: I am sorry Daksh..!! muje maph kar do... mein khar chodkar nahi ayi... mein usha aunty ki beti ki shaadi.. [Daksh wondered.. embarassed.. ]

D melts and tears apears.. : voh.. voh.. mein bohot darr gaya tha...
N: Vaise.. mein tumhe itni asani se chodnewali nahi hoom..
Daksh smiles... they looks each other.. intense and deep eyelock..

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Contd...

Dakshna bed room...10.00 am


Lil different from routine...naina opens her eyes after coming out of her sweet dreams.😳.and remembers last night.😳..apne aap main sharmaake..muskuraake☺️..and turns sidewards hoping to steal a glance of her pyare patidev😛..but dakshu is not on bed...

Naina; kaha chala gaya?...😲.looks around room...just then daksh makes an entry. from balcony..😛

Daksh;cuite trade mark smile.;😛 good morning swt hr8..❤️.comes and sits on bed...; mujhe dhoond rahi ho...( kiss on cheek)

Naina hugs him🤗; kaha chale gaye.?

Daksh; Office ka kaam aagaya..phon pe baat kar rahatha
Naina; (comes out of hug) itni subha subha? office se?😲
Daksh; 10.00 baj chuka hain mam...call kal shyam ko bhi bahut saare missed calls the...lekin.( Naughty tone )😉. kal tumne mujhe itna busy rakha ki..(holds her chin and looks in to her eyes...and pauses.)

Naina asusual blushes lil😳

Daksh;..maine iss case ka kaam office mein samja diya ...phone karke kehdunga ki Agar agay se koi problem ho tho simarn ko call kare..aur mujhe disturb naa kare...pulls her closer and says; kyunki mein apni pyare biwi ke saath busy hoon...ab ut javo😛.aur frsh ho javo...bas ek baar client se baat karleta hoon


Naina nods her head in consent... daksh gives her a kiss and gets up from bed...

Naina gets down picks her clothes from floor..and goes into wash room to freshen up...By the time she is out..daksh sitting on bed with lap top and phone...

Daksh( with client on phone) daksh starts his conversation with client...jee mr.banerjee...stands up from bed...

..Naina looks at him lovingly aur suddenly she thinks of some thing..naughty..😉..

Slowly she goes and hugs daksh from back( shirtless)..😛daksh turns his head and looks at naina but continues with his conversation...

Daksh'(on phone) haan ..kahiye ..haan woh. actually kal thoda busy tha..tho...I am sry...

.naina becomes naughty , gives a kiss(es) on his back😛..daksh is finding it hard to concentrate(bechara).😆he looks at naina with pls..chod dhona..expression..naina nods her head saying no😆. daksh releases himself ..

Daksh; haan tho aap kya kehrahethe..haan main sunraha hoon...

Naina gets even more naughty aur rukhne ka naam nahi le rahi hain..she comes forward and hugs him and kiss him on chest😳

Daksh; tho aap ne...kya.woh..haan...kuch kaha apne..jee woh..woh..( too hard to concentrate on call)😆..he releases from naina's hands and goes and sits on bed..

Daksh; woh..aap ke case ka saare arrangements kar diya maine..bas
naina too gets on to the bed..hugs him from back..


Daksh; woh woh .haan main teek hoon.(naina gives kiss on both the cheeks)..
...aap pls usse ko call kejiye..usse matlab.mera matlab hain.ki.. simran ko.. mere secretary.haan..woh(mumbling words...not knowing what to speak..since mind is goiing blank..u knw y?)😉

Naina ...comes near ear and whispers i love u daksh ❤️ gives a kiss on ear...and blows air into his ear...😆.

.Daksh ka tho hogaya kaam tamam; 😆...(Cdnt manage anymore)

Daksh;kya main aapko baad mein call karu..pls..( disconnects the call with out even waiting for response)...naina realises call khatam hogaya..she leaves him and runs near cupboard..😛 and acts as if doing some work...

Daksh takes a deep breath;; naina..ye tum kya kar rahithi?
Naina; Maine kya kiya?kuch bhi nahi.😛..( acts as if she did nothing)

Daksh; lil kp mood)😡 acha...tumhe pata hain woh kitna imp client tha...ye tumne bilkul acha nahi kiya...ye bahut galat hain

Naina feels bad😕; mooh pulakar' comes near daksh' I am sry daksh..woh uss din jab main ayi se baat karrahithi tho tumne mere saath aisa hi kiya..iss liye..mujhe nahi pata ki woh bahut imp client tha...I am sry...main tumhare client call disturb nahi karungi ayinda se..

and starts going away from there...

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