Barsaat-Angad,Garv,Kripa,Kumud - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-11..Kumud is sitting alone near the river
Garv cums:why r u luking at the river like this?
K:I like river very much.see how freely its going.it looks lovely
G:I agree with u
K:I think river is the sign of luv.if we look deeply into the river,we can see the person whom we luv
G smiles.G looks at the river.he cud see kumud there in his imagination
G:ya,u r true
K luks into it.she imagines angad's smiling face in it.sje becomes happy
K:I can see my lover in it.Angad
G is shocked:Angad?what did u say kumud?
K is shy:actually..i luv angad
G is shocked:u luv angad?
K:yes.i see u not only as my sir but al;so as my friend.that's why I confessed it 1st 2 u
G is upset:does angad no abt it?
K:I'vent told this 2 angad yet.but I think he nos abt it.i feel that he loves me.what do u think sir?he loves me?
G is speechless.G thinks:whats this?my kumud..she does'nt luv me.she loves angad.but he loves kripa.what'l happen wen kumud cums 2 no that angad loves kripa?Oh!
K:I'm confused whether he loves me or not
G is upset.K walks 4ward thinking abt it:he loves me.he loves me not.no,I cant bear it.he loves me
K smiles.she dreams of having romance with A.song:ye jo dil..{barsaat}

Kripa is luking at birds.While walking backward,her leg slips & she's abt 2 fall down.But Angad catches her.A smiles.K gets angry:how dare u touch me?
A:u were about 2 fall down & so..
K:u cud've let me fall down instead of touching me.that was better
A:why r u talking like this always?why r u avoiding me?u no how I feel 4 u?I really luv u
K shouts:enuf angad
A is stunned:kripaa
K:what do u think of me?u thot seeing ur smartness I'l fall 4 u?no way.bcoz I cant imagine falling in luv with a guy like u.i can only b happy with the person whom I luv.i can luv a person only wen he makes me happy
A:I long 4 ur happiness.i promise that I'l always make u happy
K:if u try also,u cant make me happy.i've never felt happiness with u.u said u want me 2 b happy.right?
A:yes K:then leave me alone with my happiness.my happiness is another person.Mr.Pritvi
A is shocked
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
nice aprt! poor boys! cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
Awesome part!!!! 😛 😛 😛
Cont soon 👏 👏 👏
Poor Garv & Angad
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
plzz cont soon ur fanfic is soo interesting
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
wow!!! gr8 part...continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: candyfloss

poor garv and angad 😆
i like this part especially angad and kripa. 😆



i wonder why 😆😆😆


neways gr8 part jas... the ladies confessed their love, my jaanus are upset now, they need a hug😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
Part-12..Angad:Pritvi?who is he?
Kripa:yes prithvi.He is my lover
A:kripa,what r u saying?u r lying just 2 avoid me.2 make me jealous.
K:why shud I make u jealous?4 that I don't luv u dammed.i luv prithvi
A:nooooooo
K:don't shout
A becomes very emotional:think oncemore.that wont b luv.it'l b just a crush
K:no,I luv him very much.no doubt
A:what if he's not gud
K:never.i trust him more than any1 in this life.i no since childhood.u no we r engaged.we r going 2 get married soon
A is shocked K:so leave me alone
K goes.A is upset.he screams:kripaaaaaaaaa

Angad & garv r very sad while going back.

The next day,Garv cums 2 class.He does'nt see angad there
G:where is angad?
Kumud:he is absent
G:why?
Ku:I dunno sir
G:kripa,do u no why angad is on leave?
Kri:how can I no that?
G is speechless.
Kri thinks:2day there is some relief without angad.but why this garv sir is after him?why cant he b peaceful without seeing angad?nonsense

Garv is driving the car.he sees the drunk Angad coming out from a bar.G is shocked:Angad!
A is too weak 2 walk.He is abt 2 fall.G goes & holds him from falling down.G places him inside his car.

A is sleeping on bed.He opens his eyes. A looks around. G cums there:u r in my house
A is surprised:but how?
G:I brought u here.u were not even able 2 walk.u were fully drunk
A is embarrassed. G:what happened 2 u?why did'nt u cum 2 college?I don't think u bunked class bcoz of sickness.any problem?
A:no G:I wont believe that.don't lie 2 me.u always tell that I'm not only ur teacher,but also ur friend.cum on,tell me.whats ur problem?

WILL ANGAD TELL HIM?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww...becharo angad 😭 , lol, gr8 part n continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Part-13..Angad bursts into tears:kripa does'nt luv me.she loves sum1 else
Garv is shocked:what?
A:yes,I cant imagine a life without kripa
G becomes upset.he thinks:why did angad also hav my fate?
G:so u started drinking like dEvdas?
A is speechless.
G:taking drinks 2 4get the painful luv failure is gud only in movies.in real life u gain nothing
A:its very easy 4 u 2 tell,bcoz u'vent experienced this
G smiles slightly:who told u that?u no,kumud does'nt luv me.she loves sum1 else.am I drinking ?
A is shocked:what?how cud she avoid u & fall 4 another guy?who is he?
G keeps silent.G thinks:its better not 2 tell him abt it.its kumud who shud tell that.but what'l b angad's reaction?
G:angad,don't ask kumud about it,plz
A:ok G:promise me that u won't go out of control into stupid bars
G extends his arm. A slowly keeps his arm on it.G smiles.
A:I won't get tired.i'l struggle 2 gain kripa
G:u'l gain kripa & do u think kripa wil b happy if u get her forcefully?
A:then what shud I do?
G:leave kripa 2 hav her own life.if u luv her sincerely u shud allow her 2 b happy.if her happiness is another man,let her b happy with him
A is upset.
G:now ur concentration shud b only on studies.u r a gud student & u've a gud future.don't spoil it
A smiles:I won't break ur expectations 4 me
G smiles.

Next day Angad sits near Kripa & K moves away. A:kripa,don't worry,I won't disturb u anymore.i promise
K sits near A.
A completely neglects K.K feels sad.
While A was going out of college,K calls him from behind:Angad
A stands still.
K:I no that u r angry with me
A:nothing like that.4 that what did u do?
K:then why r u avoiding me completely?cant u b a nice friend?or atleast can u just see me as ur classmate instead of treating me like a stranger?afterall our college life is going 2 get over
A:I'm sorry if I've hurt u.i'l b a gud friend always
K smiles:thanku
A smiles & goes.

College's last day.Every1's eyes r full of tears.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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brill part cont soon 😛 bt its sad though so plzz bring a & k together

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