'FF~ RaDev::The Unspoken words!!!' 28/11- pt3/pg9

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Niharika

@Nihariikaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi friends! there is been a story i was thinking of from many days! so thought i'll pen it down today! Hope it is recieved well😳

It will be a simple RaDev love story! how it starts! the twists in their love story! their love confrontation!...!!!!!

Hopefully ur'll like reading it, appreciate it and give more encouragement!😃

Will wait for ur comments eagerly!

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Edited by NiHa24 - 13 years ago

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Niharika

@Nihariikaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part1

This Morning again seemed very beautiful! Asusual She woke early in the morning! had her bath, prayed to Kahna. She went out and looked at the clear sky! breathing in, the fresh air! Deep in her thoughts, trying to recollect, though it were vague! but at the same time she was enthusiastic!!!She had different gleam in her eyes! smile on her lips...!!!

She went inside, the incense coming from the puja room made her heart relaxed from her thoughts!!! she let it go!... she went into the kitchen! her bua(aunt) has already started preparing breakfast! with a smile she went behind her bua holding her at the waist and her chin on her shoulder asks!

Bua! aaj breakfast mein kya hai!!

Anjali didnt fail to notice the gleam of happiness in her!

-Kya baath hai aaj meri Radhika bahut khus lag rahi hai!

hearing her bua! Radhika's smile widened! she blushed thinking of it!

-Arre!! kya baath hai! abhi aur hasne lagi! frowning her eyebrows with smile!
batha baath kya hai!

-kuch nahi bua! yun hi!

-Mujhse chupa rahi hai?

Buaa!! app bhi... aapse kuch bhi chupaya hai!!! bas aise hi aaj vathavaram hi kuch aisa hai!
Anjali turns back, looks at her "Paagal" chal jake tayyar hoja!!! aur dekh Nandhu utha ki nahi!

Ji! Radhika leaves from there smiling!

Anjali looks up at Radhika when she's going and smiles shaking her head!

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At the breakfst table!
Harsh enquired Radhika! If she has got all her papers from college! He always had kept her reminding about it from the day they started talking about the transfer! he wanted to be sure if it wont be any problem for her the last day!
Radhika looks at her bua smiling and gives him assurance that she has taken care of it! She has got all her certificates and a TC!

Harsh Mital was one of the respectful man living in Vridavan! he was very loving and caring person! he had his own small business and was a happy man! he loved his wife Anjali very much and their son Nandu! and he was very happy to accept Radhika into their lives when Radhika was very small! They have become one happy family!!

But After the holidays she was going to leave to Mathura to her father's house! Harsh has talked with the Mathura college management and got her the admission to continue her studies for graduaiton! Even Radhika had seen the campus when she went for the last holidays! she quite liked it!

It was really hard for her to take this decision! She didnt wanted to stay away from her bua! She was very attached to her! the thought of leaving her Bua and going to Mathura made her sad! she didnt wanted to go! She used to come to her bua hugging her with sad face complaining that she doesnt want to go! And Harsh used to tease them seeing that sight
-Aise barthav kar rahe hai jaisee ek doosre se hamesha ke liye bichad rahe hai! aur ab kabhi milenge nahi!!!

and Anjali looks at him in anger
- App chup raheye! ek tho bichari dukhi hai aur oopar aap aise baath kar rahen hai!
- Aree!! tho aur kya kahun! Ab mathura yahan se kithna dur hai ki donone milkar ronadhona shuru kar diya!
- Ab yeh math kahiye ki aap ko gham nahi hai ki Radhika ja rahi hai.

He was sad too! Radhika was like a daughter to him! and why wont he be sad when she's leaving. but well! he knew she has to go and moreover Mathura wasnt that faraway! They used to have frequent trips to Mathura to visit Radhika's Dad and GrandMother, the same would continue, probably now even more! So he didnt mind much! and he would explain the same to them too!

but as the time passed by Radhika got over it! but when ever she felt sad she would come to Anjali and Anjali would calm her down with her sweet words and tried to made her light! but now she has passed that phase!

Nandu left for school! his final exams were going on! Harsh left to office
Radika would help Anjali with household or she would go to the Temple!
She would definitely gonna miss all these! Vrindavan! temples! friends! her Vrindavan life!

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Days passed by! They were about to leave in another one week!
But Radhika used to be occupied with her thoughts which she used to dream very often! She stands there looking at the sky! with a smile trying to figure out what was the dream about! who was the unknown person who keeps on coming in her dreams! but she sure loved to have those dreams! whenever she dream, she used to have some smile unknowingly! it tingled her heart and left the feeling whole through the day!

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Radhika went to the temple! standing in front of the idol, she looked at it and folded her hands!
remembering her thoughts!
- aaj meine phirse wahi sapna dekha! Kahna! Magar kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha woh kya hai! najane se kuch anjaan chehra bas mere paas hone ka ehsaas hotha hai!

She stood there trying to recollect again her thoughts! but they still are vague.

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Niharika

@Nihariikaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

Posted my first part!
will wait for ur comments!😃

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fatssrilanka

@fatssrilanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

Read your FF. All I can say is Wow! Amazing.Pls continue.

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Verry nice start!do want to read more!

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sia

@sia_lovely

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Niha,

Finally u posted it :) I was so glad to see this post. Sorry slept early y'day and couldn't read the FF in the night. was really tired.

Firstly, welcome to the FF club! 🤗 🤗

A very nice start indeed...! Short and sweet but nicely explained 👏 👏 👏 Loved reading the Intro...of the family where Rads lives in.

So Rads is about to move to Mathura...and there she might meet the man of her dreams 😳

Waiting to read more eagerly...very eagerly!!

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jeffin mona

@...Olefie...

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Superb starting Niha dear 😊 I loved the rads day dreaming ya... I am sure that her dream is about our Handsome dev 😳

continue ur FF and pls give the next one soon 😊

It would be better if you write it in english too 😆

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vineetha anil

@vinianil

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

Good start Niha...continue it 😃...

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harianjana

@harianjana

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

niha u were best. it was sweet and superb.

dream man of radhika wow .

hope radh meet him soon as she reach mathura.

yaar sorry forgot welcome to ff club

waiting for next part hope u msg me