My Only Mistake I'm A Female(MG) THREAD#3 - Page 54

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Posted: 13 years ago
this update is for Shilalipi she pmed me "i am stuck in my house almost for 2 weeks for high fever ...only way to NOT feel bored are these ff & i am a great fan of ur ff specially this one...so plsss update this ff.." so its for her as a get well soon wish

part 53

he went near her and pulled her, she looked at him in surprise, he cupped her face and said
M: Geet can I return your favor with full intrest
she blushed and covered her faec with her palms
he slightly removed her palms and lifted her chin

she blushed profousely, he slowly closed teh distance between them, their lips were just inches apart or say millimetres apart, she closed her eyes he was just about to

his cell buzzed, he came out if the trance back, he cursed the person calling him and treid to avoid it, but she asked him to attend it, he sighed and tok it out from his pocket to see Inspector flashing, he gave her a confused look and received the call

M: hello, MSK here

I: hello sir, I am Inspector calling, sir Dev has treid to commit suicide

M: what? how is he?

I: not fine, sir you have to come immediately

M: have you told teh lawyer

I: no sir, you please inform and also ask him to inform the opposite party

M: ok, where is he?

I: City Hospital

M: ok, am coming

he hanged and looked at her

G: what happened?

M: Dev tried to commit suicide

G: OMG

M: i am going to City Hospital on way I'll call the lawyer, you please inform Arjun

G: ok I will

after he left she called Arjun

G: Dada

A: yes beta

G: Dada, Dev tried to commit suicide

A: when???

G: the inspector just called and he asked to inform the lawyer

A: I will and I am also coming as soon as possible, wher is he?

G: City Hospital and NT

A: she is with us, I'll bring her also

G: ok

in the hospital

M: where is he?

I: in ICU

M: how did this happen?

I: doctor said he consumed the rat poison

M: is it dangerous?

I: yes, it was brought directly from the lab

M: what are his chances of survival

I: 40-60

M: um, where is the doc?

I: come I will take yo to him

after few hours,

Dev was still under danger, though he was concious but his chances of survival were minimal

Arjun arrived with NT, the lawyers were there
afetr some time the doctor said if police wants they can take his statement as he may not survive

everyone went inside Dev saw NT and smiled

D: come NT I were waiting for you

NT:??

M: Dev they need your statement

D: if possible do forgive me, you always tried to be good to me, please
take care of Maa and Kamya as you have been doing

M: I will, I never run away from my responsibilities

D: Inspector, I agree to all that have been charged against me, but I dod
not agree for the charges against me under anti dowry act

NT: but

D: don't interfere, yes Inspector write I never asked Mr. Rathod for money, it was |NT who suggested so and the girls who I married and ditched were all with NT's consent. you can ask those girls NT was always with me when I apperoached them, so she is equally a criminal as I am

NT: no this is not true

D: you can ask those girls

NT: but

I: Mrs. Dev please be quite, let him speak

D: that's all you can take my sign

I: ok, sign here

D: doen, now NT you want to get rid of my name, but I won't let you get rid of me, (he pulled her wrist) yo will now be my widow and for always be called Mrs. Naintara Dev
she pulled back her hand and Dev collapsed, his eyes were wide open looking at her.


hope you liked it😃 I mean how Dev died and what he said to NT

i so much wanted Maan to kiss her but how can he kiss her on prime time show... chi chi chi Babajee Bachche bugad gaye hain


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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i'm first. great update
dev died that's graet.
ab nt ki baari.
hey di please update rescue also.
Edited by mannu1988 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part
but shurti very short
dev died good
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
plzzz update nest part soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear.
plz try to update regularly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.
I loved it.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh yaar shruthi u r such a tease...
first u created the scene for their kiss...
aur chup gayi update diye bina ab jab update kar rahi ho seedhe romance se tragedy pahunch gayi ho...
but y kill dev so easily yaar...
didnt get to c his sufferings...
well atleast v get to c nt suffering...
cant wait for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good one sweety, update it more often!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
atleast dev hav a guilty feeling..
but NT..she s such a evil!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
not in the series...
but atleast here we got rid of devil..
and i so loved it when he pushed nt in the ditch before dying...
plz continue soon..
really looking forward to what is going to happen next

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