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Posted: 13 years ago
Jealouse Naina

Daksh goes to the door and opens..
D looks a bit happy: Priya tum???
The gal who stands at the door with a 70mm smile.. "wow Daksh? tum aaj bohot zyada hi handsome lag rahe ho.. kya baat hai?" [naina watches it]
D simply smiles.. : andar avona... ayi... dekho.. kaun aya hai?
A: arrey.. meri priya beti ayi hai kya? [she comes farward and takes the blessings] [stil naina watches and smiles]
Suddenly Priya holds Daksh's hand and ask Ayi [this time Naina a bit irritated.. looks priya holds Daksh's hand]: kya baat hai aayi.. ? yeh aaj bohot handsome lag rahe hai...?
Ayi: tum bhi na.. kuch bhi bolthi rahthi hai..
P puts her hand on Daksh's shoulder: Accha Dakshji? aapki pyari si biwi ko muje milavoge nahi??
D: Oh sorry.. [he comes near Naina and introduces her] yeh hai meri dharam patni Naina Daksh Padwarthan.. [Naina smiles.]
D goes near priya and tells: Naina... yeh hai Priya.. kaki ki bahen ki beti. Akruthi aur yeh sisters kam and friends zyada.. [naina notices that gal stands very near to Daksh... obviously does not like he behaves very close to her Daksh-- yah.. jealouse hai..;) ]Naina smiles.- "Hellow". Priya comes near Naina and walks around her and looks at Naina seriously. and comes near Daksh and holds his hand again and whispers in ear "umm... apka choice accha hai.. perfect match" and both smiles.. oh.. Daksh kisi bhi ladki se itna closely bat karna nahi dekha... ab iss ladki se..?!!! Now Naina cannot tolerate any more.. [imagine the old prank music that they played when Naina pranked with Daksh. i think, they last played that music when Naina worked in Daksh's office... ] Naina hurrily comes between them and holds Priya's hand.
N: oh.. tum bhi na Daksh.. priya ko aise yeha khade doge ya andar bulavoge nahi? [she smiles at Priya and looks at Daksh seriously little bit Mrs KP. daksh wonders why she looks at me like this?]...
Naina turns towards priya and tells: avona baito.. [but not ready to release her hands.. she still tightly holds her hand].
Daksh sits on the sofa and priya abt to sit near Daksh. But b4 she sits near him, Naina sits near Daksh and makes Priya sit near her NOT DAKSh. [she can do it very naturally so that only Daksh can undertsnad it]
Daksh looks at Naina and notices how Naina holds her hand and catches Naina's mind ... Daksh tells in mind and smiles "oh to madam ko jelan ho raha hai." by that time Ayi comes with tea and some sweets. naina gets up and takes & gives a cup of tea and saucer to her.
Suddenly Priya notices the purse in Naina's hand...
P: oh.. aap log kahi jaa rahe hai kya?
D: Hah.. bas bahar khoomne ke liye ja rahe the...
P: accha... to aap log ek romantic evening outing ke liye jaa rahe hai.. [she looks at both of them]
D: hey.. aisa koi bat nahi hai.. bas yoo hi..
P: Ok ok .. mere aane se ap logo ka plan mat change keejiye. jaavo na.. vaise bhi Akruthi kaham hai?? muje use milna hai.. der zyada bat karni hai.. [by then Akruthi came and they hug each other and they started their talks]
D to Naina: lo.. ab in dono batein shuru karenge... jab tak yeh chale jate hai na.. tab tak akruthi ko tumhe nahi milenege.. subah se lekar rat tak ye batem karte rahenge.. pata nahi itna sara batem kaham se milte hai in dono ko??
Dakshna takes their leave. Naina a little bit relaxed.. so there is no need of afraiding this gal. but little bit angry that Daksh behaved so closely with her.. allowed her to hold his hands etc.. Naina still in agry with Daksh that he came late and now the behaviour to Priya.
Edited by ntsindia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh wow Neetu superb... After a long time with a very good scene... Loved the jealous Naina...
Very nice 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow neetu👏👏

Jealous naina😆...hmm...loved it.🤗.We hardly got to see naina fuming with jealousy and exhibiting her haq on daksh😉...super cute.👍🏼.thanks for making us meet jealous naina...aage ka part? kab?..

Dnt keep us waiting for long...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

Naina stops him; abhi nahi..pehle roti sabzi banalu..uske baad..pls...pls( holds his chin)😛
Daksh; teek hain..( leaves her)..lekin dinner ke baad tho...koi bahana nahi chalega..aur main chodunga nahi..( settles near dining table)😆
Naina; aur main tuhme chodne nahi dungi.😉...

Naina wapas lag gayi kaam main.she is kneading dough...uska dono haathon main atta ka pste laga hua hain...daksh suddenly thinks of some thing..comes and hugs naina from back aur phir badmaashi shuru😆.😆puts her hair forward and drops kiss on her neck and shoulder.😳...( smartie dakshu.😆..naina can't stop him now)


Naina; daksh...kya kar rahe ho.😲..chodo mujhe..chodona😳..daksh...mere haathon mein atta laga hua hain...😳
Daksh;( continuing badmaashi);; iss liye tho.(.kiss on ear )..😆😆😳
Naina turns back;; daksh..kaam karne dona...warna (shows her both the hands) atta lagadungi..😆
Daksh; jo chaho, jaha chaho laga sakti ho...( holds her hand aur lovingly rubs her hand against his cheek).( atta wala)...😆
Naina ; tum na kabhi nahi sudhroge..doosre cheek par bhi atta paste lagati hain. pyar se...❤️

Daksh moves even more closer to her...eyelock...dakshu succeeds in picking up one more sweet kiss on lips from his swt hr8...both lost in their kiss...naina's hands running through daksh's hair from hair to neck...lol..🤣.🤣.( atta wala hands)


After few min...both come back. into kitchen..😳.

Naina blushes first and later realises what she had done; arey, ye kya hoagaya..daksh tum par poora atta laga hua hain..😲
Daksh tho kya hua? tumhe itne pyar se lagaya tho rehne dona..😛
Naina; thoda aur lagavu?😆
Daksh haan haan kyu nahi..avona..again comes closer😆; naina pushes him away...
Naina; daksh aage koi badmaashi nahi..( order)..aur jaake saaf karo..
Daksh; ok maam...and goes to wash room to clean atta...

Contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kitchen me romanc ke itne sare versns...nd sab ek se ek cute...resident genius lucky ko hats off...nd f cours 🤗🤗🤗...oh boy.i'd betr watch these smiles nai tho lik yestede...but i jus cant help smilin...kya karu😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
One more cute scene of Kitchen romance.😊.Oh god Atta on Dakshu's hair😆. 😆. wah wah Lucky👏👏... Thank u Thank u dear...🤗🤗🤗 kahan se ideas aate hai tujhe...just amazing😍... superb..👏...👏 jadu ki jhappi for u dear...🤗🤗🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Contd...

Dakshna in kitchen😛

Daksh comes back( after cleaning atta)..meanwhile naina ne sabji daal diya and started making rotis( bel rahi hain...)

Daksh comes into kitchen; naina..naina...Naina turns towards daksh and see daksh holding teddy😛

..Daksh( a s if teddy is speaking)...; naina..main tumhara chintu..mujhe bhook lag raha hain..jadl se khanna do..😆.😆

Naina gives a smile😊 looking at daksh's act;; daksh takes off teddy and says; sirf chintu ko nahi..KP ko bhi bahut bhook lag raha hain...😛

Naina; bas 10 min..ho jayega..
Daksh looks at teddy and says; kyu chintu? 10 min dete hain😆..acha..okk...10 min aur doo..looks at naina and says; chintu are maine ye decide kiya ki..tumhe 10 min extra time denge...😆
Naina; oh..how sweet..thank u kp and chintu...😊

Daksh makes teddy sit on chair comes near naina and says; main madat kardoo..lavo.main banaleta hoon...and takes away belan from her hand...

Naina; daksh poora kaharb kardoge..javo yaha se..lekin daksh koi kam ziddi hain kya?😉 naina gives up and says; teek hain...banalo...handovers him chakla

Naina is busy in giving final touch to sabji...ans cooking rotis on pan..
Daksh; lo banadiya...😛
Naina looks at roti he made and starts laughing'😆 arey daksh..ye kis country ka map banaya tumne../?.😆
Daksh ; very funny..ek main madat kar raha hoon aur upar se hasrahi ho...haso..

Naina comes near dakshu; sry baba..takes roti into her hand and says; wow..kitna acha roti hain..world ka best roti banaya mr DP ne...( controls her laugh).😆..

Daksh mooh pulaleta hain and naina surely knows what makes him normal; 😉

Naina;sach main daksh bahut acha hain..thank u (gives kiss on both cheeks.😳.😳.)

Phir smile aagaya chehre par..u knw kis ke chehre par...😉.

Finally bangaya dinner...👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Daksh mooh pulaleta hain and naina surely knows what makes him normal; 😉

Naina;sach main daksh bahut acha hain..thank u (gives kiss on both cheeks.😳.😳.)

Phir smile aagaya chehre par..u knw kis ke chehre par...😉.

@ bold...wahi tho...smile aa gaya, i mean smiles aa gaye, u kno kiske chehre parEmbarrassed😆😆😆...itne crap epis ke baad tho nly u cn get dis done lucky...thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗🤗4 2de's quota f smiles🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

@ bold...wahi tho...smile aa gaya, i mean smiles aa gaye, u kno kiske chehre par😆...itne crap epis ke baad tho nly u cn get dis done lucky...thnku thnku thnku🤗4 2de's quota f smiles🤗🤗🤗



U are welcome dear..🤗

Hamara FF ka mission hi tho smiles lana hain..apne yaaro ke chehre par😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very very cute and sweet scene Lucky 😛 so finally dakshu ne apne haath se roti beli... And that too koi country ka map..😆. Superb 👏 😆 u are only the one to get these cute smiles on our faces 😊 Hatts off to u dear 👏 👏 thank u thank u thank u so much 🤗 🤗 🤗

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