Pyaar Ki Ye Ek Kahani AR FF 13/38 pms l8r

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guyz , I m KRITI,,,,Aapko yaad ho ya shayad na ho,maine aapko bataya tha ( I m not a Writer,n I hve NO WRITING SKiLLs) n that is true...fir maine socha try karne main kya jaata hai, so maine try kiya aur apne favorite show k favorite characters par story banayi hai...characters toh aap jante hi hai toh mujhe unke intro dene ki koi jarurat nhi hai aur main characters ko toh pura INDIA FORUMS jaanta hai(hehe) chalo fir bhi bata deti hu...ARMAAN & RIDDHIMA (AR) aur inki is nayi story ka naam hai

Pyar Ki Ye Ek Kahani AR FF

actually guyz mere mind main is ff k liye koi suitable title aa nhi rha tha aur ye ek aisa title hai jo har love stories k saath suit hota hai so,maine yahi naam chuna apne ff k liye...

INDEX:

part 1(page 1),part 2(page 2),part 3(page 5),part 4(page 8),part5(page 10)

part 6(page 12), part 7(a)(page 14).part 7(b)(page 16),part 8(a)(page 18)

part 8(b)(page 20), part 9(page 24),part 10(page28),part 11(page 30),

part 12(page33),part 13(page 38)

~~~~My Other Fictions~~~~

Tere Sang AR FF

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2747231/tere-sang-ar-ff-pt6-pg30-9-6

Saath Nibhana Sathiya AR FF

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2909426/saath-nibhana-sathiya-ar-ff-link-to-thread-2-pg-1

Is Pyaar Ko Main Kya Naam Doon AR ArSh FF (its very intresting story with lots of twist)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2165721/is-pyaar-ko-main-kya-naam-doon-ararshff-note-pg25

AR OS Gallery

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2855985/ar-os-gallery-by-kriti

Note: If anybody wants pm plz KRITI_PM in your buddy list...

ok guyz,the story begins...

Pyar Ki Ye Ek Khani AR FF

Part-1

story start hoti hai ek school se ELITE SCHOOL DEHRADUN the Best School Ever...ok guyz forget about school nd come to the topic story start hoti hai ek scl se scl k andar ek cls se (waise scl main cls nhi hogi toh kahan hogi..hehe) Class XI A (Med section) class XI A har field main aage(studies,games ,co curicular activities etc. etc.) waise hume yahan cls ki nhi cls k students ki baat karni hai sab students ki bhi nhi wo 2 special students ki baat karni hai jo humari is story k hero heroine hai Armaan Malik & Riddhima Gupta...

Riddhima(15) - riddhima is very sweet nd cute girl She is a obedient nd intelligent student too...

Armaan(17) - Armaan is cute, sweet nd a naughty boy but a intelligent student too...

Riddhima k frnds specially boyz except armaan humesha usse puchte the...

frnds:ridzi tu kisi ko like karti hai ya wo dekh wo ladka kaisa hai tere liye perfect hai...

aur ridzi sabko ek hi answer deti

ridzi:guyz plz stop it (irritatingly) tum sab log jaante ho main kisi boy main intrested nhi hu

boy1 : toh girlz main ho...

ridzi : its not funny...long pause...take a long breath n said guyz abhi main sirf 15 ki hu abhi meri age hi kya hai boyfrnd banane ki jab hogi banalungi ...tum sab jaante ho main abhi sirf apni studies par focus karna chahti hu aur tum...cut short by girl1..

girl1 : ridzi par tujhe koi like karta hai serious wala like...

ridzi ye sunti hai aur kuch kahe bina chali jaati hai...

Armaan un sab frnds k paas aata hai jo abhi riddhima se baat kar rhe the (guyz aage badne se pehle ye jaanlo riddhima ne 11th main Elite join kiya tha nd riddhima aur armaan k sab common frnds hai bas A & R hi frnds nhi hai aur na kabhi inhone ek dusre se baat karne ki koshish ki actually kabhi baat karne ki jarurat hi nhi hui...R k Elite join karne k baad R ko sabse kuch na kuch kaam hue lekin kabhi A se kaam nhi tha isliye dono ne kabhi baat hi nhi ki)

Armaan : Tum riddhima se fir se wahi baat kar rhe the

Boy2 : ha yaar teri naiya paar karne ki koshsh kar rhe tha (dramaticaly)

girl2 : tera kya hoga armaan tu ridzi se jaakar bol kyo nhi deta ki tu use like karta hai

Ar:tumhe kya lagta hai ye bohot asan kaam hai yaar main kaise bol sakta hun ,jis ladki se aaj tak maine baat tak nhi ki hai na kabhi usne mujhse baat ki use main achanak ja kar bol dU I LIKE YOU aisa nhi hota yaar

All:aisa hi hota hai

Ar(sad):mujhe lagta hai use ye bhi nhi pta k Armaan Malik naam ka ladka bhi uski class main hai...

girl1:sad mat ho yaar...use nhi pata toh hum bata denge use...

Ar:No guyz...guyz koi bhi use mere ya meri feelings k baare main nahi batayega...is that clear

All:Why...????

Ar:No more question guyz...plz...

All:ok...

nd he leaves

Neha Riddhima's best frnd listen all the above conversation...

Riddhima in Lockers room

R k mind main ek hi baat ghum rhi hai ki koi use serious wala like karta hai...

neha enters...

N:ridhzi tu yahan hai...

R:ha... kyo kya hua...?

N: nahi kuch nahi...

R: sure...

N:Ya sure...

R:neha kya koi ladka mujhe pasand karta hoga...

N:ho sakta hai...

R:sach bta na...

N:ha yaar koi na koi toh karta hhi hoga...

R:jaise...??

N:Abhshek...wo toh tujhe kiitni baar bol bhi chuka...

R:wo sirf majak main bolta hai...

N:tere gusse se bachne k liye wo aisa kehta hai...

R:Abhishek ko chod aur koi bata...

pause pause pause

N(seriously):Armaan

R:Armaan kon Armaan malik topper of the elite...

N:ha...

R:waise tujhe kaise pta...

N:aise hi bola...

R:sach bata...

N:nahi waise hi maine use tujhe dekhte hue dekha hai toh mujhe laga wo yujhe like karta hai...

R:tu paagal hai...usne mujhe dekh liya toh kiya ho gya iska matlab ye thodi na wo mujhe like karta hai...

long pause...acha chal cls k liye late ho rhe hai...

IN CLASS

Riddhima pehli baar armaan ki taraf dekhti hai aur usi time armaan bhi riddima ki taraf mudke dekhta hai...dona ka sirf 10 seconds ka eye contact hota hai green se blue aur blue se green eyes milti hai...aur fir proffesor aa jate hai aur unka contact tut jaata hai...

IN HOSTEL

RIDDHIMA'S ROOM

Riddhima apne bed par leti hui hai aur scl main bitaye aaj k din ko yaad karti hai aur armaan se hue 10 sec ka eye contact us par bohot effect karta hai...aur use ye realize hota hai wo bhi armaan ko like karti hai par wo is baat ko kisi ko na batane ka decision leti hai coz use abhi sirf apni studies par focus karna hai aur use pta bhi nhi hai ki armaa use like karta bhi hai ya nhi aur wo apni feeling k bare main sabko bata k uska majak nhi banana chahti toh usne finaly decide kiya ki wo apni feelings k bare main kiso ko nhi batayegi...apni best frnd ko bhi nhi...

R(to herself):uski blue eyes hai...kitni pyari hai uski eyes...stop it tu ye kya soch rhi hai...yaad hai na abhi kya decide kiya tha uske bare main mat soch sirf apni studies par concentrate kar

R(in mind);par uski eyes sach main bohot beautiful hai...nd she sleeps

IN HOSTEL

ARMAAN"S ROOM

Armaan standing near the window of his room

Armaan(to himself):uski eyes kitni beautifull perfect green eyes...kash riddhima kash main tumhe apni feelings k baare main bata sakta main jaanta hoon tum sirf apni carrier apni studies par focus karna chahti...isliye main ye baat bata kar tumhara mid divert nhi karunga...goes near the bed nd lying down on the bed and he sleeps...

Everyday in class...

har din AR class main ek dusre ko chup chup kar dekhte rehte...par kabhi bhi apni feelings k baare main ek dusre ko na batate aur na kabhi hint bhi dete...unki feelings ek dusre k liye day by day badti jaati...aur aise main hi unke do saal beet gye...

last day in school

In farewell party for class 12th

riddhima apni class ki farewell main bhohot royi...uske rone ki wajha uske frnds ya scl se dur ho jaana nhi tha...uski wajha tha armaan ko kabhi bhi na dekhpana...armaan bhi boys locker room main akela baith k bohot roya aur uski bhi rone ki wajha same thi...

dono ne apni feelings k bare main ek dusre ko kabhi kuch nhi bataya aur isi baat ka scl se jaate waqt unhe sabse jyada dukh huya aur ise unhone apni kismat ka faisla maana unhone maan liya ki kabhi unki kismat main ek dusre saath tha hi nhi isliye kabhi dill ki baat bhi ek dusre ko na bata paaye...

par unhe kya pata kismat kya kya khel khelti hai kismat ne unhe dur kiya tha toh kismat hi unhe fir se milayegi..aur fir shuru hogi unki

pyar ki ye ek kahani...

oh thank god...part 1 is finally completed , I hope u all like d starting of this stry...nd If u like press LIKE n leave ur LOVELY COMMENTS...

take care...

have a nice day...

kriti...😊

Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago

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Great part!

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow awesome start

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi sweetheart...

congrats for the fic...

wooowww simply amazing intro...

loved it...

hope to see AR together soon..

thnx for the pm...

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

😃 thanx guyz for liking my ff and for ur lovely comments...

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u knw guyz maine socha tak nhi tha...ki ye stry kisi ko pasand aayegi...and now i m sooosooosoo happy...aap sab ko ye pasand aayi...thanks again guyz...nd i try to post soon...till than take care...

love...

kriti...😊

Edited by kish - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

waiting for the first part!!!!!!

update soon, please.

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Posted: 13 years ago

hyyy

congrats for the fic...

gr8 ff

wooowww simply amazing intro...

loved it...

hope to see AR together soon..

plz pm me

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Pyaar Ki Ye Ek Kahani AR FF

Part 2

After So Many Years...

In Mumbai:-

Scene of a beautiful house :- GUPTA MANSION

Inside the House

All are busy in some preparations hey wait ! what type of preparations kahi kisi ki shaddi toh nhi hai...?...well abhi toh kisi ki nhi hai par jaldi ho sakti hai...kiski...? aur kiski humari riddhima ji ki...humaro riddhima ji ko ladke wale dekhne aa rhe hai aur unhi k swagat ki tayariyan chal rhi hai...chali andar chalke dekhte hai sab kaam thik bhi ho rhe hai nhi...

Man:Padma ,riddhima uthi ki nhi...

Padma:ha shashank abhi dekhti hu...

(Shashank & Padma Gupta :Parents of Riddhima , Shashank is the Dean In the Hospital SANJEEVNI and well known reputated Surgeon while Padma is a house wife & a good mother ,they both love their kids sooo much...)

Shashank:kya kar rhi ho,ladke wale aate hi honge...jaldi karo..

Girl:chill dad abhi bohot time hai...

Padma:Anjali beti ,(Anjali Gupta Joshi:Anjali is good looking & a hard working doctor,she is the elder daughter of ShashankPadma ,elder sister and most loving sister of riddhima & a loving wife of Dr.Atul Joshi amd she works in mumbai sanjeevni as a post of senior doctor) tumhare dad ko toh faltu main tension lele ki aadat hai

Shashank:ha hai kyonki tum log jo tension nhi lete aur is baat se mujhe tension hoti hai...are haanjali atul hospital se nikla ki nhi nhi...?

Anjali:nikal hi gya hoga dad...wo apne saurjee k orders thodi na taalega

Voice :(from door)Bilkul shi kahan tumne ,(while entering the house)main papa k orders kabhi taal sakta hoon

An,S&P:bilkul nhi Atul (Atul Joshi:Husband of Anjali , a good friend of riddhima and also works as a senior doctor in mumbai sanjeevni)

(atul come near S&P and touch their feets to take their blessings and goes near the anjali and)

Atul:acha Anjali meri pyari si saali kahan hai...?

Anjali:aur kahan hogi abhi tak so rhi hai

Shashank:anjali beta jaldi se jao aur uthao riddhima ko...aur atul tum mere saath aao...

An&At:jii Dad/papa

In Riddhima's Room

Anjali:(while entering in the room)ridzi tu uthi ki(seeing riddhima sleeps peacefully & her face is covered with blanket)nhi ye lo ye madam toh abhi tak so rhi hai mom dad toh kaam main busy hai ab mujhe hi ise uthana padega par kaise uthau...(thinking)...idea...

(Anjali goes to the bed and sit beside her and whispers in her ears)

Anjali:
(whispering)
Dr keerti...
(Dr keerti is d desciplarian and a senior doctor of mumbai sanjeevni she is also senior from riddhima atul and anjali )(ok guyz aap soch rhe hoge yahan ridz ko uthane k liye dr keerti ka naam kyo liya well dr keerti ko unke juniors hitler naam se bhi bulate hai aur hitler ka naam sunke toh koi bhi apni

pyari si neend se uth jaayeega na)

riddihma wake sup in jerk

(Riddhima Gupta(__):She is beautiful ,cute ,sweet & a pure hearted girl .she's the younger and lovely daughter of ShashankPadma ,little sister of anjali ,and a good friend of atul...She's also work as a senior doctor in mumbai sanjeevni with atul and anjali)

Ridzi:kahan hai kahn hai...

Anjali laughts at riddhima's act

Ridzi:di(irritatingly),aap bhi na...pause...subha subha kyo uthaya..

Anjali control her laugh and

Anjali:(forlmly)Dr.Riddhima Gupta subha k 12 baj rhe hai aur aap shayad bhul gyi hai ki aaj aapko ladke wale dekhne aa rhe hai toh aap jaldi se tayaar ho jaaiye

Ridzi(making face):yaad hai aur ho rhi hu tayyar...aap jao niche main thodi der main aati

Anjali:(smilingly)ok...jaldi se aaja

riddhima smiles back and anjali leaves

and riddhima sits properly on bed

Riddhima(in mind):kitne saal ho gye hai elite ko chode armaan se bichde hue...bichde hue hum toh kabhi mile hi nhi jo bichdege...ye kaisa ehsaas hai mera armaan ki liye jiska koi vajoot nhi hai jiska koi matlab hi nhi hai (getup frm bed and)bas ab aur nhi is faltu k ehsaas k liye main papa ko aur sharminda nhi karungi pehle bhi main bohot se rishte mana kar k papa ko sharminda kar chuki ab aur nhi (goes towards window)waise bhi is baar toh rishta papa k frnd k beta ka aaya hai toh acha hi hoga...agar ladka mujhe pasand aaya toh abhi ha toh nhi par ladke ko jaanne ki koshish jarur karungi...(look at the time and)(to herself):oh shit jaldi kar ridzi(in hurry puck up her towel) late ho gyi toh ma papa bohot daantege...

Scene 2

Scene of a very beautiful & big bunglow THE MALIK'S

Lets go inside the bunglow...its so beautiful there are so many beautifull paintings on the wall & and beautiful but not so young lady come outside from her room and wearing cream color net saree & diamond jewellery and goes near the man who sits on the sofa and reading some files...

Lady:Billy,main kaisi lag rhi hu...

billy stands and hold the lady's hand...

Billy:Ani(Ananya)You looks beautifull...as always (ani blushes & whispers)Ani:thanks

(Billy & Ananya Malik:Billy is a well known Business man & the owner of MALIK EMPIRES while Ananya is wife of Billy & a partner in Malik Empires )

Voice:Ehem Ehem (voice comes from the door of the another room ,a man wearing blue fadded jeans blue ts & a black blazer and looks handsome and his eyes is closed and covered with his one hand for not to see billyani romance)aap logon ka romane khatam ho gya ho toh main apni aankhein kholun...

Billy:ullu k patte kya timings hai teri

Ani:Billy(scolded him)

Ani:rahul bete apni aankhein khol le..

Rahul:thanks mom...

(Rahul Malik:Younger son of BillyAni and a senior doctor in USA Sanjeevni but now in mumbai Sanjeevni)

Ani:rahul ja dekh kar aa tera bhai tayaar hua hai k nhi...

Rahul:I m sure mom wo apna PSP khel raha hoga...

Ani:ha jaanti hu isliye tujhe bhej rhi uske paas ja use bol hume der ho rhi hai

Rahul:ok mom (he leaves)

In Rahul's brother Room:
The room is full messy(bachelor guy ka room hai toh messy toh hoga hi ...whats new...?)and a guyz sits on the beam bag & his back facing rahul & jaise ki rahul ne apni apni mom ko kahan tha uska bhai PSP khelne main hi busy hoga aur wo shi nikla this guyz is so busy is playing PSP so rahul didn't disturb him coz he knw if he did....(wo mujhe nhi chodega (rahul in mind))par uski mom k orders bhi the so he waits for some time and
Rahul:Armaan (Armaan Malik(__):yes,he is d armaan of elite and riddhima's first crush...he's the elder son of BillyAni ,elder brother cum best frnd of Rahul & a senior Doctor in USA Sanjeevni but now in Mumbai Sanjeevni)(He stands from the beam back and faces rahul with a broad smile bcoz he won the game and his dimples is si cue)(He wearing black vest and black payjamas & he have a perfect build up muscular body...girls like him)
Armaan:raoool I won the game...(goes towards rahul and hugs him)
Rahul:(smiles)I knw buddy...no one beat u...
Armaan(smiles):I knw one beat me...
Rahul(expression change):Ammy tu abhi tak tayaar nhi hua...dad k frnd k gar jaana hai...(teasingliny voice)...tere liye ladki dekhne...
Armaan(expression change happy to sad):raoool tu jaanta hai main shaddi nhi karna chahta...
Rahul(seriously):jaanta hu aur ye bhi jaanta hu kyo...pause...grow up buddy...tujhe elite chode saalon ho gye hai aur tu abhi bhi us ladki k baare main sochta hai...pause...look buddy...sochna galat nhi hai wo tera pehla crush thi aur pehla crush humesha sabko yaad rehta hai...par us faltu se crush k liye apni life waste karna its not good...apne baare main nhi mom dad k baare main toh soch wo tujhe settle dekhna chahte hai and for my sake us ladki k baare main sochna chod de isse sirf tujhe beeti baate yaad hi aayegi ki tune kabhi apni feelings k baare main use nhi bataya...aur tujhe aur dukh hoga...
Armaan:tu shi kehra hai mere bhai...maine kabhi bhi apni feelings k baare main use nhi bataya...aur is baat k liye apni l;ife waste nhi kar sakta mom dad ko dukhi nhi kar sakta...raoool maine faisla le liya hai...is baar main rishte k liye mana nhi karunga...agar ladki pasand aayi toh ha kardunga... use bhulana aasan toh nhi hai par try jaroor karunga...(they both hugs)

Armaan Riddhima ek hi time ek hi halat se gujar rhe hai aur wo hai kaise ek dusre ko kaise bhulaya jaaye par unhe kya pata wo toh ek dusre k liye ek dusre ko hi bhulana ki koshish kar rhe hai... jis kismat ne unhe dur kiya tha wo kismat hi unhe milane ki saajish kar rhi hai...

Finally part 2 completed I hope u like it...press Like button and leave ur lovely comments and waits for part 3...I update it soon...till than take care...

kriti...😉

Edited by kish - 13 years ago

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