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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Superb update.

Loving it.
Rahul is such a cheap low-down character.
Am sure he was not the one.
The person to save her here must be Maan and he only must have done all this.
Very interesting story.
Continue soon dear and Thanx for Pm.

Thanks dear.
Yes Rahul is a creep and i needed him for the entry of a new character as Geet's saviour but now i have changed the whole story and i am not introducing another character. that's the only reason for making rahul a creep but i think the readers took it in a altoghether different directionšŸ˜†.
Thanks dear for finding the story interesting.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PerfectYaRav

Rose šŸ¤—...sorry...me late again 😳...looks like lot of serious discussions were going on...what and why Geet did all this i leave for u to explain ...as the author i bet u have your reasons...i think Geet's main focus was on getting some answers...and soon...poor thing... can imagine what hell she must be in...Rahul as usual was true to his character...such a creep 😔...i hope it is Maan who came in the end šŸ˜ ...nothing wrong in hoping šŸ˜†...plz continue the way u want my dear...this is your story to tell...love u...TC 😊

This is not fair Ratna...u have to tell me the site 4 where u get such fabulous scraps...
its ok...dear no need to say sorry. about the story...
so much have already been discussed that now i have nothing new to say anymore. and i have lost the thread of thoughts for the next update...it will take time 4 me to get back in the grove😊
As 4 Maan in the end...lets see where the story goes...šŸ˜‰
Once again thanks yaar...it made my day and thanks for ur thoughts also.😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey you online, so are we getting an update today???😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

hey you online, so are we getting an update today???😃

Sorry dear i did not see the comment at that time...i don't think so as i have just started to write and i dont know how much time i will need to right? so not sure if i finish today then sure...otherwise tomorrow for sure.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crystal-rose

Sorry dear i did not see the comment at that time...i don't think so as i have just started to write and i dont know how much time i will need to right? so not sure if i finish today then sure...otherwise tomorrow for sure.😊


oh its okie dear... nah tomorrow is double okay dear...take your own time..thanx to you , you dont keep us waiting for weeks n all...thanxx for that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Imp Note: There has been lot of healthy discussions on the character of Geet. Though it feels good to know that the readers feel so strongly about Geet and the way she is being portrayed but'.please remember that this story is still in its suspense stage so I can't give away too much and explain everything in detail''Secondly there has been a change in the Precap as I wanted to introduce a new character'..but was advised against it'so this part does not contain any new character'. but I cannot say about the future'..Thirdly I want to thank all the readers for liking my story. THANK YOU
Before he could understand what happened, a hand came up catching the dupatta before it could touch the ground was thrown back on her.
"Cover up"
Part 28
Before he could understand what happened, a hand came up catching the dupatta before it could touch the ground and it was thrown back on her.
"Cover up Geet"
"Who are you?" Rahul asked in an irritated voice.
"Aditya Kashyap"
"Adi sir" Geet whispered wrapping the dupatta tightly around herself covering her head also.
"What are you doing here Aditya Kashyap and what do you want but first tell me who allowed you inside?" Rahul thundered.
I have come for Geet, I want to take her back with me and as for allowing me there was no one around and the door was wide open so I just came in.
"Just go away, she does not want you here. You can ask her yourself, she has come on her own free will and we will be getting married shortly. Go on Geet tell him and remember the condition for the answer"
Geet stood there thinking and then making up her mind, she said,
"Yes Adi sir, its ok. I am here on my own free will and we are soon going to be married."
"No Geet I can not allow you to marry this creep, you have to come with me this moment. Dev Sir, Maan Sir and Dadima will get very angry at me if I let you marry this character, so I can't allow you and have you thought what will happen to Pari if you marry him? What will think about her when they come to know her elder sister is married to such a person"
Before Adi could say more Rahul interrupted him,
"What do u mean by creep and such a fellow MR ADITYA KASHYAP" he bellowed, "And who are you to interfere in Geet's life and her decision?"
"She is like my sister. The day she entered the office of Khurana Mansion she reminded me of my sister Rakhi. My sister Rakhi, died of leukemia when she was 18 years old. We could do nothing to save her. Doctors had given her a 50/50 chance of living upto 3 more months but she could not pull it through. She told me, when she was saying her final goodbye that she was sorry, so sorry they wouldn't be able to be old together as they'd always planned, and that's she was going to a better place. That strong my sister was and that strength I saw in Geet the first time I met her. I had decided at that moment, I will always look after her and protect her, that's promise I made on my sister's memory. So I can never leave Geet alone"
Geet had tears running down her face by the time Adi finished.
"Oh Adi sir I never knew about your sister. I am so sorry"
"Enough of your stories Mister now get out of here" Rahul shouted at Adi.
"Shhhsush Rahul, keep quite. Adi sir, tell me how did you come to know I have come to this place?" Geet asked Aditya.
Rahul got bored and as he did not want to hear what Adi was saying, he moved away. When Aditya saw Rahul far away he replied to her "Actually it was Sameera who told me about you. She had seen you going out of the house and got curious to know where you were going leaving the wedding, she was going to follow you but then Dadima called her and told her to attend the Guests. As she had to attend the Guest she got worried about you, so she called me and told me to follow you. More over I had seen you write something in a note after the incident and I thought you must be planning to something stupid to yourself so after Sameera phoned me my fears were confirmed. Then I could not leave you alone. The only problem was I did not know where exactly are you going, so I got a little lost in the wilderness all around this house. That's why the delay in coming here. But tell me Geet why did you come here at this time of the night and that too after the incidence in the morning? What did you want to achieve by coming to this person Geet?"
"I will tell you everything Adi sir but please tell me, is Dadima alright? And Pari must have been very hurt. What about Dev, is he ok? And I hope you did not tell Maan about my leaving the house?"
While he flicked the channels disinterestedly Rahul kept on eyeing Geet. It gave shudders to her.
"Leave that Geet, you have to tell me first, but before that let's go from here"
"Err'..I don't know Adi sir, what and how to tell you'ehm'ss...It's difficult to tell you everything, just think that I wanted some answers so I came here. I thought I was brave enough to succeed in my plan but'. Thank god you came when you came otherwise I don't know what would have happened" Geet told Adi still shuddering from the creepy feeling that Rahul gave her.
"Ok, let's go from here"
"I can't go just now Adi sir, I have to get some answers from this man but I don't know what to do?"
Just then Adi's phone rang.
Adi moved away to take the call.
"Geet, had you enough of your brother's talk? Send him home and I will marry you." Rahul whispered in her ear. He had gotten his chance when Adi was attending the call.
"Do you promise?"
"Of course Geet I promise. Just send him away and soon, I am losing my patience."
Adi finished his call and came to Geet.
"Let's go Geet. I told him and he is coming to get you."
"Nooo'.Adi'you did not tell him, tell me you really did not tell him" holding his color Geet shook him, "why oh why did you have to tell him'..I can't face him just now'I will have to go away before he comes" saying she rushed from there.
Precap: She banged into him.
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Edited by crystal-rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
now what was that...šŸ˜• now who s this "him" she s referring to?????? you are increasing my curiosity n confusions after each update... now who s this new entry?? any long lost brother or is he maan??
thank you for updating😊
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

now what was that...šŸ˜• now who s this "him" she s referring to?????? you are increasing my curiosity n confusions after each update... now who s this new entry?? any long lost brother or is he maan??

thank you for updating😊

See everyone...Everyone was so sure it was Maan...so i gave it a new twistšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† din't u like it? Everyone thought it was maan and i had to break that expectations😃...as this story always has a different idea then the rests...if u start guessing correctly then...😭i will be the one doing this...so enjoy the suspense...šŸ˜‰...though i know i will be 🤢 by the time i get all the sweet comments of our dear friendsšŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago


interesting update... Geet came to Rahul house with a plan to know truth but she under estimated him by coming alone...
thank God Adi came in time...atleast he distracted Rahul for some time and fill some sense in Geet...I think when Geet came to meet Rahul alone she was not at fault...she must have thought that now every body hates her...she has already destroyed her life by surrendering herself unknowingly to Rahul and if the person get intimate with her is Rahul then better to get answers whether she has to again succumb to his demands...sometimes it happens we can't make correct decisions when we are surrounded by problems...

whose call was that ? who is coming to get Geet ? I don't think he is Dev because Dev must be in a GAMM KA SAGAR right now...Geet knows who is coming ? she is afraid to face him...

amazing update...thanx for pm

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just concerned and want is to maan marry geet, that's it I want nothing more nothing less.

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